Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYANGRPP234GKHJDJF920WX

Run Details

Duration:
36.6s
Cost:
$0.000231
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The wrought iron gates of Richmond Park loomed, skeletal in the moonlight. Rory wrestled with the latch, the mechanism stiff with disuse and rust. A gust of wind snaked around her, carrying the scent of damp earth and something else—something floral, overpoweringly sweet, like lilies left too long in a vase. She shivered, pulling her threadbare jacket tighter. It wasn't cold, exactly, more like a profound absence of warmth. She’d told Silas she was working a late shift, delivering noodles to a barrister in Kensington. A lie, but a necessary one. She needed to be here, in the Grove. The anonymous note had been insistent – *“Come to the Grove. Midnight. Bring the Heartstone.”* No signature, just stark black ink on thick, cream-colored paper. Rory clipped the latch, pushing the gates open with a groan of protesting metal. The path ahead vanished quickly, swallowed by the dense wood. Moonlight barely pierced the canopy. The air, heavy and still, pressed against her skin. She fumbled for the Heartstone Pendant beneath her jacket, its familiar warmth a small comfort against her skin. The silver chain felt cold against her fingers. Its crimson gemstone pulsed faintly, a slow, steady beat. Nothing unusual. Not yet, anyway. Rory moved deeper, the soft earth muffling her footsteps. The established path twisted, forking unexpectedly. She'd been here dozens of times, sworn to secrecy by Eva – always during daylight hours, exploring the bizarre botanical anomalies of the Fae-touched grove. It was a curious place during the day, beautiful and unsettling in equal measure. Now, under the oppressive cloak of night, it was something else entirely. A twig snapped. Rory froze. Just a deer, probably. Richmond Park brimmed with them. Still, her hand instinctively tightened around the Heartstone. She scanned the shadows, the moonlight painting the trunks of ancient oaks in distorted patterns. Silence. She resumed her walk, faster than before. The wildflowers, vibrant even in the dark, seemed to lean in towards her, their petals brushing against her legs with an almost sentient touch. It felt…wrong. Wildflowers didn't bloom this late, this vividly, in mid-October. Another snap. Closer this time. Not a deer. Rory stopped, her breath catching in her throat. She strained her ears, listening for any sound beyond the rush of blood in her own ears. The grove was too quiet. Unnaturally so. Even the usual rustle of leaves seemed absent, as if the trees themselves were holding their breath. Then she heard it. A whisper. Faint, indistinct, carried on the wind. It seemed to curl around her, a sibilant sigh that tickled the back of her neck. She couldn’t make out any words. Rory spun around, her gaze sweeping across the grove. Nothing. Just the trees, their branches intertwined like grasping fingers. “Hello?” she called out, her voice barely a tremor. “Is anyone there?” Only silence answered her. A deeper, more profound silence than before. She shouldn’t have spoken. It felt like breaking a rule, awakening something. The Heartstone pulsed faster against her chest, a frantic throb against her ribs. She hurried on, navigating the twisting paths with a growing sense of unease. The air grew colder, the scent of lilies intensifying, thick and cloying. Something moved at the edge of her vision, a flicker of shadow between the trees. She whipped her head around, but there was nothing there. Imagination, she told herself. Just nerves. Then she saw it. A glimpse of white, just beyond a thicket of thorny bushes. A pale, indistinct form, shifting slightly in the darkness. Rory squinted, trying to make it out, but it vanished as quickly as it appeared. She took a tentative step forward, pushing aside a branch. Another step. The ground beneath her feet shifted. Not a settling of the earth, but a deliberate movement. Something was down there, concealed beneath the leaves. Rory recoiled, stumbling backward. A child’s giggle echoed through the grove, high-pitched and unsettling. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. Rory's blood turned to ice. She knew this place, knew its quirks, its anomaly. It did not belong for children to reside in. “Who’s there?” she demanded, her voice shaking despite her best efforts. The giggle came again, closer this time. Followed by a soft, singsong voice. “Lost, little Rory?” The voice was incongruous – sweet and childish, yet laced with a chilling undercurrent. She didn’t turn around, she didn’t dare. She could feel eyes on her. The wrongness in the air thickened and solidified. “I’m not lost,” she replied, her voice barely audible. “I’m looking for someone.” “Everyone comes looking for someone,” the voice replied, still sing-song and far too close. “But not everyone finds what they're looking for.” Rory felt a wave of dizziness wash over her. The Heartstone blazed with heat against her skin, its crimson glow illuminating the area around her in an eerie light. A figure emerged from the shadows. Small, slight, almost childlike. It wore a long, white dress, the fabric shimmering in the moonlight. Its face was obscured by a tangle of dark hair. “You brought the pretty stone,” the figure said, extending a small, pale hand. “Give it to me.” Rory shook her head, taking a step back. “Who are you?” The figure tilted its head, the movement unnervingly fluid. A single, long finger emerged from the hair, pointing directly at Rory. “Doesn’t matter who I am,” it said, its voice dropping to a menacing whisper. “What matters is what you have.” Rory clutched the Heartstone tighter. It was warm, almost burning now. She could feel its energy pulsing through her veins, a desperate surge of power. “I won’t give it to you,” she said, finding a new surge of steel in her voice. The figure’s head snapped up, its obscured face seeming to contort into a grotesque parody of a smile. The air around it shimmered, distorting the light. “You don’t understand,” it whispered. “It belongs to me.” Another giggle. This time, it was closer than ever, right behind her. Rory whirled around, heart hammering against her ribs. Nothing. But the scent of lilies was overpowering now, suffocating, filling her lungs with its sickly sweetness. “It’s time to play,” the figure said, its voice echoing through the grove. “And you’re it.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.526
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1044
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1044
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"profound"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"throb"
count1
12
word"navigating"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"chilling"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count2
18
word"shimmered"
count1
19
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"profound"
2"warmth"
3"stark"
4"familiar"
5"pulsed"
6"footsteps"
7"oppressive"
8"scanned"
9"silence"
10"whisper"
11"throb"
12"navigating"
13"sense of"
14"flicker"
15"echoed"
16"chilling"
17"could feel"
18"shimmered"
19"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords8
totalWords1041
ratio0.008
matches
0"“Come to the Grove. Midnight. Bring the Heartstone.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Imagination, she told herself."
