Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAJ6Q88SXFMH1TRR3ZZ30T

Run Details

Duration:
32.0s
Cost:
$0.000616
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air shifted as they stepped between the oaks, the scent of damp earth and exhaust fumes instantly replaced by something cloyingly sweet, like overripe fruit and honey. Rory blinked, adjusting to the dimness. Richmond Park hadn’t prepared her for *this*. It wasn’t a clearing, not exactly. More like a folding of the world, a pocket tucked between breathing trees. Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, bloomed in a riot of color under the filtered light, and a subtle hum thrummed in the air, a vibration Rory felt in her teeth. Isolde drifted ahead, silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight. She didn’t walk, not in the conventional sense. She seemed to…glide, the grass bending to her passage without a sound, leaving no impression on the yielding earth. Nyx, normally a swirling shadow at her shoulder, had solidified, though they remained disturbingly indistinct, the edges of their form wavering like heat haze. Their violet eyes scanned the grove with a slow, unsettling deliberation. “Time is… malleable here,” Isolde said, her voice a chime carried on a breeze. “Don’t be surprised if minutes feel like hours, or vice versa.” Rory glanced at her watch. Sixty-three seconds since they’d passed the final sentinel oak. It felt like far longer. She touched the silver chain around her neck, her fingers brushing the cool, smooth surface of the Heartstone Pendant. It hadn’t pulsed, not yet. “What are we looking for, exactly?” Rory asked, her voice sounding too loud in the hushed stillness. Isolde stopped before a circle of ancient, moss-covered stones. “A thinning. A place where the whispers are loudest. The Veil is bruised here, weakened by ancient sorrows.” Nyx stepped forward, their hand—an elongated, shadowy claw—reaching out to trace a rune carved into one of the stones. “A nexus point. There’s a residual energy… Dymasian. But faint.” Dymas. Prince Belphegor’s realm of gluttony. Rory suppressed a shudder. The thought of anything leaking from *there* into London didn't bear thinking about. “Belphegor isn't known for subtlety,” she muttered. Isolde’s lavender eyes fixed on Rory. “Subtlety is for those with patience. He prefers… overwhelming sensation.” They moved deeper into the grove, following a path that wasn’t a path, more a suggestion of one. The trees grew taller, their branches interlacing to form a canopy so dense that only slivers of sunlight penetrated. Strange, luminescent fungi sprouted from the roots, casting an eerie, phosphorescent glow. Insects buzzed past, their wings shimmering with iridescent colors Rory had never seen before. It felt less like a place on Earth and more like a memory of one, a faded echo of a world that never was. Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade from the sheath strapped to her thigh. The moonsilver felt frigid against her palm, a stark contrast to the humid air. It hummed faintly, a cold vibration that mirrored the uneasiness settling in her gut. “Just in case,” she said, more to reassure herself than the others. Nyx’s head tilted, a gesture that somehow felt predatory. “A wise precaution. Though I suspect our quarry is not… corporeal.” They reached a clearing dominated by a single, colossal oak. Its trunk was wider than a bus, its branches reaching towards the sky like gnarled, supplicating arms. Around the base of the tree, the wildflowers had withered, replaced by a patch of black, barren earth. The sweet scent had soured, replaced by a faint, metallic tang. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed. A dull, rhythmic throb against Rory’s skin. “Here,” Isolde breathed. “This is the place.” Rory cautiously circled the tree, her gaze sweeping the blackened earth. The air here was heavier, colder. She could feel the hairs on the back of her neck prickle. The hum had increased in intensity, morphing into a discordant drone that made her teeth ache. “What am I looking for?” she asked. “A disruption,” Isolde replied, her eyes closed, her head tilted towards the sky. “A tear. A place where the threads of reality fray.” Rory ran a hand along the rough bark of the oak. It felt… wrong. Not just old, but *tired*. Like the tree was holding something back, straining under an immense weight. As her fingers brushed against a particularly gnarled knot in the wood, she saw it. A shimmer. A distortion in the air, like heat rising off asphalt. It was subtle, almost imperceptible, but it was there. A ripple in the fabric of reality, barely visible, yet undeniably present. The Heartstone Pendant was practically vibrating now, radiating a warmth that spread through her chest. “There,” she said, pointing. “By the trunk. Do you see it?” Isolde’s eyes snapped open, her lavender gaze locking onto the shimmer. “The Veil is thin indeed.” Nyx moved closer, their shadowy form resolving into something more defined, their violet eyes glowing with an almost frightening intensity. They reached out, their hand passing *through* the distortion. “It leads… elsewhere,” Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible above the drone. “To Dymas. I can feel the indulgence, the… emptiness.” Rory stepped closer, her hand instinctively tightening around the Fae Blade. The shimmer wavered, revealing fleeting glimpses of another world. Endless vineyards stretching towards a warm, amber sky. Tables laden with decadent foods, piled high with fruits, pastries, and roasted meats. Laughter, loud and boisterous, echoing from unseen halls. But beneath the surface of indulgence, there was something else. A sense of desperate hunger, of insatiable longing. “It feels… wrong,” Rory said, her voice tight. “Like a beautiful trap.” Isolde’s expression was grave. “It *is* a trap. Belphegor doesn't offer