Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAR3NHQMCF60GMV1W8KP4W

Run Details

Duration:
22.1s
Cost:
$0.001110
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hums with the murmur of drunkards and the clink of whiskey glasses. The green neon sign above the door bleeds through the smudged window, painting the wet pavement outside in sickly light. Rory Carter is behind the bar, wiping down a sticky mahogany counter with a rag that reeks of lemon and gin. Her hair, still black but faded at the roots, is pulled back with a rubber band that’s seen better days. The scar on her left wrist—crescent-shaped, a ghost from a childhood fall off a tree—glints as she twists the rag. Yu-Fei, the restaurant owner, called an hour ago. *“Rory, rush. Big order to Covent Garden. Doritos—*a lot*—and beer. Don’t be late or I’ll feed you to the dragon maps.”* The dragon maps are the framed prints on the walls, curled at the edges, labeled in faded ink. Rory doubts Yu-Fei actually owns a dragon, but the woman’s threats are sharp enough to count. She checks her watch—20 past nine—and grabs her jacket, slinging it over her arm. Leaves the rag on the bar, sticky residue smearing across the wood. The bell above the door jingles. Rory pauses, half-glancing up. A woman stands there, rain beading on her coat, blocking the green light. She’s taller than Rory remembers, broad-shouldered, hair cut shorter than a boy’s, streaked with silver at the temples. Her face is a puzzle—familiar bones, a mouth that’s set too firm, eyes that narrow like she’s trying to place a voice. Rory’s throat tightens. *Not here.* Not after— “Rory?” The name comes out as a question, rough. The woman steps farther into the bar, shaking rain from her coat. Neon light flickers over her: hazel eyes, a split lip, a small tattoo of a raven on her right cheekbone, peeking over her ear. *Oh.* Oh. Rory’s hands freeze around her jacket lapel. Eva. *Eva Morgan.* They’d been inseparable at Cardiff University—shared a bed, a bottle of cheap wine, a dream of moving to Paris together. Then Rory left Evan, the one with the bruise on her wrist and the voice that cracked when he lied. Then Eva sent that postcard—*Come. I can help. Safe.* And Rory took the train, left everything behind. Except Eva. Eva pushes a strand of silver-streaked hair behind her ear. “Youyou look smaller. Like a kid who forgot to grow.” Rory’s mouth opens. Closes. She grabs the rag, dabs at the bar again, too hard. The lemon stings her nose. “You look like you’ve been *fighting*,” she says. Not a question. Eva has always been a fighter—kicked a policeman once for making a comment about Rory’s skirt. Eva snorts. “Fighting’s the only thing that keeps the dead quiet. C’mon, sit. I bought you a drink.” She nods to the corner table, where a half-empty whiskey glass sits, condensation pooling on the table. Rory hesitates. The bar’s too loud, the rain too loud, the way Eva says *I bought you a drink* too soft. She steps closer, eyeing the glass. “You didn’t know I’d be here.” “Figured. Silas talks. About you. Sometimes.” Eva’s voice drops. “He doesn’t talk much these days. Says the world’s too loud for secrets.” Rory’s jaw tightens. Silas. The former spymaster, the man who taught her to read a room, who fixed the boiler when her radiator exploded, who never asked questions—at least, not out loud. He’d found her in London, lost and shivering, and said, “Flat above the bar’s free. Work three nights a week here. We call it even.” Even. As if chasing down debtors and delivering dumplings could pay back a man who gave her a roof. “Silas still limps when he climbs stairs. Told him to get a cane. He said a cane makes you look like a *spymaster*.” She sits, hard, the chair scraping the floor. Eva slid the whiskey glass over; Rory wraps her hands around it, warm through the condensation. Eva leans forward, elbows on the table. “How’s the delivery gig? Still delivering Doritos to drunks?” “Better than law school. No essays. No *Evan*.” The words come out sharper than she means. Eva flinches. Rory’s chest tightens. *Sorry. I didn’t mean—* Eva shakes her head. “I know. He was a piece of work. Your dad… Brendan. He called me after you left. Said you’d been crying for three days. Said you’d hidden in your room, wouldn’t eat, and when he tried to talk to you, you said, *‘He breaks things. And then he says he’s sorry. And I believe him. I always do.’