Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAPS4JN9RKDX9MPH0AFW8P

Run Details

Duration:
3m 18s
Cost:
$0.018043
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory worked the third deadbolt free, her left wrist’s crescent scar pulled tight against the doorframe’s chipped paint—she’d fumbled the first two when the sharp, deliberate knock cut through her sorting of Eva’s research scrolls, each covered in Eva’s scrawled indigo handwriting about the demon realm of Avaros. She yanks the door open, breath catching before she can bite down the sound, the curry house below’s tinny bhangra music drifting up to wrap around the moment like a tangled thread. She grips the doorframe. Lucien stood on the step, tailored charcoal suit crisp despite the Brick Lane pavement’s muck and the turmeric fumes curling from the curry house’s vent, his platinum blond hair slicked back so perfectly not a strand strayed save for a single one that fell across his forehead, ivory-handled cane planted firm in the mud. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber flecked with gold, one black as the demon tongue scrolls on Eva’s shelf—locked on hers before they darted to the scar peeking out from her frayed Golden Empress delivery uniform’s cuff. I didn’t come to beg. Rory’s hand shot to the cuff, yanking it down so hard the fabric scraped her skin. She shifts her weight, blocking the door’s threshold, her gaze darting to the three deadbolts she’d just undone—proof she’d learned to guard herself after Evan, after Lucien’s disappearance. You lost the right to show up unannounced three months ago. Lucien’s cane tapped the step once, a sharp, deliberate sound that cut through the bhangra music and the curry house’s clattering dishes below. He stepped forward, his shoulder brushing hers as he pushed past—she didn’t have the strength to hold him back, not when his scent (cinnamon and burnt amber, the same as the night he’d pulled her from a demon’s clawed grasp in the alley behind her flat above Silas’ bar) wrapped around her like a blanket she couldn’t shake. The door slams behind him. Rory twists each deadbolt into place, her fingers shaking so bad she misses the second one on the first try, her mind replaying the night he’d vanished: they’d been huddled in his office, maps of Avaros spread across his desk, him promising he’d keep her safe from Evan’s supernatural allies (the ex she’d fled Cardiff’s pre-law classes to escape), and then he’d been gone by dawn, no note, no trace, just a half-empty cup of cinnamon tea on his windowsill. When she turns, Lucien is already navigating the flat’s clutter, his cane tilting to avoid a stack of leather-bound books on demon summoning that teetered by the coat rack—books Eva had borrowed from a supernatural library in Camden. Ptolemy the tabby darted from under the kitchen table, his striped body rubbing against Lucien’s cane before he leaped onto a shelf of scrolls, sending two slipping to the floor, their edges frayed from Eva’s constant prodding and note-scrawling about Avaros’ demon hierarchy. You’re tracking mud into Eva’s flat. Lucien paused, glancing at the smudges on the linoleum before he knelt—his suit’s knee creasing, a small stain appearing on the fabric that he didn’t seem to notice—and picked up the fallen scrolls, smoothing their frayed edges with a careful hand that spoke of years of handling fragile supernatural documents. She won’t mind. I’m here for you. Rory crossed her arms, her left wrist’s scar throbbing under the fabric of her uniform. She’d spent three months replaying that vanished night every time she delivered dumplings for the Golden Empress, every time she climbed the stairs to her flat above Silas’ bar, every time she saw a cinnamon stick in a market. She’d called every contact Lucien had ever mentioned—Yu-Fei Cheung, the bar’s Silas, a supernatural tailor in Soho—and all of them had said he’d dropped off the face of the underworld. You left. I called every contact you had. They all said you’d vanished without a trace. Lucien stood, the scrolls tucked under his arm, and moved toward the living area—cramped, with a loveseat buried under more research notes, a tattered pre-law textbook (her old Cardiff University one, left at Eva’s when she fled) peeking out from under a scroll. He sat, his cane leaning against the armrest, and gestured to the only free spot on the cushion, a small patch not covered in indigo-scrawled paper. Sit. I can explain. Rory didn’t move. She stared at his amber eye, the one that had crinkled when he’d laughed at her terrible joke about pre-law contracts being worse than demon pacts, and his black eye, the one that had glowed faintly when he’d spoken the demon tongue of Avaros to calm a rampaging imp. I don’t want your excuses. I want you to leave. A tattered scroll detailing Avaros’ demon lords slipped from an overflowing shelf and skitters across the linoleum floor, its edges frayed so bad the ink was peeling off. Lucien’s eyes followed it before he looked back at her, his expression softer than she’d ever seen it—softer than when he’d admitted he’d never met his demon father from Avaros. I couldn’t. If I’d told you, the demon Evan had made a deal with would have sensed your knowledge. It would have come for you faster, before I could track it to its lair in the London sewers. Rory stepped closer, the memory of Evan’s cruel words (you’ll never escape me, even in London) ringing in her ears, the letter she’d just realized Lucien had tossed to her crumpled in her hand. The flat’s air felt