"She slowed, hand drifting to the chain under her coat, where the Heartstone Pendant pressed warm against her chest—a faint, insistent pulse, as if the gem itself were leaning in, eager."
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"She frowned, tucking a strand of black hair behind her ear—her left wrist, where the crescent scar from falling off a bike as a child crisped, prickled."
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"Knotted carvings ran along their edges—spirals, what might have been eyes, a symbol Rory didn’t recognize but her chest ached to."
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"“You take too long,” Isolde added, tilting her head, but there was no rebuke in her voice—only amusement."
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"The wood, which had looked solid a moment ago, dissolved into smoke, revealing a narrow gap beyond—a *threshold* between realms, mist curling through it, the light on the other side a deeper, bluer gold."
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"It was cool, almost damp, like aged oak, and when she pressed, it *squished*—not wood, but something alive, slime-like, under the bark."
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"Rory’s throat went dry. She glanced at her phone again—3:42. *Forty-five minutes*, she thought, but her phone felt heavier, as if the battery were draining fast. No, that wasn’t right. She’d left it at home, hadn’t she? No, it was here, in her hand, screen cracked from a fall last week. She frowned, squinting at the time. *3:43*. *Forty-eight minutes*."
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"The air smelled of crushed mint and something sweet, cloying, like overripe peaches—exotic, *wrong*. The light was golden, but softer, as if filtered through a veil, and the trees were not oaks, but something taller, slimmer, their leaves a iridescent green that shifted to blue when the wind shifted. Wildflowers carpeted the ground—red, purple, white, petals waxy to the touch—that Rory didn’t recognize, their scent thickening the air. A stream babbled to her left; when she stepped toward it, the water rippled, forming a face—a woman with silver hair, her lavender eyes wide—then dissolved, leaving only the gurgle of the current."
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"Rory knelt, brushing a flower—white, with a center like liquid starlight—off a stem. It didn’t wilt, even as she plucked it; instead, it flickered, the starlight spreading up her arm, making her skin tingle. She dropped it. “What if…"
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"The stream gurgled again, and this time, the face it formed was not a woman, but a man—pale, with black hair that rippled like smoke, a scar on his wrist. Aldric. Nyx’s past. The sorcerer who’d become a Shade. Rory’s chest ached. *That’s him*, she thought. *That’s why the pendant called to me.*"
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"It sees *you*—cool-headed, quick, *hungry* for survival.”"
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"A wind picked up, blowing the wildflowers away, and the standing stones hissed. Rory felt the time shift then, a disorienting lurch, as if the world had been rolled up like a scroll. When it settled, the sun was lower, painting the sky a deep orange. She checked her phone—4:07. *Fifty-two minutes*. But her muscles felt tight, as if she’d been running, and her throat was dry, as if she’d been shouting."
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"The Heartstone will guide you—but you must *listen*.”"
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"Rory stood, gripping the Heartstone. It was still warm, but the pain had faded, replaced by a quiet hum. She thought of Evan, of Eva, of the way she’d fled London, of the life she’d built—small, ordinary, *safe*—in a flat above a bar. But safety, she realized, was a feast too. A quiet, insidious one. And the Heartstone was a knock at the door, promising more."
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"They walked back to the standing stones, the Grove fading behind them—its light, its scents, its time—until the tree trunks dissolved into smoke, and the park’s winter air hit them, sharp and cold. Rory’s phone buzzed, a text from her boss: *Flat’s yours tonight. Extra tips for the overtime.* She ignored it, squeezing Nyx’s hand. “Ready?”"
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"Rory looked at the sky, at the first stars pricking through the dark. The Heartstone hummed, low and steady, and she knew—this time, there would be no turning back. The feast was waiting. And she was hungry."
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"She slowed, hand drifting to the chain under her coat, where the Heartstone Pendant pressed warm against her chest—a faint, insistent pulse, as if the gem itsel…"
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"The Half-Fae stood at the stone circle’s edge, her silver hair drifting as if through a current, her lavender eyes alight."
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"She wore a dress of linen, dyed indigo, the hem frayed as if by centuries of rain."
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"The wood, which had looked solid a moment ago, dissolved into smoke, revealing a narrow gap beyond—a *threshold* between realms, mist curling through it, the li…"
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"Rory’s throat went dry. She glanced at her phone again—3:42. *Forty-five minutes*, she thought, but her phone felt heavier, as if the battery were draining fast…"
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"The air smelled of crushed mint and something sweet, cloying, like overripe peaches—exotic, *wrong*. The light was golden, but softer, as if filtered through a …"
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"Rory’s hand tightened around the pendant. She thought of Evan, of his fists, of the way he’d laughed when she’d flinched. Of Eva, dead in a car crash last year,…"
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"A wind picked up, blowing the wildflowers away, and the standing stones hissed. Rory felt the time shift then, a disorienting lurch, as if the world had been ro…"