Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAG278MFF2ZQ0ZN5DJE7E4

Run Details

Duration:
52.7s
Cost:
$0.000410
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of dust and something else, something metallic and old. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her coat, a futile gesture against the chill that clung to the abandoned Tube station. Camden Town station, but not the one anyone used anymore. This was beneath it, a skeletal network of tunnels and platforms swallowed by darkness decades ago. Now, it pulsed with a different kind of energy, a low thrum that made the hairs on the back of her neck prickle. She scanned the scene. Yellow tape crisscrossed the platform, attempting to contain the impossible. A body, sprawled near a disused ticket booth, illuminated by the harsh glare of portable floodlights. Male, mid-thirties, expensive suit ruined by a spreading crimson stain. Classic gangland execution, at first glance. Except… “Clean,” she muttered, her voice rough. “Too clean.” DS Davies, young, eager, already documenting the scene with a digital camera, looked up. “What’s that, Detective?” “The kill. No struggle. No signs of forced entry. Just…placed.” She moved closer, her gaze sweeping over the victim. No defensive wounds. The single gunshot wound, precise, to the chest. Professional, yes. But sterile. “Looks open and shut to me,” Davies offered, snapping another photo. “Dispute over territory, probably. We’ve had a little uptick in the Veil Market’s influence, haven’t we?” Harlow stopped, her gaze fixed on Davies. He used the colloquial term—the Veil Market. Good. It meant he wasn’t entirely oblivious. “Influence, yes. A direct hit like this? Not so much.” She crouched, ignoring the protesting creak of her knees, and examined the floor around the body. The concrete was surprisingly clean. No scuff marks, no broken glass, nothing disturbed beyond the immediate area of the corpse. “He wasn't robbed,” Davies stated, reading from his notes. “Wallet still present, watch intact. Expensive watch, at that.” “Which is precisely why it’s wrong,” Harlow said, her fingers tracing the edge of the ticket booth. The metal was cold, slick with moisture. “If it’s a robbery gone wrong, they take everything. Everything of value.” “Maybe it wasn’t about the money, then?” Davies suggested, hovering slightly too close. Harlow stood, her 5’9” frame towering over Davies. “Maybe. Or maybe, we’re looking at this entirely the wrong way.” She pulled a pair of latex gloves from her pocket, snapping them on with practiced efficiency. She began a systematic search, starting with the victim’s pockets. Nothing but a phone – a burner, naturally – and a small, intricately carved bone token. “Now that’s interesting,” she said, carefully bagging the token. “Recognize this, Davies?” Davies peered at the evidence bag. “Looks like… bone? Some kind of amulet?” “The entry requirement for the Veil Market,” Harlow stated flatly. “This man was a regular.” “The Market?” Davies’ voice rose in pitch. “You think this is related to…all that?” Harlow gave him a withering look. “What did you think this was, a knitting circle gone wrong? This isn’t some petty squabble between street gangs, Davies. This is…something else.” The thrumming sensation in the air seemed to intensify, now accompanied by a faint, almost imperceptible scent of ozone. She circled the body again, her eyes now focused on the details others might miss. A faint, shimmering residue on the platform near the victim’s head. It was almost invisible, like heat rising off asphalt on a summer day. She pulled out a small, portable UV light from her satchel and swept it across the area. The residue flared to life, revealing a complex pattern of glowing symbols etched into the concrete. “Well, now,” Harlow murmured, her sharp jaw tightening. “That’s not standard issue gangland graffiti.” “What is it?” Davies asked, craning his neck to see. “Protection sigils, Davies. Crude, but present. Someone was trying to ward this area.” “Ward it from what?” Harlow didn’t answer. Her attention was drawn to something else. On the wall behind the ticket booth, obscured by shadows, she noticed a tiny, almost imperceptible scratch mark. It wasn't new, but it was out of place. She touched it cautiously, feeling a slight indentation in the concrete. She traced the path of the scratch, revealing a hidden panel, cleverly concealed within the wall. Using her pen as a lever, she pried it open. Inside was a small, velvet-lined box. And inside the box…a compass. A small brass compass, the casing heavily patinated with verdigris. The face was etched with intricate sigils, and the needle, instead of pointing north, spun wildly, then settled, quivering, towards a darkened section of the tunnel. “What is it?” Davies asked, his voice barely a whisper. “A Veil Compass,” Harlow said, her fingers closing around the cool metal. “Attuned to supernatural energy. Points to the nearest rift, the nearest…disturbance.” She glanced at the needle’s unwavering direction. “And right now, it's pointing that way.” She looked back at Davies. “You were right, about the Market. They’re involved. But not in the way you think. This wasn’t about territory. This was about…containing something.” She felt a growing dread settle in her stomach, a cold, familiar weight. It reminded her of the case three years ago, the one that took Morris. The one she still couldn't explain. “Containing what, Detective?” Harlow didn't answer immediately. The air throbbed with that strange energy, growing stronger with each passing moment. She ran a hand over her closely cropped hair, her worn leather watch digging into her wrist. She closed her eyes for a moment, fighting the growing panic. Morris. The distorted shadows. The sense