Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAN5X3FC6R2C5A1TYZ4S9G

Run Details

Duration:
23.9s
Cost:
$0.001092
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn squeezed through the rusted turnstile, her worn leather watch digging into her wrist at 2:17 a.m. The brick wall behind it was damp, dripping cold onto her calf. She ignored the chill. Looked up. The Tube station’s ceiling was a jagged gap in the night, graffiti peeling like scabbed skin—*Kill the light, feed the void*—painted in neon green that glowed even under the moon. Camden had never smelled like this: sage mixed with rot, a hint of something metallic that bit at her tongue. A shadow detached itself from the ticket booth. A man in a gas mask, his uniform caked in grime. “Token.” His voice came through the mask, muffled, like a growl in a barrel. Quinn slid the bone token across the counter. It was a wolf’s hipbone, etched with the market’s sigil—three intertwined circles, each containing a star. The guard’s eyes lingered on it, then he stamped it with a red inkpad and slid it back. “Five minutes. They move at midnight.” “Five’s enough,” she said. The station opened up like a mouth. Stalls lined the platforms, their awnings made from old curtains and animal hides, glowing with candlelight and magic. A vendor sold what looked like coal but crackled when she touched it—*living coal*, she thought, from the market’s black list. Another handed out vials of fog that reeked of seaweed; Eva had told her once that was locator mist, used to track missing Shades. The air hummed, a low thrumming in her teeth. Supernatural energy. Strong here, thicker than usual. Then she saw the body. It hung from a meat hook above the old ticket office, its legs splayed, blood pooling dark on the concrete. The throat was slit, but not with a knife. The wound was black, oozing something that looked like liquid shadow. The face was turned up, eyes wide, but the whites were clouded over—*no iris, no pupil*. Just milky white. Quinn moved closer. Her combat boots crunched on broken glass. The body was a man, mid-30s, maybe. His shirt was open, revealing a tattoo on his chest: a compass, its needle pointing right. *The Veil Compass*, she thought. She’d seen one before—Eva had a replica, carved from boxwood. This one was real, she could tell. The brass casing was tarnished, verdigris creeping like mold, and the face was etched with sigils, not the usual protective ones. These were *restrictive*—seal, bind, contain. “Jesus Christ,” a voice said. Quinn turned. A woman in round glasses, her curly red hair escaping its loose braid, stood behind her. She clutched a satchel to her chest, freckles visible even in the dim light. Her left ear was red, like she’d been tugging at her hair. “You’re late.” “Quinn.” She extended a hand. The woman hesitated, then shook it. “Eva. Kowalski. Aurora’s friend.” Quinn knew Aurora. The girl from the missing persons case three years back. The one whose body was found in the Thames, her throat slit, but with no wound—just the same white eyes. Morris had been on that case. Had died six months later, found in a field in Dorset, his eyes white, a black ooze around his mouth. “Kit found the body,” Eva said, nodding at a man in a blue jumpsuit, leaning against a stall, playing with a shiv. “Him and his team. Thought it was a gang hit. Slit throat, typical.” She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, the nervous habit, Quinn noticed. “But the mark—” “I see it,” Quinn said. She knelt, tilted the body’s wrist. A bruise ringed it, shaped like a compass. Not the tattoo on his chest—*another* compass. “Gang was using the market last week,” Eva said, fumbling with her satchel, pulling out a notebook. “Heard talk about a new supplier. Local crew, the Camden Cutthroats. They’d been pushing into supernatural goods, but the market’s rules—” “Rules,” Quinn interrupted. She ran a finger over the black ooze on the man’s throat. It tasted like iron. *Magical iron*, she thought. Not from a blade. From a spell. “Yeah. No violence inside the market. No humans killing humans. The old-timers enforce it with Shades.” Eva’s voice dropped. “Shades are—they’re spirits, bound to the market. They do the dirty work when the vendors can’t.” She paused, then added, “You didn’t hear that from me.” Quinn stood. “Vendors don’t usually kill their own. Too much bad press. Word gets out, the bone tokens dry up.” Eva tensed. “What if it was a human?” “Then why the white eyes?” Quinn said. She turned to Kit, the crime scene tech, who’d wandered over. “Any prints? Fibers?” “Nada,” he said, lighting a cigarette. “The slit’s clean, but the burn—weird. Like the blade wasn’t metal. The blood’s gone, too. Disintegrated, maybe.” He exhaled, the smoke curling around his face. “Probably a message. ‘We don’t play.’” Quinn walked to the edge of the platform, where a stall still had its awning down. She pulled back the fabric. Inside: a broken vial, its contents spilled onto the floor. The glass was etched with sigils—*warding sigils*, not a gang’s. A single coin lay beside it, copper, with a portrait that wasn’t a king or queen. It was a Shade. “You know what this is?” Eva asked, appearing at her shoulder. Quinn picked up the coin. The Shade’s face was familiar—pale, with black veins under its skin. “I’ve seen these before. How do they work? The vials, I mean.” “To trap Shades,” Eva said, her voice tight. “If you break the vial, the sigils weaken, and the Shade breaks free. But why would someone…?” “Frame the Cutthroats,” Quinn finished. She turned to Kit. “Bring the vial to the lab. Test the contents. And check the body’s pockets. No phone, no wallet. Typical gang move to make it look like robbery, but they never take the wallet. Too much heat if the