Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAJYSGG7W8PQBNBWT6ZCZE

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora’s skin, a frantic thrum against her ribs. It felt like a trapped bird, desperate to escape. Beside her, Nyx shifted, their form rippling like heat haze above asphalt. Silas, ever practical, adjusted the strap of his battered messenger bag, his face pale beneath the flickering amber light. “Are you certain about this, Rory?” Silas asked, his voice tight. Aurora ignored the tremor in her hands. “Isolde said it was the only way.” She glanced back at the standing stones, ancient oaks gnarled and twisted, marking the boundary of the Fae Grove. Beyond them, the air shimmered, a heat distortion that tasted like ozone and something else… something impossibly sweet. Nyx extended a hand, their fingers dissolving into shadow as they reached towards the shimmering air. “The Veil… thinner than I anticipated.” Their voice, a whisper carried on the wind, sent a shiver down Aurora’s spine. She took a breath and stepped forward, Silas and Nyx close behind. The moment she crossed the threshold, the world fractured. The familiar scent of damp earth and pine needles of Richmond Park vanished, replaced by an overwhelming fragrance of ripe fruit and blooming spices. The air hung thick and heavy, warm against her skin. Above, the sky wasn’t blue, but a perpetual twilight of amber, casting long, distorted shadows. The ground beneath her feet wasn't earth, but a spongy moss that yielded with each step. Towering above them were trees unlike any she’d ever seen. Their trunks were a deep, swirling purple, their leaves a riot of colors – crimson, gold, and a vibrant, almost electric blue. “By the saints…” Silas breathed, his usual cynicism momentarily forgotten. Nyx remained silent, their form solidifying slightly, their violet eyes scanning the landscape. “Dymas,” they murmured, the word a sigh. “The air… it tastes of indulgence.” Aurora felt a strange lightness in her limbs, a loosening of tension she hadn’t realized she carried. It was unsettling, like being offered a potent, unknown drug. She clutched the Heartstone, grounding herself. The grove opened into a sprawling valley, a landscape of impossible abundance. Vineyards stretched as far as the eye could see, laden with grapes the size of melons. Orchards overflowed with fruit she couldn’t name – shimmering, iridescent orbs and velvety, deep-red pods. Waterfalls cascaded down terraced hillsides, feeding into crystal-clear streams that meandered through the valley. “It’s… obscene,” Silas muttered, his gaze fixed on a table laden with pastries that seemed to defy gravity, stacked high in precarious towers. Aurora noticed movement in the distance. Figures, tall and slender, moved amongst the vines, their forms indistinct in the amber light. They wore flowing robes of deep crimson and gold, their faces obscured by elaborate masks. “Someone lives here,” she said, her voice barely a whisper. Nyx tilted their head. “Not lives. *Feasts*.” They began to walk, the spongy moss muffling their footsteps. The air grew heavier, the scent of fruit intensifying, laced with the aroma of roasting meats and exotic spices. As they moved deeper into the valley, they came across a clearing where a grand feast was in progress. Long tables groaned under the weight of food – roasted boars, platters of glistening fish, mountains of fruit, and goblets overflowing with ruby-red wine. The masked figures moved amongst the diners, serving food with an almost ritualistic precision. Laughter echoed through the valley, a hollow, unsettling sound. Aurora felt a growing unease. This wasn’t a celebration. It was… something else. Something predatory. “This feels wrong,” she said, her hand instinctively reaching for the Fae-Forged Blade tucked into her belt. Silas, drawn by the sheer spectacle of the feast, was already halfway to the table, his eyes wide with a mixture of awe and morbid fascination. “Look at this! They’ve got… what *is* that?” He pointed to a dish piled high with what appeared to be candied insects, shimmering with an unnatural sheen. “Silas, don’t!” Aurora hissed, but he was already reaching for a piece. Nyx stepped forward, their form flickering, their voice a low warning. “Do not partake. This is not sustenance. It is… a lure.” Before Silas could react, one of the masked figures glided towards him, extending a hand offering a goblet of wine. “Welcome, travelers,” the figure said, their voice a smooth, melodic drone. “Join us in our revelry. Partake of the bounty of Dymas.” Silas hesitated, then took the goblet. He raised it in a mock toast. “Well, when in Hel…” As he drank, his eyes glazed over. A slow smile spread across his face. He began to laugh, a high-pitched, manic sound that didn’t belong to him. Aurora felt a surge of panic. “Silas! What’s happening?” Nyx moved swiftly, intercepting the masked figure before they could offer another goblet. Their shadow form lashed out, momentarily disrupting the figure’s composure. “They are binding him,” Nyx said, their voice strained. “The Gluttony… it takes root quickly.” Aurora drew the Fae-Forged Blade, the moonsilver gleaming in the amber light. The blade felt cold against her palm, a stark contrast to the oppressive warmth of the valley. “We need to get him out of here,” she said, her voice firm despite the tremor in her hands. The masked figures turned their attention to them, their laughter ceasing abruptly. The revelry died down, replaced by an unsettling silence. The amber light seemed to intensify, casting long, menacing shadows. “You trespass in Dymas,” one of the figures said, their voice now devoid of any warmth. “You are not welcome here.” “We’re leaving,” Aurora said, her grip tightening on the Fae-Forged Blade. “Just let us pass.” The figure chuckled, a dry, rasping sound. “Leaving? But the feast has only just begun.” Suddenly, the ground began to tremble. From the shadows emerged grotesque figures – hulking, bloated creatures with gaping mouths and eyes that burned with a hungry light. They were the servants of Prince Belphegor, the embodiment of Gluttony. “Enjoy the banquet,” the figure said, gesturing towards the approaching horde. “It is your destiny.” Aurora knew they were outnumbered, outmatched. But she wouldn’t abandon Silas. She wouldn’t let the Gluttony consume him. “Nyx, cover Silas,” she said, her voice ringing with determination. “I’ll create an opening.” Nyx nodded, their form shifting, their shadow tendrils reaching out to shield Silas from the advancing creatures. Aurora charged forward, the Fae-Forged Blade a silver streak in the amber light, ready to face the horrors of Dymas. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, a frantic rhythm urging her onward. This wasn't a place for indulgence. It was a trap. And they had to escape.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She glanced back [back]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.586
leniency1
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.059
86.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"fractured"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"glistening"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"disrupting"
count1
14
word"gleaming"
count1
15
word"stark"
count1
16
word"oppressive"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count2
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"hulking"
count1
20
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"shimmered"
2"whisper"
3"fractured"
4"familiar"
5"electric"
6"scanning"
7"tension"
8"crystal"
9"footsteps"
10"weight"
11"glistening"
12"echoed"
13"disrupting"
14"gleaming"
15"stark"
16"oppressive"
17"warmth"
18"silence"
19"hulking"
20"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences85
matches
0"a surge of panic"
1"g with determination"
42.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1096
ratio0.002
matches
0"Feasts"
1"is"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount960
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Aurora12
Nyx9
Fae5
Grove1
Silas10
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-Forged4
Blade4
Prince1
Belphegor1
Gluttony2
Dymas1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Nyx"
3"Silas"
4"Blade"
5"Prince"
6"Belphegor"
7"Gluttony"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.875
windowScore1
47.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a trapped bird, desperate to"
1"tasted like ozone and something else…"
2"pastries that seemed to defy gravity, stacked high in precarious towers"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1096
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean28.84
std16.99
cv0.589
sampleLengths
052
111
251
336
445
573
610
726
833
957
1023
1136
1210
137
1448
1547
1615
1717
1853
1912
2022
2142
2217
2327
249
2523
2615
2729
2819
2931
3021
3115
3215
3338
3415
3518
3614
3764
97.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"being offered"
1"were outnumbered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs172
matches(empty)
25.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences97
ratio0.041
matches
0"Their trunks were a deep, swirling purple, their leaves a riot of colors – crimson, gold, and a vibrant, almost electric blue."
1"Orchards overflowed with fruit she couldn’t name – shimmering, iridescent orbs and velvety, deep-red pods."
2"Long tables groaned under the weight of food – roasted boars, platters of glistening fish, mountains of fruit, and goblets overflowing with ruby-red wine."
3"From the shadows emerged grotesque figures – hulking, bloated creatures with gaping mouths and eyes that burned with a hungry light."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount964
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, warm against her"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.022821576763485476
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00933609958506224
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean11.3
std6.06
cv0.536
sampleLengths
012
19
212
319
411
57
626
715
83
916
1020
1112
129
1324
1410
1515
1616
1710
1822
1910
2013
217
226
2317
2410
256
2612
2716
2815
2914
3023
316
3215
3315
3410
354
363
3710
3819
3919
4024
4114
429
435
444
452
462
472
4817
4926
71.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4639175257731959
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners45
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Suddenly, the ground began to"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences82
matches
0"It felt like a trapped"
1"She glanced back at the"
2"Their voice, a whisper carried"
3"She took a breath and"
4"Their trunks were a deep,"
5"they murmured, the word a"
6"It was unsettling, like being"
7"She clutched the Heartstone, grounding"
8"They wore flowing robes of"
9"she said, her voice barely"
10"They began to walk, the"
11"she said, her hand instinctively"
12"He pointed to a dish"
13"He raised it in a"
14"He began to laugh, a"
15"Their shadow form lashed out,"
16"she said, her voice firm"
17"They were the servants of"
18"She wouldn’t let the Gluttony"
19"she said, her voice ringing"
ratio0.256
39.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences82
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora’s"
1"It felt like a trapped"
2"Silas, ever practical, adjusted the"
3"Silas asked, his voice tight"
4"Aurora ignored the tremor in"
5"She glanced back at the"
6"something impossibly sweet."
7"Nyx extended a hand, their"
8"Their voice, a whisper carried"
9"She took a breath and"
10"The moment she crossed the"
11"The familiar scent of damp"
12"The air hung thick and"
13"The ground beneath her feet"
14"Their trunks were a deep,"
15"Silas breathed, his usual cynicism"
16"Nyx remained silent, their form"
17"they murmured, the word a"
18"Aurora felt a strange lightness"
19"It was unsettling, like being"
ratio0.841
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Before Silas could react, one"
ratio0.012
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Beyond them, the air shimmered, a heat distortion that tasted like ozone and something else…"
1"Nyx remained silent, their form solidifying slightly, their violet eyes scanning the landscape."
2"Waterfalls cascaded down terraced hillsides, feeding into crystal-clear streams that meandered through the valley."
3"He began to laugh, a high-pitched, manic sound that didn’t belong to him."
4"Nyx nodded, their form shifting, their shadow tendrils reaching out to shield Silas from the advancing creatures."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Silas asked, his voice tight"
1"Silas breathed, his usual cynicism momentarily forgotten"
2"they murmured, the word a sigh"
3"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
4"the figure said, their voice a smooth, melodic drone"
5"Nyx said, their voice strained"
6"Aurora said, her grip tightening on the Fae-Forged Blade"
7"she said, her voice ringing with determination"
12.07% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Silas breathed (breathe)"
1"they murmured (murmur)"
2"Silas muttered (mutter)"
3"Aurora hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.483
leniency0.966
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.276
75.3010%