Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAQEZDNFPE6KKF2PVGGAK9

Run Details

Duration:
47.4s
Cost:
$0.001534
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the rusted metal stairs into the bowels of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, her worn leather watch ticking steadily against her left wrist. The air thickened with the stench of damp concrete and something sharper—ozone, like a storm trapped underground. Her torch beam sliced through the gloom, catching graffiti-smeared tiles and coils of exposed wiring dangling like veins from the ceiling. Military precision guided her steps: shoulders square, jaw set sharp as a blade. Eighteen years on the force had honed her to this—unflinching, methodical. PC Ellis had radioed her an hour ago, voice cracking over the line. "Ma'am, you need to see this. It's... not normal. Abandoned station, but there's a market down here? Bodies. And the walls—they're moving." Quinn had dismissed the hysteria at first. Camden's underbelly bred junkies and squatters, not miracles. But the address pinged familiar: a ghost station shuttered since the Blitz, access sealed tighter than a tomb. Forensics techs had cracked the chained gate with bolt cutters, and now yellow tape fluttered in the stale draft, a feeble ward against whatever madness lurked below. She ducked under the tape, boots crunching shattered glass. The platform stretched out, but this wasn't the derelict ruin she'd expected. Makeshift stalls lined the tracks: rickety tables draped in black velvet, laden with jars of glowing sludge, amulets pulsing faint light, books bound in hides that didn't look animal. The Veil Market—whispers of it had crossed her desk before, urban legend peddled by paranoid informants. Bone tokens for entry, they said. Moves every full moon. Quinn's brown eyes narrowed. If this was real, it was the motherlode of black market filth. If not, some elaborate squatters' con. A huddle of uniforms parted as she approached the epicenter: a stall at the platform's edge, overturned crates spilling iridescent powders. Two bodies sprawled amid the debris—a vendor, mid-forties, throat slashed clean across; a buyer, younger, face frozen in a rictus scream, chest caved in like a crushed tin can. Blood pooled black under torchlight, but no spray on the walls, no drag marks. Quinn crouched, gloved fingers hovering over the vendor's neck. Wound too precise, edges cauterized, as if sealed by heat. "Detective Quinn," a familiar voice cut through the murmurs. Eva Kowalski emerged from the shadows, round glasses perched on her freckled nose, curly red hair tamed into a hasty bun. She clutched her worn leather satchel, stuffed with books that bulged the seams. "I consulted for the museum on the initial report. Restricted artifacts down here—banned stuff. This isn't your standard mugging." Quinn straightened, bearing rigid. Eva, 26 to her 41, childhood friend of that slippery suspect Aurora Vale. Occult researcher, Oxford pedigree. Quinn had interviewed her twice last month on unrelated "clique" matters—petty thefts escalating to ritual paraphernalia. Colleague now? Convenient. "Kowalski. You cleared for crime scenes?" Eva tucked a stray curl behind her left ear, green eyes flicking nervously. "British Museum archives liaison. Called in for provenance on the goods. But look." She gestured to the buyer's hand, palm up, fingers curled around a small brass compass, its casing patinaed with verdigris. The face bore etched sigils, protective runes that made Quinn's skin prickle. The needle spun lazily, not north, but toward... nothing. A blank tile on the far wall. "Veil Compass," Eva murmured. "Shade-crafted. Points to rifts—supernatural portals. Bought it off the vendor five minutes before... this." Quinn snapped photos, lens whirring. Evidence didn't add up. Vendor's slash: no weapon nearby. Buyer's chest: ribs shattered inward, no blunt force trauma consistent with fists or pipes. No exit wounds, no blood spatter beyond the pools. And the air—charged, humming faintly, like static before lightning. She paced the stall's perimeter, torch probing shadows. Dust motes swirled unnaturally, coiling toward that blank wall tile. "First take: robbery gone south," PC Ellis ventured, clipboard in hand. Lanky kid, first big scene. "Buyer pulls knife, vendor fights back with some improvised club. Panic, they kill each other." Quinn's jaw tightened. "No. Buyer clutching the compass like a lifeline. Defensive posture—arms up, but no defensive wounds. Vendor facedown, away from the buyer. Wrong angles." Eva nodded, satchel thumping against her hip. "Exactly. And the compass—it's attuned. If it was pointing to a rift..." "Save the ghost stories, Kowalski." Quinn's voice was steel, but her watch hand itched, memory flashing: DS Morris, three years gone. Disappeared mid-case, body never found. Unexplained lights, shadows that moved wrong. Official report: AWOL. Quinn knew better. "Stick to facts. Blood congealed too fast—viscous, almost gelled. Toxicology?" "Pending," Ellis said. "But ma'am, the walls. Techs swear they heard whispers. And this powder—" He toed a shimmering pile. "Burns like acid, but no residue on the bodies." Quinn knelt again, sifting the powder between fingers. Cool, then searing—sigils on the compass mirrored those in the dust. Her gaze tracked the buyer's eyes: pupils blown wide, whites veined black. Not drugs. Not natural. She rose, strode to the blank tile. Torchlight revealed faint cracks, hairline fractures radiating