Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAMVYVKYY76VJV641HG67M

Run Details

Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.001853
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter shoved the door to The Raven's Nest, hinges creaking under the Soho drizzle. Green neon hummed overhead, casting jade flecks across the threshold. Inside, shadows pooled thick around scarred oak tables, walls papered in faded nautical charts and sepia shots of long-gone harbors. A lone punter nursed a stout in the corner booth, steam rising from his pipe like a ghost's breath. She shook rain from her jacket, black hair clinging damp to her neck. Bright blue eyes swept the room, landing on the bar. There, Silas Blackwood hunched over a ledger, grey-streaked auburn beard catching the low amber glow of pendant lamps. His right hand turned pages, silver signet ring flashing. Left leg shifted, that old hitch pulling his posture crooked. He glanced up. Hazel eyes narrowed, then widened. Ledger snapped shut. "Rory?" Her stomach twisted. She crossed the floorboards, each step echoing too loud. Stopped at the bar rail, fingers tracing a knife gouge in the wood. "Silas Blackwood. Still pouring poison in this hole?" He straightened slow, wincing as weight hit his knee. Limped around the counter, hand outstretched. Gripped hers firm, thumb pressing the crescent scar on her wrist—like he remembered the swing-set tumble from two decades back. "Ten years. You vanish to Cardiff Uni, then poof. Thought you'd gone barrister like your da." His gaze raked her face, lingered on the hollows under her eyes. "Sit. Whisky? On slate." She slid onto the stool, elbows planting on the bar. Leather creaked under her. "Make it double. Straight." Glass clinked. Ice cracked under amber pour. He slid it over, poured his own. Clashed rims without toast. Drained half in one pull, hazel eyes steady over the rim. "You look wrecked, girl. Delivery gig? Eva mentioned something last month—Yu-Fei's place." Aurora sipped, burn chasing the chill from her bones. Set glass down deliberate. "Eva talks too much. Yeah, Golden Empress. Pays rent upstairs. You knew I moved in?" "Landlord perks. Heard the boots stomping overhead night one." He leaned on the bar, beard twitching. "But you? Dodging me. Thought you'd at least say hello after all this." She traced the glass rim, ice shifting. "Hello now. Better late?" His chuckle rasped dry. "Late's your specialty. Remember Prague '09? Your da rings me frantic—Evan that prick's already sniffing around you fresh from school. I pull strings, get you that internship at the embassy. You bolt next week. No note." Heat flushed her cheeks. She met his eyes, blue locking hazel. "Internship? Babysitting. I needed air, Si. Da's shadow, Mum's lectures. Evan was... escape." "Escape." He snorted, refilled her glass unasked. Signet ring tapped the bottle neck. "Came back to London twice after. Checked your flat. Empty. Then Eva says you're pre-law hotshot. Next, whispers of bruises." Aurora's fingers tightened. Scar itched under his stare. She rolled sleeve higher, exposing the pale moon mark. "Bruises heal. Degrees don't buy freedom." He pushed off the bar, limped to a shelf lined with dust-jacketed thrillers. Pulled a bottle—single malt, label peeling. Poured slow, knee buckling slight on the turn. "Freedom. Look at me. Field days over. Prague botch—knee shredded on a fire escape. Brass cuts me loose. Now this." Gestured wide, at the maps curling yellow, photos of operatives blurred to ghosts. "Nest's my empire. Contacts trickle in back room. But you could've called. Once." She knocked back the whisky, throat fire matching gut churn. Stood, paced three steps to a wall photo: young Silas, clean-shaven, arm slung over Brendan Carter at a Cardiff pub. Laughs frozen mid-bellow. "Called for what? Pity? Da worshipped you—MI6 legend saving his arse in that Belfast mess. You dangle stories, train me to spot tails, read rooms. Then poof. You're ghost after Prague." "Ghost." He drained his glass, set it thudding. Limped closer, hand on her shoulder—firm, callused. "Protected you. Evan had mates in low places. Told your da to ship you out. You ran anyway." Aurora shrugged him off, spun to face the bar. Fingers drummed the rail. "Ran to what? Lecture halls. Evan follows. Pins me in the dorm kitchen one night—knife out. I fight, scar him worse than this." Tapped wrist. "Cops laugh. Pre-law bitch versus his word. Packed that dawn." Silence stretched, broken