Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAJV23XWFRTA9MQNJ572P8

Run Details

Duration:
44.6s
Cost:
$0.000273
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted like overripe peaches and something else…something musky, almost animalistic, but not unpleasant. Rory wrinkled her nose, inhaling deeply. It was a thick, heavy scent, clinging to the dampness that saturated the grove. She glanced at Isolde, whose silver hair seemed to absorb the dappled light filtering through the seemingly endless canopy. The Seer moved with an uncanny grace, her bare feet leaving no mark on the thick carpet of wildflowers. “Time…flows differently here,” Isolde murmured, her voice a low thrum that vibrated in Rory’s chest. It wasn’t a statement, more of an observation, delivered with the same detachment she might use to describe the weather. Nyx shimmered, their form solidifying here, becoming less a silhouette and more almost human—tall, lean, veiled in an imitation of shadow. They reached out a long, slender hand, tracing the bark of an impossibly large oak. It was wider than a car, its branches reaching so high they were lost in the golden haze. The oak’s bark wasn't rough and weathered like the trees back home; it felt smooth, almost polished. "The air…it sings," Nyx whispered, their voice echoing faintly as if carried on a breeze. Rory couldn’t hear anything but the rustling of leaves and the drip of moisture from the foliage, but she understood. It was a feeling, a resonance. Rory held the Heartstone pendant, the crimson gemstone pulsing a steady, warm beat against her skin. She’d received it a week ago, slipped through the mail with no return address. It had led her here, to Richmond Park, to this hidden pocket of…something. Something that made the hairs on her arms stand on end. She brushed a strand of black hair behind her ear, the familiar gesture a futile attempt to ground herself. "So, what are we looking for exactly?" She asked, her voice sounding jarringly ordinary in this place of quiet majesty. Isolde turned her lavender eyes towards Rory. “A convergence. A thinning.” The words hung in the air, devoid of explanation. They moved deeper into the grove, the wildflowers rising to their knees in vibrant waves of purple, gold, and crimson. The air grew warmer, richer, the scent of peaches intensifying. Strange, luminous fungi sprouted from the roots of the trees, casting an ethereal glow on the surrounding foliage. Rory reached out, tentatively touching a cap of deep turquoise. It felt cool and yielding, like velvet. “Careful,” Nyx cautioned, their violet eyes, faintly luminous, fixed on the fungi. "Not all beauty is benign." Rory ignored the warning and plucked the fungi from it's base. It left a faint shimmer when removed. Ahead, the grove opened into a small clearing bathed in the warm amber light. Towering structures rose from the earth, intricate and bewildering. They weren't buildings, not exactly. More like…organic sculptures, formed from twisting branches and woven vines. They resembled massive beehives, or perhaps the nests of some colossal, unknown creature. The material shimmered faintly, as if light itself was woven into the structure. “What…are those?” Rory breathed, the question escaping before she could stop it. Isolde offered no reply. Her gaze was fixed on the largest of the structures, its entrance a gaping maw of shadow. She began to walk towards it, her movements deliberate, unwavering. Rory and Nyx exchanged a look. "Shouldn't we…ask?" Rory asked, but the question felt foolish even as she voiced it. Nyx simply shrugged, their form flickering slightly. "Questions are for those who have the answers. We seek them.” They followed Isolde, their footsteps muffled by the dense flora. As they neared the structure, the air grew noticeably colder, despite the pervasive warmth of the grove. A low hum resonated from within, vibrating through the ground and up into their bones. The Heartstone pendant against Rory’s chest pulsed faster, its warmth almost painful. Reaching the entrance, Rory peered into the darkness. It wasn't the absence of light, but an actively absorbing darkness, as if the air itself was consuming the amber glow. It smelled of ozone and something ancient, something that predated the world she knew. “It feels…wrong,” Rory said, her voice barely a whisper. “All beginnings feel wrong,” Isolde replied, her voice echoing strangely within the structure. Without hesitation, she stepped into the darkness. Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who gave a nearly imperceptible nod and followed Isolde. Rory took a deep breath and crossed the threshold. Immediately, the temperature plummeted. The warm amber light vanished, replaced by a perpetual twilight. The walls of the structure seemed to writhe and shift, formed of the same interwoven branches and vines, but now twisted into grotesque, unnatural shapes. The air crackled with an unsettling energy. The scent of peaches was gone, replaced by a sharp, metallic tang. The structure wasn’t empty. Scattered throughout the interior were tables laden with food - mountains of glistening fruits, platters piled with roasted meats, goblets overflowing with crimson wine. But the food wasn’t fresh. Some of it was moldy, crawling with iridescent insects. Other portions were blackened and brittle, as if preserved for centuries. And seated around the tables were figures – indistinct shapes cloaked in shadow. Some seemed to be feasting, their movements jerky and unnatural. Others simply sat, staring blankly ahead, their faces hidden in the gloom. Were they…people? Or something else entirely? Rory gripped the Fae-Forged blade she'd received from Isolde, the moonsilver cold against her palm. It pulsed faintly, a silvery luminescence breaking through the twilight. “This is... unsettling," Rory observed, her voice tight. Nyx moved silently through the cavernous space, their form gliding between the tables. They seemed to absorb the shadows, their presence almost becoming one with the gloom. "This place…" Nyx murmured, their voice carrying a faint echo. "It resonates with…insatiability. A hunger that can never be sated." Isolde stood before one of the tables, seemingly oblivious to the grotesque feast. Her gaze was fixed on a single goblet, filled with a dark, viscous liquid. She reached out a hand, her fingers brushing the rim. "The Gluttony takes many forms,” She said, her voice echoing in the chamber. "It is not merely consumption, but a desperate need...a yearning for something lost." The figures at the tables began to stir. Slowly, mechanically, they turned their heads towards Rory, their faces remaining hidden in the shadows. Rory felt a prickling sensation on her skin, a sense of being watched, scrutinized. One of the figures rose from its seat. Its form coalesced slightly, revealing a glimpse of pallid skin and hollow eyes. It emitted a low groan—a sound of profound despair and endless hunger. Then the others began to rise, their movements slow, deliberate, like puppets controlled by unseen strings. They shuffled towards Rory, their shadows stretching and distorting in the dim light. The Heartstone pendant pulsed violently against her chest, searing her skin. A wave of nausea washed over her. This wasn't just a strange place. This wasn't some whimsical pocket realm. This was something dangerous. “I think we took a wrong turn," Rory said, her hand tightening on the Fae-Forged blade. "A *very* wrong turn."
created_at"2026-02-20T20:06:44.044Z" 2/20/2026, 8:06:44 PM
model"google/gemma-3-12b-it"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency762
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time44523
tokens_prompt1614
tokens_completion1927
native_tokens_prompt1601
native_tokens_completion1604
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.00027256
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"eb06dc92-5a16-47ec-a776-6ef956457c47"
id"chatcmpl-Rj23asysIFgfJ0LXHEG6mxFp"
is_byokfalse
latency50
model_permaslug"google/gemma-3-12b-it"
provider_name"DeepInfra"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771618004-MiPBMkizgGOHgScYtOmP"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-Rj23asysIFgfJ0LXHEG6mxFp"
total_cost0.00027256
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"DeepInfra"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.722
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"uncanny"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count3
5
word"resonance"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"structure"
count5
10
word"maw"
count1
11
word"unwavering"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count2
14
word"resonated"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count3
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"glistening"
count1
18
word"gloom"
count2
19
word"echo"
count1
20
word"yearning"
count1
21
word"sense of"
count1
22
word"profound"
count1
23
word"searing"
count1
24
word"whimsical"
count1
highlights
0"uncanny"
1"vibrated"
2"shimmered"
3"tracing"
4"echoing"
5"resonance"
6"familiar"
7"velvet"
8"intricate"
9"structure"
10"maw"
11"unwavering"
12"footsteps"
13"warmth"
14"resonated"
15"pulsed"
16"whisper"
17"glistening"
18"gloom"
19"echo"
20"yearning"
21"sense of"
22"profound"
23"searing"
24"whimsical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"wave of emotion"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"A wave of nausea"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
36.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1176
ratio0.001
matches
0"very"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1088
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Isolde9
Seer1
Rory21
Heartstone3
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx8
Fae-Forged2
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Seer"
2"Rory"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.535
windowScore0.5
61.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like overripe peaches and somethin"
1"ng through the seemingly endless canopy"
2"of the tables, seemingly oblivious to the gr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.85
wordCount1176
matches
0"not merely consumption, but a desperate need"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean32.67
std19.37
cv0.593
sampleLengths
073
135
271
341
473
520
620
765
817
918
1064
1112
1231
1320
1418
1554
1643
179
1820
1924
2058
214
2249
2341
2425
258
2627
2720
2837
2926
3037
3133
3229
3330
344
3520
82.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences94
matches
0"were lost"
1"was woven"
2"was fixed"
3"was gone"
4"were blackened"
5"was fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was consuming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences99
ratio0.051
matches
0"Nyx shimmered, their form solidifying here, becoming less a silhouette and more almost human—tall, lean, veiled in an imitation of shadow."
