| 43.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Rory asked suspiciously [suspiciously]" | | 2 | "Lucien corrected smoothly [smoothly]" | | 3 | "He paused then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.49 | | leniency | 0.98 | | rawRatio | 0.16 | | effectiveRatio | 0.157 | |
| 92.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "simmering" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "glinting" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "gleaming" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "unspoken" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "eyebrow" | | 13 | "predator" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "clandestine" | | 17 | "down her spine" | | 18 | "racing" | | 19 | "intricate" | | 20 | "unreadable" | | 21 | "fractured" | | 22 | "weight" | | 23 | "whisper" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her fists" | | 1 | "hung in the air" | | 2 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.87% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "managed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1313 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "I" | | 1 | "chaos on a scale London has never seen" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 866 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.31 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 20 | | Eva | 2 | | Marseille | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.345 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.762 | | wordCount | 1313 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a polite tap, but a forceful insistence" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 26.26 | | std | 13.29 | | cv | 0.506 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 48 | | 40 | 52 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | | |
| 23.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "The hallway reeked of simmering cumin and stale beer—a familiar scent she’d grown accustomed to living above Silas’ bar." | | 1 | "One eye amber, the other black—a constant, jarring reminder of what he was, of the world she tried to ignore." | | 2 | "A flicker of something—amusement, perhaps?—crossed his face." | | 3 | "The image of Evan flashed in her mind – a pathetic, volatile man she barely managed to escape." | | 4 | "But the thought of what he said – *chaos on a scale London has never seen* – was worse." |
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| 97.41% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 523 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.040152963671128104 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.022944550669216062 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 10.94 | | std | 6.31 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 55.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 38.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Just stepped inside, his presence" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 59.08% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She braced herself and pulled" | | 1 | "He filled the doorway, charcoal" | | 2 | "He hadn't aged." | | 3 | "she stated, voice flat" | | 4 | "He offered a small, almost" | | 5 | "He didn't close the door." | | 6 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 7 | "she retorted, gesturing around the" | | 8 | "His gaze lingered on her," | | 9 | "she snapped, then immediately regretted" | | 10 | "She was letting him get" | | 11 | "He pushed off the doorframe," | | 12 | "she said quietly, turning away" | | 13 | "He ignored her, his eyes" | | 14 | "He paused, his voice dropping" | | 15 | "he paused, a ghost of" | | 16 | "He raised an eyebrow, feigning" | | 17 | "He circled her slowly, like" | | 18 | "He stopped directly in front" | | 19 | "His amber eye seemed to" |
| | ratio | 0.402 | |
| 23.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The hallway reeked of simmering" | | 1 | "Rory wrestled with the deadbolt," | | 2 | "A persistent knocking rattled the" | | 3 | "She braced herself and pulled" | | 4 | "He filled the doorway, charcoal" | | 5 | "Platinum hair slicked back, the" | | 6 | "He hadn't aged." | | 7 | "Rory blinked, shoving a stray" | | 8 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her" | | 9 | "A childish thing compared to" | | 10 | "she stated, voice flat" | | 11 | "He offered a small, almost" | | 12 | "He didn't close the door." | | 13 | "Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, shot from" | | 14 | "Lucien barely registered the cat," | | 15 | "Rory asked, pushing past him," | | 16 | "The air, thick with the" | | 17 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 18 | "she retorted, gesturing around the" | | 19 | "A flicker of something—amusement, perhaps?—crossed" |
| | ratio | 0.874 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Still impossibly elegant, still radiating a controlled power that had both fascinated and terrified her." | | 1 | "The botched ritual, the near-disaster in Marseille, the fallout that had scattered them both to the winds." | | 2 | "But there was something in his expression, a flicker of genuine concern, that gave her pause." | | 3 | "And there was that familiar pull, that undeniable attraction, that had always drawn her to him, despite everything." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she stated, voice flat" | | 1 | "He paused, his voice dropping a register" | | 2 | "he paused, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips," | | 3 | "Rory challenged, refusing to back down" | | 4 | "he said, his voice low and intense," | | 5 | "he added, his gaze locking with hers," | | 6 | "she asked, the resistance draining from her" | | 7 | "Rory said, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she stated (state)" | | 1 | "she retorted (retort)" | | 2 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 3 | "Rory challenged (challenge)" | | 4 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 5 | "he added (add)" | | 6 | "Lucien corrected smoothly (correct)" | | 7 | "Rory mumbled (mumble)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.275 | | leniency | 0.549 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.314 | |