"Rory worked the third deadbolt free, her left wrist’s crescent scar pulled tight against the doorframe’s chipped paint—she’d fumbled the first two when the sharp, deliberate knock cut through her sorting of Eva’s research scrolls, each covered in Eva’s scrawled indigo handwriting about the demon realm of Avaros."
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"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber flecked with gold, one black as the demon tongue scrolls on Eva’s shelf—locked on hers before they darted to the scar peeking out from her frayed Golden Empress delivery uniform’s cuff."
2
"She shifts her weight, blocking the door’s threshold, her gaze darting to the three deadbolts she’d just undone—proof she’d learned to guard herself after Evan, after Lucien’s disappearance."
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"He stepped forward, his shoulder brushing hers as he pushed past—she didn’t have the strength to hold him back, not when his scent (cinnamon and burnt amber, the same as the night he’d pulled her from a demon’s clawed grasp in the alley behind her flat above Silas’ bar) wrapped around her like a blanket she couldn’t shake."
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"When she turns, Lucien is already navigating the flat’s clutter, his cane tilting to avoid a stack of leather-bound books on demon summoning that teetered by the coat rack—books Eva had borrowed from a supernatural library in Camden."
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"Lucien paused, glancing at the smudges on the linoleum before he knelt—his suit’s knee creasing, a small stain appearing on the fabric that he didn’t seem to notice—and picked up the fallen scrolls, smoothing their frayed edges with a careful hand that spoke of years of handling fragile supernatural documents."
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"She’d called every contact Lucien had ever mentioned—Yu-Fei Cheung, the bar’s Silas, a supernatural tailor in Soho—and all of them had said he’d dropped off the face of the underworld."
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"Lucien stood, the scrolls tucked under his arm, and moved toward the living area—cramped, with a loveseat buried under more research notes, a tattered pre-law textbook (her old Cardiff University one, left at Eva’s when she fled) peeking out from under a scroll."
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"Lucien’s eyes followed it before he looked back at her, his expression softer than she’d ever seen it—softer than when he’d admitted he’d never met his demon father from Avaros."
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"That all the times you’d pulled me from danger—from the imp, from Evan’s supernatural goons, from the collapsed alley behind the restaurant—were just a game to you, a way to pass the time as an information broker."
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"Lucien stood, his suit straightening as he moved toward her—so close she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his platinum hair’s stray strand now fell across his forehead like a secret."
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"Lucien’s hand lifted, his fingers brushing her hair back from her face—his touch was warm, warmer than she remembered, and she didn’t pull away, not when she’d craved that touch for three months."
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"He nodded toward the scrolls on the shelf; Rory glanced over, seeing a single scroll with a small cinnamon stick tied to its edge—his signature mark, the same one he’d left on the map he’d given her the night he’d saved her from the demon alley, a mark she’d missed because she’d been too angry to look at any of Eva’s scrolls after he’d vanished."
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"Lucien’s cane shifted, the ivory handle catching the light from the lamp—she noticed the faint seam along the handle, the one that hid the thin blade he’d never used in front of her."
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"Lucien’s hand dropped to her left wrist, his fingers brushing the scar gently—he’d never touched it before, never asked about it, but now he seemed to be memorizing its shape, its curve."
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"Rory leaned into his touch, her body pressing against his—his suit was crisp, his chest firm, and she could hear his heartbeat, fast and steady, against her ear, a reminder that he was real, that he was here."
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"Rory pulled back, looking into his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black, the same eyes that had haunted her dreams for three months."
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"Rory leaned forward again, her lips brushing his—she’d waited so long for this, so long to feel his lips against hers, so long to have him close, so long to say all the things she’d left unsaid."
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"Ptolemy meowed once, a soft, sleepy sound, but neither of them paid him any mind—they were too busy memorizing each other’s touches, each other’s scents, each other’s truths, the complicated past melting away into the quiet of Eva’s cramped flat."
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"She shifts her weight, blocking the door’s threshold, her gaze darting to the three deadbolts she’d just undone—proof she’d learned to guard herself after Evan,…"
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"Rory twists each deadbolt into place, her fingers shaking so bad she misses the second one on the first try, her mind replaying the night he’d vanished: they’d …"
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"When she turns, Lucien is already navigating the flat’s clutter, his cane tilting to avoid a stack of leather-bound books on demon summoning that teetered by th…"
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"Lucien paused, glancing at the smudges on the linoleum before he knelt—his suit’s knee creasing, a small stain appearing on the fabric that he didn’t seem to no…"
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"Rory’s black straight hair fell in her face when she leaned forward, her breath brushing his cheek, the curry house’s turmeric fumes fading into the background …"
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"Lucien’s hand dropped to her left wrist, his fingers brushing the scar gently—he’d never touched it before, never asked about it, but now he seemed to be memori…"
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"Rory pulled back, looking into his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black, the same eyes that had haunted her dreams for three months."