Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
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"It’s not dark. It’s a sea of amber, light so bright it hurts, and the air tastes of roasted fruit and something sharp, like vinegar. She hears music—loud,欢快, a symphony of drums an…"
"Not that she needed the stone’s guidance—her gut had been coiling since Nyx materialized in her flat, shadow shifting like smoke, voice a whisper in her ear: *“Winter solstice. The Boundary frays. You’ll need the blade.”*"
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"Now, they stand before the ancient stones—ancient, but not in the way the park’s oaks are."
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"The sky is not the park’s gray. It’s amber, warm as candlelight, streaked with clouds that seem to flow upward, not downward. The trees around them aren’t oak—they’re something else, their leaves iridescent, shifting from gold to blue to green as the wind stirs. The ground is soft, moss that glows like crushed starlight, and wildflowers—poppies, lilies, flowers Aurora doesn’t recognize—burst from the earth in colors that shouldn’t exist. *Blood red*, *pale lavender*, *sunshine yellow* so bright it hurts her eyes. She blinks, and one of the flowers closes, its petals folding into a tight bud that pulses."
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"“Time’s different,” Nyx says, and Aurora checks her phone. 3:17 PM. Her watch—old, a gift from her dad—reads 3:19. “Inside,” Isolde says, already moving, and Aurora hurries after her."
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"They walk a path that isn’t there an hour ago. It winds through the grove, past a fountain where the water isn’t water—it’s liquid diamond, refracting the amber sky into a rainbow that splinters the air. Nyx pauses, shadow rippling. “Hel,” they whisper. Aurora’s hand flies to the pendant. It burns now, hot enough to make her yank it free, the stone glowing like a smoldering coal. “Close,” she says, and Nyx’s silhouette flickers, becoming more shadow than form. “Your kind doesn’t fare well near the Veil’s tears.”"
"The desire to *consume*—not for hunger, but for *more*.” She plucks another petal, lets it fall. “The Grove is a mirror."
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"And you—Rory—you’ll think."
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"They move on. The grove grows wilder—trees with branches that twist into spiral staircases, a river that sings, its voice like a harp played by wind. Nyx points out a creature hiding in the undergrowth: a fox with nine tails, each tail a different color, its eyes the same faint violet as Nyx’s. “A shifter,” they say. “Common here."
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"Aurora’s pendant burns hotter. She stops, bends, and brushes the moss with her free hand. It’s not just glowing—it’s *pulsing* in time with her heartbeat. The thrum Isolde mentioned is there, a low vibration in her bones. “It’s that way,” she says, pointing east. “The stone’s getting stronger.”"
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"They walk for what feels like hours, though Aurora’s phone still reads 3:22. The sky darkens, but there’s no sunset—only the amber light fading to a deep, warm gold. The trees thin, and suddenly they’re in a clearing, larger than the park’s green, with a single stone at its center. It’s not an oak, not a stone at all—*it’s a rift*."
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"The Helborn don’t need to *break* the Veil—they just need to *unlock* it."
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"It’ll be *hunger*—black, insatiable, until she’s nothing but a shell, feeding Dymas’ hunger.” She pauses, looks at Aurora. “You once outran an abusive man with nothing but a can of mace and your wits."
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"Isolde plucks a petal from her hair—pale lavender, glowing—and drops it into the rift. The moment it touches the shimmering air, the petal burns, white-hot, and the rift pulses. “You don’t close it,” she says. “You *divert* it."
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"Dymas wants Eva because she’s *hungry*—feed him something else."
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"The Veil’s tears don’t just break the boundary—they break *you*."
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"It’s not dark. It’s a sea of amber, light so bright it hurts, and the air tastes of roasted fruit and something sharp, like vinegar. She hears music—loud,欢快, a symphony of drums and strings—and the sound of laughter, endless laughter. Ahead, there’s a hall, larger than a cathedral, its walls lined with mirrors that reflect feasts of every kind: roasted swans, towers of pastries, vats of wine that flow like water. And at the end of the hall, a man in a crown of thorns, his eyes black as coal, sitting on a throne of bones."
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"Aurora takes a step forward. The floor is cold, marble that feels like ice. The air thickens, and she hears Nyx shout—a sound like wind through a canyon, then a roar of pain, then silence. *Guards down*, she thinks. “Eva, *look* at me!” She grabs her arm, and Eva flinches, but her eyes don’t leave the food. “It’s a trap."
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"But *you*—*you* are real."
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"Aurora’s hand goes to her necklace. The pendant is on fire, but not with heat—with light. She rips it off, holds it high. “Take it."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
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"They’d waited an hour for Isolde, who arrived as if from nowhere, her silver hair glowing in the gray afternoon, no footprints marring the muddy path of Richmon…"
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"The sky is not the park’s gray. It’s amber, warm as candlelight, streaked with clouds that seem to flow upward, not downward. The trees around them aren’t oak—t…"
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"It’s not dark. It’s a sea of amber, light so bright it hurts, and the air tastes of roasted fruit and something sharp, like vinegar. She hears music—loud,欢快, a …"
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"The gemstone shatters, sending a wave of light across the hall. Dymas screams, a sound like nails on a blackboard, and the mirrors explode, glass raining down. …"