delights without a price. This rift wasn't made by chance, child. Someone opened it. Someone is calling to him.” The air around the shimmer crackled, and a voice, smooth as honey laced with poison, drifted out. “Welcome… Lost one. Come, indulge. Forget your sorrows. Everything you desire awaits.” Rory felt a pull, a subtle compulsion to step forward, to answer the voice. She gripped the Fae Blade tighter, forcing herself to resist. The cold metal grounded her. “Don’t listen,” she murmured, her voice strained. “It’s a trick.” Nyx stepped in front of her, their shadowy form partially obscuring the rift. “The call is strong. It preys on weakness, on discontent.” Isolde raised a hand, and a circle of wildflowers sprang up around them, their petals glowing with an ethereal luminescence. “The Grove offers protection, but it is not absolute. We must close this tear before it widens. Before Belphegor answers the summons.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1072
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1072
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"wavering"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"sentinel"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"throb"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count2
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"resolving"
count1
13
word"wavered"
count1
14
word"fleeting"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count1
17
word"grave"
count1
18
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"wavering"
1"scanned"
2"sentinel"
3"pulsed"
4"echo"
5"stark"
6"rhythmic"
7"throb"
8"could feel"
9"intensity"
10"weight"
11"warmth"
12"resolving"
13"wavered"
14"fleeting"
15"echoing"
16"sense of"
17"grave"
18"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1067
ratio0.005
matches
0"this"
1"there"
2"tired"
3"through"
4"is"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount860
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Rory14
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Isolde9
Belphegor1
London1
Earth1
Fae-Forged1
Blade3
Nyx6
Fae3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Belphegor"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
globalScore0.686
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.937
wordCount1067
matches
0"Not just old, but *tired*"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean30.49
std21.6
cv0.708
sampleLengths
088
171
225
343
417
527
629
723
87
916
1087
1140
1212
1320
1456
1511
167
1745
187
1923
2046
2148
2211
2316
2429
2521
2667
2712
2830
2917
3012
3129
3210
3323
3442
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs148
matches
0"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences97
ratio0.01
matches
0"Nyx stepped forward, their hand—an elongated, shadowy claw—reaching out to trace a rune carved into one of the stones."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount865
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ancient, moss-covered stones."
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03468208092485549
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.018497109826589597
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean11
std5.9
cv0.537
sampleLengths
028
16
27
36
413
528
69
78
819
924
1011
1114
1211
135
149
155
1619
175
1817
199
2018
2119
2210
231
245
254
2613
277
286
2910
3018
3119
3212
3314
3424
3512
3614
3714
3812
399
4011
4110
4217
4318
4411
454
467
473
484
4911
62.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4020618556701031
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners39
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"More like a folding of"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences74
matches
0"It wasn’t a clearing, not"
1"She didn’t walk, not in"
2"She seemed to…glide, the grass"
3"Their violet eyes scanned the"
4"It felt like far longer."
5"She touched the silver chain"
6"It hadn’t pulsed, not yet."
7"They moved deeper into the"
8"It felt less like a"
9"It hummed faintly, a cold"
10"she said, more to reassure"
11"They reached a clearing dominated"
12"Its trunk was wider than"
13"She could feel the hairs"
14"It was subtle, almost imperceptible,"
15"she said, pointing"
16"They reached out, their hand"
17"She gripped the Fae Blade"
18"she murmured, her voice strained"
ratio0.257
20.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences74
matches
0"The air shifted as they"
1"Rory blinked, adjusting to the"
2"Richmond Park hadn’t prepared her"
3"It wasn’t a clearing, not"
4"Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, bloomed in"
5"Isolde drifted ahead, silver hair"
6"She didn’t walk, not in"
7"She seemed to…glide, the grass"
8"Nyx, normally a swirling shadow"
9"Their violet eyes scanned the"
10"Isolde said, her voice a"
11"Rory glanced at her watch."
12"It felt like far longer."
13"She touched the silver chain"
14"It hadn’t pulsed, not yet."
15"Rory asked, her voice sounding"
16"Isolde stopped before a circle"
17"Nyx stepped forward, their hand—an"
18"Prince Belphegor’s realm of gluttony."
19"Rory suppressed a shudder."
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"They moved deeper into the grove, following a path that wasn’t a path, more a suggestion of one."
1"It hummed faintly, a cold vibration that mirrored the uneasiness settling in her gut."
2"Its trunk was wider than a bus, its branches reaching towards the sky like gnarled, supplicating arms."
3"The hum had increased in intensity, morphing into a discordant drone that made her teeth ache."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Isolde said, her voice a chime carried on a breeze"
1"Rory asked, her voice sounding too loud in the hushed stillness"
2"Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible above the drone"
3"Rory said, her voice tight"
4"she murmured, her voice strained"
1.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.296
78.8472%