Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAM18P5AW4MSFRHQGWNM4F

Run Details

Duration:
19.0s
Cost:
$0.000166
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain smelled like iron. It slicked the ancient oak standing stones, turning the carvings into blurred, weeping ghosts. Rory shivered, pulling her threadbare denim jacket tighter. The Fae Grove wasn’t supposed to rain, not like this. It wasn’t supposed to *feel* like this. She’d followed the insistent tug of the Heartstone Pendant, a throb of warmth against her skin that had intensified all the way through Richmond Park and into this hidden pocket. The air here, thick and humid, tasted of moss and something else, something faintly rotten. It pressed against her lungs, making each breath a conscious effort. “Just keep moving,” she told herself, her voice a dry rasp. The pendant pulsed, a slow, deliberate beat. It wasn't alarming, not exactly, but the steady rhythm echoed in the unnatural silence. No birdsong. No rustle of wind in the impossibly lush wildflowers that bloomed year-round, a riot of color in the perpetual twilight. She’d received the pendant three weeks ago, anonymously slipped into her delivery bag alongside a single, obsidian raven feather. No note, no explanation. Just the pendant and the unsettling feeling that her life was about to change. Her friend, Eva, had warned her— a cryptic, “Some doors are better left closed, Rory.” Now, standing within the Grove, she understood. A fallen log shifted to her left. Not a gust of wind. A deliberate movement. Rory froze, every muscle coiled tight. She scanned the periphery, the shadows deepening beneath the towering oaks. Nothing. Just the rain, the stones, and the unsettling pulse of the pendant. “Okay, this is…weird,” she muttered, her hand instinctively reaching for the small, dull knife she kept clipped to her belt. It wasn’t much, but it was something. The sound came next – a high, thin chime, like distant glass breaking. It repeated, fading in and out, always just beyond her direct line of sight. She rotated slowly, searching for the source. The wildflowers seemed to tilt their heads, as if observing her. “Hello?” Her voice cracked, swallowed by the stillness. Only the rain answered, drumming a relentless tattoo on the stone. She started walking again, forcing herself to focus on the path, a barely discernible track winding deeper into the Grove. The pendant beat faster now, a frantic tremor against her wrist. The air grew colder, and the scent of rot intensified. She noticed it then – the patterns in the moss on the standing stones. They weren't random. They weren’t natural. They formed symbols, interwoven and unsettling, like a language she instinctively knew she shouldn’t understand. A twig snapped behind her. Rory didn’t turn. She held her breath, listening. The rain softened momentarily, revealing the unsettling chime again, closer this time. “Show yourself,” she said, her voice low and controlled. Silence. Then, a flicker of movement at the edge of her vision – a shadow twisting through the trees, too fluid, too quick to be an animal. It vanished as suddenly as it appeared. She gripped the knife tighter. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat mirroring the pendant’s rhythm. “This isn’t a natural place,” she realized, a cold certainty settling over her. This wasn’t just a pocket dimension; it was something…else. Something older. Something hungry. The pendant pulsed violently, nearly pulling her arm out of its socket. It insisted she go forward. She continued, pushing through a curtain of ferns, into a small clearing. In the center stood a single, ancient willow, its branches draped like skeletal fingers, dripping with rain. Beneath it, a pool of water shimmered with an unnatural luminescence. The chime sounded again, louder now, accompanied by a whisper, so faint she almost dismissed it as the rain. *Welcome.* Rory backed away slowly, her gaze fixed on the willow. The water in the pool seemed to swirl, reflecting not the sky, but…something else. A fleeting glimpse of faces – pale, sorrowful, and utterly lost. She turned to flee, but the path had vanished. The trees closed in, their branches interlocking, forming a claustrophobic cage. The rain intensified, a deluge that blurred her vision. A voice, no longer a whisper, but a resonant hum, filled the Grove. It wasn’t spoken, not exactly. It seemed to vibrate within her bones. *You brought the stone. The key.* She risked a glance back at the pool. A figure was rising from the water. It wasn’t human. Tall and slender, with skin like polished jade and eyes that burned with an inner, crimson light. It wore a garment woven from shadows, and its movements were unsettlingly graceful, like a predator testing its prey. “Who are you?” she demanded, her voice trembling, but holding. The figure tilted its head, a gesture both curious and predatory. *I am what you seek. And you are what I need.* It raised a hand, and a single, luminous flower bloomed at its fingertips – a deep crimson bloom that mirrored the gemstone in her pendant. “The pendant,” the figure intoned, its voice a silken thread. “You carry the heartstone. It binds you to this place.” She instinctively clutched the pendant, feeling its warmth radiating against her skin. It wasn’t just a conduit; it was a tether. The figure took a step closer. The scent of rot was overwhelming now. She could taste it on her tongue. “Your father,” the figure said, its voice laced with a chilling amusement. “He knew. He always knew.” Rory recoiled, a wave of nausea washing over her. Her father. Her father, a respected barrister with a sharp mind and an unwavering sense of justice, had known about this place? About this…thing? “What do you want?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. *To restore balance. To reclaim what was lost. You are a link in the chain, child. A forgotten vessel.* The water in the pool began to glow brighter, pulling at her, beckoning her towards it. She saw more faces now, swirling within the luminescence – her parents, her friends, all trapped in an eternal, sorrowful tableau. She understood then. The pendant hadn't been given to her. It had been *placed* upon her. It was a trap. She took a step back, desperate to escape, but the trees continued to close in, isolating her completely. *Resisting is futile,* the figure said, its crimson eyes fixed on her. *Embrace your destiny.* The pendant pulsed with a violent, insistent rhythm, demanding her surrender. She looked down at the stone, at the deep crimson glow, and a horrifying realization dawned upon her. The pendant wasn’t just a key; it was a hunger. The figure extended a hand, its fingers long and slender, tipped with claws of polished jade. And Rory, caught in the rain-soaked twilight of the Fae Grove, with the weight of the Heartstone Pendant burning against her wrist, felt herself drawn forward, helplessly, inexorably, towards the pool and the waiting embrace of the darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.833
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1140
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"helplessly"
count1
5
adverb"inexorably"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
2"utterly"
3"completely"
4"helplessly"
5"inexorably"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1140
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count3
10
word"fleeting"
count1
11
word"predator"
count1
12
word"chilling"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"sense of"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"echoed"
4"silence"
5"scanned"
6"pulse"
7"flicker"
8"shimmered"
9"whisper"
10"fleeting"
11"predator"
12"chilling"
13"unwavering"
14"sense of"
15"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"wave of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a wave of nausea"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords45
totalWords1144
ratio0.039
matches
0"feel"
1"Welcome."
2"You brought the stone. The key."
3"I am what you seek. And you are what I need."
4"To restore balance. To reclaim what was lost. You are a link in the chain, child. A forgotten vessel."
5"placed"
6"Resisting is futile,"
7"Embrace your destiny."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1097
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove5
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Richmond1
Park1
Eva1
Silence1
Rory6
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if observing her"
25.17% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.748
wordCount1144
matches
0"not exactly, but the steady rhythm echoed in the unnatural silence"
1"not the sky, but…something else"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean24.87
std14.36
cv0.577
sampleLengths
044
156
211
343
452
57
645
727
845
919
1041
1135
125
1320
149
151
1633
1718
1826
1917
2040
2119
221
2335
2429
2525
266
2754
2810
2911
3011
3125
3220
3321
3420
3517
3633
3711
3819
3937
4020
4118
4215
4339
4416
4538
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"been given"
1"been *placed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs187
matches
0"wasn't alarming"
1"was rising"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences114
ratio0.088
matches
0"Her friend, Eva, had warned her— a cryptic, “Some doors are better left closed, Rory.”"
