Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAKFZNDG5CGVPEM76AWSJE

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
“Don’t blink.” The words echoed, not from a voice, but from somewhere deep within the stones themselves. Aurora Carter didn’t blink. She hadn’t blinked since stepping through the shimmering curtain of leaves and branches that marked the boundary of The Fae Grove. It had been a foolish impulse, really. A desperate one. Eva had practically begged her to stay away, but the letter… the letter had been insistent. Urgent. And the Heartstone Pendant, warm against her skin, pulsed with a frantic energy she couldn’t ignore. The air hung thick and still, tasting of damp earth and something else… something floral, but cloying, like overripe lilies left too long in a vase. The ancient oak standing stones that ringed the clearing were taller than she remembered, their gnarled branches intertwined, blotting out what little moonlight might have filtered through the canopy. Wildflowers bloomed in riotous profusion, a kaleidoscope of colours that seemed almost aggressively cheerful in the oppressive stillness. It was beautiful, undeniably so, but the beauty felt… wrong. Like a painted smile on a corpse. She’d been here once, years ago, as a child. A school trip. A fleeting glimpse of something magical, something otherworldly. She’d dismissed it then as childish fancy, the product of an overactive imagination. Now, standing here, the memory felt less like a dream and more like a warning. The letter had been brief, cryptic. *They know. Come to the Grove. Bring the stone.* No signature. Just a single, elegant flourish at the bottom. It had been delivered by a raven, perched on her windowsill, a black, obsidian eye fixed on her with unsettling intelligence. She’d almost laughed. Almost dismissed it as a prank. But the Heartstone had throbbed against her chest, a frantic drumbeat urging her onward. She took a tentative step forward, the crunch of dry leaves under her boots the only sound in the suffocating silence. The pendant warmed against her skin, a faint, crimson glow emanating from the gemstone. It pulsed faster now, a frantic rhythm mirroring the growing unease in her gut. A twig snapped. Aurora froze, her breath catching in her throat. It could have been anything. A deer. A squirrel. The wind. But there was no wind. The leaves hung motionless, suspended in the still air. She scanned the perimeter of the clearing, her eyes straining to pierce the gloom. The shadows seemed to writhe and shift, playing tricks on her vision. A flicker of movement at the edge of the trees. A glimpse of something pale and slender. “Hello?” she called out, her voice barely a whisper. The sound seemed to die instantly, swallowed by the oppressive silence. Another snap. Closer this time. She tightened her grip on the strap of her messenger bag, her fingers digging into the worn canvas. Inside, nestled amongst her delivery receipts and a half-eaten packet of crisps, was a small, silver whistle. A gift from Eva. *For emergencies,* Eva had said. *When the world gets too strange.* She didn’t want to use it. Not yet. She didn’t want to alert whatever was out there. But the feeling of being watched was becoming unbearable. A prickling sensation on the back of her neck. The certainty that she was not alone. A low hum resonated through the ground, vibrating up through her boots. It was a subtle sound, almost imperceptible, but it filled the clearing with an unsettling resonance. The wildflowers seemed to sway in time with the hum, their vibrant colours blurring into a dizzying swirl. She took another step, then another, moving deeper into the Grove. The trees grew denser, their branches intertwining overhead, creating a claustrophobic canopy. The air grew colder, a damp chill seeping into her bones. A rustling in the undergrowth. Something large. Moving quickly. Aurora spun around, her heart pounding against her ribs. Nothing. Just the shadows, playing their cruel games. She told herself it was her imagination. The stress. The lack of sleep. The unsettling atmosphere of the Grove. But the feeling of dread persisted, growing stronger with each passing moment. She stopped, listening intently. The hum continued, a constant, throbbing presence. And now, she could hear something else. A faint, rhythmic clicking sound. Like insects. But too large. Too deliberate. The clicking grew louder, closer. It seemed to be coming from all directions at once. She raised the silver whistle to her lips, her fingers trembling. She hesitated. What if it was nothing? What if she was just being paranoid? The clicking stopped. The silence that followed was even more unsettling than the noise had been. A pregnant pause, thick with anticipation. Then, a voice. It wasn’t a human voice. It was something else entirely. A chorus of whispers, layered and distorted, weaving together into a single, chilling utterance. “Welcome, Laila.” Aurora froze, the whistle still poised at her lips. Laila. It was a name she hadn’t heard in years. A name she’d tried to forget. A name she’d abandoned. She lowered the whistle, her hand falling limply to her side. “Who’s there?” she asked, her voice barely audible. The whispers intensified, swirling around her like a vortex. “We have been waiting.” A figure emerged from the shadows. Tall and slender, with skin as pale as moonlight. Its eyes were black and fathomless, reflecting no light. It wore a long, flowing gown of woven leaves and vines, blending seamlessly with the surrounding foliage. It wasn’t alone. More figures emerged from the shadows, their forms indistinct, their faces obscured by the gloom. They surrounded her, a silent, watchful circle. “You brought the Heartstone,” the first figure said, its voice a melodic whisper that sent shivers down her spine. “Good. It is time.” Aurora stared at them, her mind reeling. She didn’t understand. None of this made sense. “I don’t know what you’re talking about,” she said, her voice trembling. The figure smiled, a slow, unsettling curve of its lips. “Don’t play coy, Laila. We know who you are. We know what you are.” It raised a hand, its long, slender fingers beckoning her forward. “Come. The ritual awaits.” Aurora took a step back, her eyes darting around the clearing, searching for an escape. But there was nowhere to go. She was surrounded. Trapped. The Heartstone pulsed violently against her skin, its crimson glow intensifying. It felt like a burning brand, searing her flesh. “What ritual?” she demanded, her voice rising in panic. The figure chuckled, a low, haunting sound. “The ritual that will restore what was lost. The ritual that will awaken the ancient power.” It took a step closer, its black eyes fixed on hers. “The ritual that