Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAPJR7397D8HC17KH4EE0A

Run Details

Duration:
34.9s
Cost:
$0.001596
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory twisted the third deadbolt with a sharp click. Ptolemy wove between her ankles, his tabby tail flicking like a metronome. The stack of ancient grimoires on the side table teetered as she yanked the door open, cool night air from Brick Lane slicing in. Lucien stood there, framed in the dim glow of the streetlamp. His charcoal suit hugged his frame, crisp despite the drizzle beading on his shoulders. Platinum hair slicked back, not a strand astray. Ivory cane hooked over his arm, the handle catching the light. One amber eye gleamed; the other, black as pitch, swallowed it. Her breath hitched. Fingers tightened on the doorframe. That scar on her wrist itched, the old crescent pulling tight. "Lucien." His name scraped out, low and edged. He tilted his head, lips curving into that half-smile that always promised secrets. "Rory. Or should I say Laila tonight? Eva's security rivals a vault." She crossed her arms, blocking the threshold. Bookshelves loomed behind her, scrolls spilling from every shelf like frozen waterfalls. The curry house below sent up cumin and garlic through the floorboards. "Eva's not here. Piss off." His gaze flicked past her shoulder, lingering on the chaos of notes pinned to the walls—occult symbols, scribbled Latin. Ptolemy hissed from the floor, fur bushed. Lucien ignored the cat, stepped closer. Rain dotted his lapels. "I know. I need you." Heat flushed her cheeks. Not the good kind. Memories crashed in: his hand on her thigh under the table at that dive in Soho, whispers in French that melted her bones, then the fight—his secrets about Avaros, her ex's shadow still clinging, words hurled like knives. She slammed the door shut? No. Her body betrayed her, rooted. "Need me for what? Another job? Another lie?" She gripped the door harder, nails biting wood. He rapped the cane once on the frame, a hollow thunk. "May I come in? London rain doesn't flatter even me." Ptolemy yowled, darting behind her legs. Rory's blue eyes narrowed, scanning his face. That jawline, shadowed stubble. The scar throbbed. She stepped aside, jerking her head. "Five minutes. Then you're out." He slipped past, cane tapping the worn floorboards. The flat shrank around him—too small for his presence, his cologne of sandalwood and smoke filling the air. He shed his coat, draped it over a chair buried in Eva's research. Suit jacket next, revealing a crisp white shirt stretched across his chest. She shut the door, three deadbolts snicked home. Leaned against it. "Talk." Lucien turned, heterochromatic eyes locking on hers. He moved to the cluttered kitchenette, picked up a chipped mug from the counter—half-filled with cold tea—and set it down with care. "Silas mentioned you'd been here. Hiding?" "Not hiding." Her voice sharpened. Shoulder-length black hair swung as she stalked forward. "Working. Eva's got a lead on that relic from Avaros. The one your father wants." His laugh came soft, dark. Amber eye flared. "My father wants many things. You know that." He circled the room, fingers trailing a spine of leather-bound tome. Dust motes danced. "But this isn't about him." Ptolemy leaped onto the table, stared Lucien down. The half-demon paused, extended a hand. The cat sniffed, then butted his head against pale fingers. Traitor. "Then what?" Rory snatched a scroll from the table, rolled it tight. Her pulse hammered. Last time they'd parted, his flat in Mayfair—silk sheets tangled, her nails raking his back, then dawn: his confession about the demon blood, her panic over Evan still fresh. She'd bolted, left her scarf behind. Things unsaid choked her now. Lucien faced her fully. Cane propped against the wall. He closed the distance in two strides, stopped inches away. Heat radiated off him. "You. I've combed every shadow from Cardiff to the Thames. No sign of Evan, but whispers say he's sniffing around Yu-Fei's deliveries." Her stomach twisted. Ex's face flashed—bruises he'd left before she fled. "I can handle him." "Can you?" His voice dropped, velvet over steel. Fingers brushed her wrist, ghosted the scar. Electricity sparked. She jerked back, but not far enough. "Don't." Breathless. Damn him. He didn't retreat. Loomed closer, black eye endless. "I couldn't then. Too tangled in my own hell. Avaros pulling strings." Thumb traced her jawline now, feather-light. "But you felt it. That night." Fire licked her veins. She grabbed his wrist, shoved it away. Or tried. His grip held, gentle iron. "Felt what? Your lies? The way you vanished after, left me chasing ghosts?" Amber eye softened. "I protected you. Demon politics—" "Bollocks." She shoved his chest. Solid. He didn't budge. Pinned her against the bookshelf with his body, books digging into her back. His scent enveloped her. Heart thundered. "Rory." His forehead touched hers. Breath mingled, warm. "I never stopped wanting you." Words hung. Her hands fisted his shirt. Pulled him closer? Pushed? The line blurred. Ptolemy jumped down, tail lashing, vanished into the bedroom. She tilted her chin, lips brushing his. "Prove it." His mouth crashed onto hers. Hunger raw, no hesitation. Hands cupped her face, then slid to her waist, bunching her shirt. She arched into him, fingers threading platinum strands, yanking. Tongues