| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1103 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1103 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "throb" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "comforting" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "quickened" | | 16 | "scanning" | | 17 | "sentinel" | | 18 | "reminder" | | 19 | "resolved" | | 20 | "lilt" | | 21 | "raced" | | 22 | "rhythmic" | | 23 | "glint" | | 24 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1092 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.67% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Each step felt deliberate, measured against the growing throb in her chest—from the pendant, she told herself, not nerve…" |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1082 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Welsh | 2 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | English | 1 | | Talking | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "golds that seemed to shift when she looked away" | | 1 | "as if warning her" | | 2 | "seemed farther away, the brambles thicker" | | 3 | "looked like one—emerged from behind a sto" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.747 | | wordCount | 1092 | | matches | | 0 | "Not words, exactly, more like wind through dry leaves, but with an edge" | | 1 | "Not English, but the cadence tugged at memories of her mother's Welsh lilt, t" | | 2 | "not just sounds but a tug on her thoughts, urging her to sit, to wait" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 18.39% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 60.67 | | std | 13 | | cv | 0.214 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 76 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 75 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 81 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 73 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 47 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory shrugged off the unease; she had faced worse in her old life, back when Evan's temper turned every shadow into a threat." | | 1 | "Each step felt deliberate, measured against the growing throb in her chest—from the pendant, she told herself, not nerves." | | 2 | "Deeper into the grove, a cluster of wildflowers drew her eye—vibrant purples and golds that seemed to shift when she looked away." | | 3 | "She took a step back, then another, her hand brushing the scar on her left wrist—a old reminder of childhood clumsiness, but tonight it itched as if fresh." | | 4 | "But the laugh died as a new sound emerged—a faint scraping, like nails on bark." | | 5 | "Not an animal—too deliberate, too silent after the initial glimpse." | | 6 | "From the treeline, a shape resolved—not fully, just an outline that suggested limbs too long, a form that bent light around it." | | 7 | "Time behaved oddly here, the lore warned—an hour inside could stretch or shrink outside." | | 8 | "A hand— or what looked like one—emerged from behind a stone, pale fingers curling around the bark." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1093 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.035681610247026534 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007319304666056725 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 12.7 | | std | 7.09 | | cv | 0.558 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 80.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4883720930232558 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 82.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Just her own breath, steady" | | 1 | "Probably a fox, she thought," |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 91.60% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come for answers." | | 1 | "She circled one, trailing her" | | 2 | "She paused, listening." | | 3 | "She slipped the pendant from" | | 4 | "She knelt, placing the pendant" | | 5 | "She scanned the shadows, but" | | 6 | "She shook her head and" | | 7 | "She stood, pacing the perimeter" | | 8 | "She stopped, ears straining." | | 9 | "She retrieved the pendant, slipping" | | 10 | "Its warmth spread, comforting now," | | 11 | "She approached, kneeling again to" | | 12 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 13 | "She rose slowly, scanning the" | | 14 | "She took a step back," | | 15 | "It resolved into fragments: Not" | | 16 | "She laughed, a short bark" | | 17 | "It came from multiple directions" | | 18 | "She backed toward the centre," | | 19 | "She had dismissed it as" |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 95.80% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through the last" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant thrummed against" | | 2 | "She had come for answers." | | 3 | "The pendant's faint glow had" | | 4 | "This grove, whispered about in" | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 6 | "She circled one, trailing her" | | 7 | "She paused, listening." | | 8 | "Silence blanketed the clearing, thicker" | | 9 | "Rory shrugged off the unease;" | | 10 | "This was research, nothing more." | | 11 | "She slipped the pendant from" | | 12 | "The glow intensified, casting red" | | 13 | "She knelt, placing the pendant" | | 14 | "A soft crack echoed from" | | 15 | "Rory froze, her hand hovering" | | 16 | "She scanned the shadows, but" | | 17 | "Parks teemed with life, even" | | 18 | "She shook her head and" | | 19 | "The air grew heavier, as" |
| | ratio | 0.728 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "If it pulsed near portals," | | 1 | "If there was a portal" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant thrummed against her chest, warmer than it had been all evening, pulling her here to this forgotten corner of Richmond Park as if it had …" | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into shapes that mimicked human forms, their bark etched with patterns that looked deliberate." | | 2 | "The glow intensified, casting red flecks on the wildflowers that dotted the ground, blooms that defied the season's chill." | | 3 | "She stood, pacing the perimeter of the stones, her boots leaving shallow imprints in the moss." | | 4 | "Petals unfurled under her touch, releasing a scent like honey and decay, sweet at first, then cloying." | | 5 | "She took a step back, then another, her hand brushing the scar on her left wrist—a old reminder of childhood clumsiness, but tonight it itched as if fresh." | | 6 | "It came from multiple directions now, soft and intermittent, as if whatever made it tested the air." | | 7 | "She had dismissed it as folklore, but the pendant's glow intensified, casting the clearing in crimson hues that made the flowers look blood-soaked." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |