Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAN7SPA1WE91FJGHZG9Q47

Run Details

Duration:
21.7s
Cost:
$0.000156
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against Detective Harlow Quinn’s worn leather jacket, a relentless, grey drumbeat against the slick asphalt. Each drop felt like a tiny accusation, a mirror to the knot tightening in her stomach. Below her, the streetlights bled hazy halos, painting the scene in a sickly yellow wash. Tomás Herrera was fast, unnaturally so, weaving through the crowded pavements of Soho with a practiced ease that bordered on unsettling. He was a blur of dark clothes and panicked strides, a brown shadow swallowed by the storm. Quinn adjusted her grip on her service pistol, the cold steel a familiar comfort against the rising panic. Eighteen years on the force, eighteen years of decorated service, and she still hadn’t gotten used to the feeling of chasing something – someone – down the rabbit hole. Especially when that something had a history steeped in the impossible. DS Morris. Three years. The report had called it a “tragic accident,” a fall from a scaffolding during a rooftop surveillance operation. Quinn knew better. The bruises hadn’t matched the fall, the rain hadn’t washed away the lingering scent of ozone and something…else. Something ancient and wrong. Herrera glanced back, his dark eyes wide with a raw, desperate fear. He wasn’t running from the police; he was running from something else entirely. Quinn could feel it in the prickle of the air, a subtle shift in the static of the city that always accompanied the presence of the supernatural. This wasn’t a simple robbery, not a drug bust. This was…different. She checked her watch – a worn leather timepiece, a constant reminder of a life she desperately wanted to reclaim – and noted the time: 02:47. The rain showed no sign of letting up. He darted down a narrow alleyway, the stench of stale beer and something vaguely metallic hanging heavy in the air. Quinn followed, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the distorted neon glow of the nearby bars. The alley opened onto a busier street, then abruptly terminated at a side entrance concealed behind a peeling poster advertising a forgotten band. A single, unmarked door. Quinn pushed it open, stepping into a narrow, dimly lit corridor that smelled of damp concrete and decay. The corridor led down a flight of rickety steps, the air growing colder with each descent. At the bottom, she found herself in a cavernous space – The Raven’s Nest. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance pulsed with a sickly light, illuminating the interior with an unsettling glow. The walls were covered in a chaotic collage of old maps and black-and-white photographs, depicting scenes that seemed both familiar and utterly alien – Victorian London overlaid with symbols she didn’t recognize, shadowy figures engaged in rituals beneath crumbling archways. The bar was sparsely populated with figures shrouded in darkness, their faces obscured by wide-brimmed hats and the deep shadows. The air was thick with the smell of tobacco, cheap whiskey, and something else…something subtly floral and intoxicating. Quinn moved through the crowd, her movements precise and deliberate, the military precision ingrained after years of training. She spotted Herrera near the bar, arguing with a man who looked like he’d been carved from granite – a large, scarred individual with eyes that held the cold glint of polished obsidian. The man was holding a small, intricately carved box, its surface shimmering with an unnatural luminescence. “You said you had it,” the granite man growled, his voice a low rumble. “Don’t play games, Herrera.” Herrera, despite his fear, met her gaze. “I don’t have it,” he said, his voice trembling slightly. “I told you, I only deliver. I don't know what's in the box.” “Liar,” the man spat, taking a step closer. “You’re a courier, a ghost. Always moving, always unseen.” Just as the situation was about to escalate, Quinn intervened, stepping between them with the practiced authority of a seasoned officer. “Let’s just keep things civil here,” she said, her voice firm, cutting through the murmur of the bar. She leveled her pistol, not at Herrera, but at the granite man. "Everyone, remain calm." The granite man didn’t flinch. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice laced with amusement. “Always interfering.” As she assessed the situation, she noticed a flickering light emanating from a bookshelf at the back of the bar. A slight indentation, barely visible, suggested a hidden door. The secret room. Silas’ bar – the nickname for the place, whispered among those who knew. A place of clandestine meetings, a crossroads for the city’s hidden underworld. A place where the veil between worlds grew thin. Quinn turned back to Herrera, who was nervously glancing around the bar, his hand instinctively reaching for the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck. "You need to come with me," she said, her gaze unwavering. "There's a safer place." Herrera hesitated, then nodded, his eyes darting back to the granite man, who remained impassive, a silent threat in the shadows. As they moved toward the hidden doorway, Quinn felt a sudden, sharp sting of pain in her arm. A small, almost imperceptible puncture wound. She didn't have time to investigate. She pushed open the bookshelf, revealing a narrow passage that sloped downwards into darkness. The passage led to a narrow corridor, slick with moisture, that smelled of ozone and earth. The air grew noticeably colder, the silence broken only by the drip, drip, drip of water. Ahead, she could see the faint glow of – something – illuminating a vast, subterranean space. They emerged into The Veil Market. It was a chaotic, overwhelming scene. Stalls overflowing with strange and unsettling wares lined the cavernous space, illuminated by flickering candlelight and the eerie glow of enchanted objects. Vendors hawked demonic talismans, vials of shimmering, iridescent liquids, and bundles of dried herbs that smelled of both life and decay. Figures cloaked in dark robes haggled over the price of enchanted weapons and stolen memories. The bone token – the entry requirement – was left on a small, moss-covered table. Quinn recognized a few faces from her previous investigations, individuals involved in less-than-legal occult practices. And somewhere within the throng, she could sense it – a pulse of raw, uncontrolled magic. Like a barely contained storm. "This is...a lot," Herrera whispered, his voice filled with a mixture of awe and terror. “It's more than a lot,” Quinn replied, her hand instinctively moving to her pistol. “It’s a nexus. A place where…things slip through. Things that shouldn’t.” Suddenly, a voice cut through the din. “Detective Quinn. A pleasure.” Turning, she saw him – the granite man, flanked by two equally imposing figures. He wasn’t alone. And he was smiling. A slow, deliberate smile that hinted at a knowledge and power that chilled her to the bone. He held up the shimmering box. "I believe," he said, his voice dripping with satisfaction, "this belongs to you.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1140
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"nervously"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slightly"
2"nervously"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1140
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"practiced ease"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count2
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"clandestine"
count1
9
word"unwavering"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"imposing"
count1
13
word"chilled"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"practiced ease"
2"familiar"
3"could feel"
4"reminder"
5"pulsed"
6"chaotic"
7"glint"
8"clandestine"
9"unwavering"
10"silence"
11"pulse"
12"imposing"
13"chilled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch –"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1148
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1045
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn12
Herrera8
Soho1
Morris1
Raven1
Nest1
Victorian1
London1
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil1
Market1
Suddenly1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Raven"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Veil"
globalScore0.926
windowScore1
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a tiny accusation, a mirror t"
1"looked like he’d been carved from granite"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.871
wordCount1148
matches
0"not at Herrera, but at the granite man"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean54.67
std36.13
cv0.661
sampleLengths
087
1105
297
382
4128
567
618
730
817
954
1016
1166
1239
1365
1448
156
16115
1715
1825
1911
2057
91.59% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"were covered"
1"been carved"
2"was left"
72.61% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was running"
1"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences86
ratio0.116
matches
0"Eighteen years on the force, eighteen years of decorated service, and she still hadn’t gotten used to the feeling of chasing something – someone – down the rabbit hole."
1"He wasn’t running from the police; he was running from something else entirely."
2"She checked her watch – a worn leather timepiece, a constant reminder of a life she desperately wanted to reclaim – and noted the time: 02:47."
3"At the bottom, she found herself in a cavernous space – The Raven’s Nest."