outward, as if something had punched through from the other side. "Compass needle," she said flatly. "Where's it pointing now?" Eva leaned in, breath fogging the glass. "Right here. Dead on." Quinn pressed her palm to the tile. Cold, then a jolt—like static shock amplified. The cracks pulsed faintly, a heartbeat. She withdrew, mind racing. Timeline: Ellis's team arrived 20 minutes post-999 call from a "witness" who bolted. Bodies fresh, rigor not set. But the market—empty now, stalls abandoned mid-haggle. Footprints in the dust led everywhere and nowhere: scuffled, overlapping, then vanishing mid-stride. "Ellis, bag the compass. Dust for prints on every vial." Quinn circled back to the bodies. Vendor's pockets: bone token, engraved with a sigil matching the compass. Entry key. Buyer's wallet: mundane ID, £200 cash untouched. Not robbery. Eva hovered, tucking hair again. "Harlow, listen. Veil Market's no myth. Bone token gets you in—supernatural vetting. Sells rift-touched goods. That compass? It doesn't just point; it pulls. If a rift opened here—" "Rifts." Quinn snorted, but her eyes lingered on the needle, still twitching toward the wall. Deduction clicked: powder burns without residue meant otherworldly heat. Blood gelled from rapid coagulation—cold vacuum? Chest implosion: pressure drop, like explosive decompression. Throat cauterized: plasma edge, not blade. She grabbed Ellis's torch, aimed it at the ceiling. Cobwebs dusted conduits, but one gap—fresh, edges frayed. Something dropped from above? No. She climbed a crate, peered into the duct. Blackness, but a glint: another bone token, wedged deep. "Got your third player," Quinn called down. "Token in the vents. Someone watched." Eva's eyes widened. "Watcher. Shade? Or—" Quinn dropped, boots thudding. "Human. Prints will tell." But the fractures pulsed again, stronger. The compass, now in an evidence bag on Ellis's belt, jerked against the plastic, needle slamming the glass. "Secure that," Quinn barked. Ellis fumbled; the bag split, compass skittering across tiles. Needle locked on the wall—and the cracks spiderwebbed wider. A hiss escaped, air pressure shifting. Dust vortexed inward. "Back!" Quinn shoved Eva behind a stall. The tile exploded outward in a shower of porcelain shards. No body, no weapon—just a shimmer, like heat haze, rippling the air. Whispers slithered out: sibilant, layered, promising secrets. Quinn's pulse hammered, watch ticking louder in her ears. Morris's case—lights in the fog, shadows peeling from walls. This was it. Not ghosts. Rifts. Real. Eva whispered, "Told you. Portal. Buyer activated the compass wrong—pulled something through. Vendor tried to seal it, got slashed by the edge. Watcher fled via vents." Quinn's mind pieced it: compass as trigger, not loot. Buyer tests it, rift cracks open. Entity lashes out—implodes chest, sears throat. Watcher drops token in panic. Evidence "doesn't add up" because half the crime's extradimensional. She advanced on the rift, torch steady. The shimmer recoiled, whispers fading. "Ellis, gas the area. Kowalski—satchel. Got a containment rune?" Eva blinked, then nodded, digging out a dog-eared tome. "Page 47. But Harlow, you're seeing it now." Quinn's sharp jaw clenched. "Facts first. Supernatural second." But as Eva chanted low, sigils glowing on the page, the rift shrank. Quinn holstered her torch, gaze hardening on the compass. Suspects: the clique. Aurora's crew frequented occult dives. This market was their playground. The whispers died. Bodies bagged, stall taped. But Quinn lingered, watch glinting verdigris-green in the dying light. Three years chasing shadows, and now they stared back. The evidence added up—to hell. Ellis radioed SOCO for rift scans—"anomalous readings"—while Eva packed her book, freckles stark against paling skin. "You okay?" Quinn adjusted her cuff, military crisp. "Better than Morris." She turned for the stairs, compass burning a hole in the evidence log. The hunt was on. Clique first. Rifts next. No more unexplained. But as she climbed, the station groaned—a full moon shift? The Market would vanish by dawn. Quinn's brown eyes gleamed. She'd find it again. Bone token or not.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said flatly [flatly]"
1"Quinn circled back [back]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.105
93.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1508
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1508
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"fluttered"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count2
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"standard"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"blown wide"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count2
12
word"racing"
count1
13
word"otherworldly"
count1
14
word"glint"
count1
15
word"porcelain"
count1
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"jaw clenched"
count1
18
word"glinting"
count1
19
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"methodical"
2"familiar"
3"fluttered"
4"shattered"
5"velvet"
6"standard"
7"etched"
8"charged"
9"searing"
10"blown wide"
11"pulsed"
12"racing"
13"otherworldly"
14"glint"
15"porcelain"
16"pulse"
17"jaw clenched"
18"glinting"
19"stark"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences145
matches
0"n in panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences145
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1473
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Bone tokens for entry, they said."
