Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAP1B88MFQWW21MPCZ3YD0

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 36s
Cost:
$0.046290
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain pelted the cobblestones of Soho like a barrage of accusations, turning the narrow streets into slick mirrors reflecting the stutter of neon signs. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped through puddles, her sharp jaw set against the chill that seeped through her trench coat. Eighteen years on the force had honed her instincts to a razor's edge, but tonight they screamed of something off—something that echoed the unexplained void left by DS Morris's death three years back. The suspect ahead, a wiry man with short curly dark brown hair plastered to his scalp, darted like a shadow through the downpour. Tomás Herrera, the file said. Former paramedic, Spanish expat, now tangled in whatever web the clique was spinning. She'd tailed him from The Raven's Nest, that dimly lit bar with its green neon sign flickering like a lure, walls papered in old maps that hinted at paths better left unexplored. Herrera glanced back, his warm brown eyes catching the glow of a passing taxi's headlights. He bolted left into an alley off Wardour Street, his olive skin glistening under the rain. Quinn cursed under her breath, her worn leather watch ticking like a countdown on her left wrist. She couldn't let him slip away—not after piecing together the whispers of unauthorized treatments, supernatural patients, whatever the hell that meant. Her military-precision bearing propelled her forward, legs pumping with the discipline of parade grounds long forgotten. The alley narrowed, garbage bins overflowing with sodden refuse that Herrera kicked aside, sending a metal clang echoing off brick walls. He vaulted a low chain-link fence, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting as it swung from his neck. Quinn followed, her brown eyes narrowing against the spray. Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close, stayed put under the onslaught, but her coat flapped like a flag of pursuit. "Stop! Police!" she shouted, voice cutting through the storm, but the words drowned in the rumble of thunder. He didn't stop. Of course he didn't. Herrera emerged onto Greek Street, dodging a cluster of late-night revelers huddled under umbrellas. One yelped as he shoved past, spilling a takeaway coffee that steamed on the pavement. Quinn wove through them, badge flashing briefly from her pocket. "Move!" Her height—five-nine—gave her an edge, letting her spot his dark curls bobbing ahead toward Charing Cross Road. The rain intensified, a relentless sheet that blurred the edges of the world, turning taillights into bloody smears. Herrera crossed against traffic, horns blaring as a double-decker bus hydroplaned to a halt. He slipped between vehicles, his scar-flecked left forearm pumping as he ran. Quinn's heart hammered—memories of Morris flashing unbidden: his body found in that warehouse, veins blackened as if poisoned by shadows. She pushed the thought down, focusing on the chase. She darted after him, a cab's bumper grazing her thigh. The driver swore through the window, but she was already gone, boots pounding toward Tottenham Court Road. He was heading north, toward Camden. Why? The streets widened slightly, but the rain made every step treacherous. Herrera ducked into a side street, his breath coming in visible puffs. Quinn closed the gap, her lungs burning with the effort. She could see the medallion bouncing against his chest, a talisman that mocked her rational world. "Herrera! It's over!" she called, but the wind whipped her words away. He veered right, splashing through a flooded gutter that soaked her trousers to the knee. The city lights dimmed as they left Soho's glow behind, entering the edgier fringes where graffiti-tagged walls loomed like sentinels. Quinn's mind raced: the file on Herrera mentioned Seville roots, NHS fallout, unlicensed aid to... what? The clique's shadows? Supernatural bullshit? She'd dismissed it as delusion until the patterns emerged—disappearances, unexplained healings, all circling back to bars like The Raven's Nest. A sudden turn led them into a deserted market square, stalls shuttered against the night. Herrera leaped over a low barrier, his shoes skidding on wet stone. Quinn followed, her hand brushing the grip of her service weapon holstered at her side. No shots—not yet. This was pursuit, not confrontation. But the scar on his forearm, visible now as his sleeve rode up, spoke of violence survived. Knife attack, the report said. What else had he endured? He plunged down a flight of stairs into the Underground, but not the main entrance. This was an old access point, grated and forgotten, near Camden Town station. Quinn hesitated