Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYANZQRHXHQ8TPTWXRTS0DX

Run Details

Duration:
16.7s
Cost:
$0.000289
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass knob shrieked a protest as Lucien Moreau forced it open, the sound echoing unnervingly in the cramped flat above Silas’ bar. Dust motes danced in the single shaft of weak sunlight slicing through the perpetually drawn curtains, illuminating a chaotic landscape of stacked books, overflowing ashtrays, and half-finished sketches of anatomical diagrams – a testament to Aurora Carter’s fiercely independent, slightly mad, existence. He hadn’t expected a grand entrance, certainly not a dramatic burst of scent and sound, but the sudden, jarring intrusion of a feminine shriek cut through the quiet like a shard of glass. “You’re… you’re really here,” Aurora said, her voice tight, a brittle thread stretched taut. She’d been meticulously dissecting a vintage map of London, her brow furrowed in concentration, a smear of graphite dust clinging to her cheekbone. A silver scalpel lay on the cluttered table beside her, reflecting the weak light. She didn’t look up immediately, didn’t offer a welcoming smile, didn’t even bother to fully register his presence before speaking. Instead, she continued to trace the faded lines of a winding street, her movements precise, almost clinical. Lucien surveyed the room, a practiced appraisal honed over years of navigating the shadowy corners of London's supernatural community. The air hung thick with the scent of old paper, stale tobacco, and something vaguely floral – a lingering attempt at masking the less pleasant aspects of her living space, he suspected. Three deadbolts secured the door, each gleaming dully under the weak light. He adjusted his ivory-handled cane, the subtle click of the mechanism a small, deliberate action, a counterpoint to the palpable tension in the room. “Remarkably,” he observed, his voice a smooth, carefully modulated baritone, “you haven’t changed a bit.” Aurora finally raised her head, her bright blue eyes, startlingly vivid against her dark hair, fixing him with an unnerving intensity. There was no warmth in her gaze, no flicker of the easy familiarity they once shared. Just a cold, assessing scrutiny. “That’s debatable,” she replied, her voice flat, devoid of inflection. She carefully set down the map, the crisp rustle of the paper the only sound for a moment. “I wasn’t expecting a visit.” “Neither was I, truthfully,” Lucien admitted, stepping further into the flat. The small space felt even smaller now, claustrophobic, saturated with the weight of her unspoken emotions. He took a slow, deliberate circle, his eyes scanning the details – the worn armchair slumped in a corner, the overflowing bookshelves, the small, framed photograph on the mantelpiece depicting a younger Aurora, laughing, with a man he didn't recognize. "But appearances can be deceiving. Especially when dealing with the bereaved." “You’re remarkably formal,” Aurora stated, her lips curving into a ghost of a smile. “Considering the circumstances.” She gestured vaguely to the chair opposite her, a silent invitation—or perhaps a carefully constructed barrier. Lucien settled into the chair, the springs groaning in protest under his weight. He ran a hand through his platinum blond hair, a practiced gesture of considered thought. “Appearances are a luxury I rarely afford myself, Miss Carter. Especially not when a certain… complication arises.” He paused, letting the word hang in the air, heavy with implication. “You’re still using Silas’ bar for your… acquisitions?” Aurora’s eyes narrowed. “Silas is a fine establishment. And discreet.” Her voice hardened slightly. “My business is none of your concern.” “That’s precisely what I found so… intriguing,” Lucien countered, his amber and black eyes meeting hers. “A skilled anatomist operating in the shadows, procuring rare specimens through a notoriously unreliable bartender. It’s a rather peculiar combination.” He tilted his head, a subtle, almost predatory movement. "Tell me, what exactly are you dissecting tonight?" She didn’t respond immediately, her gaze fixed on the map once more. Lucien allowed her the silence, letting the tension simmer, building slowly. He wasn’t looking for an explanation, not yet. He was simply observing, cataloging, assessing. He'd tracked her movements for weeks, piecing together the fragments of her life, trying to understand the reason for this sudden, unexpected reappearance. The grief he felt for her hadn’t lessened, but years of carefully constructed walls had risen between them, a fortress of resentment and regret. “It’s a map,” she said finally, her voice barely a whisper. “A very old map.” “Of what?” Lucien pressed, his voice low and deliberate. “London,” she replied, her voice regaining a touch of its earlier composure. “Before it became London. Before the renovations, the reinventions, the… progress.” She tapped a finger on a faded marking on the map, a tiny, almost invisible symbol. "This intersection used to be the site of a rather clandestine gathering. A ritualistic obsession, devoted to manipulating the fabric of reality. It’s relevant to what I'm currently… researching." Lucien’s eyebrows rose slightly. “And what exactly is it you’re researching, Miss Carter?” “A resonance," she said, her voice tight. “A ripple effect originating from a specific point in time. Something someone tried to erase. Something that’s starting to resurface." She picked up the silver scalpel, turning it over in her fingers with a slow, unsettling deliberation. “Something that involves a missing demon. One with a particular penchant for causing chaos.” A slow smile spread across Lucien's face, a rare and unsettling sight. “A missing demon, you say?” He leaned forward slightly, his eyes gleaming with intellectual curiosity and something darker, something that hinted at a shared history, a dangerous understanding. “That certainly throws a wrench in the works, wouldn't you agree? It seems our paths have crossed again, Rory. And this time, I don't think either of us can afford to simply walk away.” The air crackled with an unspoken current, a volatile mix of attraction, resentment, and the unsettling knowledge that they were both caught in a current far stronger than either of them controlled. Outside, the rain began to fall, a soft, insistent drumming against the windows, a subtle counterpoint to the storm gathering within the confines of Aurora's flat. And just as a sudden, piercing siren wailed in the distance, a single, crimson rose – a peculiar, almost unnervingly perfect bloom – appeared on the mantelpiece, nestled amongst the dusty photographs, a silent, unsettling declaration of intent.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:08:27.152Z" 2/20/2026, 8:08:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Her voice hardened slightly [slightly]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
