Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAP34F7G1CBP8MMS5AFHW8

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 47s
Cost:
$0.046026
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the rickety service ladder into the dim underbelly of the abandoned Camden Town Tube station, her boots scraping against cracked tiles that hadn't seen daylight in decades. The air hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something sharper—ozone, like the aftermath of a lightning strike. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, noting the time: 2:17 AM. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that crime didn't respect hours, but this call felt off from the start. An anonymous tip about a body in a sealed-off section of the Underground? No jurisdiction squabbles, no uniforms securing the perimeter. Just her, dispatched alone by the night sergeant with a vague "handle it quietly." She moved with military precision, her sharp jaw set, salt-and-pepper hair cropped close enough to avoid any loose strands betraying her focus. The flashlight on her belt cut through the gloom, illuminating faded posters from the Blitz era peeling off the walls. Graffiti twisted into symbols she didn't recognize—swirls and angles that looked deliberate, almost ritualistic. Up ahead, muffled voices echoed from what should have been a dead-end platform. Quinn paused at the threshold, hand hovering near her holster. The platform opened into a cavernous space that defied the station's blueprints she'd pulled earlier. Stalls lined the tracks, makeshift booths draped in heavy fabrics, flickering with bioluminescent lanterns that cast an eerie blue glow. Vendors—no, not vendors, these were people in hooded cloaks—haggled over vials of glowing liquid and strange artifacts. The air buzzed with whispers in languages she couldn't place. This wasn't a squatters' den. This was a market, hidden and alive, pulsing with an energy that made the hairs on her arms stand up. Uniforms had finally arrived, two constables cordoning off a section near a rusted ticket booth. Forensics techs in white suits knelt around a body sprawled on the grimy floor, their movements methodical but tense. And there, standing just outside the tape, was a young woman with curly red hair tucked behind her left ear, green eyes wide behind round glasses, a worn leather satchel slung over her shoulder. She looked out of place, like a librarian who'd wandered into a raid. "Detective Quinn," one of the constables said, nodding as she approached. "Scene's secured. Victim's a male, mid-thirties, no ID yet. Looks like a stabbing, but... well, you'll see." Quinn ducked under the tape, her brown eyes scanning the body. The man lay face-up, his chest a ruin of precise incisions that formed a pattern—almost like a star with branching lines. No blood pool, though; the wounds were cauterized, edges blackened as if burned. Around him, shattered glass from what might have been a display case glittered under the forensic lights. Odd trinkets scattered: feathers that shimmered unnaturally, a vial of iridescent powder spilled across the tiles. "Something's wrong here," Quinn muttered, kneeling to examine the wounds closer. No defensive marks on the hands, no signs of struggle. The victim’s expression was serene, almost ecstatic, not the rictus of pain she'd expect from a blade. And the air—still that ozone tang, now mixed with a faint metallic bitterness. "Detective?" The red-haired woman stepped forward, hesitant but insistent. "I'm Eva Kowalski. I work at the British Museum's archives. One of your officers called me in—said it might involve artifacts from our restricted collection." Quinn straightened, eyeing her. Colleague? Hardly. More like a civilian consultant, the kind the Met dragged in for cultural sensitivities. But Eva's freckled face held a nervousness that didn't match the typical academic detachment. She kept tucking that curl behind her ear, a tell Quinn filed away. "Restricted how?" Quinn asked, her voice even, probing. Eva glanced at the body, then away. "These symbols... they're not random. Look at the incisions—they mimic ancient warding glyphs from Mesopotamian texts. And that powder? It's likely a banned alchemical substance, something like powdered dragon scale—er, I mean, a synthetic hallucinogen. This place isn't just an abandoned station. It's the Veil Market. A black market for... unusual goods." Quinn's gaze sharpened. "Veil Market? Sounds like a fairy tale. We're dealing with a homicide, Ms. Kowalski, not folklore." Eva shifted, her satchel bumping against her hip. "It's not folklore. I've studied it—rumors in occult circles. It moves every full moon, requires a bone token to enter. Enchants, potions, information. All off the grid. The victim was probably a vendor. See that stall? It sold navigation tools for... rifts." Quinn followed her gesture to the shattered case. Amid the debris lay a small brass compass, its casing patinated with verdigris, the face etched with intricate sigils. The needle didn't point north; it twitched erratically, as if pulled by invisible strings. She picked it up carefully, gloved hand turning it over. The Veil Compass, if Eva's jabber meant anything. But compasses didn't behave like this. Not in the real world. "Stabbing gone wrong in a drug den," Quinn said, testing the waters. "Victim high on whatever this powder is, doesn't fight back. Dealer panics, cauterizes the wounds to hide evidence—maybe with a blowtorch." Eva shook her head, green eyes flashing. "That doesn't fit. Look closer. No charring from heat; it's like the wounds sealed themselves. And the pattern—it's a binding sigil. Meant to trap something inside the body. Or release it. This wasn't a drug deal; it was a ritual gone awry. The compass points to supernatural rifts, portals between worlds. Maybe the killer was trying to open one right here." Quinn set the compass down, her mind racing. Rituals. Portals. It echoed the haze around her partner's death three years ago—DS Morris, found in an alley with similar inexplicable burns, no weapon, no suspect. The case file labeled it a freak accident, but Quinn had never bought it. Unexplained circumstances, the report said. Supernatural origins she didn't understand—yet. She circled the body again, boots crunching glass. The evidence didn't add up under normal scrutiny. No footprints in the dust except the victim's and a few scattered ones that vanished midway, as if the assailant had... evaporated. The ozone smell intensified near the wounds, and when she leaned in, she swore she heard a faint hum, like static from a distant radio. "Constable," she called to the nearest uniform. "Bag that compass. And get me the tipster's recording—anonymous or not, there might be a voice print." Eva hovered, adjusting her glasses. "Detective, if this is what I think, you're missing the bigger picture. The Market isn't just illicit trade; it's a nexus. People—beings—from other realms come here. The killer could be one of them, slipping through a rift. That compass isn't pointing randomly; it's detecting residual energy from a portal." Quinn's jaw tightened. She wasn't one for fairy tales, but facts were facts. The wounds' precision suggested a blade that burned on contact—impossible with steel. The lack of blood: maybe not cauterized post-mortem, but during, as if the weapon drained it. And those sigils—Eva was right; they matched nothing in her database of gang tattoos or ritual killings. She recalled a cold case file from her early days, symbols like these scrawled in blood at a scene where the victim had "vanished" mid-autopsy. Covered up, of course. She picked up the compass again, watching the needle spin, then stabilize—not north, but toward a shadowed alcove where the air shimmered faintly, like heat haze over asphalt. Impossible. But there: a distortion in the wall, bricks seeming to warp if she stared too long. "Alright, Ms. Kowalski," Quinn said, her voice low, bearing the weight of reluctant admission. "Suppose you're onto something. What's the play? A killer who steps through walls?" Eva's freckles stood out as she paled, but she met Quinn's gaze. "Not walls—veils. Thin spots between worlds. If the sigil was meant to bind a spirit or demon, and it failed, the victim might have been possessed briefly. The incisions released it, but not cleanly. That's why no struggle; he welcomed it." Quinn's mind flashed to Morris again—his body found with that same serene smile, unexplained energy readings dismissed as equipment failure. She'd pored over the autopsy photos in secret, noting the faint etchings on his skin, brushed off as scratches. What if it hadn't been a mugging? What if it was this—supernatural rot infecting the city? She stepped toward the alcove, compass in hand. The needle steadied, pointing dead center. The air grew colder, a whisper of wind where none should be. Quinn's hand steadied on her weapon, but she didn't draw. Observation first. Deduction. The market's vendors had scattered at the police arrival, but a few lingered in the shadows, eyes gleaming unnaturally. One of them—a gaunt figure with skin like aged parchment—watched her, lips curling in what might have been a smile. "Secure the perimeter tighter," Quinn ordered the constables. "No one leaves. And you," she turned to Eva, "tell me everything you know about these rifts. Quietly." Eva nodded, tucking her hair again, voice dropping to a murmur. "It starts with the bone token—carved from something not quite human. But if a rift's open, anything could come through. Spirits, shades, worse. The compass is attuned to them; that's why it's twitching. Detective, if I'm right, this isn't just a murder. It's an incursion." Quinn felt the weight of it settling in her gut, the pieces clicking like tumblers