1"The sound came next – a high, thin chime, like distant glass breaking."
2"She noticed it then – the patterns in the moss on the standing stones."
3"Then, a flicker of movement at the edge of her vision – a shadow twisting through the trees, too fluid, too quick to be an animal."
4"This wasn’t just a pocket dimension; it was something…else."
5"A fleeting glimpse of faces – pale, sorrowful, and utterly lost."
6"It raised a hand, and a single, luminous flower bloomed at its fingertips – a deep crimson bloom that mirrored the gemstone in her pendant."
7"It wasn’t just a conduit; it was a tether."
8"She saw more faces now, swirling within the luminescence – her parents, her friends, all trapped in an eternal, sorrowful tableau."
9"The pendant wasn’t just a key; it was a hunger."
96.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1093
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.04391582799634035
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.020128087831655993
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean10.04
std6.35
cv0.633
sampleLengths
05
114
28
310
47
530
615
711
811
97
1014
112
1220
1319
144
1514
1615
177
187
195
203
216
2211
231
2412
2520
267
2713
2814
297
3011
318
3211
3320
3411
3510
3614
373
383
3915
405
413
425
4312
449
451
4626
477
485
4913
38.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.30701754385964913
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences103
matches
0"Just the pendant and the"
1"Just the rain, the stones,"
2"Only the rain answered, drumming"
3"Then, a flicker of movement"
ratio0.039
29.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences103
matches
0"It slicked the ancient oak"
1"It wasn’t supposed to *feel*"
2"She’d followed the insistent tug"
3"It pressed against her lungs,"
4"she told herself, her voice"
5"It wasn't alarming, not exactly,"
6"She’d received the pendant three"
7"Her friend, Eva, had warned"
8"She scanned the periphery, the"
9"she muttered, her hand instinctively"
10"It wasn’t much, but it"
11"It repeated, fading in and"
12"She rotated slowly, searching for"
13"Her voice cracked, swallowed by"
14"She started walking again, forcing"
15"She noticed it then –"
16"They weren't random."
17"They weren’t natural."
18"They formed symbols, interwoven and"
19"She held her breath, listening."
ratio0.476
37.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences103
matches
0"The rain smelled like iron."
1"It slicked the ancient oak"
2"Rory shivered, pulling her threadbare"
3"The Fae Grove wasn’t supposed"
4"It wasn’t supposed to *feel*"
5"She’d followed the insistent tug"
6"The air here, thick and"
7"It pressed against her lungs,"
8"she told herself, her voice"
9"The pendant pulsed, a slow,"
10"It wasn't alarming, not exactly,"
11"She’d received the pendant three"
12"Her friend, Eva, had warned"
13"A fallen log shifted to"
14"A deliberate movement."
15"Rory froze, every muscle coiled"
16"She scanned the periphery, the"
17"she muttered, her hand instinctively"
18"It wasn’t much, but it"
19"The sound came next –"
ratio0.845
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"Now, standing within the Grove,"
1"*To restore balance."
2"To reclaim what was lost."
ratio0.029
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She’d followed the insistent tug of the Heartstone Pendant, a throb of warmth against her skin that had intensified all the way through Richmond Park and into t…"
1"No rustle of wind in the impossibly lush wildflowers that bloomed year-round, a riot of color in the perpetual twilight."
2"The wildflowers seemed to tilt their heads, as if observing her."
3"The trees closed in, their branches interlocking, forming a claustrophobic cage."
4"It raised a hand, and a single, luminous flower bloomed at its fingertips – a deep crimson bloom that mirrored the gemstone in her pendant."
5"She instinctively clutched the pendant, feeling its warmth radiating against her skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she told, her voice a dry rasp"
1"she said, her voice low and controlled"
2"she realized, a cold certainty settling over her"
3"she demanded, her voice trembling, but holding"
4"the figure intoned, its voice a silken thread"
5"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
74.8374%