Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAPJ0VWPVV3Y30H2AT84KR

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.000414
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered down like God himself had turned off the sky’s faucet and left it running. Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that reflected the sickly glow of streetlamps, her breath fogging in the cold. The suspect—a wiry man in a long coat—ducked into the alley between two brick buildings, his movements sharp, desperate. She didn’t hesitate. Quinn lunged after him, her leather jacket slick with rain, the weight of her service pistol a familiar comfort against her hip. The alley reeked of damp concrete and something older, something metallic. A discarded hypodermic needle glinted in the gutter. She ignored it. Focused. The man was fast, but she was faster. He bolted left, nearly colliding with a homeless man curled under a tarp. Quinn skidded to a stop, her boots sliding on the wet pavement. The suspect didn’t look back. He vanished around the corner of a boarded-up pub, the *Red Lion*, its sign hanging crooked, rusted. She rounded the corner just in time to see him shove something into the mouth of a sewer grate. A bone token. White, jagged, like a broken rib. Her pulse spiked. She’d seen those before—at the Veil Market, where things that shouldn’t exist changed hands. The grate rattled. The man was already halfway down the iron ladder bolted to the wall, his coat flapping like a crow’s wings. Quinn didn’t think. She grabbed the ladder, her fingers slipping on the wet rungs. Muscle memory took over. She descended, her boots clanging against the metal, the stench of stagnant water and something fouler—rot, decay—hitting her like a fist. The tunnel sloped downward, the air thickening. The man was gone. A flicker of movement. A shadow. Then—nothing. Quinn’s flashlight cut through the dark, the beam trembling in her grip. The tunnel split ahead. Left or right? She chose left, her instincts screaming at her to move. The walls here were slick with moisture, the ceiling low enough she had to duck. The air hummed, low and electric, like the city’s heartbeat had been buried here. Then she saw it—a faint glow, pulsing like a slow, sick pulse. Not a light. Not exactly. The Veil Market. She stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into something soft. Not mud. Not quite. Her stomach twisted. She didn’t look down. The tunnel opened into a cavernous space, the air thick with the scent of incense and something sharper—ozone, like before a storm. Stalls lined the walls, their wares glowing faintly in the dim light. Jars of black liquid. Bottles labeled with scripts she didn’t recognize. A man in a long coat—no, a *robe*—haggling over a skull that pulsed faintly, veins of blue light threading through its bone. Quinn’s hand tightened around her pistol. She wasn’t here for the market. She was here for the man who’d led her down. She moved deeper, her flashlight sweeping over the crowd. No sign of him. Then—a whisper. *“Detective Quinn.”* She spun. A woman leaned against a stall, her lips curled in a smile that didn’t reach her eyes. Dark hair, sharp cheekbones, a silver ring on her thumb that glinted in the low light. *“You shouldn’t be here,”* the woman said. Quinn didn’t answer. She scanned the crowd again. Nothing. *“He’s gone,”* the woman said, as if reading her mind. *“But you’re not.”* Quinn’s jaw tightened. “Who are you?” The woman tilted her head. *“Someone who knows things.”* She stepped closer, her voice dropping. *“You’re looking for the wrong man.”* Quinn’s finger twitched on the trigger. “What man?” The woman’s smile widened. *“The one who didn’t lead you here. The one who sent you.”* A cold prickle ran down Quinn’s spine. She didn’t like being played. *“Who sent me?”* she demanded. The woman’s eyes flicked to something behind Quinn. Then she was gone, swallowed by the crowd. Quinn turned. The tunnel behind her was empty. But the air had changed. Thicker. Heavier. And then she saw it. A figure stood at the far end of the market, half-hidden in shadow. Tall. Broad-shouldered. A coat that pooled at his feet like spilled ink. He didn’t move. Didn’t speak. But he was watching her. Quinn’s breath hitched. She knew that stance. That stillness. She’d seen it in the mirror. The figure stepped forward, and the market seemed to hold its breath. Quinn’s hand flew to her pistol. But it was too late. The figure was already reaching for her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount749
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount749
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"pulse"
3"flicker"
4"electric"
5"stomach"
6"pulsed"
7"whisper"
8"scanned"
9"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.02% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords39
totalWords736
ratio0.053
matches
0"Red Lion"
1"robe"
2"“Detective Quinn.”"