ID’s found.” “Got it,” Kit said, heading back to his truck. Eva was staring at the body, her lower lip between her teeth. “He was a vendor, wasn’t he? The Compass mark.” Quinn nodded. “The market’s vendors are the only ones with those tattoos. To show they’re bound to the rules. If he was a vendor, he broke one. Why?” “Maybe he was selling something he shouldn’t,” Eva said, finally meeting her eye. “Something the Shades don’t want out. Or… someone.” “Someone else,” Quinn corrected. She wiped her gloves on her trousers—they stank of ozone now. “Who benefits from the market moving? The vendors need new locations to avoid humans finding them. The Shades need to stay close to the rifts. If the market moves, the rifts shift. Maybe someone wanted the vendors busy, so they could… take something.” Eva’s satchel strap slipped. She fumbled to adjust it. “Aurora used to say the market’s got a heart. A core that keeps it moving. If you take that, the market falls apart. Shades get loose. Humans find it.” Quinn’s blood ran cold. Aurora had mentioned the market’s heart in her journal. “Did the victim have a Satchel?” she asked. Eva’s face paled. “Aurora’s satchel? She—she left it in my flat when she went missing.” Quinn drew her gun. “Where is it?” “Camden, in my flat—” “Wait.” Quinn held up a hand, listening. The hum in the air had shifted. Higher. More urgent. She turned toward the tunnel that led to the next platform. The paint on the walls was peeling faster now, revealing writing underneath: *It’s in the compass. The needle points home*. “The Compass,” Eva whispered. “It’s not just a tool. It’s a key. To the heart.” Quinn ran, her boots thudding on the concrete. The tunnel was dark, a single bulb flickering overhead. She reached the platform, skidded to a stop. The body was gone. “Quinn!” Eva called, breathless. “Look at the tracks!” Quinn knelt. The metal rails were etched with fresh sigils—*not the market’s*. They wound around the rails, forming a shape. A compass, its needle pointed straight up. “The rift,” she said. “That’s where the body went. To the market’s realm.” Eva grabbed her arm. “You can’t follow it. It’s dangerous. Shades—” “Shades don’t kill humans who know the rules,” Quinn said, yanking her arm free. She pulled the bone token from her pocket, held it up. The sigils glowed. “This works because I respect them. The Cutthroats probably stole it. Or took it from the victim.” “Then we have to get it back,” Eva said. Quinn smiled, sharp and cold. “We’re already too late.” A noise behind her. A low, guttural growl. She turned. A figure stood in the tunnel, its body made of shadow, its eyes glowing red. It held the bone token in one hand, crumpled like paper. “The token’s not yours,” it said, its voice a chorus of voices. “It belongs to the vendor. And you, detective—you’re here to *watch*.” The shadow reached for her. Quinn backed away, her gun lifting. The world spun. She saw Morris, his white eyes, the black ooze at his mouth. *Watch*, he’d said, just before he died. *Watch and remember*. The shadow lunged. Quinn fired. The bullet hit it in the chest, and it hissed, melting like wax. The bone token fell from its hand, uncrinkled. Eva grabbed it, pressed it into her palm. “Run!” she shouted. They ran, the hum in the air rising to a shriek. Behind them, the tunnel crumbled, the platform collapsing into the tracks. Quinn didn’t look back. She just ran, her watch ticking, counting the seconds until the market moved again. Somewhere in the dark, a voice laughed. And she knew, deep down, that the game had just begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.518
leniency1
rawRatio0.034
effectiveRatio0.034
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1616
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1616
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"etched"
count4
2
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"etched"
2"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences141
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans13
markdownWords37
totalWords1605
ratio0.023
matches
0"Kill the light, feed the void"
1"living coal"
2"no iris, no pupil"
3"The Veil Compass"
4"restrictive"
5"another"
6"Magical iron"
7"warding sigils"
8"It’s in the compass. The needle points home"
9"not the market’s"
10"watch"
11"Watch"
12"Watch and remember"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1121
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.23
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn25
Tube1
Eva17
Shades1
Veil1
Aurora2
Thames1
Dorset1
Kit3
Shade2
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
4"Shade"
5"Morris"
places
0"Thames"
1"Dorset"
2"Kit"
globalScore0.385
windowScore0
55.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like this: sage mixed with rot, a"
1"looked like coal but crackled when she to"
2"looked like liquid shadow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1605
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean29.18
std21.17
cv0.725
sampleLengths
087
133
248
34
486
55
659
781
85
946
105
1110
1259
1352
1426
1538
1630
1745
1820
198
2021
2137
2261
2311
2428
2525
2649
279
2821
2928
3021
3158
3238
3321
3415
357
364
3748
3815
3929
408
4127
4213
4311
4445
459
469
4736
4823
4936
90.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences141
matches
0"was turned"
1"were clouded"
2"was etched"
3"was found"
4"was etched"
5"was gone"
6"were etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs212
matches
0"was staring"
1"was peeling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences168
ratio0.077
matches
0"The Tube station’s ceiling was a jagged gap in the night, graffiti peeling like scabbed skin—*Kill the light, feed the void*—painted in neon green that glowed even under the moon."