4"The walls were covered in a chaotic collage of old maps and black-and-white photographs, depicting scenes that seemed both familiar and utterly alien – Victorian London overlaid with symbols she didn’t recognize, shadowy figures engaged in rituals beneath crumbling archways."
5"She spotted Herrera near the bar, arguing with a man who looked like he’d been carved from granite – a large, scarred individual with eyes that held the cold glint of polished obsidian."
6"Ahead, she could see the faint glow of – something – illuminating a vast, subterranean space."
7"The bone token – the entry requirement – was left on a small, moss-covered table."
8"And somewhere within the throng, she could sense it – a pulse of raw, uncontrolled magic."
9"Turning, she saw him – the granite man, flanked by two equally imposing figures."
98.83% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount701
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.029957203994293864
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.021398002853067047
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean13.35
std7.49
cv0.561
sampleLengths
018
116
215
321
417
518
629
711
82
92
1018
113
1218
134
1412
1513
1627
179
182
1926
208
2120
2217
2323
244
2518
2616
2714
2820
2940
3020
3118
3218
3333
3416
3514
364
377
3810
3913
408
419
4221
4318
4412
453
465
479
482
4920
63.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4418604651162791
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners38
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Especially when that something had"
1"Suddenly, a voice cut through"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences74
matches
0"He was a blur of"
1"He wasn’t running from the"
2"She checked her watch –"
3"He darted down a narrow"
4"She spotted Herrera near the"
5"he said, his voice trembling"
6"she said, her voice firm,"
7"She leveled her pistol, not"
8"he said, his voice laced"
9"she said, her gaze unwavering"
10"She didn't have time to"
11"She pushed open the bookshelf,"
12"They emerged into The Veil"
13"It was a chaotic, overwhelming"
14"He wasn’t alone."
15"He held up the shimmering"
16"he said, his voice dripping"
ratio0.23
47.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences74
matches
0"The rain hammered against Detective"
1"Each drop felt like a"
2"Tomás Herrera was fast, unnaturally"
3"He was a blur of"
4"Quinn adjusted her grip on"
5"The report had called it"
6"Quinn knew better."
7"The bruises hadn’t matched the"
8"Something ancient and wrong."
9"Herrera glanced back, his dark"
10"He wasn’t running from the"
11"Quinn could feel it in"
12"This wasn’t a simple robbery,"
13"She checked her watch –"
14"The rain showed no sign"
15"He darted down a narrow"
16"Quinn followed, her boots splashing"
17"The alley opened onto a"
18"A single, unmarked door."
19"Quinn pushed it open, stepping"
ratio0.824
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Just as the situation was"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Tomás Herrera was fast, unnaturally so, weaving through the crowded pavements of Soho with a practiced ease that bordered on unsettling."
1"Quinn followed, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the distorted neon glow of the nearby bars."
2"She spotted Herrera near the bar, arguing with a man who looked like he’d been carved from granite – a large, scarred individual with eyes that held the cold gl…"
3"The man was holding a small, intricately carved box, its surface shimmering with an unnatural luminescence."
4"Quinn turned back to Herrera, who was nervously glancing around the bar, his hand instinctively reaching for the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck."
5"Herrera hesitated, then nodded, his eyes darting back to the granite man, who remained impassive, a silent threat in the shadows."
6"She pushed open the bookshelf, revealing a narrow passage that sloped downwards into darkness."
7"Vendors hawked demonic talismans, vials of shimmering, iridescent liquids, and bundles of dried herbs that smelled of both life and decay."
8"A slow, deliberate smile that hinted at a knowledge and power that chilled her to the bone."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"the granite man growled, his voice a low rumble"
1"he said, his voice trembling slightly"
2"she said, her voice firm, cutting through the murmur of the bar"
3"she said, her gaze unwavering"
4"Quinn replied, her hand instinctively moving to her pistol"
5"he said, his voice dripping with satisfaction,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"the granite man growled (growl)"
1"the man spat (spit)"
2"Herrera whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
76.9885%