thick, filled with the scent of curry, cinnamon, and the faint, acrid smell of demon lore scrolls that had been handled too much. Ptolemy meowed from the shelf, his tail flicking against a book titled *Avaros: Demon Realm Unveiled*. I spent three months thinking you’d abandoned me. That all the times you’d pulled me from danger—from the imp, from Evan’s supernatural goons, from the collapsed alley behind the restaurant—were just a game to you, a way to pass the time as an information broker. Lucien stood, his suit straightening as he moved toward her—so close she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his platinum hair’s stray strand now fell across his forehead like a secret. He’d come here unannounced because he’d finally taken care of the demon, because he could finally tell her the truth, because he couldn’t stand being apart from her any longer, not when he’d spent three months tracking the demon through London’s sewers and supernatural underworld, his cane’s hidden blade drawn more times than he could count. It was never a game. Every time I pulled you from danger, I did it because I couldn’t stand the thought of you getting hurt. Rory’s black straight hair fell in her face when she leaned forward, her breath brushing his cheek, the curry house’s turmeric fumes fading into the background as his cinnamon scent wrapped around her. She’d wanted him for so long, even when she’d hated him, even when she’d cursed his name every time she delivered dumplings, even when she’d stared at her crescent scar and wondered if he’d ever remember it. You left me with nothing. Not a word. Not a sign. Not even a single cinnamon stick, your signature mark. Lucien’s hand lifted, his fingers brushing her hair back from her face—his touch was warm, warmer than she remembered, and she didn’t pull away, not when she’d craved that touch for three months. He nodded toward the scrolls on the shelf; Rory glanced over, seeing a single scroll with a small cinnamon stick tied to its edge—his signature mark, the same one he’d left on the map he’d given her the night he’d saved her from the demon alley, a mark she’d missed because she’d been too angry to look at any of Eva’s scrolls after he’d vanished. I left a clue. You just didn’t see it. I tied it to the scroll about Avaros’ demon hierarchy, the one you’d asked me about the night before I left. Rory stepped closer, the crumpled letter in her hand now pressing against her chest. The flat’s dim lamp cast shadows across Lucien’s face, making his heterochromatic eyes look even more intense. Ptolemy meowed again, his tail flicking against a book, but she didn’t pay attention. I didn’t look. I was too angry, too hurt, too scared that if I looked at any of the scrolls, I’d be reminded of you and the way you’d left me. Lucien’s cane shifted, the ivory handle catching the light from the lamp—she noticed the faint seam along the handle, the one that hid the thin blade he’d never used in front of her. He’d come here unannounced because he’d finally taken care of the demon, because he could finally let his guard down, because he could finally tell her he’d been in love with her since the day they’d met in Eva’s flat, when she’d pointed out a mistake in his demon lore notes. I tracked it to the sewers, used my cane’s blade to cut its heart out, and buried it in a supernatural graveyard in Highgate. It’s gone for good. Rory’s left wrist’s scar throbbed again, a reminder of her childhood accident (a fall from a tree in Cardiff’s park, her father’s barrister hands wrapping around her wrist to stop the bleeding), of all the pain she’d endured since leaving Cardiff, of all the pain she’d endured because of Lucien’s disappearance. But now, standing this close to him, she didn’t feel the pain anymore. She felt the attraction that had lingered between them since the first time they’d met, the unsaid things that were finally starting to be spoken. Why now? Why not come sooner? Lucien’s hand dropped to her left wrist, his fingers brushing the scar gently—he’d never touched it before, never asked about it, but now he seemed to be memorizing its shape, its curve. I needed to make sure the demon was truly gone. I needed to cover my tracks so no other demons from Avaros would come after you. I needed to make sure I could face you without putting you in danger, without having to run again. Rory leaned into his touch, her body pressing against his—his suit was crisp, his chest firm, and she could hear his heartbeat, fast and steady, against her ear, a reminder that he was real, that he was here. Ptolemy jumped from the shelf, landing on the loveseat and curling up, his eyes closing as he drifted off to sleep. I didn’t think you’d ever come back. I thought I’d spend the rest of my life delivering dumplings and hating you. Lucien’s thumb brushed her scar, his touch soft and gentle, the same touch he’d used to fix her broken chess piece in his office. I couldn’t stay away. Not when I’d spent three months thinking about you every minute, about your bright blue eyes, your black hair, your crescent scar, the way you laugh at bad jokes even when you don’t want to. Rory pulled back, looking into his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black, the same eyes that had haunted her dreams for three months. She’d wanted to kiss him for so long, even when she’d hated him, even when she’d cursed his name, even when she’d stared at her scar and wondered if he’d ever come back. You’re here now. Lucien nodded, his fingers still wrapped around her left wrist, his