Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAK9MPHAHNRYCFWCVTXGN5

Run Details

Duration:
49.9s
Cost:
$0.000434
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chipped paint on the doorframe felt cold under Rory’s palm. Three deadbolts clicked back, one after another, a practiced motion meant to ward off more than just unwanted callers. She hadn’t expected anyone, not tonight. The scent of cumin and something sweeter—cardamom, maybe—drifted up from the curry house below. She tugged the door open. Lucian stood on the landing, a stark figure against the dim hallway light. Charcoal suit immaculate, platinum hair gleaming. He hadn’t changed a bit. Not even the slight tilt of his head, the way his amber and black eyes assessed everything at once. An ivory-handled cane rested against his shoulder. “Well,” she said, voice rougher than she intended. “This is a surprise.” He didn’t offer a polite greeting, didn't even blink. Instead, his gaze raked over her—the faded band t-shirt, ripped jeans, the smudge of grease on her cheek from a late shift at Golden Empress. “Don’t pretend you’re not pleased to see me, Aurora.” Her jaw tightened. “Pleased isn’t exactly the word.” She stepped back, offering him room, but not warmth. “Come in, then. Unless you enjoy catching a chill.” He moved past her with a fluid grace that always irritated her. How did a man carry himself like that, like he owned the very air around him? Ptolemy, Eva’s perpetually unimpressed tabby, uncoiled from atop a stack of books and regarded Lucian with glacial disdain. “Charming,” Lucian remarked, nodding toward the cat. “Still ruling the roost, I see.” “Someone has to maintain order around here.” Rory moved to shut the door, blocking out the sounds of Brick Lane. The flat suddenly felt smaller, charged with a tension she hadn’t realized she’d been avoiding. Lucian leaned against the doorframe, casually observing the chaos of Eva’s research. Books overflowed from shelves, spilling onto the floor. Scrolls were haphazardly stacked on every surface. It looked like a hurricane had hit a library. “Still living in a…scholarly mess, I see.” “It’s called research,” Rory countered. “Eva’s working on something big.” “Always is.” He shifted his weight, the tap of his cane a quiet punctuation in the room. “Though her ‘big somethings’ rarely end well.” Rory bristled. Lucian had been condescending towards Eva from the moment they’d met. “She’s brilliant, and she’s careful.” “Brilliant people sometimes overlook the obvious.” His eyes, those mismatched pools of color, met hers. “Like a fondness for reckless men.” The air in the room thinned. It wasn’t a question. It was an accusation. She turned away, busying herself with straightening a stack of papers that didn't need it. Damn him. He always had a knack for hitting her where it hurt. “What do you want, Lucian?” she asked, keeping her voice carefully level. “Must there be a reason?” He pushed off the doorframe, strolling further into the flat. “Can’t an old acquaintance pay a visit?” “You don’t do ‘visits’,” she said, meeting his gaze again. “You have things you want. Information, favors…or just a need to stir up trouble.” He stopped in front of her, close enough that she could smell the faint scent of sandalwood and something else—something cold and otherworldly. “Always so cynical, Aurora.” “Someone has to be.” The silence stretched, thick with unspoken history. It hadn’t been a short relationship, theirs. A whirlwind of stolen moments, shared secrets, and a connection that had felt…dangerous. And then, the abrupt, messy end. She hadn't seen him since. Months. Years, maybe. Time blurred when she actively tried not to remember. “I need your help.” The words were clipped, devoid of any pretense. Rory’s immediate reaction was disbelief. Lucian Moreau, asking *her* for help? It felt…wrong. “With what?” He hesitated, a flicker of something unreadable crossing his face. “A retrieval. Something was taken. An object.” “What kind of object?” “One that shouldn’t have been taken.” He ran a hand through his hair, a rare display of frustration. "Irrelevant for now. What matters is finding it.” “And you came to me?” Rory asked, skeptical. “Why? Surely a master fixer like yourself has a network of contacts.” “This is…delicate.” He glanced around the flat, as if afraid of being overheard. "It requires a certain…discretion. And a specific skillset." That skillset being her knack for getting into places she shouldn't, her uncanny ability to read people, and a talent for improvisation learned from years of navigating London’s underbelly. She hadn’t used those skills much since leaving him. Since trying to build a normal life. “What’s in it for me?” she asked, her voice flat. “Let’s just say a considerable sum. Enough to…ease your financial burdens.” She scoffed. "You've been keeping tabs on me?" “Observing,” he corrected. “There’s a difference.” "Right." Rory turned away, needing a moment to recalibrate. She didn’t need his money. But the thought of working with him again… It was a dangerous temptation. Everyone told her to stay away. Eva included. “It’s a simple job, Aurora,” Lucian continued, his voice softer now. “In and out. Minimal risk.” “You always say that.” She said it without thinking, the words tumbling out before she could stop them. He didn’t deny it. Instead, he studied her, his expression unreadable. "You haven't lost your edge, I see." “I have.” She met his gaze, steeling herself. “I’m trying to.” He moved closer again, invading her space. She should step back, create distance. But she found herself rooted to the spot. "And is it working?" “That’s none of your business.” “Isn’t it?” He reached out, his fingers brushing against the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A jolt of electricity shot through her. She hadn't shown that scar to anyone in years. Rory instinctively pulled her hand away, her pulse hammering in her ears. "Don't." “Don’t what?” His voice was a low murmur. “Don’t remind you of what we had? Don’t remind you that beneath the cynicism, beneath the delivery job and the life you’re pretending to build, there's still a part of you that…craves something more?” She hated him for knowing. Hated him for seeing through her defenses. Hated him for the way he made her feel—vulnerable, flustered, and achingly aware of the space between them. “Get out, Lucian,” she whispered, her voice barely audible. He didn’t move. He simply looked at her, his expression a mixture of regret and something like…hope. “Think about it, Aurora. The object needs to be found. And you…you need an adventure.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
