| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.407 | | leniency | 0.815 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1072 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1072 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "wavering" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "sentinel" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "stark" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "intensity" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "resolving" | | 13 | "wavered" | | 14 | "fleeting" | | 15 | "echoing" | | 16 | "sense of" | | 17 | "grave" | | 18 | "desire" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1067 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "this" | | 1 | "there" | | 2 | "tired" | | 3 | "through" | | 4 | "is" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.60% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 860 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Isolde | 9 | | Belphegor | 1 | | London | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 3 | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Belphegor" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.686 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.937 | | wordCount | 1067 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just old, but *tired*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 30.49 | | std | 21.6 | | cv | 0.708 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 88 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 87 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 67 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 42 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx stepped forward, their hand—an elongated, shadowy claw—reaching out to trace a rune carved into one of the stones." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 865 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ancient, moss-covered stones." |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.03468208092485549 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018497109826589597 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 11 | | std | 5.9 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 62.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4020618556701031 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 45.05% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "More like a folding of" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a clearing, not" | | 1 | "She didn’t walk, not in" | | 2 | "She seemed to…glide, the grass" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes scanned the" | | 4 | "It felt like far longer." | | 5 | "She touched the silver chain" | | 6 | "It hadn’t pulsed, not yet." | | 7 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 8 | "It felt less like a" | | 9 | "It hummed faintly, a cold" | | 10 | "she said, more to reassure" | | 11 | "They reached a clearing dominated" | | 12 | "Its trunk was wider than" | | 13 | "She could feel the hairs" | | 14 | "It was subtle, almost imperceptible," | | 15 | "she said, pointing" | | 16 | "They reached out, their hand" | | 17 | "She gripped the Fae Blade" | | 18 | "she murmured, her voice strained" |
| | ratio | 0.257 | |
| 20.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted as they" | | 1 | "Rory blinked, adjusting to the" | | 2 | "Richmond Park hadn’t prepared her" | | 3 | "It wasn’t a clearing, not" | | 4 | "Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, bloomed in" | | 5 | "Isolde drifted ahead, silver hair" | | 6 | "She didn’t walk, not in" | | 7 | "She seemed to…glide, the grass" | | 8 | "Nyx, normally a swirling shadow" | | 9 | "Their violet eyes scanned the" | | 10 | "Isolde said, her voice a" | | 11 | "Rory glanced at her watch." | | 12 | "It felt like far longer." | | 13 | "She touched the silver chain" | | 14 | "It hadn’t pulsed, not yet." | | 15 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding" | | 16 | "Isolde stopped before a circle" | | 17 | "Nyx stepped forward, their hand—an" | | 18 | "Prince Belphegor’s realm of gluttony." | | 19 | "Rory suppressed a shudder." |
| | ratio | 0.878 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "They moved deeper into the grove, following a path that wasn’t a path, more a suggestion of one." | | 1 | "It hummed faintly, a cold vibration that mirrored the uneasiness settling in her gut." | | 2 | "Its trunk was wider than a bus, its branches reaching towards the sky like gnarled, supplicating arms." | | 3 | "The hum had increased in intensity, morphing into a discordant drone that made her teeth ache." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice a chime carried on a breeze" | | 1 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding too loud in the hushed stillness" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible above the drone" | | 3 | "Rory said, her voice tight" | | 4 | "she murmured, her voice strained" |
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| 1.85% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.407 | | leniency | 0.815 | | rawRatio | 0.364 | | effectiveRatio | 0.296 | |