at the top, rain dripping from her sharp jaw. The grate was ajar, chains rattling in the wind. Herrera squeezed through, vanishing into the dark maw below. She peered down: flickering lights, muffled voices echoing up like ghosts. Not the standard Tube—this was something else. Abandoned lines, perhaps? Her gut twisted. Morris had chased leads into places like this, emerging... changed, before he didn't emerge at all. The decision clawed at her. Follow into the unknown, or call for backup and risk losing him? The rain hammered her shoulders, a cold reminder of the world's indifference. She checked her watch—eleven-fifty, the hour when shadows lengthened. Whispers from informants had mentioned a market, underground, moving with the moon. The Veil Market, they called it. Enchanted goods, banned substances. Fairy tales, she'd thought. But Herrera's trail led here, and her suspicions about the clique burned too hot to ignore. A distant shout from below—muffled, foreign accents bartering. Herrera's voice? No time to second-guess. Quinn slipped her hand into her pocket, feeling for anything that might pass as entry. The codex of rumors said it required a bone token. She had none, but determination was her currency. With a deep breath, she pried the grate wider and descended the rusted stairs, the air turning musty, laced with incense and something metallic. The stairs spiraled down into what had once been a Tube platform, now transformed. Torches—actual flaming torches—lined the walls, casting dancing shadows on arched ceilings cracked with age. Stalls crowded the tracks, vendors hawking wares that defied logic: vials of glowing liquid, amulets pulsing with inner light, tomes bound in what looked like scaled hide. The air hummed with energy, voices haggling in languages Quinn didn't recognize. A woman with eyes like polished obsidian offered "dream essences" from a cart; a hulking figure, skin mottled like bark, grunted over forged blades that whispered when touched. Herrera wove through the throng, his curly hair a beacon amid the bizarre. He paused at a stall, exchanging words with a cloaked seller, then slipped a small bone token—carved like a femur shard—into a slot on a hidden door in the far wall. It creaked open, revealing a tunnel beyond. He glanced back once, his warm brown eyes locking on Quinn's position. Recognition flared, then he vanished inside. She froze at the platform's edge, heart pounding. The market's patrons eyed her—some with curiosity, others with malice. A vendor with too many fingers hissed, "New blood? Got your token, love?" No, she didn't. This place reeked of the impossible, the kind of shadows that had swallowed Morris. Unfamiliar territory, yes. Dangerous? Undoubtedly. Her brown eyes scanned the crowd: a mix of humans and... others. Things with elongated limbs, eyes that glowed. Supernatural. The word stuck in her throat like bile. Backup was a call away, but signal down here? Doubtful. And if she waited, Herrera would evaporate into whatever network shielded the clique. Her hand tightened on the stair rail, the metal cold and unforgiving. Memories surged: Morris's funeral, the unexplained autopsy, veins like ink rivers. She'd vowed to uncover the truth, no matter the cost. This was it—the veil lifting. With a sharp inhale, Quinn stepped forward. No token, but bluffing had carried her through worse. She approached the door Herrera had used, ignoring the stares. A bony hand shot out from a nearby stall, grabbing her wrist. "Entry's not free, detective." The voice was gravelly, belonging to a figure shrouded in rags, face hidden but eyes gleaming yellow. She yanked free, her military bearing snapping into place. "I'm not here to browse." Her voice was steel, but inside, doubt gnawed. Follow or retreat? The door loomed, a threshold to answers or oblivion. Herrera's trail pulled like gravity. She couldn't turn back—not now, not after the rain-slick streets, the echoes of loss. With a final glance at the chaotic market—the bartering, the eerie glows—she pressed against the door. It didn't budge. No token, no entry. Frustration boiled, but then a glint on the ground: a discarded shard, bone-white, perhaps dropped in haste. She snatched it up, the surface etched with runes that tingled against her skin. It fit the slot. The door groaned open, revealing a dim tunnel flickering with bioluminescent fungi. Voices echoed from within—Herrera's among them? The air smelled of earth and secrets. Dangerous, yes. Unfamiliar, absolutely. But Quinn's resolve hardened. She stepped through, the door sealing behind her with a finality that echoed like a judgment. The tunnel sloped downward, walls rough-hewn and damp. Her boots echoed softly, the only sound besides distant drips. Ahead, a chamber opened, lit by hanging lanterns that swayed like pendulums. Herrera stood there, conferring with two figures—one lithe and ethereal, the other burly, scarred. He turned at her approach, his scar on the left forearm stark in the light. "You shouldn't have followed," he said, accent thick with Seville's warmth, but edged with warning. "This world's not for you." Quinn's hand hovered near her weapon, brown eyes locked on his. "It's exactly for me, Herrera. Whatever you're hiding— the treatments, the clique—it's over." But even as she spoke, the chamber's walls seemed to pulse, runes awakening with a faint glow. The ethereal figure whispered something, and the air thickened, charged with unseen force. He shook his head, medallion catching the light. "You have no idea." With that, he bolted again, deeper into the labyrinth. Quinn pursued, the decision made in that rain-soaked instant above ground. No turning back now. The underground market's dangers closed in, but so did the truth. Her sharp jaw set, she plunged onward, the chase reborn in shadows.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:08:28.787Z" 2/20/2026, 8:08:28 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"that he bolted again [again]"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.909
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
94.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1706
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1706
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count4
2
word"glistening"
count1
3
word"pumping"
count2
4
word"echoing"
count2
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"pounding"
count2
7
word"treacherous"
count1
8
word"loomed"
count2
9
word"sentinels"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"maw"
count1
12
word"standard"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
14
word"dancing"
count1
15
word"hulking"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
17
word"scanned"
count1
18
word"gleaming"
count1
19
word"echoes"
count1
20
word"chaotic"
count1
21
word"glint"
count1
22
word"etched"
count1
23
word"absolutely"
count1
24
word"resolve"
count1
25
word"stark"
count1
26
word"warmth"
count1
27
word"pulse"
count1
28
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"echoed"
2"glistening"
3"pumping"
4"echoing"
5"glinting"
6"pounding"
7"treacherous"
8"loomed"
9"sentinels"
10"raced"
11"maw"
12"standard"
13"reminder"
14"dancing"
15"hulking"
16"beacon"
17"scanned"
18"gleaming"
19"echoes"
20"chaotic"
21"glint"
22"etched"
23"absolutely"
24"resolve"
25"stark"
26"warmth"
27"pulse"
28"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences147
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1669
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The Veil Market, they called it."
97.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1620
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow1
Quinn16
Morris5
Herrera17
Spanish1
Raven2
Nest2
Wardour1
Street2
Saint1
Christopher1
Greek1
Charing1
Cross1
Road2
Tottenham1
Court1
Camden2
Seville2
Underground1
Town1
Tube2
Veil1
Market1
Follow2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"Wardour"
2"Street"
3"Greek"
4"Charing"
5"Cross"
6"Road"
7"Tottenham"
8"Court"
9"Camden"
10"Seville"
11"Town"
globalScore0.975
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences113
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like scaled hide"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1669
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
54.91% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean72.57
std24.83
cv0.342
sampleLengths
0150
185
284
382
482
568
676
777
897
980
1071
1195
1269
1381
1461
1559
1634
1773
1853
1979
2054
2121
2238
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs302
matches
0"was spinning"
1"was heading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences18
totalSentences148
ratio0.122
matches
0"Eighteen years on the force had honed her instincts to a razor's edge, but tonight they screamed of something off—something that echoed the unexplained void left by DS Morris's death three years back."
1"She couldn't let him slip away—not after piecing together the whispers of unauthorized treatments, supernatural patients, whatever the hell that meant."
2"\"Move!\" Her height—five-nine—gave her an edge, letting her spot his dark curls bobbing ahead toward Charing Cross Road."
3"Quinn's heart hammered—memories of Morris flashing unbidden: his body found in that warehouse, veins blackened as if poisoned by shadows."
4"She'd dismissed it as delusion until the patterns emerged—disappearances, unexplained healings, all circling back to bars like The Raven's Nest."
5"No shots—not yet."
6"Not the standard Tube—this was something else."
7"She checked her watch—eleven-fifty, the hour when shadows lengthened."
8"A distant shout from below—muffled, foreign accents bartering."
