| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.42 | | leniency | 0.84 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1313 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1313 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "glinting" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "gleaming" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "stark" | | 11 | "quivered" | | 12 | "loomed" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1281 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 68 | | wordCount | 878 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 2.39 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 21 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 3 | | Shade | 4 | | You | 2 | | Eva | 18 | | Shelves | 1 | | Constables | 3 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Watch | 1 | | Hargrove | 3 | | Gloved | 1 | | Faint | 2 | | Needle | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "You" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Shelves" | | 7 | "Constables" | | 8 | "Kowalski" | | 9 | "Watch" | | 10 | "Hargrove" | | 11 | "Faint" | | 12 | "Needle" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.304 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1281 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 25.62 | | std | 19.27 | | cv | 0.752 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 43 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "She gripped the bone token—snatched from a junkie's pocket during last night's raid—tight in her fist." | | 1 | "The Veil Market thrummed despite the tape—vendors haggling over jars of writhing smoke, a hag with goat horns peddling cursed dice." | | 2 | "Male, Shade artisan by the pallor—skin like smoked glass, veins pulsing faint indigo." | | 3 | "Curly red hair tumbled loose; she tucked a strand behind her left ear." | | 4 | "Her worn leather satchel slumped nearby, books spilling out—tomes on rifts and bindings." | | 5 | "\"Sigils burned into the tiles. Protective wards, inverted. Someone cracked open a rift—pulled him through, maybe. Shades don't bleed like this; it's ichor, not blood. Ritual killing, I'd bet my Oxford degree.\"" | | 6 | "Shelves groaned under half-empty jars—essence of nightmare, phoenix ash." | | 7 | "Footprints muddled the tiles—human boots, size ten, mixed with claw drags." | | 8 | "Entries in Shade cant—translated scrawls beside: \"Client: E.K.—compass attuned, extra wards.\" Her jaw tightened." | | 9 | "Faint shimmer there—air rippled like heat haze." | | 10 | "Faint residue—brass shavings, verdigris flecks." | | 11 | "Needle slowed, quivered—pointed straight at Eva's satchel." | | 12 | "Used his own tool to slip out—pit's a stable portal, compass guided you." | | 13 | "Hargrove radioed for backup. Market whispers swelled—horns honked, wings rustled." | | 14 | "Quinn lunged, yanked the satchel open. Inside, amid books, a vial of indigo ichor glowed. Matching the pool. And beneath—a bone-handled knife, blade crusted black." | | 15 | "Quinn lunged after, boots pounding tiles. Constables shouted. Market erupted—stalls toppled, figures fled into shadows. Compass flew from her pocket, needle whipping wild as the pit shimmered wider." | | 16 | "Client—shadow broker." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 758 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "under half-empty jars—" | | 1 | "sigil-burned-straight heat" |
| | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.017150395778364115 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0013192612137203166 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 9.42 | | std | 6.87 | | cv | 0.729 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 37 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 95.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5735294117647058 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 78 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Her flashlight beam sliced through" | | 1 | "She gripped the bone token—snatched" | | 2 | "Her salt-and-pepper hair caught the" | | 3 | "Her worn leather watch ticked" | | 4 | "Her worn leather satchel slumped" | | 5 | "You made it through the" | | 6 | "They almost sealed the" | | 7 | "She pointed to the floor," | | 8 | "She pried it from the" | | 9 | "She rocked back on heels," | | 10 | "She stood, circling the stall" | | 11 | "She tucked hair again, glasses" | | 12 | "She snapped the book shut." | | 13 | "She gestured wide" | | 14 | "She shone her light along" | | 15 | "She scraped a sample into" | | 16 | "She snapped her gaze up." | | 17 | "She nodded to the floor" | | 18 | "She tapped Eva's satchel" | | 19 | "You silenced him." |
| | ratio | 0.221 | |
| 70.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended the" | | 1 | "Her flashlight beam sliced through" | | 2 | "The air thickened with incense" | | 3 | "She gripped the bone token—snatched" | | 4 | "Military boots echoed on the" | | 5 | "The Veil Market thrummed despite" | | 6 | "Quinn ducked under the tape." | | 7 | "Her salt-and-pepper hair caught the" | | 8 | "Throat slashed ear to ear," | | 9 | "Blood pooled black and viscous," | | 10 | "A small brass compass lay" | | 11 | "Quinn's voice cut through the" | | 12 | "Her worn leather watch ticked" | | 13 | "Eva spun from where she" | | 14 | "Her worn leather satchel slumped" | | 15 | "You made it through the" | | 16 | "They almost sealed the" | | 17 | "Quinn's brown eyes flicked to" | | 18 | "Eva nodded, pulling a notebook" | | 19 | "She pointed to the floor," |
| | ratio | 0.779 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn lifted, light catching runes" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn's brown eyes (quinn brown eye)" | | 1 | "Quinn's laugh barked (bark)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.04 | | leniency | 0.08 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |