| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.722 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1178 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1178 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "uncanny" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "velvet" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "structure" | | 10 | "maw" | | 11 | "unwavering" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "resonated" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "glistening" | | 18 | "gloom" | | 19 | "echo" | | 20 | "yearning" | | 21 | "sense of" | | 22 | "profound" | | 23 | "searing" | | 24 | "whimsical" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "wave of emotion" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A wave of nausea" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 36.47% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1176 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1088 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 9 | | Seer | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Fae-Forged | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Seer" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.535 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 61.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like overripe peaches and somethin" | | 1 | "ng through the seemingly endless canopy" | | 2 | "of the tables, seemingly oblivious to the gr" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.85 | | wordCount | 1176 | | matches | | 0 | "not merely consumption, but a desperate need" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 32.67 | | std | 19.37 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 20 |
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| 82.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "were lost" | | 1 | "was woven" | | 2 | "was fixed" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "were blackened" | | 5 | "was fixed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx shimmered, their form solidifying here, becoming less a silhouette and more almost human—tall, lean, veiled in an imitation of shadow." | | 1 | "The oak’s bark wasn't rough and weathered like the trees back home; it felt smooth, almost polished." | | 2 | "Scattered throughout the interior were tables laden with food - mountains of glistening fruits, platters piled with roasted meats, goblets overflowing with crimson wine." | | 3 | "And seated around the tables were figures – indistinct shapes cloaked in shadow." | | 4 | "It emitted a low groan—a sound of profound despair and endless hunger." |
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| 95.26% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1090 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03853211009174312 | | lyAdverbCount | 28 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.025688073394495414 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 11.88 | | std | 4.84 | | cv | 0.408 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 57.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.40404040404040403 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "More like…organic sculptures, formed from" | | 1 | "Immediately, the temperature plummeted." | | 2 | "Slowly, mechanically, they turned their" | | 3 | "Then the others began to" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 99.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a thick, heavy" | | 1 | "She glanced at Isolde, whose" | | 2 | "It wasn’t a statement, more" | | 3 | "They reached out a long," | | 4 | "It was wider than a" | | 5 | "It was a feeling, a" | | 6 | "She’d received it a week" | | 7 | "It had led her here," | | 8 | "She brushed a strand of" | | 9 | "She asked, her voice sounding" | | 10 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 11 | "It felt cool and yielding," | | 12 | "It left a faint shimmer" | | 13 | "They weren't buildings, not exactly." | | 14 | "They resembled massive beehives, or" | | 15 | "Her gaze was fixed on" | | 16 | "She began to walk towards" | | 17 | "They followed Isolde, their footsteps" | | 18 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 19 | "It smelled of ozone and" |
| | ratio | 0.301 | |
| 46.02% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted like overripe" | | 1 | "Rory wrinkled her nose, inhaling" | | 2 | "It was a thick, heavy" | | 3 | "She glanced at Isolde, whose" | | 4 | "The Seer moved with an" | | 5 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a" | | 6 | "It wasn’t a statement, more" | | 7 | "Nyx shimmered, their form solidifying" | | 8 | "They reached out a long," | | 9 | "It was wider than a" | | 10 | "The oak’s bark wasn't rough" | | 11 | "Nyx whispered, their voice echoing" | | 12 | "Rory couldn’t hear anything but" | | 13 | "It was a feeling, a" | | 14 | "Rory held the Heartstone pendant," | | 15 | "She’d received it a week" | | 16 | "It had led her here," | | 17 | "Something that made the hairs" | | 18 | "She brushed a strand of" | | 19 | "She asked, her voice sounding" |
| | ratio | 0.828 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 90.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a thick, heavy scent, clinging to the dampness that saturated the grove." | | 1 | "Something that made the hairs on her arms stand on end." | | 2 | "It wasn't the absence of light, but an actively absorbing darkness, as if the air itself was consuming the amber glow." | | 3 | "Other portions were blackened and brittle, as if preserved for centuries." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a low thrum that vibrated in Rory’s chest" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, their voice echoing faintly as if carried on a breeze" | | 2 | "Nyx cautioned, their violet eyes, faintly luminous, fixed on the fungi" | | 3 | "Rory breathed, the question escaping before she could stop it" | | 4 | "Rory asked, but the question felt foolish even as she voiced it" | | 5 | "Rory said, her voice barely a whisper" | | 6 | "Isolde replied, her voice echoing strangely within the structure" | | 7 | "Rory observed, her voice tight" | | 8 | "Nyx murmured, their voice carrying a faint echo" | | 9 | "She said, her voice echoing in the chamber" | | 10 | "Rory said, her hand tightening on the Fae-Forged blade" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Rory observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.611 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.455 | |