of…wrongness. “Something escaped, Davies,” she said, her voice low and grim. “And our friend here? He wasn’t a victim. He was damage control.” She looked at the compass again, the needle still pointing insistently into the darkness. “And I think it's time we found out what that something is.” She met Davies’ gaze. He was pale, his eagerness replaced with a visible tremor. “You with me?” Davies swallowed hard. “Yes, Detective.” Harlow nodded, already moving towards the darkness, the Veil Compass leading the way. The scent of ozone was stronger now, mingling with the smell of dust and decay. A prickling sensation ran down her spine. She had a feeling this case wasn’t going to be like any other. It felt…larger. Ancient. And terrifyingly familiar. She thought of Morris, and the unexplained circumstances surrounding his death. Perhaps, after all this time, she was finally about to find some answers. But she suspected those answers would come at a terrible cost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Harlow stated flatly [flatly]"
1"Davies swallowed hard. [hard]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.095
81.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1070
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1070
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"systematic"
count1
5
word"complex"
count1
6
word"etched"
count2
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"unwavering"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count2
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"throbbed"
count1
17
word"sense of"
count1
18
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulsed"
2"scanned"
3"tracing"
4"systematic"
5"complex"
6"etched"
7"standard"
8"traced"
9"velvet"
10"intricate"
11"whisper"
12"unwavering"
13"stomach"
14"familiar"
15"weight"
16"throbbed"
17"sense of"
18"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"think"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen89
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1069
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount752
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Davies"
discoveredNames
Harlow11
Quinn1
Tube1
Town1
Davies11
Veil2
Market1
Crude1
Points1
Compass1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Davies"
3"Compass"
4"Morris"
places
0"Town"
globalScore0.769
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1069
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean33.41
std25.28
cv0.757
sampleLengths
083
147
28
317
434
527
667
718
836
913
1061
1112
1213
1315
1414
1548
1672
1714
1810
1913
204
2174
2247
2310
2437
2561
263
2752
2848
2917
305
3189
94.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"was drawn"
1"was etched"
97.44% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs130
matches
0"was trying"
1"was about…containing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences71
ratio0.014
matches
0"He used the colloquial term—the Veil Market."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount398
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.020100502512562814
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.010050251256281407
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean15.06
std17.12
cv1.137
sampleLengths
012
122
210
316
423
54
610
716
810
96
101
116
122
1314
143
1519
163
178
182
192
2011
2116
227
237
241
256
2626
275
2815
299
309
3117
327
3312
3413
359
3652
3712
388
391
404
4115
4214
4317
449
4522
4672
4714
4810
493
94.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.6056338028169014
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences56
matches
0"She scanned the scene."
1"she muttered, her voice rough"
2"She moved closer, her gaze"
3"He used the colloquial term—the"
4"It meant he wasn’t entirely"
5"She crouched, ignoring the protesting"
6"she said, carefully bagging the"
7"She circled the body again,"
8"She looked back at Davies."
9"she said, her voice low"
10"He wasn’t a victim."
11"He was damage I think"
12"She met with"
ratio0.232
58.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences56
matches
0"The air tasted of dust"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"Camden Town station, but not"
3"This was beneath it, a"
4"She scanned the scene."
5"A body, sprawled near a"
6"she muttered, her voice rough"
7"DS Davies, young, eager, already"
8"She moved closer, her gaze"
9"The single gunshot wound, precise,"
10"Davies offered, snapping another photo"
11"Harlow stopped, her gaze fixed"
12"He used the colloquial term—the"
13"It meant he wasn’t entirely"
14"She crouched, ignoring the protesting"
15"The concrete was surprisingly clean."
16"Davies stated, reading from his"
17"Harlow said, her fingers tracing"
18"The metal was cold, slick"
19"Davies suggested, hovering slightly too"
ratio0.804
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Now, it pulsed with a"
ratio0.018
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her coat, a futile gesture against the chill that clung to the abandoned Tube station."
1"Now, it pulsed with a different kind of energy, a low thrum that made the hairs on the back of her neck prickle."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she muttered, her voice rough"
1"She moved, her gaze sweeping over the victim"
2"Harlow said, her fingers tracing the edge of the ticket booth"
3"Harlow murmured, her sharp jaw tightening"
4"Davies asked, his voice barely a whisper"
5"Harlow said, her fingers closing around the cool metal"
6"she said, her voice low and grim"
11.11% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Davies stated (state)"
2"Davies suggested (suggest)"
3"Harlow stated flatly (state)"
4"Harlow murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.611
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.278
80.0055%