1"The oak’s bark wasn't rough and weathered like the trees back home; it felt smooth, almost polished."
2"Scattered throughout the interior were tables laden with food - mountains of glistening fruits, platters piled with roasted meats, goblets overflowing with crimson wine."
3"And seated around the tables were figures – indistinct shapes cloaked in shadow."
4"It emitted a low groan—a sound of profound despair and endless hunger."
95.26% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1090
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03853211009174312
lyAdverbCount28
lyAdverbRatio0.025688073394495414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.88
std4.84
cv0.408
sampleLengths
015
16
214
319
419
515
620
721
815
918
1017
1115
1220
136
1416
1514
1613
1711
1819
1920
207
2113
2220
2310
2418
2510
267
2712
285
2911
307
3114
329
335
3410
3513
3613
3712
384
3917
4010
416
4214
437
4411
4510
4617
4715
4812
498
57.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.40404040404040403
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences93
matches
0"More like…organic sculptures, formed from"
1"Immediately, the temperature plummeted."
2"Slowly, mechanically, they turned their"
3"Then the others began to"
ratio0.043
99.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences93
matches
0"It was a thick, heavy"
1"She glanced at Isolde, whose"
2"It wasn’t a statement, more"
3"They reached out a long,"
4"It was wider than a"
5"It was a feeling, a"
6"She’d received it a week"
7"It had led her here,"
8"She brushed a strand of"
9"She asked, her voice sounding"
10"They moved deeper into the"
11"It felt cool and yielding,"
12"It left a faint shimmer"
13"They weren't buildings, not exactly."
14"They resembled massive beehives, or"
15"Her gaze was fixed on"
16"She began to walk towards"
17"They followed Isolde, their footsteps"
18"It wasn't the absence of"
19"It smelled of ozone and"
ratio0.301
46.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences93
matches
0"The air tasted like overripe"
1"Rory wrinkled her nose, inhaling"
2"It was a thick, heavy"
3"She glanced at Isolde, whose"
4"The Seer moved with an"
5"Isolde murmured, her voice a"
6"It wasn’t a statement, more"
7"Nyx shimmered, their form solidifying"
8"They reached out a long,"
9"It was wider than a"
10"The oak’s bark wasn't rough"
11"Nyx whispered, their voice echoing"
12"Rory couldn’t hear anything but"
13"It was a feeling, a"
14"Rory held the Heartstone pendant,"
15"She’d received it a week"
16"It had led her here,"
17"Something that made the hairs"
18"She brushed a strand of"
19"She asked, her voice sounding"
ratio0.828
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"It was a thick, heavy scent, clinging to the dampness that saturated the grove."
1"Something that made the hairs on her arms stand on end."
2"It wasn't the absence of light, but an actively absorbing darkness, as if the air itself was consuming the amber glow."
3"Other portions were blackened and brittle, as if preserved for centuries."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her voice a low thrum that vibrated in Rory’s chest"
1"Nyx whispered, their voice echoing faintly as if carried on a breeze"
2"Nyx cautioned, their violet eyes, faintly luminous, fixed on the fungi"
3"Rory breathed, the question escaping before she could stop it"
4"Rory asked, but the question felt foolish even as she voiced it"
5"Rory said, her voice barely a whisper"
6"Isolde replied, her voice echoing strangely within the structure"
7"Rory observed, her voice tight"
8"Nyx murmured, their voice carrying a faint echo"
9"She said, her voice echoing in the chamber"
10"Rory said, her hand tightening on the Fae-Forged blade"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory breathed (breathe)"
3"Rory observed (observe)"
4"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.455
73.4376%