Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYARFG3XTTGPRP0766345NQ

Run Details

Duration:
9.6s
Cost:
$0.000508
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air smelled like honeyed wine and something older—something that had been fermenting in the dark for centuries. Aurora Carter exhaled slowly, her fingers tightening around the worn leather of her messenger bag. The pendant at her throat, the one she’d found tucked into a book in Silas’s bar, pulsed faintly against her skin, warm as a living thing. She hadn’t told anyone about it. Not even Nyx, who moved through the world like a question mark in the corner of her vision, flickering in and out of solidity as if the air itself couldn’t decide whether to hold them. Isolde had warned her. *"The Veil thins at the solstice,"* the Half-Fae seer had murmured, her silver hair catching the dappled light of the Grove. *"But this… this is not the thinning. This is a tear."* She’d pressed the cold, slender blade into Aurora’s palm, the moonsilver edge biting just enough to draw a single bead of blood. *"For when the shadows call, you must answer."* Now, standing at the edge of this place, Aurora understood why. The ground beneath her boots was soft, yielding like damp earth, but not quite. It gave way beneath her weight, shifting as if alive, and she had to force herself not to sink. The trees here were not trees at all—towering, gnarled things with bark like cracked porcelain, their branches heavy with fruit she didn’t recognize. Some were plump and ripe, others withered and blackened, as if plucked from a feast long abandoned. The air hummed with a low, resonant vibration, like the note of a cello stretched too thin, and the sound of it made her teeth ache. Nyx was already moving forward, their form solidifying just enough to step over a fallen branch. *"This is Dymas,"* they whispered, their voice carrying on the wind. *"The realm of Belphegor."* Aurora’s breath hitched. *Gluttony.* The sin had a flavor, she realized—sweet and cloying, like too much sugar left in the mouth. She swallowed, her throat dry. *"We’re not supposed to be here."* *"No,"* Nyx agreed, their shadow stretching long and thin as they turned, eyes glowing faint violet. *"But neither are we supposed to be alive."* Isolde had come last, her silver hair catching the golden light filtering through the canopy. She moved without sound, her bare feet leaving no impression in the earth. *"The Veil is weakest here,"* she said, her voice like the rustle of leaves. *"But it is not broken. Not yet."* She extended a hand, and Aurora took it, the contact sending a jolt of something electric up her arm. The pendant burned against her skin. The deeper they went, the stranger the world became. The trees here were not just gnarled—they were *alive* in a way that made her skin prickle. Their bark pulsed faintly, like veins beneath skin, and the fruit hanging from their branches swayed as if in a breeze that wasn’t there. Some of the fruit was familiar—peaches, figs, grapes—but others were monstrous things, swollen and misshapen, their skins split open to reveal flesh that glowed faintly, like bioluminescent jellyfish. A few had already fallen, landing with a wet *thud* in the undergrowth, and the moment they hit, the earth around them seemed to *drink* them in, the soil parting like lips to swallow them whole. Aurora’s stomach twisted. *"What the hell is that?"* Nyx crouched, their shadow pooling around a particularly grotesque fruit—round, the size of a melon, with a skin like cracked amber and a single, milky eye embedded in the center. *"A Helbound memory,"* they murmured. *"The souls here are not just trapped. They are… repurposed."* They plucked the fruit from the branch, the stem giving way with a wet *pop*. The moment it touched their palm, the eye in the fruit blinked open, slow and deliberate. Nyx recoiled, dropping it. The fruit hit the ground and *exploded* in a burst of blackened petals, the scent of burnt sugar filling the air. Aurora stumbled back, her heart hammering. *"Did you just—?"* *"Summon something?"* Nyx’s voice was tight. *"No. But it was close."* Isolde’s fingers brushed Aurora’s wrist, her touch cool against the heat of the pendant. *"The fruit is not the danger,"* she said. *"It is the *hunger*."* A sound cut through the air—a low, guttural growl, like a thousand voices speaking at once. Aurora spun, her hand instinctively going to the dagger at her belt, the moonsilver blade cold against her palm. Between the trees, something *moved*. Not a person. Not quite an animal. Something *else*. Tall, emaciated, its limbs too long, its skin stretched tight over bones that seemed to *click* as it shifted. Its mouth was a lipless gash, filled with needle-like teeth, and its eyes—oh, its eyes—were hollow pits, reflecting nothing. *"A Glutton,"* Isolde breathed. The thing let out another growl, a sound that made Aurora’s teeth ache, and then it *laughed*, a sound like breaking glass and shattering bones. *"You should not have come,"* it hissed, its voice layered with a dozen others, overlapping, warping. *"This is not a place for mortals."* Aurora’s fingers tightened around the dagger. *"We’re not here to stay."* The Glutton tilted its head, its hollow eyes locking onto her. *"No,"* it echoed. *"But you will be hungry."* Nyx stepped forward, their shadow stretching like a living thing, coiling around the creature’s legs. *"Move,"* they commanded, their voice sharp. *"Now."