Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAMB7QCMKM2EJXF21FGXTZ

Run Details

Duration:
49.0s
Cost:
$0.000267
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest buzzed, spitting out a sickly glow onto the rain-slicked pavement. Rory wiped condensation from the window, peering inside. A Tuesday night. Dead quiet. Perfect. She needed a pint and a few hours away from the relentless churn of delivering General Tso’s chicken across London. She pushed through the door, the scent of stale beer and old wood hitting her like a familiar wave. The place was mostly empty; a few regulars hunched over pints, the low murmur of conversation barely audible above the clinking of glasses. Silas, perched behind the bar polishing a glass, looked up, a flicker of something unreadable in his hazel eyes. "Rory. Didn’t expect to see you here.” He set the glass down with a soft thud. "Just needed a quiet pint, Si," she replied, sliding onto a stool. "Anything new in the world of espionage?" He chuckled, a dry, rasping sound. "The world keeps turning. Same dramas, different faces." He slid a pint of stout towards her. "On the house." Rory took a long swallow, the dark beer coating her tongue. The Raven's Nest hadn’t changed a bit. Still smelled like forgotten stories and dimly lit secrets. She scanned the room, lingering on the faded maps and black-and-white photographs that plastered the walls – ghosts of lives lived and lost. A voice cut through the quiet. "Rory? Rory Carter, is that really you?" She turned. Standing near the back, leaning against a bookshelf, was a woman she hadn’t seen in over a decade. Elara Davies. Rory felt a jolt, a physical tremor that ran through her. Elara, but… not. The last time she saw Elara, they were inseparable, bright-eyed teenagers dreaming of escaping Cardiff, of conquering the world through art and music. But this woman... She was all sharp angles and polished steel. Gone was the whirlwind of auburn curls; in their place, a severe, dark bun pulled tight against her skull. Her clothes were impeccable – a tailored grey suit that probably cost more than Rory’s rent. The soft, artistic eyes she remembered were now hard and distant, framed by a precise application of makeup. "Elara," Rory managed, her voice a little shaky. "Wow. You… you look amazing.” A hollow compliment. Elara offered a tight smile, the expression failing to reach her eyes. She pushed off the bookshelf and moved toward the bar, her heels clicking sharply on the wooden floor. “So do you, in a… different way.” Her gaze lingered on Rory’s worn leather jacket and faded jeans. Silas watched the exchange with quiet intensity, his expression unreadable. "What are you doing here?" Rory asked, needing to break the awkward silence. "Business," Elara said, her voice cool and clipped. “I’m in London for the week. Securing a deal.” “A deal?” Rory raised an eyebrow. "What kind of deal?" Elara hesitated, a flicker of something unreadable crossing her face. “It’s… complicated. Let’s just say it involves acquisitions. Large-scale acquisitions.” Rory took another swig of her stout. Acquisitions. That wasn't the language of an artist. "Last I heard, you were painting murals in Barcelona." Elara’s smile tightened further. "People change, Rory. Circumstances change." “Yeah, they do.” Rory stared at her pint. A decade. They hadn't spoken in ten years, not since a stupid argument about a boy, a gallery showing, and a whole lot of unresolved tension. She’d assumed Elara was living her dream, splashing colors across buildings, inspiring people. Clearly, she was wrong. "Remember that gallery showing we talked about?" Rory asked, the memory surfacing unexpectedly. Elara's face flickered, a brief flash of vulnerability. “Vaguely. It was a long time ago.” “You were brilliant. Everyone said so. Your work… it had a spark. A real passion.” Elara laughed, a short, brittle sound. “Passion doesn’t pay the bills, Rory. Talent doesn't guarantee success.” "So you traded your passion for… acquisitions?” “I traded it for security,” Elara corrected sharply. “For influence. For control.” “Control over what?” Elara shrugged, a dismissive gesture. “That’s not something you need to worry about.” She signaled to Silas. “Another vodka tonic, please.” Silas poured the drink with practiced efficiency, his eyes still fixed on Rory. Rory took a deep breath. "Remember our pact? To never compromise, to always chase our dreams, no matter what?" Elara’s gaze hardened. “We were young and naive then, Rory. The world doesn’t work like that. You should know that by now.” "I thought I'd learned it a lot sooner," Rory mumbled, thinking of Evan, of London, of the life she’d built out of the wreckage of a bad relationship. Elara studied her, a slow, assessing look. “So, the delivery girl. Still slumming it, I see.” Rory bristled at the condescension. “It pays the bills. And it's honest work.” “Honest, perhaps. But hardly… fulfilling.” Elara took a long sip of her vodka tonic. "You always were the idealistic one, Rory. Bravely chasing windmills." “And you’re the one who sold out,” Rory retorted, the words slipping out before she could stop them. “You traded your soul for a corner office and a fancy suit.” Elara slammed her glass down on the bar. “Don’t be ridiculous.” “Am I? You used to hate corporate greed, Elara. We used to protest it. We used to believe we could change the world.” “We were children then,” Elara said, her voice low and dangerous. “Children are allowed to be idealistic. Adults have responsibilities.” “Responsibilities?” Rory laughed, a bitter sound. “Or excuses?” The tension in the small bar thickened, palpable and heavy. Silas watched them with an unnerving stillness, the silver signet ring on his right hand glinting in the dim light. Elara leaned closer, her voice barely a whisper. "You wouldn't understand, Rory. You've always been content to drift along, letting life happen to you." Rory met her gaze, refusing to back down. “Maybe I am. But at least I can still look in the mirror.” The silence stretched between them, thick with unspoken regrets and shattered dreams. The weight of their shared history pressed down on them, a burden of what might have been. Elara turned away abruptly, her shoulders stiff. "I have to go." She fished a business card from her purse and slid it across the bar towards Rory. "If you ever find yourself in Geneva..." She didn’t finish the sentence. She didn't wait for a response. She turned and strode out of The Raven's Nest, her heels clicking on the pavement as she disappeared into the rain-soaked London night. Rory stared at the business card. It read: Elara Davies, Director of Strategic Acquisitions, Thorne Industries. The card felt cold and alien in her hand. She crumpled it, tossing it into the overflowing ashtray. Silas cleared his throat. "Tough reunion?" Rory looked up at him, the bitterness still lingering in her throat. “She’s not the person I remember.” “People rarely are,” Silas said, his gaze distant. “Time has a way of changing things. Not always for the better.” He paused, studying her face. “Are you alright, Rory?” Rory shrugged, trying to shake off the unsettling feeling that had settled in her stomach. “Just… thinking about old friends. And old choices.” She finished her stout, the taste suddenly flat and bitter. “Some choices,” Silas said softly, “can’t be undone.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Elara corrected sharply [sharply]"