3"“You shouldn’t be here,”"
4"“He’s gone,”"
5"“But you’re not.”"
6"“Someone who knows things.”"
7"“You’re looking for the wrong man.”"
8"“The one who didn’t lead you here. The one who sent you.”"
9"“Who sent me?”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount695
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
God1
Quinn14
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Market"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.493
windowScore0.333
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if reading her mind"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount736
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"knew that stance"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean18.4
std17.63
cv0.958
sampleLengths
055
13
245
38
447
545
662
711
87
929
1046
113
1221
1367
1422
1515
162
1735
187
199
2013
216
2221
238
2416
2512
265
2716
282
2913
305
3125
325
335
349
356
3612
376
385
397
90.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences95
matches
0"was gone"
1"been buried"
2"being played"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences101
ratio0.079
matches
0"The suspect—a wiry man in a long coat—ducked into the alley between two brick buildings, his movements sharp, desperate."
1"She’d seen those before—at the Veil Market, where things that shouldn’t exist changed hands."
2"She descended, her boots clanging against the metal, the stench of stagnant water and something fouler—rot, decay—hitting her like a fist."
3"Then—nothing."
4"Then she saw it—a faint glow, pulsing like a slow, sick pulse."
5"The tunnel opened into a cavernous space, the air thick with the scent of incense and something sharper—ozone, like before a storm."
6"A man in a long coat—no, a *robe*—haggling over a skull that pulsed faintly, veins of blue light threading through its bone."
7"Then—a whisper."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount708
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03248587570621469
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00847457627118644
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean7.29
std5.66
cv0.776
sampleLengths
017
119
219
33
422
511
68
73
81
98
1013
1112
125
1317
1419
153
166
173
1814
193
2020
213
2211
234
2421
257
264
274
282
291
3012
314
323
3310
3415
3514
3612
373
382
393
4010
412
422
433
444
4522
4612
474
487
4922
43.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.31683168316831684
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners32
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then she saw it—a faint"
1"Then she was gone, swallowed"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences78
matches
0"She didn’t hesitate."
1"She ignored it."
2"He bolted left, nearly colliding"
3"He vanished around the corner"
4"She rounded the corner just"
5"Her pulse spiked."
6"She’d seen those before—at the"
7"She grabbed the ladder, her"
8"She descended, her boots clanging"
9"She chose left, her instincts"
10"She stepped forward, her boots"
11"Her stomach twisted."
12"She didn’t look down."
13"She wasn’t here for the"
14"She was here for the"
15"She moved deeper, her flashlight"
16"She scanned the crowd again."
17"She stepped closer, her voice"
18"She didn’t like being played."
19"He didn’t move."
ratio0.282
30.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences78
matches
0"The rain hammered down like"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through"
2"The suspect—a wiry man in"
3"She didn’t hesitate."
4"Quinn lunged after him, her"
5"The alley reeked of damp"
6"A discarded hypodermic needle glinted"
7"She ignored it."
8"The man was fast, but"
9"He bolted left, nearly colliding"
10"Quinn skidded to a stop,"
11"The suspect didn’t look back."
12"He vanished around the corner"
13"She rounded the corner just"
14"A bone token."
15"Her pulse spiked."
16"She’d seen those before—at the"
17"The grate rattled."
18"The man was already halfway"
19"Quinn didn’t think."
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that reflected the sickly glow of streetlamps, her breath fogging in the cold."
1"She descended, her boots clanging against the metal, the stench of stagnant water and something fouler—rot, decay—hitting her like a fist."
2"Dark hair, sharp cheekbones, a silver ring on her thumb that glinted in the low light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"the woman said, as if reading her mind"
1"She stepped, her voice dropping"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.2
76.9865%