cane’s hidden blade now forgotten, his guard down for the first time in three months. I’m here now. Rory glanced around the flat, at the books and scrolls, at Ptolemy sleeping on the loveseat, at the three deadbolts on the door, at her old pre-law textbook peeking out from under the scrolls. She’d spent three months hiding, three months running, three months hating, but now she didn’t have to run anymore. She had Lucien, and he had finally told her the truth. I don’t want you to leave again. Lucien’s lips twitched into that faint smile again, the same smile he’d given her when she’d beaten him at a game of chess in his office. I won’t. Not unless you ask me to. Not ever again. Rory leaned forward again, her lips brushing his—she’d waited so long for this, so long to feel his lips against hers, so long to have him close, so long to say all the things she’d left unsaid. The flat’s air felt lighter now, filled with the scent of cinnamon, the faint taste of turmeric, and the sweet scent of possibility, the bhangra music from the curry house below fading into the background as they kissed, their lips moving in sync, their hands tangled in each other’s hair, their unsaid things finally being spoken without a single word. Ptolemy meowed once, a soft, sleepy sound, but neither of them paid him any mind—they were too busy memorizing each other’s touches, each other’s scents, each other’s truths, the complicated past melting away into the quiet of Eva’s cramped flat.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2196
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"gently"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2196
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"navigating"
2"throbbed"
3"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"n in love"
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen81
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords2167
ratio0.002
matches
0"Avaros: Demon Realm Unveiled"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions90
wordCount2103
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva10
Avaros6
Brick1
Lane1
Golden2
Empress2
Evan5
Lucien20
Cardiff4
Camden1
You6
Yu1
Fei1
Cheung1
Silas1
Soho1
University1
London3
Demon1
Realm1
Rory14
Highgate1
Ptolemy6
persons
0"Eva"
1"Evan"
2"Lucien"
3"You"
4"Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Silas"
7"Rory"
8"Ptolemy"
places
0"Avaros"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Cardiff"
4"Camden"
5"Soho"
6"London"
7"Highgate"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2167
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"craved that touch"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean43.34
std33.3
cv0.768
sampleLengths
080
14
289
35
444
511
681
75
8118
943
106
1150
127
1384
1416
1569
164
1752
1810
1958
2038
2177
2245
2393
2425
2570
2620
2798
2830
2945
3031
3184
3228
3389
346
3532
3645
3759
3821
3924
4039
4155
423
4326
443
4564
467
4726
4811
49137
91.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences99
matches
0"been huddled"
1"been gone"
2"been handled"
3"gone"
4"being spoken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs362
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount24
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences99
ratio0.192
matches
0"Rory worked the third deadbolt free, her left wrist’s crescent scar pulled tight against the doorframe’s chipped paint—she’d fumbled the first two when the sharp, deliberate knock cut through her sorting of Eva’s research scrolls, each covered in Eva’s scrawled indigo handwriting about the demon realm of Avaros."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber flecked with gold, one black as the demon tongue scrolls on Eva’s shelf—locked on hers before they darted to the scar peeking out from her frayed Golden Empress delivery uniform’s cuff."
2"She shifts her weight, blocking the door’s threshold, her gaze darting to the three deadbolts she’d just undone—proof she’d learned to guard herself after Evan, after Lucien’s disappearance."
3"He stepped forward, his shoulder brushing hers as he pushed past—she didn’t have the strength to hold him back, not when his scent (cinnamon and burnt amber, the same as the night he’d pulled her from a demon’s clawed grasp in the alley behind her flat above Silas’ bar) wrapped around her like a blanket she couldn’t shake."
4"When she turns, Lucien is already navigating the flat’s clutter, his cane tilting to avoid a stack of leather-bound books on demon summoning that teetered by the coat rack—books Eva had borrowed from a supernatural library in Camden."
5"Lucien paused, glancing at the smudges on the linoleum before he knelt—his suit’s knee creasing, a small stain appearing on the fabric that he didn’t seem to notice—and picked up the fallen scrolls, smoothing their frayed edges with a careful hand that spoke of years of handling fragile supernatural documents."
6"She’d called every contact Lucien had ever mentioned—Yu-Fei Cheung, the bar’s Silas, a supernatural tailor in Soho—and all of them had said he’d dropped off the face of the underworld."
7"Lucien stood, the scrolls tucked under his arm, and moved toward the living area—cramped, with a loveseat buried under more research notes, a tattered pre-law textbook (her old Cardiff University one, left at Eva’s when she fled) peeking out from under a scroll."
8"Lucien’s eyes followed it before he looked back at her, his expression softer than she’d ever seen it—softer than when he’d admitted he’d never met his demon father from Avaros."