in a lock. The evidence had screamed wrong from the moment she descended that ladder—no blood, sealed wounds, vanishing footprints. A market that shouldn't exist, a compass that defied physics. And now, this shimmer, this veil thin enough to tear. She glanced at her watch: 2:45 AM. The full moon was tonight; if Eva's lore held, the market would move soon. Time was slipping. But for the first ture since Morris's death, Quinn saw the thread—supernatural, yes, but tangible. Trackable. She pocketed the compass discreetly, feeling its faint vibration against her hip. The killer hadn't fled; they'd stepped sideways, into whatever lay beyond. "Let's peel this back," she said to Eva, voice steel-edged. "One layer at a time." As they moved toward the alcove, the ozone smell peaked, and Quinn's sharp jaw set firmer. The city above slept, oblivious, but down here, in the veins of London, something ancient stirred. And she was going to drag it into the light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.48
leniency0.96
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1754
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1754
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"aftermath"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count2
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count2
6
word"shimmered"
count2
7
word"synthetic"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"database"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"gleaming"
count1
15
word"tangible"
count1
highlights
0"aftermath"
1"gloom"
2"echoed"
3"methodical"
4"scanning"
5"shattered"
6"shimmered"
7"synthetic"
8"etched"
9"intricate"
10"racing"
11"database"
12"weight"
13"whisper"
14"gleaming"
15"tangible"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1716
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The ozone smell intensified near the wounds, and when she leaned in, she swore she heard a faint hum, like static from a…"
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1254
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn21
Camden1
Town1
Tube1
Underground1
Blitz1
Met1
Eva12
Veil1
Compass1
Morris3
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Met"
3"Eva"
4"Compass"
5"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Tube"
3"Blitz"
4"London"
globalScore0.663
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
83.45% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.166
wordCount1716
matches
0"not cauterized post-mortem, but during, as if the weapon drained it"
1"not north, but toward a shadowed alcove"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"tucking that curl"
1"descended that ladder"
88.85% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean53.63
std24.72
cv0.461
sampleLengths
0123
169
297
381
428
578
651
734
847
98
1059
1119
1250
1370
1433
1568
1658
1763
1824
1954
2087
2145
2227
2353
2455
2578
2626
2756
2855
2963
3015
3142
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"were cauterized"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was slipping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount11
flaggedSentences22
totalSentences121
ratio0.182
matches
0"The air hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something sharper—ozone, like the aftermath of a lightning strike."
1"Graffiti twisted into symbols she didn't recognize—swirls and angles that looked deliberate, almost ritualistic."
2"Vendors—no, not vendors, these were people in hooded cloaks—haggled over vials of glowing liquid and strange artifacts."
3"The man lay face-up, his chest a ruin of precise incisions that formed a pattern—almost like a star with branching lines."
4"No blood pool, though; the wounds were cauterized, edges blackened as if burned."
5"And the air—still that ozone tang, now mixed with a faint metallic bitterness."
6"The needle didn't point north; it twitched erratically, as if pulled by invisible strings."
7"\"That doesn't fit. Look closer. No charring from heat; it's like the wounds sealed themselves. And the pattern—it's a binding sigil. Meant to trap something inside the body. Or release it. This wasn't a drug deal; it was a ritual gone awry. The compass points to supernatural rifts, portals between worlds. Maybe the killer was trying to open one right here.\""
8"It echoed the haze around her partner's death three years ago—DS Morris, found in an alley with similar inexplicable burns, no weapon, no suspect."
9"Supernatural origins she didn't understand—yet."
10"\"Detective, if this is what I think, you're missing the bigger picture. The Market isn't just illicit trade; it's a nexus. People—beings—from other realms come here. The killer could be one of them, slipping through a rift. That compass isn't pointing randomly; it's detecting residual energy from a portal.\""
11"And those sigils—Eva was right; they matched nothing in her database of gang tattoos or ritual killings."