1"It was a wolf’s hipbone, etched with the market’s sigil—three intertwined circles, each containing a star."
2"A vendor sold what looked like coal but crackled when she touched it—*living coal*, she thought, from the market’s black list."
3"Another handed out vials of fog that reeked of seaweed; Eva had told her once that was locator mist, used to track missing Shades."
4"The face was turned up, eyes wide, but the whites were clouded over—*no iris, no pupil*."
5"She’d seen one before—Eva had a replica, carved from boxwood."
6"These were *restrictive*—seal, bind, contain."
7"The one whose body was found in the Thames, her throat slit, but with no wound—just the same white eyes."
8"Not the tattoo on his chest—*another* compass."
9"The glass was etched with sigils—*warding sigils*, not a gang’s."
10"The Shade’s face was familiar—pale, with black veins under its skin."
11"She wiped her gloves on her trousers—they stank of ozone now."
12"The metal rails were etched with fresh sigils—*not the market’s*."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1127
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.026619343389529725
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001774622892635315
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean9.55
std7.2
cv0.753
sampleLengths
019
112
24
32
430
520
68
711
814
98
1016
1118
126
134
147
1518
1621
1724
189
192
205
215
2220
239
2411
2516
263
273
287
297
3016
315
3210
337
3421
355
365
372
3816
3914
4012
412
425
436
444
453
4610
4720
486
4920
61.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.40476190476190477
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners68
84.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences119
matches
0"Then she saw the body."
1"Just milky white."
2"Somewhere in the dark, a"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences119
matches
0"She ignored the chill."
1"His voice came through the"
2"It was a wolf’s hipbone,"
3"It hung from a meat"
4"Her combat boots crunched on"
5"His shirt was open, revealing"
6"She’d seen one before—Eva had"
7"She clutched a satchel to"
8"Her left ear was red,"
9"She extended a hand"
10"She tucked a strand of"
11"She knelt, tilted the body’s"
12"She ran a finger over"
13"It tasted like iron."
14"She paused, then added"
15"She turned to Kit, the"
16"he said, lighting a cigarette"
17"He exhaled, the smoke curling"
18"She pulled back the fabric."
19"It was a Shade."
ratio0.269
14.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences119
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn squeezed through"
1"The brick wall behind it"
2"She ignored the chill."
3"The Tube station’s ceiling was"
4"Camden had never smelled like"
5"A shadow detached itself from"
6"A man in a gas"
7"His voice came through the"
8"Quinn slid the bone token"
9"It was a wolf’s hipbone,"
10"The guard’s eyes lingered on"
11"The station opened up like"
12"Stalls lined the platforms, their"
13"A vendor sold what looked"
14"Another handed out vials of"
15"The air hummed, a low"
16"It hung from a meat"
17"The throat was slit, but"
18"The wound was black, oozing"
19"The face was turned up,"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She turned to Kit, the crime scene tech, who’d wandered over."
1"She just ran, her watch ticking, counting the seconds until the market moved again."
73.28% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva said, her voice tight"
1"Eva called, breathless"
2"it said, its voice a chorus of voices"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn interrupted (interrupt)"
1"Quinn corrected (correct)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
3"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.19
effectiveRatio0.143
81.2947%