*” Her voice cracks. “I took that postcard and I drove to Cardiff. Sat outside your flat for three hours. Watched a car pull up—Evan, with a flower. You let him in. I drove home.” Rory’s throat burns. She takes a drink of whiskey, too fast. It burns her chest. “You should have tried harder. I would have—” “*You couldn’t have*.” Eva’s voice is quiet, but fierce. “You were broken, Rory. Like a record scratch. I didn’t know how to fix it. Didn’t know if I *wanted* to fix it. What if fixing it meant you stopped being *you*?” She pauses, stares at the table. “You were so *alive* back then. Like the world was a story you were writing, and you’d just found the best chapter.” Rory stares at her. The world a story. She used to write poetry—bad, sappy stuff, about stars and sunsets. Evan laughed at her, once. Said poets were for people who didn’t have to *live*. She stopped writing. Stopped singing. Stopped being alive, by degrees. “You still write?” Eva asks. Rory blinks. “No. Why?” Eva taps the scar on her own wrist—thinner, paler than Rory’s. “I got into a fight in a bar in Dublin. A man called me a ‘stupid Welsh girl.’ He grabbed my wrist. I broke his nose with a beer bottle. The nurse asked if I needed stitches. I said, *‘No. My sister would have.’*” Rory’s hand flies to her throat. There, against her skin, is a silver chain—thin, delicate, a tiny locket. She’d forgotten she was wearing it. Evan had given it to her, on their sixth month anniversary. *“For my angel,”* he’d said. She’d worn it every day until the night he hit her, and she’d taken it off, dropped it in the Thames, and watched it sink. *“Lost,”* she’d told Yu-Fei, who’d handed her a rag and said, *“Good. Get another one. Better.”* “I still have the locket,” she says, stupidly. Eva smiles, wet and fragile. “Me too. Inside, there’s a photo. Of us. In the park, your birthday. We were 19. You’d just aced your history exam, and you were eating a doughnut, and you looked like you could conquer the world.” Rory’s vision blurs. She looks down at the whiskey glass. “I’m sorry I didn’t write. I’m sorry I didn’t call. I’m sorry I—” “—left everything behind?” Eva finishes. “I know. And I’m sorry I didn’t chase you. I stayed in Cardiff, and I became a teacher. Tried to save kids from the same things you saved me from. And… it worked. For a while. But they start to see you. The one who flinches when someone raises their voice. The one who still has nightmares about men with hands. And I can’t save them. Not if I’m hiding from my own ghosts.” A loud crash from the kitchen. Rory startles. Yu-Fei’s voice: *“Rory! You said you’d be here in ten minutes! The Doritos—*hurry*!”* Rory stands, knocking over her chair. She fumbles for her jacket, but stops. “I have to go. But—” Eva stands too, quick. “Call me. Sometime. Not Silas. Not the bar. *You*.” She pulls a crumpled piece of paper from her pocket, slides it across the table. A phone number, written in neat, looping script. “I’ll wait. For a month. If I don’t hear from you, I’ll come to London. And I’ll *drag* you to Paris. We can write that story. Together.” Rory takes the paper, her fingers brushing Eva’s. They both flinch, like it’s an electric shock. “Go,” Eva says, pushing her toward the door. “Before Yu-Fei sends a mob after you. And… Rory? You don’t have to be a hero anymore. Just… *you*.” The bell jingles again. Rory steps outside, rain hitting her face. She tucks the paper into her jacket pocket, next to the scar. The neon sign blares green, washing the street in sickness. She pulls out the whiskey glass, takes one last sip. The whiskey burns, but it’s warm, deep in her chest. Somewhere, a clock chimes. Ten o’clock. She turns, walks down the street, toward the restaurant, toward the flat above the bar, toward Silas’ quiet nods and Yu-Fei’s threats. The paper in her pocket grows heavy. She smiles. Just a little.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:09:36.701Z" 2/20/2026, 8:09:36 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She sits hard [hard]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.059
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
69.86% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans26
markdownWords95
totalWords1460
ratio0.065
matches
0"“Rory, rush. Big order to Covent Garden. Doritos—"
1"—and beer. Don’t be late or I’ll feed you to the dragon maps.”"
2"Not here."
3"Oh."
4"Eva Morgan."
5"Come. I can help. Safe."
6"fighting"
7"I bought you a drink"
8"spymaster"
9"Evan"
10"Sorry. I didn’t mean—"
11"‘He breaks things. And then he says he’s sorry. And I believe him. I always do.’"
12"You couldn’t have"
13"wanted"
14"you"
15"alive"
16"live"
17"‘No. My sister would have.’"
18"“For my angel,”"
19"“Lost,”"
20"“Good. Get another one. Better.”"
21"“Rory! You said you’d be here in ten minutes! The Doritos—"
22"!”"
