| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured grimly [grimly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 91.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1124 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1124 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "comforting" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "anticipation" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "mosaic" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "echoes" | | 11 | "crystalline" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "structure" | | 15 | "constructed" | | 16 | "desire" | | 17 | "pulsed" | | 18 | "loomed" | | 19 | "scanning" | | 20 | "silence" | | 21 | "resonated" | | 22 | "whisper" | | 23 | "complex" | | 24 | "wavered" | | 25 | "cacophony" | | 26 | "charged" | | 27 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.49% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1122 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 938 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.75 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Isolde | 7 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Nyx | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Gluttony" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae-Forged" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed so large a moment ago" | | 1 | "designs that seemed to watch us" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.891 | | wordCount | 1122 | | matches | | 0 | "Not decaying or rotting, but…suspended" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.45% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 32.06 | | std | 15.74 | | cv | 0.491 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 74 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 46 | | 29 | 55 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 15 |
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| 93.57% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "being carved" | | 1 | "were draped" | | 2 | "were snatched" |
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| 77.30% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "were*, gliding" | | 1 | "was nauseating" | | 2 | "were devouring" |
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| 57.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "We passed groves of fruit trees laden with produce I'd only read about in archaic bestiaries - star apples, sun peaches, dragonfruit that pulsed with inner light." | | 1 | "I watched a small, winged creature – a hummingbird, but with scales instead of feathers – sip nectar from a luminescent blossom." | | 2 | "The winged creatures – the scaled hummingbirds – were snatched from the air and consumed in a single gulp." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 940 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange, spice-laden air." |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.043617021276595745 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.023404255319148935 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 11.11 | | std | 6.18 | | cv | 0.556 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 57.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.40594059405940597 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 79.37% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "More like…a subtraction." | | 1 | "Eerily, disturbingly beautiful." |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 67.62% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a question born" | | 1 | "She rarely asked anything directly." | | 2 | "I said, adjusting the weight" | | 3 | "It wouldn’t warm." | | 4 | "We’d followed the readings for" | | 5 | "They simply *were*, gliding through" | | 6 | "I followed, Isolde trailing behind," | | 7 | "It wasn't a transition, not" | | 8 | "I hadn’t expected…this." | | 9 | "I'd anticipated something bleak, something" | | 10 | "Her voice was softer here," | | 11 | "We moved forward, our footsteps" | | 12 | "It led towards a structure" | | 13 | "I murmured, my gaze fixed" | | 14 | "It hadn’t seemed so large" | | 15 | "It seemed to be *expanding*," | | 16 | "I pulled the Heartstone Pendant" | | 17 | "It pulsed faster now, almost" | | 18 | "It loomed closer with every" | | 19 | "We passed groves of fruit" |
| | ratio | 0.381 | |
| 55.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone warmed against my" | | 1 | "Nyx drifted ahead, a smudge" | | 2 | "Isolde’s voice, a chime of" | | 3 | "It wasn’t a question born" | | 4 | "She rarely asked anything directly." | | 5 | "I said, adjusting the weight" | | 6 | "The moonsilver felt perpetually cold," | | 7 | "It wouldn’t warm." | | 8 | "We’d followed the readings for" | | 9 | "The grove wasn’t marked on" | | 10 | "Isolde claimed it shifted, moved" | | 11 | "Nyx didn’t bother with formalities." | | 12 | "They simply *were*, gliding through" | | 13 | "I followed, Isolde trailing behind," | | 14 | "The world swallowed us whole." | | 15 | "It wasn't a transition, not" | | 16 | "The familiar greens and browns" | | 17 | "Amethyst, ochre, a shade of" | | 18 | "The air tasted of cinnamon" | | 19 | "Trees twisted upwards like supplicating" |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing within a circle" | | 1 | "Or, more accurately, to those" | | 2 | "Before us stretched a landscape" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted ahead, a smudge against the deeper gloom, their form flickering as though caught in a perpetual breeze." | | 1 | "They simply *were*, gliding through the final barrier of overgrown ivy as if it wasn’t there." | | 2 | "Trees twisted upwards like supplicating limbs, their bark shimmering with a pearlescent sheen." | | 3 | "It led towards a structure in the distance, a sprawling edifice that resembled a palace constructed from spun sugar and obsidian." | | 4 | "The mosaic underfoot began to shift, forming new patterns, swirling designs that seemed to watch us." | | 5 | "Screams, the clatter of overturned dishes, and a guttural roar that shook the very foundations of the space." | | 6 | "They were devouring everything in their path, tearing apart the suspended meals, gorging themselves until their bodies swelled grotesquely." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx replied, their violet eyes fixed on the structure" | | 1 | "I said, my voice barely a whisper" | | 2 | "Isolde interrupted, her voice cutting through the figure's honeyed tone" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "I murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Isolde interrupted (interrupt)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured grimly (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.417 | |