| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 69.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "utterly" | | 3 | "completely" | | 4 | "helplessly" | | 5 | "inexorably" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "fleeting" | | 11 | "predator" | | 12 | "chilling" | | 13 | "unwavering" | | 14 | "sense of" | | 15 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "wave of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.84% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 45 | | totalWords | 1144 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "feel" | | 1 | "Welcome." | | 2 | "You brought the stone. The key." | | 3 | "I am what you seek. And you are what I need." | | 4 | "To restore balance. To reclaim what was lost. You are a link in the chain, child. A forgotten vessel." | | 5 | "placed" | | 6 | "Resisting is futile," | | 7 | "Embrace your destiny." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1097 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.55 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Rory | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 25.17% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.748 | | wordCount | 1144 | | matches | | 0 | "not exactly, but the steady rhythm echoed in the unnatural silence" | | 1 | "not the sky, but…something else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 24.87 | | std | 14.36 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 37 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 38 |
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| 99.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "been given" | | 1 | "been *placed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't alarming" | | 1 | "was rising" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "Her friend, Eva, had warned her— a cryptic, “Some doors are better left closed, Rory.”" | | 1 | "The sound came next – a high, thin chime, like distant glass breaking." | | 2 | "She noticed it then – the patterns in the moss on the standing stones." | | 3 | "Then, a flicker of movement at the edge of her vision – a shadow twisting through the trees, too fluid, too quick to be an animal." | | 4 | "This wasn’t just a pocket dimension; it was something…else." | | 5 | "A fleeting glimpse of faces – pale, sorrowful, and utterly lost." | | 6 | "It raised a hand, and a single, luminous flower bloomed at its fingertips – a deep crimson bloom that mirrored the gemstone in her pendant." | | 7 | "It wasn’t just a conduit; it was a tether." | | 8 | "She saw more faces now, swirling within the luminescence – her parents, her friends, all trapped in an eternal, sorrowful tableau." | | 9 | "The pendant wasn’t just a key; it was a hunger." |
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| 96.47% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1093 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.04391582799634035 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020128087831655993 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 10.04 | | std | 6.35 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 38.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.30701754385964913 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pendant and the" | | 1 | "Just the rain, the stones," | | 2 | "Only the rain answered, drumming" | | 3 | "Then, a flicker of movement" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 29.71% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "It slicked the ancient oak" | | 1 | "It wasn’t supposed to *feel*" | | 2 | "She’d followed the insistent tug" | | 3 | "It pressed against her lungs," | | 4 | "she told herself, her voice" | | 5 | "It wasn't alarming, not exactly," | | 6 | "She’d received the pendant three" | | 7 | "Her friend, Eva, had warned" | | 8 | "She scanned the periphery, the" | | 9 | "she muttered, her hand instinctively" | | 10 | "It wasn’t much, but it" | | 11 | "It repeated, fading in and" | | 12 | "She rotated slowly, searching for" | | 13 | "Her voice cracked, swallowed by" | | 14 | "She started walking again, forcing" | | 15 | "She noticed it then –" | | 16 | "They weren't random." | | 17 | "They weren’t natural." | | 18 | "They formed symbols, interwoven and" | | 19 | "She held her breath, listening." |
| | ratio | 0.476 | |
| 37.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain smelled like iron." | | 1 | "It slicked the ancient oak" | | 2 | "Rory shivered, pulling her threadbare" | | 3 | "The Fae Grove wasn’t supposed" | | 4 | "It wasn’t supposed to *feel*" | | 5 | "She’d followed the insistent tug" | | 6 | "The air here, thick and" | | 7 | "It pressed against her lungs," | | 8 | "she told herself, her voice" | | 9 | "The pendant pulsed, a slow," | | 10 | "It wasn't alarming, not exactly," | | 11 | "She’d received the pendant three" | | 12 | "Her friend, Eva, had warned" | | 13 | "A fallen log shifted to" | | 14 | "A deliberate movement." | | 15 | "Rory froze, every muscle coiled" | | 16 | "She scanned the periphery, the" | | 17 | "she muttered, her hand instinctively" | | 18 | "It wasn’t much, but it" | | 19 | "The sound came next –" |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing within the Grove," | | 1 | "*To restore balance." | | 2 | "To reclaim what was lost." |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d followed the insistent tug of the Heartstone Pendant, a throb of warmth against her skin that had intensified all the way through Richmond Park and into t…" | | 1 | "No rustle of wind in the impossibly lush wildflowers that bloomed year-round, a riot of color in the perpetual twilight." | | 2 | "The wildflowers seemed to tilt their heads, as if observing her." | | 3 | "The trees closed in, their branches interlocking, forming a claustrophobic cage." | | 4 | "It raised a hand, and a single, luminous flower bloomed at its fingertips – a deep crimson bloom that mirrored the gemstone in her pendant." | | 5 | "She instinctively clutched the pendant, feeling its warmth radiating against her skin." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she told, her voice a dry rasp" | | 1 | "she said, her voice low and controlled" | | 2 | "she realized, a cold certainty settling over her" | | 3 | "she demanded, her voice trembling, but holding" | | 4 | "the figure intoned, its voice a silken thread" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |