Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAK1MTGE5R3EMPSQ0PPS42

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Duration:
15.9s
Cost:
$0.000156
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The chime of the doorbell was a sharp, insistent bleat in the cluttered quiet of Eva's flat. Rory was hunched over a particularly dense tome on Sumerian demonology, a mug of lukewarm tea sweating on the table beside her, when it sounded. She hadn’t expected anyone. Not tonight. Not ever, really. She’d deliberately insulated herself from the echoes of the past, constructing a carefully curated life above Silas’ bar, a life measured in deliveries and the smell of ginger and garlic from Yu-Fei’s kitchen. She glanced at the door, a practiced wariness settling over her. Eva had warned her, repeatedly, about loose lips and unwanted attention. The flat was a fortress, a testament to a life spent building walls. Three deadbolts and a healthy dose of paranoia kept most people at bay. “Just a moment,” she called, her voice sounding thinner than she intended. She hesitated, then pushed herself away from the table, smoothing down the dark, simple dress she’d worn. The small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a pale whisper beneath the fabric, caught the light. It was a reminder, a tiny, insistent pinprick of a memory she preferred to forget. The door swung inward before she could fully steel herself. He was standing there, framed against the dim hallway light, an unnerving elegance radiating from him. Lucien Moreau. Even after all this time, even after the scorched earth they’d both agreed to walk, he was undeniably Lucien. The platinum blond hair, slicked back with an almost painful precision, the charcoal suit that seemed to absorb the light, the disconcerting heterochromia of his eyes – amber and black, swirling like a trapped storm. And, of course, the ivory-handled cane, resting lightly in his hand, a silent promise of lethal grace. “Rory,” he said, his voice a low, carefully modulated rumble. It hadn’t changed, not really. Still carrying the subtle hint of a French accent, still tinged with a weariness that seemed to settle into his bones. “Lucien,” she replied, the word a brittle shard in her throat. It felt wrong, speaking his name after everything. Like reopening a wound she’d painstakingly bandaged. He stepped inside, the scent of sandalwood and something subtly darker – ozone, perhaps – trailing behind him. He didn't bother with formalities, didn't announce himself or offer an explanation for his intrusion. He simply took in the cramped space, the stacks of books threatening to topple, the general air of controlled chaos that was unmistakably Rory’s. “This still smells of ginger and regret,” he observed, his amber eye flicking over the overflowing bookshelves. Rory bristled, instinctively defensive. “It smells of takeout and research,” she corrected, turning back to her Sumerian demonology. It was a pathetic attempt at normalcy, a clumsy shield against the current of something undeniably potent that was building between them. He didn’t move, didn’t react to her defensiveness. Instead, he walked further into the flat, his movements fluid and deliberate, until he was standing a few feet away from her desk. He studied her for a long moment, his expression unreadable. “I needed to see you,” he said finally, his voice softer now, stripped of its initial formality. “You could have,” Rory said, her voice clipped. “You didn’t have to.” “That’s precisely the point,” he countered, a ghost of a smile playing at the corner of his lips. “I didn't want you to *choose* to see me.” The air thickened, charged with the unresolved history between them. It wasn’t a comfortable tension, not one laced with easy affection. It was a brittle, dangerous thing, sharp and edged with the threat of old wounds. “It’s been five years, Lucien,” she said, her gaze fixed on the open page of her book. “Let it go.” “Some things don’t simply *go*, Rory,” he replied, his hand instinctively reaching for the ivory cane. He didn't raise it, didn’t threaten, but the gesture spoke volumes. “Especially not when they’re tied to a certain woman with bright blue eyes and a stubborn streak.” She lowered the book slightly, meeting his gaze. “You always did have a way with words.” “And you always did have a way of pushing me away,” he said, the amusement fading from his face. “That’s the most compelling part of you, isn't it? The resistance.” He moved closer, slowly, deliberately, until he was standing beside her desk, close enough that she could feel the subtle heat radiating from his body. The scent of sandalwood was stronger now, mingled with a hint of something wild, something primal. “I heard about Eva,” he said, his voice low. “She’s… thriving.” “She’s better off,” Rory stated flatly. “Is she?” He tilted his head, his black eye scrutinizing her. “Or is she simply denying the part of herself that remembers you?” The question hung in the air, an unspoken acknowledgment of the connection they’d both tried so desperately to bury. Rory's breath hitched. She turned her gaze away, focusing on the chaotic arrangement of books and scrolls. The scar on her wrist throbbed faintly. “Don’t,” she said, her voice barely a whisper. “Don't what, Rory?” he asked, gently reaching out and brushing a stray strand of hair from her face. The touch was feather-light, almost hesitant, yet it sent a jolt of electricity through her. She flinched, pulling away slightly. “Don't dredge it up.” “I’m not dredging anything,” he insisted, his voice laced with a vulnerability that surprised her. “I’m simply observing. You haven’t changed. You’re still fiercely independent, stubbornly intelligent, and devastatingly difficult to reach.” He paused, and for a moment, his amber eye held hers, searching. Rory felt a strange, disorienting pull, a yearning she hadn't realized she still harbored. It was a dangerous feeling, a promise of pain and regret, but it was undeniably there, simmering beneath the surface of her carefully constructed defenses. “What do you want, Lucien?” she asked, her voice tight. He leaned closer, his breath warm against her ear. “I want to know why you pushed me away,” he murmured, his voice a silken threat. "I want to understand.” The silence stretched between them, thick with unspoken words, with the ghosts of a passionate, destructive affair. Rory closed her eyes, battling the urge to flee, to retreat back into the safety of her carefully constructed solitude. But something held her rooted to the spot, a magnetic force she couldn't deny. When she finally opened her eyes, she saw a flicker of something akin to hope in his heterochromatic gaze. And for the first time in five years, she wondered if maybe, just maybe, she wasn’t quite as good at pushing people away as she thought.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She’d deliberately [deliberately]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"Rory stated flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.15
36.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count4
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count2
6
adverb"slowly"
count1
7
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"deliberately"
2"carefully"
3"lightly"
4"precisely"
5"slightly"
6"slowly"
7"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"echoes"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"testament"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"tinged"
count1
6
word"normalcy"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"comfortable"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"affection"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count2
14
word"chaotic"
count1
15
word"throbbed"
count1
16
word"yearning"
count1
17
word"simmering"
count1
18
word"constructed"
count2
19
word"silence"
count1
20
word"magnetic"
count1
21
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"measured"
2"testament"
3"whisper"
4"reminder"
5"tinged"
6"normalcy"
7"unreadable"
8"charged"
9"comfortable"
10"tension"
11"affection"
12"could feel"
13"unspoken"
14"chaotic"
15"throbbed"
16"yearning"
17"simmering"
18"constructed"
19"silence"
20"magnetic"
21"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1102
ratio0.002
matches
0"choose"
1"go"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount911
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Sumerian2
Moreau1
Lucien2
French1
Rory8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"suit that seemed to absorb the light, the disconcerting heterochromia of his eyes – amber and black, swirling like a trapped storm"
1"weariness that seemed to settle into his bones"
2"something akin to hope in his heterochromatic g"
3"quite as good at pushing people away as she thought"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1102
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean33.39
std20.27
cv0.607
sampleLengths
084
148
260
310
489
536
626
757
817
940
1041
1117
1212
1327
1436
1520
1644
1716
1830
1941
2011
216
2223
2343
248
2533
269
2732
2851
2910
3029
3151
3245
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"was hunched"
24.56% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was standing"
1"was building"
2"was standing"
3"was standing"
74.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences83
ratio0.024
matches
0"The platinum blond hair, slicked back with an almost painful precision, the charcoal suit that seemed to absorb the light, the disconcerting heterochromia of his eyes – amber and black, swirling like a trapped storm."
1"He stepped inside, the scent of sandalwood and something subtly darker – ozone, perhaps – trailing behind him."
40.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount185
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.08648648648648649
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.05945945945945946
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean13.28
std6.87
cv0.517
sampleLengths
017
125
24
32
43
533
611
711
813
913
1012
1117
1216
1315
1410
1516
162
1719
1835
1917
2010
215
2221
2311
248
257
2618
2715
2824
2917
304
3114
3222
338
3423
3510
3617
378
384
3918
409
4110
4211
4315
4417
453
4616
4711
4817
498
41.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3373493975903614
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners28
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Still carrying the subtle hint"
1"Instead, he walked further into"
ratio0.029
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences70
matches
0"She hadn’t expected anyone."
1"She’d deliberately insulated herself from"
2"She glanced at the door,"
3"she called, her voice sounding"
4"She hesitated, then pushed herself"
5"It was a reminder, a"
6"He was standing there, framed"
7"he said, his voice a"
8"It hadn’t changed, not really."
9"she replied, the word a"
10"It felt wrong, speaking his"
11"He stepped inside, the scent"
12"He didn't bother with formalities,"
13"He simply took in the"
14"he observed, his amber eye"
15"she corrected, turning back to"
16"It was a pathetic attempt"
17"He didn’t move, didn’t react"
18"He studied her for a"
19"he said finally, his voice"
ratio0.586
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences70
matches
0"The chime of the doorbell"
1"Rory was hunched over a"
2"She hadn’t expected anyone."
3"She’d deliberately insulated herself from"
4"She glanced at the door,"
5"Eva had warned her, repeatedly,"
6"The flat was a fortress,"
7"she called, her voice sounding"
8"She hesitated, then pushed herself"
9"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
10"It was a reminder, a"
11"The door swung inward before"
12"He was standing there, framed"
13"The platinum blond hair, slicked"
14"he said, his voice a"
15"It hadn’t changed, not really."
16"she replied, the word a"
17"It felt wrong, speaking his"
18"He stepped inside, the scent"
19"He didn't bother with formalities,"
ratio0.857
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Even after all this time,"
1"And, of course, the ivory-handled"
ratio0.029
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The platinum blond hair, slicked back with an almost painful precision, the charcoal suit that seemed to absorb the light, the disconcerting heterochromia of hi…"
1"He simply took in the cramped space, the stacks of books threatening to topple, the general air of controlled chaos that was unmistakably Rory’s."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"she called, her voice sounding thinner than she intended"
1"he said, his voice a low, carefully modulated rumble"
2"she replied, the word a brittle shard in her throat"
3"he observed, his amber eye flicking over the overflowing bookshelves"
4"he said finally, his voice softer now, stripped of its initial formality"
5"Rory said, her voice clipped"
6"he replied, his hand instinctively reaching for the ivory cane"
7"he said, the amusement fading from his face"
8"he said, his voice low"
9"He tilted, his black eye scrutinizing her"
10"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
11"she asked, her voice tight"
12"he murmured, his voice a silken threat"
2.94% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"she corrected (correct)"
2"Rory stated flatly (state)"
3"he insisted (insist)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.567
leniency1
rawRatio0.294
effectiveRatio0.294
69.8828%