41.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count4
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count4
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"carefully"
3"precisely"
4"slowly"
5"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"testament"
count1
3
word"furrowed"
count1
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count2
6
word"palpable"
count1
7
word"tension"
count2
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"unspoken"
count2
13
word"scanning"
count1
14
word"constructed"
count2
15
word"implication"
count1
16
word"intriguing"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"clandestine"
count1
20
word"resonance"
count1
21
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"chaotic"
2"testament"
3"furrowed"
4"navigating"
5"gleaming"
6"palpable"
7"tension"
8"intensity"
9"warmth"
10"flicker"
11"weight"
12"unspoken"
13"scanning"
14"constructed"
15"implication"
16"intriguing"
17"silence"
18"whisper"
19"clandestine"
20"resonance"
21"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences58
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1030
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Instead, she continued to trace the faded lines of a winding street, her movements precise, almost clinical."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount782
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien9
Moreau1
Dust1
Aurora7
Carter1
London2
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Dust"
3"Aurora"
4"Carter"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.925
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.971
wordCount1030
matches
0"not a dramatic burst of scent and sound, but the sudden, jarring intrusion of a feminine shriek cut throu"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean60.59
std30.52
cv0.504
sampleLengths
098
188
2102
375
478
533
665
721
853
984
1015
119
1268
1313
1458
1574
1696
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs107
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences58
ratio0.086
matches
0"Dust motes danced in the single shaft of weak sunlight slicing through the perpetually drawn curtains, illuminating a chaotic landscape of stacked books, overflowing ashtrays, and half-finished sketches of anatomical diagrams – a testament to Aurora Carter’s fiercely independent, slightly mad, existence."
1"The air hung thick with the scent of old paper, stale tobacco, and something vaguely floral – a lingering attempt at masking the less pleasant aspects of her living space, he suspected."
2"He took a slow, deliberate circle, his eyes scanning the details – the worn armchair slumped in a corner, the overflowing bookshelves, the small, framed photograph on the mantelpiece depicting a younger Aurora, laughing, with a man he didn't recognize."
3"“Considering the circumstances.” She gestured vaguely to the chair opposite her, a silent invitation—or perhaps a carefully constructed barrier."
4"And just as a sudden, piercing siren wailed in the distance, a single, crimson rose – a peculiar, almost unnervingly perfect bloom – appeared on the mantelpiece, nestled amongst the dusty photographs, a silent, unsettling declaration of intent."
57.86% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount366
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.06557377049180328
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.04371584699453552
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences58
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences58
mean17.76
std10.03
cv0.565
sampleLengths
023
142
233
314
423
514
620
717
819
932
1012
1124
1215
1321
1416
155
1610
1718
185
1911
2016
2140
2211
2314
2419
2513
2615
2729
288
293
3011
317
3216
3329
348
3512
3611
378
386
3923
4024
4111
424
439
4412
4527
4629
474
489
497
79.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5172413793103449
totalSentences58
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences48
matches
0"Instead, she continued to trace"
1"Just a cold, assessing scrutiny."
ratio0.042
28.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences48
matches
0"He hadn’t expected a grand"
1"She’d been meticulously dissecting a"
2"She didn’t look up immediately,"
3"He adjusted his ivory-handled cane,"
4"he observed, his voice a"
5"she replied, her voice flat,"
6"She carefully set down the"
7"He took a slow, deliberate"
8"She gestured vaguely to the"
9"He ran a hand through"
10"He paused, letting the word"
11"Her voice hardened slightly"
12"He tilted his head, a"
13"She didn’t respond immediately, her"
14"He wasn’t looking for an"
15"He was simply observing, cataloging,"
16"He'd tracked her movements for"
17"she said finally, her voice"
18"she replied, her voice regaining"
19"She tapped a finger on"
ratio0.479
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences48
matches
0"The brass knob shrieked a"
1"Dust motes danced in the"
2"He hadn’t expected a grand"
3"Aurora said, her voice tight,"
4"She’d been meticulously dissecting a"
5"A silver scalpel lay on"
6"She didn’t look up immediately,"
7"Lucien surveyed the room, a"
8"The air hung thick with"
9"He adjusted his ivory-handled cane,"
10"he observed, his voice a"
11"Aurora finally raised her head,"
12"she replied, her voice flat,"
13"She carefully set down the"
14"Lucien admitted, stepping further into"
15"The small space felt even"
16"He took a slow, deliberate"
17"Aurora stated, her lips curving"
18"She gestured vaguely to the"
19"Lucien settled into the chair,"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He took a slow, deliberate circle, his eyes scanning the details – the worn armchair slumped in a corner, the overflowing bookshelves, the small, framed photogr…"
1"He'd tracked her movements for weeks, piecing together the fragments of her life, trying to understand the reason for this sudden, unexpected reappearance."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice tight, a brittle thread stretched taut"
1"he observed, his voice a smooth, carefully modulated baritone,"
2"she replied, her voice flat, devoid of inflection"
3"Aurora stated, her lips curving into a ghost of a smile"
4"she said finally, her voice barely a whisper"
5"Lucien pressed, his voice low and deliberate"
6"she replied, her voice regaining a touch of its earlier composure"
7"she said, her voice tight"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"The brass knob shrieked (shriek)"
1"he observed (observe)"
2"Lucien admitted (admit)"
3"Aurora stated (state)"
4"Lucien pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.741
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.37
71.0673%