| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She glanced back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.586 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 86.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1100 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1100 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "fractured" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "glistening" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "disrupting" | | 14 | "gleaming" | | 15 | "stark" | | 16 | "oppressive" | | 17 | "warmth" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "hulking" | | 20 | "charged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "a surge of panic" | | 1 | "g with determination" |
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| 42.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1096 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.50% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 960 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Aurora | 12 | | Nyx | 9 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 1 | | Silas | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 4 | | Blade | 4 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Gluttony | 2 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Prince" | | 6 | "Belphegor" | | 7 | "Gluttony" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.875 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a trapped bird, desperate to" | | 1 | "tasted like ozone and something else…" | | 2 | "pastries that seemed to defy gravity, stacked high in precarious towers" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1096 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 28.84 | | std | 16.99 | | cv | 0.589 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 57 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 64 |
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| 97.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "being offered" | | 1 | "were outnumbered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.04% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "Their trunks were a deep, swirling purple, their leaves a riot of colors – crimson, gold, and a vibrant, almost electric blue." | | 1 | "Orchards overflowed with fruit she couldn’t name – shimmering, iridescent orbs and velvety, deep-red pods." | | 2 | "Long tables groaned under the weight of food – roasted boars, platters of glistening fish, mountains of fruit, and goblets overflowing with ruby-red wine." | | 3 | "From the shadows emerged grotesque figures – hulking, bloated creatures with gaping mouths and eyes that burned with a hungry light." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 964 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy, warm against her" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.022821576763485476 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00933609958506224 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 11.3 | | std | 6.06 | | cv | 0.536 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 71.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4639175257731959 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 40.65% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the ground began to" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "It felt like a trapped" | | 1 | "She glanced back at the" | | 2 | "Their voice, a whisper carried" | | 3 | "She took a breath and" | | 4 | "Their trunks were a deep," | | 5 | "they murmured, the word a" | | 6 | "It was unsettling, like being" | | 7 | "She clutched the Heartstone, grounding" | | 8 | "They wore flowing robes of" | | 9 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 10 | "They began to walk, the" | | 11 | "she said, her hand instinctively" | | 12 | "He pointed to a dish" | | 13 | "He raised it in a" | | 14 | "He began to laugh, a" | | 15 | "Their shadow form lashed out," | | 16 | "she said, her voice firm" | | 17 | "They were the servants of" | | 18 | "She wouldn’t let the Gluttony" | | 19 | "she said, her voice ringing" |
| | ratio | 0.256 | |
| 39.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora’s" | | 1 | "It felt like a trapped" | | 2 | "Silas, ever practical, adjusted the" | | 3 | "Silas asked, his voice tight" | | 4 | "Aurora ignored the tremor in" | | 5 | "She glanced back at the" | | 6 | "something impossibly sweet." | | 7 | "Nyx extended a hand, their" | | 8 | "Their voice, a whisper carried" | | 9 | "She took a breath and" | | 10 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 11 | "The familiar scent of damp" | | 12 | "The air hung thick and" | | 13 | "The ground beneath her feet" | | 14 | "Their trunks were a deep," | | 15 | "Silas breathed, his usual cynicism" | | 16 | "Nyx remained silent, their form" | | 17 | "they murmured, the word a" | | 18 | "Aurora felt a strange lightness" | | 19 | "It was unsettling, like being" |
| | ratio | 0.841 | |
| 60.98% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Silas could react, one" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 55.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond them, the air shimmered, a heat distortion that tasted like ozone and something else…" | | 1 | "Nyx remained silent, their form solidifying slightly, their violet eyes scanning the landscape." | | 2 | "Waterfalls cascaded down terraced hillsides, feeding into crystal-clear streams that meandered through the valley." | | 3 | "He began to laugh, a high-pitched, manic sound that didn’t belong to him." | | 4 | "Nyx nodded, their form shifting, their shadow tendrils reaching out to shield Silas from the advancing creatures." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas asked, his voice tight" | | 1 | "Silas breathed, his usual cynicism momentarily forgotten" | | 2 | "they murmured, the word a sigh" | | 3 | "she said, her voice barely a whisper" | | 4 | "the figure said, their voice a smooth, melodic drone" | | 5 | "Nyx said, their voice strained" | | 6 | "Aurora said, her grip tightening on the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 7 | "she said, her voice ringing with determination" |
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| 12.07% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Silas breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Silas muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Aurora hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.966 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.276 | |