battled—salt and storm. He tasted of whiskey and forbidden realms. She broke free, gasping. "Not that easy." "Nothing with you is." He nipped her lower lip, trailed kisses down her neck. Goosebumps erupted. His cane clattered forgotten. She hooked a leg around his thigh, pulling flush. Friction ignited. But hurt surged. She twisted, pinned him against the opposite wall. Scrolls fluttered down. "You left. After everything." His hands roamed her hips, thumbs circling. "Feared I'd drag you under. My blood—it's poison." "Liar." She ground against him, felt his hardness. A groan escaped him. Victory. "You ran." Amber eye burned. "Stay, then. Let me fix it." She kissed him again, fierce. Buttons popped on his shirt—hers or his? Fabric whispered off. Her bra clasp snapped under his fingers. Cool air hit skin, then his mouth—hot on her breast. She moaned, head thrown back. Books tumbled. Ptolemy yowled from the corner, ignored. Lucien's hands explored, mapping scars and curves. He lifted her onto the table, papers scattering. She wrapped legs around him, urging. Zipper rasped. Her jeans shoved down, his slacks followed. Skin met skin. He paused, eyes searching hers. "Tell me to stop." "Don't you dare." He thrust in, deep. She cried out, nails scoring his shoulders. Rhythm built—slow, then frantic. Table creaked. The flat echoed gasps, flesh slapping. Sweat slicked them. Her blue eyes locked on his mismatched gaze, worlds colliding. Hurt melted into need. "Lucien—" "Shh." He captured her mouth, drove harder. Tension coiled, snapped. She shattered first, waves crashing. He followed, growl muffled against her throat. They slumped, tangled. Breath ragged. His fingers stroked her hair. But the door—three deadbolts—rattled. No. Imagination? No knock. Reality seeped. Eva's notes crunched underfoot. Ptolemy glared from afar. She pushed him off, gently. Pulled up jeans. "This doesn't erase—" "I know." He straightened shirt, retrieved cane. Eyes intense. "But it's a start." She raked fingers through black hair, pulse still racing. "Evan. The relic. What's the play?" He smirked, that fixer glint. "We team up. You, me, Eva when she returns." Outside, rain pattered harder. Brick Lane hummed. Her scar tingled. Fingers brushed his. Lingered. "Not over, then." "Never was." Ptolemy leaped between them, demanding attention. Lucien scratched his ears. Rory watched, chest tight. Attraction reignited, hurt banked but smoldering. Words still unsaid, but the door—metaphorically—ajar. The front door buzzer shrilled. Eva? Lucien tensed. Hand to cane blade. Rory grabbed her shirt. "Stay hidden." He nodded, melting into shadows. She crossed to the intercom. Voice steady. "Yeah?" "Rory? It's Silas. Trouble at the bar." Her gaze flicked to Lucien. His amber eye winked. Round two. But first—Evan's shadow loomed larger now. Together? The buzzer screamed again. She hit release. Lucien pulled her close one last time, whispered. "We finish this." Lips met. Promise sealed. Ptolemy purred approval? No. Hissed. Door swung wide. Night swallowed Silas's silhouette. Inside, heat lingered. History rewritten, one beat at a time. No. Scene pulsed on. Silas burst in, soaked. "Rory, Evan's boys hit Yu-Fei's. Golden Empress in flames." Lucien's cane tapped. Emerged. "Then we hunt." Her blue eyes flashed. Hand found his. United. Curry scent thickened. Books waited. Relic called. Romance in the underworld—complicated as ever. (Word count: 1247)
created_at"2026-02-20T20:08:46.609Z" 2/20/2026, 8:08:46 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.26
leniency0.52
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"loomed"
count3
1
word"flicked"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"thundered"
count1
10
word"fluttered"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"glint"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"flicked"
2"scanning"
3"throbbed"
4"pulse"
5"silk"
6"stomach"
7"velvet"
8"traced"
9"thundered"
10"fluttered"
11"echoed"
12"tension"
13"shattered"
14"racing"
15"glint"
16"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences202
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences238
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1390
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1140
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Latin1
Soho1
French1
Avaros1
Eva3
Shoulder-length1
Dust1
Lucien11
Mayfair1
Evan2
Fingers3
Damn1
Fire1
Solid1
Breath2
Goosebumps1
Tension1
Eyes1
Silas2
Rory5
Ptolemy9
Amber3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
3"Fingers"
4"Fire"
5"Breath"
6"Goosebumps"
7"Tension"
8"Eyes"
9"Silas"
10"Rory"
11"Ptolemy"
12"Amber"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Soho"
3"French"
4"Mayfair"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1390
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences238
matches
0"smirked, that fixer"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean17.82
std14.39
cv0.807
sampleLengths
045
155
219
38
425
536
641
757
816
921
1031
1151
1212
1335
1428
1535
1625
1755
1845
1915
2024
214
2232
2331
248
2528
2613
2723
289
2941
307
3131
3218
3315
3415
359
3639
376
3830
3912
403
4136
425
4322
4410
458
4610
4711
4813
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs275
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences238
ratio0.063
matches
0"One amber eye gleamed; the other, black as pitch, swallowed it."
