Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAJ6Y91W9BVZXN6NQ74BRC

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 31s
Cost:
$0.045072
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open with a reluctant creak, the three deadbolts clunking like reluctant sentinels finally standing down. Rory blinked into the dim hallway light, her hand still gripping the knob, expecting Eva back from her late-night research binge or maybe a neighbor complaining about the curry smells wafting up from below. Instead, there he stood—Lucien Moreau, impeccably tailored in charcoal, his platinum hair slicked back like a challenge to the chaos of Brick Lane. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, glowing faintly like embers in a dying fire, the other black as a void—locked onto hers with that infuriating mix of surprise and inevitability. "Rory," he said, his voice a smooth lilt, French accent curling around her name like smoke. He leaned lightly on his ivory-handled cane, not because he needed it, but because it was part of the persona, the fixer who concealed blades in plain sight. "I didn't expect... well, perhaps I did." Her heart stuttered, a betraying rhythm she'd sworn she'd forgotten. It had been eight months since Paris—since that rain-slicked night in the Marais when she'd walked away, leaving him with a half-spoken confession and a wound that wasn't just metaphorical. She'd fled back to London, to Eva's cluttered flat, burying herself in delivery runs for the Golden Empress and pretending the supernatural underworld he'd dragged her into was just a bad dream. But here he was, unannounced, forcing the past into the present like a demon summoning itself. "What the hell are you doing here?" she snapped, her bright blue eyes narrowing. She didn't step aside, didn't invite him in. The air between them hummed with unsaid things, the kind that festered. Attraction, yes—that electric pull she'd felt from the first time he'd bought her a drink in that dingy supernatural speakeasy, his half-demon charm wrapping around her like velvet chains. Hurt, too—his secrets, the way he'd vanished when she needed him most, leaving her to face Evan's echoes alone. And the unsaid: words like love, or trust, or goodbye, all tangled in the mess of their parting. Lucien's lips quirked, not quite a smile. "Charming as ever. May I come in? Or shall we discuss this in the hall, where the neighbors might overhear tales of demons and deliveries?" She hesitated, her straight black hair falling across her shoulder as she glanced back into the flat. Eva was out, chasing leads on some arcane artifact, leaving Rory to cat-sit Ptolemy and sift through the piles of books and scrolls that buried every surface. The tabby in question lounged on a stack of yellowed manuscripts, his green eyes slitting open to regard the intruder with lazy suspicion. The scent of cumin and garlic from the curry house below seeped through the floorboards, mixing with the musty odor of old paper. It was a far cry from Lucien's world of shadowed deals and silk-lined pockets. "Fine," she muttered, stepping back just enough to let him pass. "But make it quick. Eva's due back soon, and I don't need her grilling me about why the Frenchman is darkening her doorstep." He slipped inside, his movements fluid, cane tapping softly against the worn hardwood. The door clicked shut behind him, sealing them in the cramped space. Rory crossed her arms, feeling the small crescent scar on her left wrist itch under her sleeve—a childhood reminder of falls and folly, now a talisman against newer scars. At 5'6", she had to tilt her head slightly to meet his gaze, his 5'11" frame filling the room more than it should. He was 32, seven years her senior, but his half-demon heritage made him seem timeless, ageless in a way that both fascinated and infuriated her. Lucien set his cane against the wall, surveying the chaos with a raised eyebrow. "Eva's place hasn't changed. Still a library exploded in a broom closet." He picked up a scroll from the coffee table, unrolling it just enough to glance at the faded runes. "Demonology, bien sûr. She's persistent." "She's helping me," Rory said, sharper than intended. "Unlike some people." He winced, setting the scroll down. The amber eye softened, the black one unreadable. "Rory—" "Aurora," she corrected, though her friends called her Rory, and he'd always been more than that. They'd met through Eva's tangled web of supernatural contacts, back when Rory was still licking her wounds from Evan, the abusive ex who'd left bruises deeper than skin. Lucien had been the charming distraction, the information broker who'd whispered secrets in four languages, his half-demon blood lending him an allure that was equal parts danger and desire. They'd shared stolen nights in London hideouts, his hands tracing her scars while she pretended not to notice the infernal heat beneath his skin. But then Paris happened—a job gone wrong, demons from Avaros spilling into the mortal realm, and Lucien choosing his underworld ties over her pleas to run. She'd left him there, words caught in her throat: I love you, but you're breaking me. Now, he stepped closer, the space between them shrinking. "Aurora, then. I didn't come to argue." "Then why did you come?" She backed up a step, bumping into a teetering stack of books. Ptolemy meowed indignantly, leaping down to twine around her legs. She scooped him up, using the cat as a shield, his tabby fur soft against her chest. Lucien's gaze flicked to the cat, then back to her. "Word travels in my circles. I heard about the relic Eva's after—the one tied to Avaros. It's dangerous, Rory. More than she knows. And you're in the middle of it, playing delivery girl by day and demon hunter by night?" She laughed, bitter. "Jealous? Or just here to play the hero again?" His expression darkened, that black eye swallowing light. "You think I left you in Paris to play games? I had obligations—my father's kin, pulling strings from the shadows. I thought... I thought you'd understand." "Understand?" Heat flushed her cheeks. "You vanished, Luc. Left me with a note and a promise you'd 'handle it.' I waited two weeks before I realized you weren't coming back. And now you show up here, unannounced, like nothing happened?" He reached out, his fingers brushing her arm, warm despite the cool air. She didn't pull away, damn it. The attraction surged, unbidden—a memory of his lips on hers, tasting of wine and brimstone, his body pressing her against a wall in some forgotten alley. Hurt mingled with it, a sharp ache in her chest. Things left unsaid: She'd wanted to tell him about the nightmares, how Evan's ghost still haunted her, how Lucien's absence had echoed that abandonment. But pride had sealed her lips then, and now... "I came because I couldn't stay away," he admitted, voice low. "Not after hearing your name whispered in the dens. You're in danger, Aurora. The relic Eva seeks—it's a key to Avaros. My father's realm. If it falls into the wrong hands..." She set Ptolemy down, the cat scampering off to claim a pile of notes. "And you think I'd trust you with this? After everything?" He closed the distance, his hand cupping her cheek, thumb tracing the line of her jaw. She froze, breath catching. His scent—sandalwood and something darker, infernal—enveloped her. "Trust is earned, I know. But Paris... I was a fool. I chose duty over you, and it cost me everything. I've spent months unraveling my ties, cutting deals to free myself. For you." Her pulse raced, blue eyes searching his mismatched ones. The amber glowed warmer now, pulling her in. "You expect me to believe that? After the hurt?" "Not expect. Hope." His other hand found her waist, drawing her closer. The flat felt smaller, the books and scrolls fading into irrelevance. "There are things I left unsaid, too. Like how every night since, I've regretted letting you go. How your laugh haunts me, your quick mind challenges me. I love you, Rory. I should have said it then." The words hung there, bridging the chasm. She wanted to shove him away, to cling to the anger that had armored her these months. But the attraction won, melting the ice. Her hands fisted in his suit lapels, pulling him down. Their lips met in a rush, hungry and desperate, all the unsaid pouring out in the press of mouths, the tangle of tongues. He tasted like redemption, like the fire she'd craved. His cane clattered forgotten as he lifted her onto the cluttered table, scrolls crunching beneath them. She broke the kiss, gasping. "This doesn't fix everything." "No," he murmured against her neck, lips trailing fire. "But it's a start." Ptolemy yowled from the corner, batting at a fallen book, but they ignored him. Rory's fingers worked at his shirt buttons, revealing the pale skin marked by faint demonic runes—souvenirs from Avaros. He shuddered under her touch, his hands sliding up her thighs, bunching her shirt. The hurt lingered, a shadow, but the attraction burned brighter, igniting the things left unsaid into flames. "You fled to London," he whispered, voice rough. "To Eva's. Why not come to me?" "Because I was scared," she confessed, vulnerability cracking her cool facade. "Evan broke me, and you... you almost did too. But I couldn't stop thinking about you. The way you speak French in your sleep, or how you hide that blade in your cane like it's nothing." He chuckled, low and warm, pressing her back against the table. "Je t'aime, Aurora. Let me prove it." Their bodies moved in sync, a dance of reconciliation. She traced his heterochromatic eyes with her fingers, memorizing the contrast, while he kissed the scar on her wrist, as if erasing old pains. The flat's chaos mirrored their history—messy, layered, but enduring. Outside, Brick Lane buzzed with late-night revelers, oblivious to the reunion unfolding above the curry house. As they lost themselves, the unsaid dissolved. Hurt gave way to healing, attraction to something deeper. When Eva returned later, she'd find them tangled on the couch, Ptolemy perched judgmentally nearby. But for now, in this forced togetherness, they rebuilt what had been parted. Hours passed in whispers and touches, the night stretching. Lucien traced patterns on her back, his cane propped by the door like a sentinel. "Stay with me this time," he said. She smiled against his chest. "Only if you promise no more vanishing acts." "Deal." His amber eye winked in the lamplight. The door had opened to the past, but they'd stepped through to something new.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:06:23.442Z" 2/20/2026, 8:06:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1774
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1774
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"echoes"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"desire"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count2
12
word"flicked"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"unraveling"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"raced"
count1
17
word"facade"
count1
18
word"dance"
count1
19
word"traced"
count2
20
word"sentinel"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"lilt"
2"electric"
3"charm"
4"velvet"
5"echoes"
6"silk"
7"reminder"
8"eyebrow"
9"unreadable"
10"desire"
11"tracing"
12"flicked"
13"echoed"
14"unraveling"
15"pulse"
16"raced"
17"facade"
18"dance"
19"traced"
20"sentinel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1748
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1310
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Lucien9
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
French1
Paris2
Marais1
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Evan3
Rory7
Ptolemy5
Avaros2
Hurt3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Hurt"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Paris"
3"Marais"
4"London"
5"Avaros"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"tasted like redemption, like the fire she"
2"as if erasing old pains"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1748
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"echoed that abandonment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean47.24
std33.37
cv0.706
sampleLengths
0103
151
288
3100
432
5104
634
7102
850
911
1015
11139
1216
1344
1450
1512
1634
1740
1888
1942
2024
2161
2226
2360
2489
259
2613
2763
2815
2947
3018
3158
3244
3331
3413
358
3614
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"was, unannounced"
1"been parted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs242
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences114
ratio0.096
matches
0"Instead, there he stood—Lucien Moreau, impeccably tailored in charcoal, his platinum hair slicked back like a challenge to the chaos of Brick Lane."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, glowing faintly like embers in a dying fire, the other black as a void—locked onto hers with that infuriating mix of surprise and inevitability."