86.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"He glanced around [around]"
2"Rory turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.396
leniency0.792
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.113
85.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count2
12
word"uncanny"
count1
13
word"navigating"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"gleaming"
2"warmth"
3"chill"
4"charged"
5"tension"
6"weight"
7"otherworldly"
8"silence"
9"unspoken"
10"flicker"
11"unreadable"
12"uncanny"
13"navigating"
14"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1058
ratio0.001
matches
0"her"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount755
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucian"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Golden1
Empress1
Eva4
Lucian7
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucian"
3"Moreau"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"London"
globalScore0.97
windowScore1
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a hurricane had hit a library"
1"something like…hope"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1058
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"shown that scar"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean22.04
std13.72
cv0.622
sampleLengths
055
150
212
334
49
526
646
713
835
936
107
1110
1224
1318
1421
1542
1612
1722
1824
1927
204
2150
2212
2315
2410
257
264
2726
2820
2921
3045
3110
3211
338
346
3535
3616
3718
3818
3911
4025
415
4232
4313
4442
4530
469
4732
97.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"were clipped"
1"being overheard"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
45.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences117
ratio0.034
matches
0"The scent of cumin and something sweeter—cardamom, maybe—drifted up from the curry house below."
1"Instead, his gaze raked over her—the faded band t-shirt, ripped jeans, the smudge of grease on her cheek from a late shift at Golden Empress."
2"He stopped in front of her, close enough that she could smell the faint scent of sandalwood and something else—something cold and otherworldly."
3"Hated him for the way he made her feel—vulnerable, flustered, and achingly aware of the space between them."
90.22% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount762
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.051181102362204724
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.015748031496062992
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean9.04
std5.77
cv0.638
sampleLengths
011
119
26
314
45
513
66
75
819
97
108
114
129
1325
149
153
1614
179
1812
1916
2018
217
226
2320
2415
2512
268
277
289
297
305
315
3217
337
342
3511
365
3715
386
396
404
414
4215
432
4411
4512
4615
477
4810
4914
75.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.48717948717948717
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners57
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Instead, his gaze raked over"
1"Instead, he studied her, his"
ratio0.026
14.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences78
matches
0"She hadn’t expected anyone, not"
1"She tugged the door open."
2"He hadn’t changed a bit."
3"she said, voice rougher than"
4"He didn’t offer a polite"
5"Her jaw tightened."
6"She stepped back, offering him"
7"He moved past her with"
8"It looked like a hurricane"
9"He shifted his weight, the"
10"His eyes, those mismatched pools"
11"It wasn’t a question."
12"It was an accusation."
13"She turned away, busying herself"
14"He always had a knack"
15"she asked, keeping her voice"
16"He pushed off the doorframe,"
17"she said, meeting his gaze"
18"He stopped in front of"
19"It hadn’t been a short"
ratio0.513
30.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences78
matches
0"The chipped paint on the"
1"She hadn’t expected anyone, not"
2"The scent of cumin and"
3"She tugged the door open."
4"Lucian stood on the landing,"
5"Charcoal suit immaculate, platinum hair"
6"He hadn’t changed a bit."
7"An ivory-handled cane rested against"
8"she said, voice rougher than"
9"He didn’t offer a polite"
10"Her jaw tightened."
11"She stepped back, offering him"
12"He moved past her with"
13"Ptolemy, Eva’s perpetually unimpressed tabby,"
14"Lucian remarked, nodding toward the"
15"Rory moved to shut the"
16"The flat suddenly felt smaller,"
17"Lucian leaned against the doorframe,"
18"Books overflowed from shelves, spilling"
19"Scrolls were haphazardly stacked on"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A whirlwind of stolen moments, shared secrets, and a connection that had felt…dangerous."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she said, voice rougher than she intended"
1"Rory asked, skeptical"
2"He glanced around, as if afraid of being overheard"
3"she asked, her voice flat"
4"Lucian continued, his voice softer now"
5"She said, the words tumbling out before she could stop them"
6"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
93.40% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
1"Lucian continued (continue)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.17
leniency0.34
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.113
79.9514%