77.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount961
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Silas1
Kensington1
Grove1
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Eva1
Fae-touched1
Rory14
persons
0"Silas"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Kensington"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.772
windowScore0.833
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed absent as if the trees themselves were holding their breath"
1"felt like breaking a rule, awakening so"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.961
wordCount1041
matches
0"Not a settling of the earth, but a deliberate movement"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean22.15
std16.8
cv0.759
sampleLengths
069
155
238
340
466
53
634
71
842
95
103
1149
124
1330
1419
1512
1611
1712
1813
1956
204
2135
2212
2324
244
2520
2623
2711
2813
293
3035
3113
3222
3329
3432
3517
3611
3721
3820
3925
4017
4126
429
4320
441
4516
4616
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"was obscured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was working"
1"were holding"
46.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences119
ratio0.034
matches
0"A gust of wind snaked around her, carrying the scent of damp earth and something else—something floral, overpoweringly sweet, like lilies left too long in a vase."
1"The anonymous note had been insistent – *“Come to the Grove. Midnight. Bring the Heartstone.”* No signature, just stark black ink on thick, cream-colored paper."
2"She'd been here dozens of times, sworn to secrecy by Eva – always during daylight hours, exploring the bizarre botanical anomalies of the Fae-touched grove."
3"The voice was incongruous – sweet and childish, yet laced with a chilling undercurrent."
79.36% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount964
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, cream-colored paper."
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.056016597510373446
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.02074688796680498
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean8.75
std5.41
cv0.619
sampleLengths
012
112
227
37
411
516
66
78
825
914
1010
115
129
1318
148
159
162
173
189
196
2025
2114
2212
233
242
254
265
278
2815
291
307
3124
322
339
342
353
363
378
3817
395
402
4117
424
432
446
4516
466
479
481
499
51.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3277310924369748
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences97
matches
0"Just a deer, probably."
1"Even the usual rustle of"
2"Then she heard it."
3"Just the trees, their branches"
4"Only silence answered her."
5"Then she saw it."
ratio0.062
88.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences97
matches
0"She shivered, pulling her threadbare"
1"It wasn't cold, exactly, more"
2"She’d told Silas she was"
3"She needed to be here,"
4"She fumbled for the Heartstone"
5"Its crimson gemstone pulsed faintly,"
6"She'd been here dozens of"
7"It was a curious place"
8"She scanned the shadows, the"
9"She resumed her walk, faster"
10"She strained her ears, listening"
11"It seemed to curl around"
12"She couldn’t make out any"
13"she called out, her voice"
14"She shouldn’t have spoken."
15"It felt like breaking a"
16"She hurried on, navigating the"
17"She whipped her head around,"
18"She took a tentative step"
19"It seemed to come from"
ratio0.33
42.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences97
matches
0"The wrought iron gates of"
1"Rory wrestled with the latch,"
2"A gust of wind snaked"
3"She shivered, pulling her threadbare"
4"It wasn't cold, exactly, more"
5"She’d told Silas she was"
6"A lie, but a necessary"
7"She needed to be here,"
8"The anonymous note had been"
9"Rory clipped the latch, pushing"
10"The path ahead vanished quickly,"
11"Moonlight barely pierced the canopy."
12"The air, heavy and still,"
13"She fumbled for the Heartstone"
14"The silver chain felt cold"
15"Its crimson gemstone pulsed faintly,"
16"Rory moved deeper, the soft"
17"The established path twisted, forking"
18"She'd been here dozens of"
19"It was a curious place"
ratio0.835
51.55% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Now, under the oppressive cloak"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Even the usual rustle of leaves seemed absent, as if the trees themselves were holding their breath."
1"It seemed to curl around her, a sibilant sigh that tickled the back of her neck."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she called out, her voice barely a tremor"
1"she demanded, her voice shaking despite her best efforts"
2"she replied, her voice barely audible"
3"it said, its voice dropping to a menacing whisper"
4"the figure said, its voice echoing through the grove"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.316
80.3265%