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1167
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity2.23
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn26
Tube1
Camden2
Ellis8
Blitz1
Veil1
Market2
Eva12
Kowalski1
Aurora2
Vale1
Oxford1
Lanky1
Morris2
Disappeared1
Vendor2
Deduction1
Buyer3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Ellis"
4"Blitz"
5"Market"
6"Eva"
7"Kowalski"
8"Aurora"
9"Morris"
10"Vendor"
11"Deduction"
12"Buyer"
places
0"Oxford"
globalScore0.386
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.679
wordCount1473
matches
0"not north, but toward"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean38.76
std22.13
cv0.571
sampleLengths
090
135
260
398
483
562
646
774
818
964
1031
1126
1219
1348
1429
1560
169
1711
1862
1938
2033
2143
2239
2313
246
2532
2631
2736
2825
2926
3035
3121
3217
3343
3431
3518
3633
3728
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs226
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences20
totalSentences162
ratio0.123
matches
0"The air thickened with the stench of damp concrete and something sharper—ozone, like a storm trapped underground."
1"Eighteen years on the force had honed her to this—unflinching, methodical."
2"The Veil Market—whispers of it had crossed her desk before, urban legend peddled by paranoid informants."
3"Two bodies sprawled amid the debris—a vendor, mid-forties, throat slashed clean across; a buyer, younger, face frozen in a rictus scream, chest caved in like a crushed tin can."
4"Quinn had interviewed her twice last month on unrelated \"clique\" matters—petty thefts escalating to ritual paraphernalia."
5"And the air—charged, humming faintly, like static before lightning."
6"Cool, then searing—sigils on the compass mirrored those in the dust."
7"Cold, then a jolt—like static shock amplified."
8"But the market—empty now, stalls abandoned mid-haggle."
9"\"Harlow, listen. Veil Market's no myth. Bone token gets you in—supernatural vetting. Sells rift-touched goods. That compass? It doesn't just point; it pulls. If a rift opened here—\""
10"Blood gelled from rapid coagulation—cold vacuum?"
11"Cobwebs dusted conduits, but one gap—fresh, edges frayed."
12"Ellis fumbled; the bag split, compass skittering across tiles."
13"Needle locked on the wall—and the cracks spiderwebbed wider."
14"No body, no weapon—just a shimmer, like heat haze, rippling the air."
15"Morris's case—lights in the fog, shadows peeling from walls."
16"Entity lashes out—implodes chest, sears throat."
17"The evidence added up—to hell."
18"Ellis radioed SOCO for rift scans—\"anomalous readings\"—while Eva packed her book, freckles stark against paling skin."
19"But as she climbed, the station groaned—a full moon shift?"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount546
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.014652014652014652
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003663003663003663
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean9.09
std6.45
cv0.71
sampleLengths
028
117
221
313
411
513
622
77
88
918
1027
119
1212
1329
1416
156
164
174
1812
196
2021
2129
2214
239
2410
259
2621
2713
2819
294
3013
314
3216
332
341
356
3613
3733
3812
398
401
417
424
4314
445
454
465
4714
489
499
86.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5308641975308642
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners86
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences128
matches
0"Her torch beam sliced through"
1"She ducked under the tape,"
2"She clutched her worn leather"
3"She gestured to the buyer's"
4"She paced the stall's perimeter,"
5"He toed a shimmering pile"
6"Her gaze tracked the buyer's"
7"She rose, strode to the"
8"she said flatly"
9"She withdrew, mind racing."
10"She grabbed Ellis's torch, aimed"
11"She climbed a crate, peered"
12"She advanced on the rift,"
13"She turned for the stairs,"
14"She'd find it again."
ratio0.117
61.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences128
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"The air thickened with the"
2"Her torch beam sliced through"
3"Military precision guided her steps:"
4"PC Ellis had radioed her"
5"Quinn had dismissed the hysteria"
6"Camden's underbelly bred junkies and"
7"Forensics techs had cracked the"
8"She ducked under the tape,"
9"The platform stretched out, but"
10"The Veil Market—whispers of it"
11"Bone tokens for entry, they"
12"Moves every full moon."
13"Quinn's brown eyes narrowed."
14"A huddle of uniforms parted"
15"Blood pooled black under torchlight,"
16"Quinn crouched, gloved fingers hovering"
17"a familiar voice cut through"
18"Eva Kowalski emerged from the"
19"She clutched her worn leather"
ratio0.797
78.13% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences128
matches
0"If this was real, it"
1"If not, some elaborate"
ratio0.016
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Makeshift stalls lined the tracks: rickety tables draped in black velvet, laden with jars of glowing sludge, amulets pulsing faint light, books bound in hides t…"
1"She clutched her worn leather satchel, stuffed with books that bulged the seams."
2"Torchlight revealed faint cracks, hairline fractures radiating outward, as if something had punched through from the other side."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"her watch hand itched, memory flashing: DS Morris, three years gone"
1"Quinn snorted, but her eyes lingered on the needle, still twitching toward the wall"
2"Eva chanted, sigils glowing on the page, the rift shrank"
3"She turned, compass burning a hole in the evidence log"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"Quinn barked (bark)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
3"Eva chanted (chant)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.211
79.3909%