Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAJ5Z2TNJPVKAQ9DYYD6DR

Run Details

Duration:
49.1s
Cost:
$0.000404
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chipped paint on the doorframe felt cool under Rory’s palm. Three deadbolts. All unlocked. She hadn’t expected him to actually be home. Not after… everything. She pushed the door open, the scent of turmeric and something ancient hitting her like a wave. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, immediately wound around her ankles, purring like a faulty engine. The flat was exactly as she remembered. Chaos organized into a semblance of order. Stacks of books threatened to topple from every surface, scrolls lay unfurled on the worn rug, and dried herbs hung in bunches from the curtain rod. A single lamp cast a warm glow on the interior, doing little to dispel the shadows gathering in the corners. Lucien stood near the window, back to her, a glass of something dark swirling in his hand. He still wore those tailored suits, the charcoal fabric molding to a frame that haunted her dreams. Even from behind, she registered the precise set of his shoulders, the elegant curve of his neck. “Charming of you to grace me with your presence.” His voice, a low rumble, didn’t turn. Rory tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear, heat creeping up her neck. “Needed to talk.” He finally turned, slowly. One eye, amber like aged whiskey, met hers, then slid to linger on the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. A ghost of a touch brushed her memory. His fingers tracing that very spot. “Talk?” He took a slow sip of his drink. “Last time we ‘talked’ resulted in me being threatened with a lawsuit and you storming off in tears.” “That’s…a fair assessment.” She forced herself to meet his mismatched gaze. The black eye felt like a void, swallowing all light. “Things are different now.” “Are they?” He raised an eyebrow, a flicker of amusement playing around his lips. "Because from where I'm standing, you’re still tracking mud onto my rug.” Rory glanced down at her boots, scuffed from a delivery shift. Rain slicked the soles. “Right. Sorry.” She shifted her weight. Ptolemy, tiring of her immobility, hopped onto a stack of books and began meticulously grooming himself. “Don’t apologize,” Lucien said, a hint of something softer underlying the sharpness. "Offer to replace it." He gestured with his glass. “Would you care for a drink? I have a rather exquisite Armagnac.” “I’m good.” She desperately wanted to say yes, to lean against his bar, to lose herself in the easy rhythm of their old conversations. But old conversations only led to new wounds, and she wasn’t sure she could handle another round. “Just…wanted to ask you about something.” “Then ask.” He took another sip, watching her over the rim of his glass. The silence stretched, thick and laced with unspoken history. “It’s about Avaros.” His expression didn't change, but the hand holding the glass tightened. “Avaros is a closed chapter. For both of us, I would have thought.” “Someone’s been asking questions. About me. About my…connection to it.” Rory watched his face, searching for a tell. He was a master of composure, but she’d learned to read the subtle shifts in his features. The way his jaw tightened, the flicker in his amber eye. “Asking questions? Who?” “I don’t know. Just heard whispers. Through the usual channels.” She was a delivery driver, not a spy. But living above Silas' bar and befriending Eva tended to pull you into things. Things you didn't ask for. “They seemed to think I had information. Something…valuable.” Lucien set his glass down on a nearby table, the crystal clicking against the wood. He walked towards her, and Rory found herself instinctively taking a step back. He stopped a foot away, close enough that she could smell the faint scent of sandalwood and something else, something inherently *him*. “Valuable how?” “They didn’t say.” Rory hated how small she felt under his scrutiny. “Look, I just wanted to know if you had any idea what this was about. You know more about that world than anyone I know.” He ran a hand through his platinum blond hair, ruffling the perfect slicked-back style. “You were a complication. A human dragged into something that wasn’t meant for you.” His gaze dropped to her wrist again, lingering on the scar. "I tried to shield you from it." “Shield me?” A wry laugh escaped her lips. “By disappearing without a word? By leaving me to deal with the fallout?” His jaw clenched. “I had my reasons.” "Oh, I'm sure you did." Rory crossed her arms, wanting to appear untouchable despite the tremor in her hands. “Reasons that involved not wanting your…world to interfere with your perfectly curated life.” “That’s not fair.” “Isn’t it? You always were so careful. So controlled.” She remembered the feel of his hand in hers, the moments when he’d let his guard down, the vulnerability she’d glimpsed beneath the polished exterior. Those moments felt like a lifetime ago. He reached out, his fingers hovering over her arm before dropping back to his side. “You were reckless. You rushed into things without understanding the consequences.” “And you were…distant.” Rory’s voice was softer now, the anger replaced by a simmering ache. “You never let me get close. Not really.” “I was protecting you.” “From what, Luc? From *us*?” The words slipped out before she could stop them. He flinched, a flicker of pain crossing his face. He turned away, walking back towards the window. “Don’t.” “Don’t what? Don’t point out the obvious? Don’t ask why you pushed me away when all I wanted was…” She trailed off, unable to voice the simple truth. All she’d wanted was him. “Don’t pretend you understood.” He spoke into the darkness, his voice barely a whisper. “You couldn't possibly understand the things I am.” “And you didn't think I deserved an explanation?” Rory stepped closer, her voice rising. "Didn't think I deserved to know *why* you vanished?" He turned back, his mismatched eyes blazing. “I did what I thought was best. For both of us.” He tilted his head, a subtle movement that somehow conveyed a world of regret. “Some doors are better left closed, Rory. Some secrets are better left buried.