| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1267 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1267 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "sent shivers down" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "kaleidoscope" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "fleeting" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "gloom" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "resonated" | | 13 | "resonance" | | 14 | "chill" | | 15 | "pounding" | | 16 | "rhythmic" | | 17 | "anticipation" | | 18 | "chilling" | | 19 | "sent shivers down" | | 20 | "searing" | | 21 | "warmth" | | 22 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "the feeling of dread" | | 1 | "k with anticipation" | | 2 | "g in panic" |
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| 58.27% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 152 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" | | 3 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 161 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 1266 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "They know. Come to the Grove. Bring the stone." | | 1 | "For emergencies," | | 2 | "When the world gets too strange." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1192 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.67 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Aurora | 8 | | Like | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Like" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a burning brand, searing her" |
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| 42.02% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.58 | | wordCount | 1266 | | matches | | 0 | "not from a voice, but from somewhere deep within the stones themselves" | | 1 | "Not swaying in the wind, but shifting, twisting, their branches reaching out like graspin" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 22.21 | | std | 19.36 | | cv | 0.872 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 2 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 90 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "been delivered" | | 1 | "was surrounded" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 199 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 161 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1193 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.039396479463537304 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012573344509639563 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 161 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 161 | | mean | 7.86 | | std | 5.08 | | cv | 0.645 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 2 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 39.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.2795031055900621 | | totalSentences | 161 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a single, elegant flourish" | | 1 | "Almost dismissed it as a" | | 2 | "Just the shadows, playing their" | | 3 | "Then, a voice." |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 97.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t blinked since stepping" | | 1 | "It had been a foolish" | | 2 | "It was beautiful, undeniably so," | | 3 | "She’d been here once, years" | | 4 | "She’d dismissed it then as" | | 5 | "It had been delivered by" | | 6 | "She’d almost laughed." | | 7 | "She took a tentative step" | | 8 | "It pulsed faster now, a" | | 9 | "It could have been anything." | | 10 | "She scanned the perimeter of" | | 11 | "she called out, her voice" | | 12 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 13 | "She didn’t want to use" | | 14 | "She didn’t want to alert" | | 15 | "It was a subtle sound," | | 16 | "She took another step, then" | | 17 | "She told herself it was" | | 18 | "She stopped, listening intently." | | 19 | "It seemed to be coming" |
| | ratio | 0.305 | |
| 70.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 102 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "The words echoed, not from" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter didn’t blink." | | 2 | "She hadn’t blinked since stepping" | | 3 | "It had been a foolish" | | 4 | "A desperate one." | | 5 | "Eva had practically begged her" | | 6 | "the letter had been insistent." | | 7 | "The air hung thick and" | | 8 | "something floral, but cloying, like" | | 9 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 10 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous profusion," | | 11 | "It was beautiful, undeniably so," | | 12 | "She’d been here once, years" | | 13 | "A school trip." | | 14 | "A fleeting glimpse of something" | | 15 | "She’d dismissed it then as" | | 16 | "The letter had been brief," | | 17 | "It had been delivered by" | | 18 | "She’d almost laughed." | | 19 | "She took a tentative step" |
| | ratio | 0.779 | |
| 38.17% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing here, the memory" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 61.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones that ringed the clearing were taller than she remembered, their gnarled branches intertwined, blotting out what little moonlight…" | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous profusion, a kaleidoscope of colours that seemed almost aggressively cheerful in the oppressive stillness." | | 2 | "The trees grew denser, their branches intertwining overhead, creating a claustrophobic canopy." | | 3 | "Aurora took a step back, her eyes darting around the clearing, searching for an escape." | | 4 | "Not swaying in the wind, but shifting, twisting, their branches reaching out like grasping claws." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice barely a whisper" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice barely audible" | | 2 | "she said, her voice trembling" | | 3 | "she demanded, her voice rising in panic" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |