| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.564 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1012 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1012 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "tapestry" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "intricate" | | 10 | "mosaic" | | 11 | "resonated" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "quickened" | | 14 | "rhythmic" | | 15 | "fleeting" | | 16 | "shimmered" | | 17 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "wave of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1006 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 767 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.56 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 12 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Fae | 3 | | Suddenly | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.718 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 59.09% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like overripe plums and something" | | 1 | "quite breathing" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.994 | | wordCount | 1006 | | matches | | 0 | "not from bells, but from the flowers themselves" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 26.47 | | std | 13.73 | | cv | 0.519 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 59 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 17 |
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| 95.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "being carried" | | 1 | "was designed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | | |
| 14.45% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "She unconsciously touched the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt; it pulsed with faint warmth." | | 1 | "The chimes from the flowers faded, replaced by a different sound—a distant, rhythmic thrumming, like a colossal heartbeat." | | 2 | "It wasn’t a visual disturbance, but a visceral sensation—the feeling of being overwhelmed, suffocated by excess." | | 3 | "It extended a hand towards them, and a cascade of illusions poured forth—mountains of food, rivers of wine, jewels glittering in the darkness." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 773 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.027166882276843468 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014230271668822769 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 11.3 | | std | 5.95 | | cv | 0.526 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 78.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.5056179775280899 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a figure coalesced within" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Her silver hair streamed out" | | 1 | "She hadn’t expected…this." | | 2 | "She'd braced for strangeness, for" | | 3 | "she asked, brushing a hand" | | 4 | "It contracted at her touch." | | 5 | "She unconsciously touched the Heartstone" | | 6 | "Her eyes settled on Rory." | | 7 | "She hadn’t signed up for" | | 8 | "They glowed with an eerie," | | 9 | "She glanced at the Heartstone" | | 10 | "Its pulse quickened, the warmth" | | 11 | "she said, her voice hushed" | | 12 | "They moved forward, following a" | | 13 | "Its trunk was wider than" | | 14 | "She could feel the Heartstone" | | 15 | "It wasn’t a visual disturbance," | | 16 | "she gasped, stumbling back" | | 17 | "It extended a hand towards" | | 18 | "they warned, their voice sharp" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted like overripe" | | 1 | "Richmond Park dissolved behind her," | | 2 | "Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, carpeted the" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a" | | 4 | "Isolde moved with a stillness" | | 5 | "Her silver hair streamed out" | | 6 | "Isolde observed, not turning" | | 7 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "She hadn’t expected…this." | | 9 | "She'd braced for strangeness, for" | | 10 | "A chorus of chimes echoed," | | 11 | "she asked, brushing a hand" | | 12 | "It contracted at her touch." | | 13 | "Nyx chuckled, a sound like" | | 14 | "Rory warned, her gaze flicking" | | 15 | "The air felt thick, heavy" | | 16 | "She unconsciously touched the Heartstone" | | 17 | "Isolde continued, finally turning" | | 18 | "Her eyes settled on Rory." | | 19 | "She hadn’t signed up for" |
| | ratio | 0.922 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, carpeted the ground, their petals unfolding and retracting in a rhythm that wasn’t quite breathing." | | 1 | "Her silver hair streamed out behind her, catching the strange light, and her lavender eyes scanned the grove with a patience that felt…" | | 2 | "Branches intertwined like grasping hands, their bark shimmering with mother-of-pearl." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a dry rustle," | | 1 | "Isolde observed, not turning" | | 2 | "she said, her voice hushed" | | 3 | "Nyx breathed, their form flickering violently" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice barely audible above the thrumming" | | 5 | "the figure rasped, its voice a low growl" | | 6 | "they warned, their voice sharp" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 19 | | fancyCount | 11 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Rory warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 4 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 5 | "Rory pressed (press)" | | 6 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 7 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 8 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 9 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" | | 10 | "they warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.487 | | leniency | 0.974 | | rawRatio | 0.579 | | effectiveRatio | 0.564 | |