| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.526 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1044 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1044 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "profound" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "stark" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "throb" | | 12 | "navigating" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "chilling" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "shimmered" | | 19 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1041 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "“Come to the Grove. Midnight. Bring the Heartstone.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Imagination, she told herself." |
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| 77.16% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 961 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Kensington | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Rory | 14 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Kensington" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.772 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 87.50% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed absent as if the trees themselves were holding their breath" | | 1 | "felt like breaking a rule, awakening so" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.961 | | wordCount | 1041 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a settling of the earth, but a deliberate movement" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 22.15 | | std | 16.8 | | cv | 0.759 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "was working" | | 1 | "were holding" |
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| 46.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "A gust of wind snaked around her, carrying the scent of damp earth and something else—something floral, overpoweringly sweet, like lilies left too long in a vase." | | 1 | "The anonymous note had been insistent – *“Come to the Grove. Midnight. Bring the Heartstone.”* No signature, just stark black ink on thick, cream-colored paper." | | 2 | "She'd been here dozens of times, sworn to secrecy by Eva – always during daylight hours, exploring the bizarre botanical anomalies of the Fae-touched grove." | | 3 | "The voice was incongruous – sweet and childish, yet laced with a chilling undercurrent." |
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| 79.36% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 964 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, cream-colored paper." |
| | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.056016597510373446 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02074688796680498 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 8.75 | | std | 5.41 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 51.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3277310924369748 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a deer, probably." | | 1 | "Even the usual rustle of" | | 2 | "Then she heard it." | | 3 | "Just the trees, their branches" | | 4 | "Only silence answered her." | | 5 | "Then she saw it." |
| | ratio | 0.062 | |
| 88.04% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She shivered, pulling her threadbare" | | 1 | "It wasn't cold, exactly, more" | | 2 | "She’d told Silas she was" | | 3 | "She needed to be here," | | 4 | "She fumbled for the Heartstone" | | 5 | "Its crimson gemstone pulsed faintly," | | 6 | "She'd been here dozens of" | | 7 | "It was a curious place" | | 8 | "She scanned the shadows, the" | | 9 | "She resumed her walk, faster" | | 10 | "She strained her ears, listening" | | 11 | "It seemed to curl around" | | 12 | "She couldn’t make out any" | | 13 | "she called out, her voice" | | 14 | "She shouldn’t have spoken." | | 15 | "It felt like breaking a" | | 16 | "She hurried on, navigating the" | | 17 | "She whipped her head around," | | 18 | "She took a tentative step" | | 19 | "It seemed to come from" |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 42.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The wrought iron gates of" | | 1 | "Rory wrestled with the latch," | | 2 | "A gust of wind snaked" | | 3 | "She shivered, pulling her threadbare" | | 4 | "It wasn't cold, exactly, more" | | 5 | "She’d told Silas she was" | | 6 | "A lie, but a necessary" | | 7 | "She needed to be here," | | 8 | "The anonymous note had been" | | 9 | "Rory clipped the latch, pushing" | | 10 | "The path ahead vanished quickly," | | 11 | "Moonlight barely pierced the canopy." | | 12 | "The air, heavy and still," | | 13 | "She fumbled for the Heartstone" | | 14 | "The silver chain felt cold" | | 15 | "Its crimson gemstone pulsed faintly," | | 16 | "Rory moved deeper, the soft" | | 17 | "The established path twisted, forking" | | 18 | "She'd been here dozens of" | | 19 | "It was a curious place" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 51.55% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, under the oppressive cloak" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the usual rustle of leaves seemed absent, as if the trees themselves were holding their breath." | | 1 | "It seemed to curl around her, a sibilant sigh that tickled the back of her neck." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice barely a tremor" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice shaking despite her best efforts" | | 2 | "she replied, her voice barely audible" | | 3 | "it said, its voice dropping to a menacing whisper" | | 4 | "the figure said, its voice echoing through the grove" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.316 | |