will make you whole.” A twig snapped behind her. She didn’t dare turn. The clicking started again, louder this time, closer. And then, a new sound. A wet, sucking noise. Like something dragging itself through the mud. The figures began to chant, their voices rising in a hypnotic crescendo. The wildflowers swayed in time with the chant, their vibrant colours blurring into a swirling vortex. Aurora felt a strange sensation, a tingling in her fingertips. A warmth spreading through her veins. She looked down at her hands. They were glowing. A faint, crimson light emanating from her skin. The figure smiled again, its eyes gleaming with triumph. “Welcome home, Laila,” it whispered. “Welcome home.” The chanting reached a fever pitch. The ground began to tremble. And then, the trees started to move. Not swaying in the wind, but shifting, twisting, their branches reaching out like grasping claws. A guttural roar echoed through the clearing. Something large. Something monstrous. Emerging from the shadows. Aurora screamed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1267
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1267
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count2
4
word"fleeting"
count1
5
word"otherworldly"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count2
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"resonated"
count1
13
word"resonance"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"pounding"
count1
16
word"rhythmic"
count1
17
word"anticipation"
count1
18
word"chilling"
count1
19
word"sent shivers down"
count1
20
word"searing"
count1
21
word"warmth"
count1
22
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pulsed"
2"kaleidoscope"
3"oppressive"
4"fleeting"
5"otherworldly"
6"throbbed"
7"silence"
8"scanned"
9"gloom"
10"flicker"
11"whisper"
12"resonated"
13"resonance"
14"chill"
15"pounding"
16"rhythmic"
17"anticipation"
18"chilling"
19"sent shivers down"
20"searing"
21"warmth"
22"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences152
matches
0"the feeling of dread"
1"k with anticipation"
2"g in panic"
58.27% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences152
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
3"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords17
totalWords1266
ratio0.013
matches
0"They know. Come to the Grove. Bring the stone."
1"For emergencies,"
2"When the world gets too strange."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1192
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove4
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Eva3
Aurora8
Like3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Eva"
4"Aurora"
5"Like"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a burning brand, searing her"
42.02% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.58
wordCount1266
matches
0"not from a voice, but from somewhere deep within the stones themselves"
1"Not swaying in the wind, but shifting, twisting, their branches reaching out like graspin"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean22.21
std19.36
cv0.872
sampleLengths
02
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290
348
469
549
63
733
843
920
105
1150
1242
1346
1434
159
1617
1731
1830
1915
2025
213
2219
233
2424
252
2629
2711
288
299
304
3141
323
3322
3423
3515
3612
3710
3814
3911
404
4125
4220
439
447
4516
4611
477
4833
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences152
matches
0"been delivered"
1"was surrounded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs199
matches
0"were glowing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences161
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1193
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.039396479463537304
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012573344509639563
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean7.86
std5.08
cv0.645
sampleLengths
02
115
24
321
47
53
611
75
81
916
1013
1113
1229
1318
149
151
167
179
183
198
2013
2115
226
232
244
255
268
2721
283
296
3014
3121
3214
3314
343
358
365
372
382
392
405
419
4214
4312
4410
457
469
4711
482
493
39.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2795031055900621
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences131
matches
0"Just a single, elegant flourish"
1"Almost dismissed it as a"
2"Just the shadows, playing their"
3"Then, a voice."
ratio0.031
97.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences131
matches
0"She hadn’t blinked since stepping"
1"It had been a foolish"
2"It was beautiful, undeniably so,"
3"She’d been here once, years"
4"She’d dismissed it then as"
5"It had been delivered by"
6"She’d almost laughed."
7"She took a tentative step"
8"It pulsed faster now, a"
9"It could have been anything."
10"She scanned the perimeter of"
11"she called out, her voice"
12"She tightened her grip on"
13"She didn’t want to use"
14"She didn’t want to alert"
15"It was a subtle sound,"
16"She took another step, then"
17"She told herself it was"
18"She stopped, listening intently."
19"It seemed to be coming"
ratio0.305
70.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences131
matches
0"The words echoed, not from"
1"Aurora Carter didn’t blink."
2"She hadn’t blinked since stepping"
3"It had been a foolish"
4"A desperate one."
5"Eva had practically begged her"
6"the letter had been insistent."
7"The air hung thick and"
8"something floral, but cloying, like"
9"The ancient oak standing stones"
10"Wildflowers bloomed in riotous profusion,"
11"It was beautiful, undeniably so,"
12"She’d been here once, years"
13"A school trip."
14"A fleeting glimpse of something"
15"She’d dismissed it then as"
16"The letter had been brief,"
17"It had been delivered by"
18"She’d almost laughed."
19"She took a tentative step"
ratio0.779
38.17% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences131
matches
0"Now, standing here, the memory"
ratio0.008
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones that ringed the clearing were taller than she remembered, their gnarled branches intertwined, blotting out what little moonlight…"
1"Wildflowers bloomed in riotous profusion, a kaleidoscope of colours that seemed almost aggressively cheerful in the oppressive stillness."
2"The trees grew denser, their branches intertwining overhead, creating a claustrophobic canopy."
3"Aurora took a step back, her eyes darting around the clearing, searching for an escape."
4"Not swaying in the wind, but shifting, twisting, their branches reaching out like grasping claws."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she called out, her voice barely a whisper"
1"she asked, her voice barely audible"
2"she said, her voice trembling"
3"she demanded, her voice rising in panic"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
80.0082%