9"That all the times you’d pulled me from danger—from the imp, from Evan’s supernatural goons, from the collapsed alley behind the restaurant—were just a game to you, a way to pass the time as an information broker."
10"Lucien stood, his suit straightening as he moved toward her—so close she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his platinum hair’s stray strand now fell across his forehead like a secret."
11"Lucien’s hand lifted, his fingers brushing her hair back from her face—his touch was warm, warmer than she remembered, and she didn’t pull away, not when she’d craved that touch for three months."
12"He nodded toward the scrolls on the shelf; Rory glanced over, seeing a single scroll with a small cinnamon stick tied to its edge—his signature mark, the same one he’d left on the map he’d given her the night he’d saved her from the demon alley, a mark she’d missed because she’d been too angry to look at any of Eva’s scrolls after he’d vanished."
13"Lucien’s cane shifted, the ivory handle catching the light from the lamp—she noticed the faint seam along the handle, the one that hid the thin blade he’d never used in front of her."
14"Lucien’s hand dropped to her left wrist, his fingers brushing the scar gently—he’d never touched it before, never asked about it, but now he seemed to be memorizing its shape, its curve."
15"Rory leaned into his touch, her body pressing against his—his suit was crisp, his chest firm, and she could hear his heartbeat, fast and steady, against her ear, a reminder that he was real, that he was here."
16"Rory pulled back, looking into his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black, the same eyes that had haunted her dreams for three months."
17"Rory leaned forward again, her lips brushing his—she’d waited so long for this, so long to feel his lips against hers, so long to have him close, so long to say all the things she’d left unsaid."
18"Ptolemy meowed once, a soft, sleepy sound, but neither of them paid him any mind—they were too busy memorizing each other’s touches, each other’s scents, each other’s truths, the complicated past melting away into the quiet of Eva’s cramped flat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount309
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.038834951456310676
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.003236245954692557
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean21.89
std17.55
cv0.802
sampleLengths
048
132
24
354
435
55
616
728
811
923
1058
115
1280
1338
1443
156
1650
173
184
1915
2039
2130
222
236
248
2543
2626
271
283
293
3049
315
325
3328
3430
352
3617
3719
3834
3927
4016
418
4237
4337
4456
455
4620
4733
4837
495
37.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.20202020202020202
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences94
matches
0"She yanks the door open,"
1"She grips the doorframe."
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber flecked"
3"I didn’t come to beg."
4"She shifts her weight, blocking"
5"You lost the right to"
6"He stepped forward, his shoulder"
7"You’re tracking mud into Eva’s"
8"She won’t mind."
9"I’m here for you."
10"She’d spent three months replaying"
11"She’d called every contact Lucien"
12"I called every contact you"
13"They all said you’d vanished"
14"He sat, his cane leaning"
15"I can explain."
16"She stared at his amber"
17"I don’t want your excuses."
18"I want you to leave."
19"It would have come for"
ratio0.5
13.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences94
matches
0"Rory worked the third deadbolt"
1"She yanks the door open,"
2"She grips the doorframe."
3"Lucien stood on the step,"
4"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber flecked"
5"I didn’t come to beg."
6"Rory’s hand shot to the"
7"She shifts her weight, blocking"
8"You lost the right to"
9"Lucien’s cane tapped the step"
10"He stepped forward, his shoulder"
11"The door slams behind him."
12"Rory twists each deadbolt into"
13"Ptolemy the tabby darted from"
14"You’re tracking mud into Eva’s"
15"Lucien paused, glancing at the"
16"She won’t mind."
17"I’m here for you."
18"Rory crossed her arms, her"
19"She’d spent three months replaying"
ratio0.894
53.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"If I’d told you, the"
ratio0.011
58.11% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She shifts her weight, blocking the door’s threshold, her gaze darting to the three deadbolts she’d just undone—proof she’d learned to guard herself after Evan,…"
1"Rory twists each deadbolt into place, her fingers shaking so bad she misses the second one on the first try, her mind replaying the night he’d vanished: they’d …"
2"When she turns, Lucien is already navigating the flat’s clutter, his cane tilting to avoid a stack of leather-bound books on demon summoning that teetered by th…"
3"Lucien paused, glancing at the smudges on the linoleum before he knelt—his suit’s knee creasing, a small stain appearing on the fabric that he didn’t seem to no…"
4"Rory’s black straight hair fell in her face when she leaned forward, her breath brushing his cheek, the curry house’s turmeric fumes fading into the background …"
5"Lucien’s hand dropped to her left wrist, his fingers brushing the scar gently—he’d never touched it before, never asked about it, but now he seemed to be memori…"
6"Rory pulled back, looking into his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black, the same eyes that had haunted her dreams for three months."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.8271%