1"His gaze flicked past her shoulder, lingering on the chaos of notes pinned to the walls—occult symbols, scribbled Latin."
2"Memories crashed in: his hand on her thigh under the table at that dive in Soho, whispers in French that melted her bones, then the fight—his secrets about Avaros, her ex's shadow still clinging, words hurled like knives."
3"The flat shrank around him—too small for his presence, his cologne of sandalwood and smoke filling the air."
4"He moved to the cluttered kitchenette, picked up a chipped mug from the counter—half-filled with cold tea—and set it down with care."
5"Last time they'd parted, his flat in Mayfair—silk sheets tangled, her nails raking his back, then dawn: his confession about the demon blood, her panic over Evan still fresh."
6"Ex's face flashed—bruises he'd left before she fled."
7"Tongues battled—salt and storm."
8"Buttons popped on his shirt—hers or his?"
9"Cool air hit skin, then his mouth—hot on her breast."
10"Rhythm built—slow, then frantic."
11"But the door—three deadbolts—rattled."
12"Words still unsaid, but the door—metaphorically—ajar."
13"But first—Evan's shadow loomed larger now."
14"Romance in the underworld—complicated as ever."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1163
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.025795356835769563
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0025795356835769563
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences238
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences238
mean5.84
std4.8
cv0.823
sampleLengths
09
112
224
311
414
58
611
711
83
95
1011
118
1213
1312
147
1512
1612
175
1819
197
206
214
225
234
244
2538
265
271
285
2916
3011
3110
326
337
344
353
366
375
388
3918
4013
4112
428
433
441
457
4622
476
485
498
79.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4789915966386555
totalSentences238
uniqueOpeners114
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
ratio0
52.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount69
totalSentences165
matches
0"His charcoal suit hugged his"
1"Her breath hitched."
2"His name scraped out, low"
3"He tilted his head, lips"
4"She crossed her arms, blocking"
5"His gaze flicked past her"
6"She slammed the door shut?"
7"Her body betrayed her, rooted."
8"She gripped the door harder,"
9"He rapped the cane once"
10"She stepped aside, jerking her"
11"He slipped past, cane tapping"
12"He shed his coat, draped"
13"She shut the door, three"
14"He moved to the cluttered"
15"Her voice sharpened"
16"His laugh came soft, dark."
17"He circled the room, fingers"
18"Her pulse hammered."
19"She'd bolted, left her scarf"
ratio0.418
8.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount149
totalSentences165
matches
0"Rory twisted the third deadbolt"
1"Ptolemy wove between her ankles,"
2"The stack of ancient grimoires"
3"Lucien stood there, framed in"
4"His charcoal suit hugged his"
5"Platinum hair slicked back, not"
6"Ivory cane hooked over his"
7"Her breath hitched."
8"Fingers tightened on the doorframe."
9"That scar on her wrist"
10"His name scraped out, low"
11"He tilted his head, lips"
12"She crossed her arms, blocking"
13"Bookshelves loomed behind her, scrolls"
14"The curry house below sent"
15"His gaze flicked past her"
16"Ptolemy hissed from the floor,"
17"Lucien ignored the cat, stepped"
18"Rain dotted his lapels."
19"Heat flushed her cheeks."
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Memories crashed in: his hand on her thigh under the table at that dive in Soho, whispers in French that melted her bones, then the fight—his secrets about Avar…"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He circled, fingers trailing a spine of leather-bound tome"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.0937%