"The flat was a sanctuary of sorts tonight—Eva was out chasing leads on some obscure occult artifact, leaving Rory to housesit and sift through the chaos of notes and scrolls that spilled across every surface like an academic avalanche."
1
"It was late—past midnight on a drizzly Brick Lane evening—and unannounced visitors in East London rarely meant good news."
2
"Those eyes—one amber, one black—stared directly at the door as if he could sense her scrutiny."
3
"Then the betrayal—or was it abandonment?"
4
"Rain had beaded on his shoulders, darkening the wool of his jacket, but he didn't look diminished—only more real, more dangerously close."
5
"He didn't push forward, respecting the barrier she'd erected, but his amber eye flickered with something warmer than calculation—regret, perhaps, or longing."
6
"The cane tapped lightly against the worn floorboards as he surveyed the room—the towers of books teetering on shelves, scrolls unrolled across the sofa like forbidden maps, research notes pinned haphazardly to the walls."
7
"Complicated terms—that's what she'd called their parting in her own mind, replaying the scene a hundred times."
8
"She handed him the mug, their fingers brushing—electric, inevitable."
9
"Attraction had bloomed fast—stolen glances over pints at the bar, late-night walks along the Thames where he'd shared fragments of his Marseille childhood, the demon father who'd cursed him with duality."
10
"Attraction reignited—his scent of sandalwood and rain, the way his black eye seemed to swallow secrets, the amber one promising light."
11
"The kiss started tentative—his lips brushing hers like a question."
12
"The flat's clutter surrounded them like a cocoon—books whispering forgotten lore, the cat watching from afar."
13
"Attraction, hurt, words unsaid—they converged in the quiet space between heartbeats, forcing them together not by chance, but by the inexorable pull of what they'd always been."
14
"They talked then—really talked."
15
"No more parting on complicated terms; this was a reunion, raw and real."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
80
technicalSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"Against every instinct screaming caution, she slid the chain free and turned the deadbolts with a series of metallic clicks that echoed too loudly in the crampe…"
1
"His lips quirked, a ghost of the smile that had once unraveled her defenses."
2
"Complicated terms—that's what she'd called their parting in her own mind, replaying the scene a hundred times."
3
"Attraction had been fire: his touch igniting sparks she'd never known, his half-demon heritage making every kiss feel like tempting fate."
4
"Memories flooded: the first time he'd approached her, offering intel on her ex Evan's shady dealings, his hand lingering on hers just a second too long."
5
"Attraction had bloomed fast—stolen glances over pints at the bar, late-night walks along the Thames where he'd shared fragments of his Marseille childhood, the …"
6
"They'd fallen into bed one rain-soaked night, his body pressing her into silk sheets, his lips tracing the scar on her wrist like a vow."
7
"That had fractured when the Avaros demons came calling, pulling him back to his realm's obligations, leaving her to face the human authorities alone."
8
"Rory melted into it, her arms winding around his neck, the cane clattering forgotten to the floor."