12"She picked up the compass again, watching the needle spin, then stabilize—not north, but toward a shadowed alcove where the air shimmered faintly, like heat haze over asphalt."
13"\"Not walls—veils. Thin spots between worlds. If the sigil was meant to bind a spirit or demon, and it failed, the victim might have been possessed briefly. The incisions released it, but not cleanly. That's why no struggle; he welcomed it.\""
14"Quinn's mind flashed to Morris again—his body found with that same serene smile, unexplained energy readings dismissed as equipment failure."
15"What if it was this—supernatural rot infecting the city?"
16"One of them—a gaunt figure with skin like aged parchment—watched her, lips curling in what might have been a smile."
17"\"It starts with the bone token—carved from something not quite human. But if a rift's open, anything could come through. Spirits, shades, worse. The compass is attuned to them; that's why it's twitching. Detective, if I'm right, this isn't just a murder. It's an incursion.\""
18"The evidence had screamed wrong from the moment she descended that ladder—no blood, sealed wounds, vanishing footprints."
19"The full moon was tonight; if Eva's lore held, the market would move soon."
20"But for the first ture since Morris's death, Quinn saw the thread—supernatural, yes, but tangible."
21"The killer hadn't fled; they'd stepped sideways, into whatever lay beyond."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount683
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.024890190336749635
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008784773060029283
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean14.18
std10.36
cv0.731
sampleLengths
032
120
215
321
413
58
614
722
820
914
1013
1110
1215
1320
1417
1510
165
1720
1815
1919
2034
2113
2211
2317
2411
2521
2613
2717
2816
2911
3010
3117
3213
339
3425
354
361
371
3814
3914
4013
418
427
4352
443
4516
468
4742
488
4919
73.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4628099173553719
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners56
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"Just her, dispatched alone by"
1"More like a civilian consultant,"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences98
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"She moved with military precision,"
2"She looked out of place,"
3"She kept tucking that curl"
4"She picked it up carefully,"
5"It echoed the haze around"
6"She circled the body again,"
7"she called to the nearest"
8"She wasn't one for fairy"
9"She recalled a cold case"
10"She picked up the compass"
11"She'd pored over the autopsy"
12"She stepped toward the alcove,"
13"she turned to Eva"
14"She glanced at her watch:"
15"She pocketed the compass discreetly,"
16"she said to Eva, voice"
ratio0.173
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences98
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1"The air hung thick with"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"An anonymous tip about a"
4"She moved with military precision,"
5"The flashlight on her belt"
6"Graffiti twisted into symbols she"
7"Quinn paused at the threshold,"
8"The platform opened into a"
9"Stalls lined the tracks, makeshift"
10"Vendors—no, not vendors, these were"
11"The air buzzed with whispers"
12"This wasn't a"
13"This was a market, hidden"
14"Uniforms had finally arrived, two"
15"Forensics techs in white suits"
16"She looked out of place,"
17"Quinn ducked under the tape,"
18"The man lay face-up, his"
19"Quinn muttered, kneeling to examine"
ratio0.704
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the rickety service ladder into the dim underbelly of the abandoned Camden Town Tube station, her boots scraping against crac…"
1"Graffiti twisted into symbols she didn't recognize—swirls and angles that looked deliberate, almost ritualistic."
2"The platform opened into a cavernous space that defied the station's blueprints she'd pulled earlier."
3"Stalls lined the tracks, makeshift booths draped in heavy fabrics, flickering with bioluminescent lanterns that cast an eerie blue glow."
4"The man lay face-up, his chest a ruin of precise incisions that formed a pattern—almost like a star with branching lines."
5"Odd trinkets scattered: feathers that shimmered unnaturally, a vial of iridescent powder spilled across the tiles."
6"But Eva's freckled face held a nervousness that didn't match the typical academic detachment."
7"The needle didn't point north; it twitched erratically, as if pulled by invisible strings."
8"No footprints in the dust except the victim's and a few scattered ones that vanished midway, as if the assailant had..."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn muttered, kneeling to examine the wounds closer"
1"haired woman stepped, hesitant but insistent"
2"Quinn said, her voice low, bearing the weight of reluctant admission"
70.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.32
leniency0.64
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.16
79.8932%