23"You"
24"drag"
25"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount903
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory24
Yu-Fei4
Oh2
Cardiff1
University1
Paris1
Evan3
Eva21
London1
Thames1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"University"
5"Evan"
6"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Paris"
2"London"
3"Thames"
globalScore0.171
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"As if chasing down debtors and delivering dumplings could pay back a man who gave her a roof"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1460
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"sent that postcard—*Come"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean40.56
std28.11
cv0.693
sampleLengths
096
189
270
31
446
569
621
747
835
933
1022
1176
1247
1316
1425
1596
1623
1769
1844
195
204
2155
2281
238
2442
2523
2679
2721
2818
2963
3016
3127
3253
3335
342
353
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"is pulled"
1"seen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was wearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences125
ratio0.104
matches
0"The scar on her left wrist—crescent-shaped, a ghost from a childhood fall off a tree—glints as she twists the rag."
1"She checks her watch—20 past nine—and grabs her jacket, slinging it over her arm."
2"Her face is a puzzle—familiar bones, a mouth that’s set too firm, eyes that narrow like she’s trying to place a voice."
3"*Not here.* Not after—"
4"*Eva Morgan.* They’d been inseparable at Cardiff University—shared a bed, a bottle of cheap wine, a dream of moving to Paris together."
5"Then Eva sent that postcard—*Come."
6"Eva has always been a fighter—kicked a policeman once for making a comment about Rory’s skirt."
7"The former spymaster, the man who taught her to read a room, who fixed the boiler when her radiator exploded, who never asked questions—at least, not out loud."
8"Eva slid the whiskey glass over; Rory wraps her hands around it, warm through the condensation."
9"I didn’t mean—*"
10"She used to write poetry—bad, sappy stuff, about stars and sunsets."
11"Eva taps the scar on her own wrist—thinner, paler than Rory’s."
12"There, against her skin, is a silver chain—thin, delicate, a tiny locket."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount911
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.027442371020856202
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003293084522502744
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean11.68
std11.6
cv0.993
sampleLengths
015
120
221
320
420
58
639
716
814
912
106
114
1213
1318
1422
153
164
171
188
1912
2024
212
227
231
2422
2520
265
273
289
292
3010
3111
323
331
3411
355
368
373
3816
392
4033
412
4219
436
446
459
4613
473
481
4928
46.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.336
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"Then Rory left Evan, the"
1"Then Eva sent that postcard—*Come."
2"Somewhere, a clock chimes."
3"Just a little."
ratio0.044
95.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences90
matches
0"Her hair, still black but"
1"She checks her watch—20 past"
2"She’s taller than Rory remembers,"
3"Her face is a puzzle—familiar"
4"I can help."
5"She grabs the rag, dabs"
6"She nods to the corner"
7"She steps closer, eyeing the"
8"He’d found her in London,"
9"She sits, hard, the chair"
10"I didn’t mean—*"
11"Her voice cracks"
12"She takes a drink of"
13"It burns her chest."
14"She pauses, stares at the"
15"She used to write poetry—bad,"
16"She stopped writing."
17"She’d forgotten she was wearing"
18"She’d worn it every day"
19"she’d told Yu-Fei, who’d handed"
ratio0.311
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences90
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hums with"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"Rory Carter is behind the"
3"Her hair, still black but"
4"The scar on her left"
5"Yu-Fei, the restaurant owner, called"
6"The dragon maps are the"
7"Rory doubts Yu-Fei actually owns"
8"She checks her watch—20 past"
9"Leaves the rag on the"
10"The bell above the door"
11"Rory pauses, half-glancing up."
12"A woman stands there, rain"
13"She’s taller than Rory remembers,"
14"Her face is a puzzle—familiar"
15"Rory’s throat tightens."
16"The name comes out as"
17"The woman steps farther into"
18"Neon light flickers over her:"
19"Rory’s hands freeze around her"
ratio0.889
55.56% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"As if chasing down debtors"
ratio0.011
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A woman stands there, rain beading on her coat, blocking the green light."
1"Her face is a puzzle—familiar bones, a mouth that’s set too firm, eyes that narrow like she’s trying to place a voice."
2"The former spymaster, the man who taught her to read a room, who fixed the boiler when her radiator exploded, who never asked questions—at least, not out loud."
3"As if chasing down debtors and delivering dumplings could pay back a man who gave her a roof."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she says, stupidly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she’d (would)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.147
leniency0.294
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.059
84.5237%