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She desperately wanted to say yes [desperately]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.457
leniency0.913
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.043
80.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1026
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"perfectly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1026
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"cast a warm glow"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count3
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"jaw clenched"
count1
10
word"simmering"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"cast a warm glow"
1"tracing"
2"eyebrow"
3"flicker"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"unspoken"
7"crystal"
8"perfect"
9"jaw clenched"
10"simmering"
11"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"a flicker of amusement"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1024
ratio0.003
matches
0"him"
1"us"
2"why"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount680
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Eva1
Ptolemy2
Things1
Lucien3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.838
windowScore0.833
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a void, swallowing all light"
1"felt like a lifetime ago"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1024
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean28.44
std17.65
cv0.621
sampleLengths
026
190
251
316
418
537
627
725
826
937
1033
1147
1223
133
1424
1546
163
1745
1850
192
2037
2146
2221
237
2432
253
2641
2726
2823
294
3014
3118
3233
3322
3423
3545
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences88
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount594
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"better left closed, Rory."
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03872053872053872
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.016835016835016835
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean11.64
std6.79
cv0.584
sampleLengths
011
12
22
38
42
51
617
713
87
97
1026
1120
1217
1317
1417
1516
1615
173
184
1919
208
216
229
2318
2411
2510
264
2714
2812
2911
304
316
3216
3312
349
3512
3624
3717
386
3914
409
413
4211
4313
4418
4517
4611
473
4818
4914
93.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5795454545454546
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences60
matches
0"She hadn’t expected him to"
1"She pushed the door open,"
2"He still wore those tailored"
3"His voice, a low rumble,"
4"He finally turned, slowly."
5"His fingers tracing that very"
6"He took a slow sip"
7"She forced herself to meet"
8"He raised an eyebrow, a"
9"She shifted her weight"
10"He gestured with his glass"
11"She desperately wanted to say"
12"He took another sip, watching"
13"His expression didn't change, but"
14"He was a master of"
15"She was a delivery driver,"
16"He walked towards her, and"
17"He stopped a foot away,"
18"He ran a hand through"
19"His gaze dropped to her"
ratio0.483
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences60
matches
0"The chipped paint on the"
1"She hadn’t expected him to"
2"She pushed the door open,"
3"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, immediately wound"
4"The flat was exactly as"
5"Chaos organized into a semblance"
6"Stacks of books threatened to"
7"A single lamp cast a"
8"Lucien stood near the window,"
9"He still wore those tailored"
10"His voice, a low rumble,"
11"Rory tucked a strand of"
12"He finally turned, slowly."
13"A ghost of a touch"
14"His fingers tracing that very"
15"He took a slow sip"
16"She forced herself to meet"
17"The black eye felt like"
18"He raised an eyebrow, a"
19"Rory glanced down at her"
ratio0.917
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Even from behind, she registered"
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He reached out, his fingers hovering over her arm before dropping back to his side."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He raised, a flicker of amusement playing around his lips"
1"Lucien said, a hint of something softer underlying the sharpness"
2"Rory crossed, wanting to appear untouchable despite the tremor in her hands"
3"She trailed, unable to voice the simple truth"
4"He spoke, his voice barely a whisper"
5"Rory stepped, her voice rising"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She desperately wanted to say yes (want say)"
1"He spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.13
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.087
80.4992%