2"It had been eight months since Paris—since that rain-slicked night in the Marais when she'd walked away, leaving him with a half-spoken confession and a wound that wasn't just metaphorical."
3"Attraction, yes—that electric pull she'd felt from the first time he'd bought her a drink in that dingy supernatural speakeasy, his half-demon charm wrapping around her like velvet chains."
4"Hurt, too—his secrets, the way he'd vanished when she needed him most, leaving her to face Evan's echoes alone."
5"Rory crossed her arms, feeling the small crescent scar on her left wrist itch under her sleeve—a childhood reminder of falls and folly, now a talisman against newer scars."
6"But then Paris happened—a job gone wrong, demons from Avaros spilling into the mortal realm, and Lucien choosing his underworld ties over her pleas to run."
7"The attraction surged, unbidden—a memory of his lips on hers, tasting of wine and brimstone, his body pressing her against a wall in some forgotten alley."
8"His scent—sandalwood and something darker, infernal—enveloped her."
9"Rory's fingers worked at his shirt buttons, revealing the pale skin marked by faint demonic runes—souvenirs from Avaros."
10"The flat's chaos mirrored their history—messy, layered, but enduring."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1333
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.028507126781695424
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006001500375093774
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean15.33
std9.03
cv0.589
sampleLengths
018
134
223
328
416
528
67
710
830
932
1016
1114
128
1312
1429
1519
1618
177
1825
1917
2027
2123
2223
2314
2411
2523
2613
2712
2829
2923
3025
3114
3231
335
348
353
366
378
381
3916
4028
4129
4224
4326
4416
459
467
4717
4810
4917
69.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.42105263157894735
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners48
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Instead, there he stood—Lucien Moreau,"
ratio0.011
13.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences91
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, glowing"
1"he said, his voice a"
2"He leaned lightly on his"
3"Her heart stuttered, a betraying"
4"It had been eight months"
5"She'd fled back to London,"
6"she snapped, her bright blue"
7"She didn't step aside, didn't"
8"She hesitated, her straight black"
9"It was a far cry"
10"she muttered, stepping back just"
11"He slipped inside, his movements"
12"He was 32, seven years"
13"He picked up a scroll"
14"He winced, setting the scroll"
15"she corrected, though her friends"
16"They'd met through Eva's tangled"
17"They'd shared stolen nights in"
18"She'd left him there, words"
19"She backed up a step,"
ratio0.516
42.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences91
matches
0"The door swung open with"
1"Rory blinked into the dim"
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, glowing"
3"he said, his voice a"
4"He leaned lightly on his"
5"Her heart stuttered, a betraying"
6"It had been eight months"
7"She'd fled back to London,"
8"she snapped, her bright blue"
9"She didn't step aside, didn't"
10"The air between them hummed"
11"Attraction, yes—that electric pull she'd"
12"Lucien's lips quirked, not quite"
13"She hesitated, her straight black"
14"Eva was out, chasing leads"
15"The tabby in question lounged"
16"The scent of cumin and"
17"It was a far cry"
18"she muttered, stepping back just"
19"He slipped inside, his movements"
ratio0.835
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Now, he stepped closer, the"
ratio0.011
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He leaned lightly on his ivory-handled cane, not because he needed it, but because it was part of the persona, the fixer who concealed blades in plain sight."
1"It had been eight months since Paris—since that rain-slicked night in the Marais when she'd walked away, leaving him with a half-spoken confession and a wound t…"
2"Lucien had been the charming distraction, the information broker who'd whispered secrets in four languages, his half-demon blood lending him an allure that was …"
3"He closed the distance, his hand cupping her cheek, thumb tracing the line of her jaw."
4"He shuddered under her touch, his hands sliding up her thighs, bunching her shirt."
5"She traced his heterochromatic eyes with her fingers, memorizing the contrast, while he kissed the scar on her wrist, as if erasing old pains."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she corrected, though her friends called her Rory, and he'd always been more than that"
1"he admitted, voice low"
2"he murmured, lips trailing fire"
3"he whispered, voice rough"
4"she confessed, vulnerability cracking her cool facade"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"she corrected (correct)"
3"he admitted (admit)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
5"he whispered (whisper)"
6"she confessed (confess)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.7
effectiveRatio0.368
75.4728%