Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAQ939NGGK3FT8FBMKSWG6

Run Details

Duration:
27.9s
Cost:
$0.000247
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked, a surprisingly loud sequence in the stillness of the evening. Aurora peered through the small peephole, her breath misting the glass. Lucien. Of all the people. She hadn’t seen him in six months, not since… well, since things had imploded with a spectacular, messy crash. She hesitated, her hand hovering over the chain. Part of her wanted to ignore the knocking entirely, to pretend she wasn't home. But another, smaller voice, a persistent thrum beneath her defenses, whispered that ignoring him wouldn't make him disappear. And he had the unnerving habit of not disappearing easily. With a sigh that tasted like dust and regret, she released the chain and pulled the door open a crack. "Lucien," she said, the name a brittle sound. He stood there, bathed in the orange glow of the curry house below, looking impossibly elegant in a charcoal suit that seemed to absorb the light. His platinum blond hair was, as always, slicked back, revealing the sharp angles of his face and the unsettlingly mismatched color of his eyes – amber and black, a constant visual reminder of his fractured heritage. “Aurora,” he replied, his voice a smooth, low murmur, accented with the faintest trace of Marseille. “May I come in?” She didn't offer an invitation, didn't even move to open the door further. “What do you want?” She kept her voice even, though a tight knot had formed in her stomach. He tilted his head, a flicker of something unreadable in his eyes. “A conversation. And perhaps a cup of tea.” “I’m not really in the mood for conversation, Lucien. Or tea.” She started to close the door. His hand, long-fingered and impeccably manicured, shot out and gently stopped the door from closing. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed in the dim light. “Please, Aurora. It’s rather important.” She looked at his hand, then back at his face. There was a seriousness in his gaze she hadn't seen before, a vulnerability that momentarily disarmed her. She opened the door wider. “Fine,” she said, stepping back. “But don't expect a party.” He stepped inside, his movements fluid and graceful. The flat smelled of old paper and Earl Grey, Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, immediately materialized from beneath a pile of scrolls, arching his back and emitting a protesting yowl at the intrusion. “Ptolemy seems displeased,” Lucien observed, offering the cat a cursory glance. “He doesn’t like surprises,” Aurora said, gesturing towards a precarious stack of books. “Or people rummaging through Eva’s research. Which you will not be doing.” He raised an eyebrow, a faint smile playing on his lips. “I assure you, my dear Rory, my intentions are purely conversational.” He surveyed the cluttered space, taking in the overflowing bookshelves, the scattered notes, the general air of organized chaos that was entirely Eva. “Impressive. Your friend clearly possesses a… dedication to her pursuits.” “She does,” Aurora agreed, her voice clipped. She busied herself with the kettle, forcing herself to focus on the mundane task of making tea. The silence stretched, thick with unspoken words, with the ghosts of their past. “So,” Lucien said, breaking the quiet. "Let's talk about why I'm here." Aurora poured the boiling water into a teapot, the sound unusually loud in the small flat. "You always were rather direct, weren’t you?" He leaned against the bookshelf, his cane resting against his leg. "Directness is a virtue, Aurora. Especially when time is of the essence.” She slid two chipped mugs across the small table, handing him one without meeting his eyes. "And what precisely is of the essence?" He took a sip of tea, his eyes fixed on her. "There’s been… activity. Unusual activity. In Avaros." Her hand tightened around her mug. Avaros. His home, the realm of demons. A place she'd only ever heard about in hushed tones, a place that represented everything she didn’t understand about him. "What kind of activity?" "Disturbance," he said, his voice low. "A power shift. Someone, or something, is vying for control." "And this concerns me how?" she asked, hoping to deflect. The less she knew about his world, the better. He set his mug down, the delicate clink echoing in the room. "It concerns us both, Aurora. Because whatever happens in Avaros… it bleeds into this world. And the ripples are already being felt.” Aurora felt a chill run down her spine despite the warmth of the tea. She remembered the night they'd parted, the argument that had ripped through them like a storm. He'd accused her of not understanding him, of keeping him at arm's length. She'd accused him of being a creature of secrets, of never truly letting her in. Perhaps she’d been right. “What kind of ripples?” she pressed. “An increase in… instability,” he explained, choosing his words carefully. "Magical surges. Disappearances. There’s a growing sense of unrest among the… less savory elements of London’s population." "You're saying things are getting dangerous," she said, stating the obvious. "Potentially very dangerous," he confirmed. "And I need your help." She almost laughed. "My help? You're joking, right? I deliver Chinese food and occasionally untangle Eva’s spells. What exactly do you think I can do?” “You’re resourceful, Aurora. Clever. You have a way of seeing things others miss. And," he paused, his gaze locking with hers, "you have a certain… connection to the Veil.” The Veil. The barrier between the human world and the supernatural realm. A connection she’d always tried to ignore, to deny. It was a reminder of the strange, unsettling power that simmered beneath her skin. "I'm not a magician, Lucien," she said, her voice barely a whisper. “You possess a sensitivity, Aurora. A natural affinity. It’s a rare gift, and one that is increasingly valuable.” He leaned forward slightly, his gaze intense. “I need someone who can navigate the shifting currents, someone who isn't bound by the rigid rules of either world." She looked away, focusing on Ptolemy, who was now attempting to knead Lucien’s expensive trousers. “Why me?” she repeated, her voice strained. “Why not go to someone… qualified? One of your contacts?” He shook his head. "Many of my contacts are… compromised. Or simply lack your particular skillset.” He shifted, the movement causing the ivory handle of his cane to glint in the light. “And frankly, Aurora, I trust you.” That stung. Trust. It was a word that had been thrown around between them, a fragile promise broken months ago. She looked up, meeting his gaze. There was a depth in his eyes she hadn't noticed before, a vulnerability that belied his impeccable facade. “And what do you offer in return, Lucien?” she asked, her voice cold. "Besides a chance to relive the past?" He paused, considering her question. The silence stretched, heavy and laden with unspoken history. Finally, he spoke, his voice low and sincere. “A truth, Aurora. And the opportunity to protect the world that you care about. Your world.” He straightened, his gaze unwavering. “And perhaps,” he added, a flicker of something almost like hope in his amber eye, “a chance to salvage what we’ve lost.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
70.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1182
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"gently"
2"precisely"
3"truly"
4"carefully"
5"very"
6"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1182
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"reminder"
count2
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"unspoken"
count2
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"navigate"
count1
15
word"glint"
count1
16
word"facade"
count1
17
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"fractured"
2"stomach"
3"flicker"
4"unreadable"
5"eyebrow"
6"silence"
7"unspoken"
8"echoing"
9"chill"
10"down her spine"
11"warmth"
12"sense of"
13"whisper"
14"navigate"
15"glint"
16"facade"
17"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences79
matches
0"felt a chill"
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1182
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, he spoke, his voice low and sincere."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount822
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.61
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Marseille1
Earl1
Grey1
Ptolemy2
Eva2
Aurora5
Veil1
Lucien4
persons
0"Earl"
1"Grey"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like dust and regret, she released"
1"suit that seemed to absorb the light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1182
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean30.31
std15.16
cv0.5
sampleLengths
048
150
228
362
420
531
620
717
831
942
1039
1111
1225
1355
1437
1512
1623
1723
1823
1918
2037
2116
2219
2334
2462
256
2627
2711
2810
2925
3029
3135
3212
3345
3432
3538
3644
3720
3865
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"been thrown"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences100
ratio0.01
matches
0"His platinum blond hair was, as always, slicked back, revealing the sharp angles of his face and the unsettlingly mismatched color of his eyes – amber and black, a constant visual reminder of his fractured heritage."
98.24% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount822
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.0413625304136253
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.02068126520681265
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean11.82
std7.17
cv0.607
sampleLengths
013
111
21
34
49
510
68
714
818
910
1020
118
1226
1336
1416
154
1613
1718
1812
198
2017
2115
2211
235
2410
2517
265
275
285
298
3031
3111
3213
3312
3411
3534
3610
377
3817
3913
406
416
4216
437
4411
4512
4616
477
4811
497
65.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.41
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners41
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"Perhaps she’d been right."
1"Finally, he spoke, his voice"
ratio0.028
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences72
matches
0"She hadn’t seen him in"
1"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
2"she said, the name a"
3"He stood there, bathed in"
4"His platinum blond hair was,"
5"he replied, his voice a"
6"She didn't offer an invitation,"
7"She kept her voice even,"
8"He tilted his head, a"
9"She started to close the"
10"His hand, long-fingered and impeccably"
11"She looked at his hand,"
12"She opened the door wider."
13"she said, stepping back"
14"He stepped inside, his movements"
15"He raised an eyebrow, a"
16"He surveyed the cluttered space,"
17"She busied herself with the"
18"He leaned against the bookshelf,"
19"She slid two chipped mugs"
ratio0.639
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences72
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked, a surprisingly"
1"Aurora peered through the small"
2"She hadn’t seen him in"
3"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
4"Part of her wanted to"
5"she said, the name a"
6"He stood there, bathed in"
7"His platinum blond hair was,"
8"he replied, his voice a"
9"She didn't offer an invitation,"
10"She kept her voice even,"
11"He tilted his head, a"
12"She started to close the"
13"His hand, long-fingered and impeccably"
14"The ivory handle of his"
15"She looked at his hand,"
16"She opened the door wider."
17"she said, stepping back"
18"He stepped inside, his movements"
19"The flat smelled of old"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He stood there, bathed in the orange glow of the curry house below, looking impossibly elegant in a charcoal suit that seemed to absorb the light."
1"It was a reminder of the strange, unsettling power that simmered beneath her skin."
2"She looked away, focusing on Ptolemy, who was now attempting to knead Lucien’s expensive trousers."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she said, the name a brittle sound"
1"Aurora agreed, her voice clipped"
2"he said, his voice low"
3"she asked, hoping to deflect"
4"he paused, his gaze locking with hers,"
5"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
6"He leaned, his gaze intense"
7"she repeated, her voice strained"
8"she asked, her voice cold"
9"He straightened, his gaze unwavering"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Lucien observed (observe)"
1"Aurora agreed (agree)"
2"she pressed (press)"
3"he explained (explain)"
4"he confirmed (confirm)"
5"she repeated (repeat)"
6"he added (add)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.378
leniency0.756
rawRatio0.412
effectiveRatio0.311
76.2238%