| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.579 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 994 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 994 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "echoes" | | 4 | "palpable" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "sanctuary" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "throb" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "sense of" | | 16 | "quickened" | | 17 | "shimmered" | | 18 | "disrupted" | | 19 | "down her spine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "managed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 986 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 905 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Park | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Guiding | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 3 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Golden" | | 2 | "Guiding" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 0.782 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "quite name, vaguely unsettling" | | 1 | "felt like the world was holding its bre" | | 2 | "sound that seemed to vibrate in her bones" | | 3 | "eyes that seemed to absorb all light" | | 4 | "as if struggling to maintain its form" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 986 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 21.43 | | std | 15.89 | | cv | 0.741 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 47 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 20.76% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d received the pendant a week ago—a plain, unmarked package delivered to Golden Empress." | | 1 | "The echoes of local folklore—a place where time twisted, where the veil between worlds thinned—had always been just stories." | | 2 | "It should have been peaceful—a secluded sanctuary." | | 3 | "There it was again—a soft rustling in the undergrowth." | | 4 | "It had no discernible features – no nose, no mouth, just smooth, pearlescent skin and large, black eyes that seemed to absorb all light." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 913 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.03943044906900329 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013143483023001095 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 8.43 | | std | 4.67 | | cv | 0.554 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 63.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.41025641025641024 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Just trees, and flowers, and" | | 1 | "Just the rustling, drawing nearer." | | 2 | "Just the trees, the flowers," | | 3 | "Then, slowly, they began to" |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her jacket, the" | | 1 | "She’d received the pendant a" | | 2 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 3 | "It should have been peaceful—a" | | 4 | "It felt like the world" | | 5 | "She spun around, searching the" | | 6 | "It was probably just a" | | 7 | "She told herself that." | | 8 | "she muttered, the sound swallowed" | | 9 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 10 | "It hadn’t reacted before, not" | | 11 | "She listened intently, straining to" | | 12 | "she called out, her voice" | | 13 | "It sounded alien, brittle, in" | | 14 | "She took a tentative step" | | 15 | "She squinted, trying to make" | | 16 | "She continued down the path," | | 17 | "She felt exposed, vulnerable, like" | | 18 | "They danced and swayed, their" | | 19 | "She stumbled, catching herself on" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 52.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gates groaned open," | | 1 | "Rory gripped the Heartstone Pendant," | | 2 | "Richmond Park at night was" | | 3 | "She tightened her jacket, the" | | 4 | "She’d received the pendant a" | | 5 | "The benefactor, whoever they were," | | 6 | "The ancient oak standing stones," | | 7 | "The echoes of local folklore—a" | | 8 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 9 | "The air shifted, immediate and" | | 10 | "The sharp bite of the" | | 11 | "Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant in the" | | 12 | "An hour ago, Richmond Park" | | 13 | "something she couldn't quite name," | | 14 | "Rory scanned the clearing." | | 15 | "Moonlight filtered through the canopy," | | 16 | "It should have been peaceful—a" | | 17 | "It felt like the world" | | 18 | "A twig snapped." | | 19 | "Rory froze, heart hammering against" |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the air vibrated with" | | 1 | "Now, the warmth intensified, radiating" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 51.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her jacket, the wind a whisper against her neck that didn’t feel quite natural." | | 1 | "She moved deeper into the Grove, following an overgrown path that snaked between ancient trees." | | 2 | "The wildflowers brushed against her boots, releasing a cloying perfume that made her head spin." | | 3 | "It had no discernible features – no nose, no mouth, just smooth, pearlescent skin and large, black eyes that seemed to absorb all light." | | 4 | "A wide, unnatural smile that revealed rows of needle-sharp teeth." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice barely a whisper" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice shaking" | | 2 | "the figure said, its voice taking on a colder tone" | | 3 | "Rory asked, her voice trembling" | | 4 | "It paused, its black eyes fixing on her" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "the figure interrupted (interrupt)" | | 4 | "the figure whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.526 | |