9"Torches—actual flaming torches—lined the walls, casting dancing shadows on arched ceilings cracked with age."
10"A woman with eyes like polished obsidian offered \"dream essences\" from a cart; a hulking figure, skin mottled like bark, grunted over forged blades that whispered when touched."
11"He paused at a stall, exchanging words with a cloaked seller, then slipped a small bone token—carved like a femur shard—into a slot on a hidden door in the far wall."
12"The market's patrons eyed her—some with curiosity, others with malice."
13"This was it—the veil lifting."
14"She couldn't turn back—not now, not after the rain-slick streets, the echoes of loss."
15"With a final glance at the chaotic market—the bartering, the eerie glows—she pressed against the door."
16"Voices echoed from within—Herrera's among them?"
17"Herrera stood there, conferring with two figures—one lithe and ethereal, the other burly, scarred."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1656
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.028381642512077296
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.006642512077294686
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean11.28
std6.72
cv0.596
sampleLengths
024
120
233
323
45
513
632
715
816
917
1021
1116
1221
1317
149
1519
1618
173
184
1914
2015
2110
2218
2318
2414
2512
2620
279
2810
2917
306
311
3211
3312
3410
3516
3612
3715
3820
3915
401
413
422
4320
4415
4512
4615
473
485
4917
56.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.34459459459459457
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners51
24.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"Of course he didn't."
ratio0.007
96.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences136
matches
0"She'd tailed him from The"
1"He bolted left into an"
2"She couldn't let him slip"
3"Her military-precision bearing propelled her"
4"He vaulted a low chain-link"
5"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close,"
6"she shouted, voice cutting through"
7"He didn't stop."
8"Her height—five—nine—gave her an edge,"
9"He slipped between vehicles, his"
10"She pushed the thought down,"
11"She darted after him, a"
12"He was heading north, toward"
13"She could see the medallion"
14"she called, but the wind"
15"He veered right, splashing through"
16"She'd dismissed it as delusion"
17"He plunged down a flight"
18"She peered down: flickering lights,"
19"Her gut twisted."
ratio0.309
59.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences136
matches
0"Rain pelted the cobblestones of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped"
2"The suspect ahead, a wiry"
3"Tomás Herrera, the file said."
4"She'd tailed him from The"
5"Herrera glanced back, his warm"
6"He bolted left into an"
7"Quinn cursed under her breath,"
8"She couldn't let him slip"
9"Her military-precision bearing propelled her"
10"The alley narrowed, garbage bins"
11"He vaulted a low chain-link"
12"Quinn followed, her brown eyes"
13"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close,"
14"she shouted, voice cutting through"
15"He didn't stop."
16"Herrera emerged onto Greek Street,"
17"Quinn wove through them, badge"
18"Her height—five—nine—gave her an edge,"
19"The rain intensified, a relentless"
ratio0.801
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences78
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped through puddles, her sharp jaw set against the chill that seeped through her trench coat."
1"Eighteen years on the force had honed her instincts to a razor's edge, but tonight they screamed of something off—something that echoed the unexplained void lef…"
2"She'd tailed him from The Raven's Nest, that dimly lit bar with its green neon sign flickering like a lure, walls papered in old maps that hinted at paths bette…"
3"She couldn't let him slip away—not after piecing together the whispers of unauthorized treatments, supernatural patients, whatever the hell that meant."
4"The rain intensified, a relentless sheet that blurred the edges of the world, turning taillights into bloody smears."
5"Quinn's heart hammered—memories of Morris flashing unbidden: his body found in that warehouse, veins blackened as if poisoned by shadows."
6"She could see the medallion bouncing against his chest, a talisman that mocked her rational world."
7"Quinn slipped her hand into her pocket, feeling for anything that might pass as entry."
8"Stalls crowded the tracks, vendors hawking wares that defied logic: vials of glowing liquid, amulets pulsing with inner light, tomes bound in what looked like s…"
9"She snatched it up, the surface etched with runes that tingled against her skin."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she called, but the wind whipped her words away"
1"a figure shrouded, face hidden but eyes gleaming yellow"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"many fingers hissed (hiss)"
2"she spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.545
75.3288%