1"Silas said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.426
leniency0.852
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.074
79.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1210
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"sharply"
2"suddenly"
3"softly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1210
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"churn"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count3
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"tension"
count2
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"glinting"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"unspoken"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"churn"
2"familiar"
3"flicker"
4"unreadable"
5"scanned"
6"intensity"
7"silence"
8"eyebrow"
9"tension"
10"flickered"
11"palpable"
12"glinting"
13"whisper"
14"unspoken"
15"shattered"
16"weight"
17"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences88
matches
0"felt a jolt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1206
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount823
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.67
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Elara"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Nest3
Tuesday1
General1
Tso1
London3
Rory22
Davies2
Elara20
Cardiff1
Silas8
Evan1
Director1
Strategic1
Acquisitions2
Thorne1
Industries1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Tso"
3"Rory"
4"Davies"
5"Elara"
6"Silas"
7"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.163
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like forgotten stories and dimly l"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1206
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean23.65
std16.77
cv0.709
sampleLengths
052
161
216
319
425
550
613
722
8101
916
1048
1110
1213
1317
1410
1520
1624
179
1851
1913
2015
2115
2216
237
2412
253
2621
2713
2819
2922
3028
3116
3213
3324
3430
3511
3623
3720
388
3930
4024
4121
4229
4339
4429
4534
466
4718
4829
4933
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs136
matches
0"was living"
46.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences118
ratio0.034
matches
0"The place was mostly empty; a few regulars hunched over pints, the low murmur of conversation barely audible above the clinking of glasses."
1"She scanned the room, lingering on the faded maps and black-and-white photographs that plastered the walls – ghosts of lives lived and lost."
2"Gone was the whirlwind of auburn curls; in their place, a severe, dark bun pulled tight against her skull."
3"Her clothes were impeccable – a tailored grey suit that probably cost more than Rory’s rent."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount826
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"inseparable, bright-eyed teenagers"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02784503631961259
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.015738498789346248
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean10.22
std6.13
cv0.6
sampleLengths
018
18
23
32
41
520
619
723
819
916
1012
117
126
1316
143
1511
167
179
1823
196
207
212
2218
232
2411
252
261
2723
283
298
3019
3116
3218
338
348
3512
3618
3718
3810
3913
408
419
426
434
4410
4510
467
471
487
499
70.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4406779661016949
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners52
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Still smelled like forgotten stories"
1"Clearly, she was wrong."
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences80
matches
0"She needed a pint and"
1"She pushed through the door,"
2"He set the glass down"
3"she replied, sliding onto a"
4"He chuckled, a dry, rasping"
5"He slid a pint of"
6"She scanned the room, lingering"
7"She was all sharp angles"
8"Her clothes were impeccable –"
9"She pushed off the bookshelf"
10"Her gaze lingered on Rory’s"
11"They hadn't spoken in ten"
12"She’d assumed Elara was living"
13"She signaled to Silas"
14"She fished a business card"
15"She didn’t finish the sentence"
16"She didn't wait for a"
17"She turned and strode out"
18"It read: Elara Davies, Director"
19"She crumpled it, tossing it"
ratio0.275
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences80
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory wiped condensation from the"
2"A Tuesday night."
3"She needed a pint and"
4"She pushed through the door,"
5"The place was mostly empty;"
6"Silas, perched behind the bar"
7"He set the glass down"
8"she replied, sliding onto a"
9"He chuckled, a dry, rasping"
10"He slid a pint of"
11"Rory took a long swallow,"
12"The Raven's Nest hadn’t changed"
13"She scanned the room, lingering"
14"A voice cut through the"
15"Rory felt a jolt, a"
16"The last time she saw"
17"She was all sharp angles"
18"Her clothes were impeccable –"
19"The soft, artistic eyes she"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She scanned the room, lingering on the faded maps and black-and-white photographs that plastered the walls – ghosts of lives lived and lost."
1"She’d assumed Elara was living her dream, splashing colors across buildings, inspiring people."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Rory managed, her voice a little shaky"
1"Rory asked, needing to break the awkward silence"
2"Elara said, her voice cool and clipped"
3"Rory asked, the memory surfacing unexpectedly"
4"Rory retorted, the words slipping out before she could stop them"
5"Elara said, her voice low and dangerous"
6"Silas said, his gaze distant"
7"She finished, the taste suddenly flat and bitter"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Elara corrected sharply (correct)"
1"Rory mumbled (mumble)"
2"Rory retorted (retort)"
3"Rory laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.204
leniency0.407
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.148
77.5434%