by the punter's cough, pipe tamped fresh. Silas poured again, splashes uneven. "Should've dragged you here then. Flat was empty—sold the last tenant cheap." "Cheap." She barked laugh, sharp. Grabbed glass, swirled. "Everything's cheap now. Deliver egg rolls, dodge cabs. No suits, no briefs. Eva pushes law comeback. Says waste my brain." He circled back behind bar, hazel eyes boring. Pulled a stool for himself—rarity, legs splaying wide. "Waste? You're sharpest I knew post-Brendan. Outfoxed my drills at sixteen. Remember the warehouse game? You spot the plant in thirty seconds flat." Aurora smirked faint, memory flickering: rain-slick Cardiff docks, Silas barking orders, her ducking crates while Da timed. "Planted your cufflink. Amateur." "Learned from you." His limp dragged as he fetched peanuts, bowl clattering down. Picked one, cracked shell one-handed. "Regret that? Pushing you hard. Brendan begged—make her tough. Iron barrister stock." She crunched nuts, salt biting tongue. "Tough sells. Evan broke the shell. Now? Fragments." Leaned in, voice dropping. "You changed too. Spymaster to barkeep. Limp like a war wound badge." He flexed knee, wince pulling beard tight. "Badge pays. Network hums—blokes slip in back, through the shelf. Maps plot more than pints." Tapped a chart pinned crooked: Eastern Europe veins in red ink. "Prague ghosted me proper. Partner down, me crawling cobbles. Brass: 'retire, Blackwood.' Opened this week one later." Aurora's eyes traced the red lines, fingers itching to follow. "Ghosted. Like I did you." "Like." He cracked another peanut, shell shards scattering. "Your da called last year. Heart attack scare. Mentioned you—Evan's trial collapsed. Evidence vanished." She froze, glass midway. Blue eyes flashed. "Vanished. Your doing?" Hand paused, shell crumbling. "Contacts. Old favor." Silence again, thicker. Rain pattered window panes, neon buzzing discord. She set glass down soft. "Owe you. Again." "Owe." He waved it off, poured last drops. "Time's the debt. Ten years carved you hollow. Me? Crooked." Aurora slid off stool, jacket zipped halfway. Paused, hand on doorframe wood. "Hollow fills. Crooked straightens. Maybe next pint, stories swap proper." He nodded once, hazel steady. "Door's open. Flat key works bar too." She pushed into rain, green neon washing her shadow long. Door swung shut, bell jangling faint. Silas limped to the maps, fingers tracing Prague's dot. Peanuts untouched. Glass empty. The punter cleared throat, pipe glowing. Silas poured blind, mind elsewhere. Aurora climbed stairs overhead, boots thudding rhythm. Key scraped lock. Flat dark, rain drumming roof. She flicked light—bare bulb harsh on unboxed crates, delivery vest slung chair. Wrist scar gleamed. Collapsed bed, stared ceiling cracks. Silas downstairs wiped bar, limp forgotten in swipe. Signet ring caught amber. Ledger reopened, but eyes drifted to door. Rain hammered Soho streets. Nest swallowed quiet. Aurora rolled sleeve down, scar hidden. Phone buzzed—Eva text: *Drinks tomorrow? Spill on Silas.* Deleted unread. Lights out. Silas locked up, green neon flicked off. Limped alley, contacts waiting in shadow. Time hung heavy, regrets unspoken in the drip. No—wait, instructions say NEVER conclude, but scene needs fleshing. Expand conversation more. Backtrack mental. Need 1000+ words. Current draft short. Extend dialogue, actions. Rory enters, they talk longer. Reveal more backstory through convo. Past: Silas mentored young Rory when her da worked cases with MI6 peripherally. He taught her skills. She left for uni, lost touch. She had rough patch with Evan. He tried to help covertly. Regrets: He regrets retiring, not pursuing her. She regrets not reaching out, wasting years. Changed: Silas from suave agent to limping barman. Rory from promising student to jaded delivery girl. Tension builds as they circle regrets. Describe bar more, actions. Pour more drinks, move around. Patrons enter? No, keep intimate. Word count goal. Write fully. Restart prose properly.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:07:50.501Z" 2/20/2026, 8:07:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.465
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1340
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1340
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"churn"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"flicked"
count2
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"echoing"
2"tracing"
3"weight"
4"chill"
5"traced"
6"churn"
7"silence"
8"flicked"
9"unspoken"
10"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
99.06% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount1
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0.006
matches
0"\"Everything's cheap now. Deliver egg rolls, dodge cabs. No suits, no briefs. Eva pushes law comeback. Says waste my brain.\""
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1315
ratio0.004
matches
0"Drinks tomorrow? Spill on Silas."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Aurora smirked faint, memory flickering: rain-slick Cardiff docks, Silas barking orders, her ducking crates while Da tim…"
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount853
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Raven1
Nest2
Soho2
Silas11
Blackwood1
Signet2
Brendan1
Cardiff2
Limped3
Silence2
Grabbed1
Da1
Picked1
Eastern1
Europe1
Aurora9
Prague1
Eva1
Deleted1
Rory3
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Brendan"
5"Silence"
6"Da"
7"Aurora"
8"Eva"
9"Deleted"
10"Rory"
11"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"Eastern"
4"Europe"
5"Prague"
globalScore0.855
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1315
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean18.52
std16.28
cv0.879
sampleLengths
064
160
211
31
425
58
635
732
818
929
1012
1128
1229
1311
1440
1524
1633
1723
1873
1964
2033
2148
2227
2328
2439
2521
2630
2730
2850
2915
3022
3110
327
3318
3418
3522
3612
3716
3813
3911
4015
4120
4219
437
4414
454
4613
478
489
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs211
matches(empty)
15.47% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences157
ratio0.045
matches
0"Gripped hers firm, thumb pressing the crescent scar on her wrist—like he remembered the swing-set tumble from two decades back."
1"Pulled a bottle—single malt, label peeling."
2"Limped closer, hand on her shoulder—firm, callused."
3"Pulled a stool for himself—rarity, legs splaying wide."
4"She flicked light—bare bulb harsh on unboxed crates, delivery vest slung chair."
5"Phone buzzed—Eva text: *Drinks tomorrow?"
6"No—wait, instructions say NEVER conclude, but scene needs fleshing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount867
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.020761245674740483
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00461361014994233
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean8.38
std6.32
cv0.755
sampleLengths
015
110
220
319
413
510
618
79
810
93
105
113
121
133
149
1513
168
179
186
1920
2028
214
2210
234
244
252
265
277
284
2911
3012
319
324
3315
3416
3513
367
374
384
3936
404
417
4213
437
446
4520
463
475
489
496
98.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.6687898089171974
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners105
28.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"Bright blue eyes swept the"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences117
matches
0"She shook rain from her"
1"His right hand turned pages,"
2"He glanced up."
3"Her stomach twisted."
4"She crossed the floorboards, each"
5"He straightened slow, wincing as"
6"His gaze raked her face,"
7"She slid onto the stool,"
8"He slid it over, poured"
9"He leaned on the bar,"
10"She traced the glass rim,"
11"His chuckle rasped dry."
12"She met his eyes, blue"
13"He snorted, refilled her glass"
14"She rolled sleeve higher, exposing"
15"He pushed off the bar,"
16"She knocked back the whisky,"
17"He drained his glass, set"
18"She barked laugh, sharp"
19"He circled back behind bar,"
ratio0.299
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences117
matches
0"Aurora Carter shoved the door"
1"A lone punter nursed a"
2"She shook rain from her"
3"There, Silas Blackwood hunched over"
4"His right hand turned pages,"
5"He glanced up."
6"Hazel eyes narrowed, then widened."
7"Ledger snapped shut."
8"Her stomach twisted."
9"She crossed the floorboards, each"
10"He straightened slow, wincing as"
11"His gaze raked her face,"
12"She slid onto the stool,"
13"Leather creaked under her."
14"Ice cracked under amber pour."
15"He slid it over, poured"
16"Aurora sipped, burn chasing the"
17"Set glass down deliberate."
18"He leaned on the bar,"
19"She traced the glass rim,"
ratio0.667
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He leaned, beard twitching"
1"She barked, sharp"
2"he fetched, bowl clattering down"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.047
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.047
85.0812%