* The Glutton snarled, its body *twisting*, its limbs elongating, stretching toward Nyx. Aurora didn’t think—she *moved*, lunging forward with the dagger, the moonsilver edge flashing as she drove it into the creature’s side. The blade passed through flesh like butter, and the Glutton let out a shriek that made the ground tremble. It recoiled, its form flickering, unstable, as if the very air was rejecting it. *"Run,"* Isolde urged, her voice urgent. They didn’t need to be told twice. The trees closed in around them, the branches twisting like grasping hands, the fruit falling from them like rain. Aurora’s lungs burned, her legs pounding through the soft, yielding earth, the pendant at her throat pulsing in time with her heartbeat. Behind her, she could hear the Glutton’s laughter, high and keening, the sound of it making her skin crawl. Then, just as suddenly as it had begun, the world *shifted*. The trees dissolved into mist, the air clearing like a breath held too long. They stood in a clearing, the sky above them a warm amber, the air thick with the scent of roasting meat and spiced wine. In the distance, a grand feast hall loomed, its towers reaching for the heavens, its banners snapping in a wind that didn’t exist. And at its center, a figure stood—tall, regal, his crown wreathed in flames. Prince Belphegor. Aurora’s breath caught. *"We’re not supposed to be here."* Nyx exhaled sharply, their form flickering. *"We’re not."* Isolde’s hand found Aurora’s shoulder, her grip firm. *"We are not welcome,"* she said. *"But we are not alone."* And then the doors of the feast hall swung open, and the Glutton stepped through, its form now *human*—a man, gaunt and hollow-eyed, his mouth stretched in a grin too wide for his face. *"Ah,"* he said, his voice dripping with honeyed malice. *"Guests."* Aurora’s fingers tightened around the dagger. *"We’re leaving."* Nyx stepped between them, their shadow stretching like a barrier. *"Not yet."* The Glutton laughed, the sound echoing through the clearing, through the trees, through the very air. *"Oh, but you will."*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1257
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"suddenly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1257
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"porcelain"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"pounding"
count1
8
word"loomed"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"weight"
2"porcelain"
3"electric"
4"familiar"
5"stomach"
6"echoed"
7"pounding"
8"loomed"
9"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans50
markdownWords166
totalWords1243
ratio0.134
matches
0"\"The Veil thins at the solstice,\""
1"\"But this… this is not the thinning. This is a tear.\""
2"\"For when the shadows call, you must answer.\""
3"\"This is Dymas,\""
4"\"The realm of Belphegor.\""
5"Gluttony."
6"\"We’re not supposed to be here.\""
7"\"No,\""
8"\"But neither are we supposed to be alive.\""
9"\"The Veil is weakest here,\""
10"\"But it is not broken. Not yet.\""
11"alive"
12"thud"
13"drink"
14"\"What the hell is that?\""
15"\"A Helbound memory,\""
16"\"The souls here are not just trapped. They are… repurposed.\""
17"pop"
18"exploded"
19"\"Did you just—?\""
20"\"Summon something?\""
21"\"No. But it was close.\""
22"\"The fruit is not the danger,\""
23"\"It is the *hunger"
24"moved"
25"else"
26"click"
27"\"A Glutton,\""
28"laughed"
29"\"You should not have come,\""
30"\"This is not a place for mortals.\""
31"\"We’re not here to stay.\""
32"\"No,\""
33"\"But you will be hungry.\""
34"\"Move,\""
35"\"Now.\""
36"twisting"
37"moved"
38"\"Run,\""
39"shifted"
40"\"We’re not supposed to be here.\""
41"\"We’re not.\""
42"\"We are not welcome,\""
43"\"But we are not alone.\""
44"human"
45"\"Ah,\""
46"\"Guests.\""
47"\"We’re leaving.\""
48"\"Not yet.\""
49"\"Oh, but you will.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1091
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Silas1
Nyx10
Half-Fae1
Grove1
Aurora16
Isolde6
Glutton6
Belphegor1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Nyx"
3"Aurora"
4"Isolde"
5"Glutton"
6"Belphegor"
places
0"Grove"
globalScore0.767
windowScore0.833
29.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like honeyed wine and something ol"
1"not quite"
2"bones that seemed to click* as it shifted"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1243
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean36.56
std33.68
cv0.921
sampleLengths
0100
166
211
399
431
532
624
774
8114
98
10101
119
1211
1326
1487
154
1648
1711
1819
1922
2066
216
227
2360
2411
2574
262
279
288
2919
3044
318
3212
3320
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs196
matches
0"was rejecting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences100
ratio0.11
matches
0"The air smelled like honeyed wine and something older—something that had been fermenting in the dark for centuries."
1"The trees here were not trees at all—towering, gnarled things with bark like cracked porcelain, their branches heavy with fruit she didn’t recognize."
2"*Gluttony.* The sin had a flavor, she realized—sweet and cloying, like too much sugar left in the mouth."
3"The trees here were not just gnarled—they were *alive* in a way that made her skin prickle."
4"Some of the fruit was familiar—peaches, figs, grapes—but others were monstrous things, swollen and misshapen, their skins split open to reveal flesh that glowed faintly, like bioluminescent jellyfish."
5"Nyx crouched, their shadow pooling around a particularly grotesque fruit—round, the size of a melon, with a skin like cracked amber and a single, milky eye embedded in the center."
6"A sound cut through the air—a low, guttural growl, like a thousand voices speaking at once."
7"Its mouth was a lipless gash, filled with needle-like teeth, and its eyes—oh, its eyes—were hollow pits, reflecting nothing."
8"Aurora didn’t think—she *moved*, lunging forward with the dagger, the moonsilver edge flashing as she drove it into the creature’s side."
9"And at its center, a figure stood—tall, regal, his crown wreathed in flames."
10"And then the doors of the feast hall swung open, and the Glutton stepped through, its form now *human*—a man, gaunt and hollow-eyed, his mouth stretched in a grin too wide for his face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1105
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.037104072398190045
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007239819004524887
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean12.43
std8.74
cv0.703
sampleLengths
018
115
226
36
435
54
621
733
88
911
1014
1119
1223
1317
1426
1516
1611
174
183
1918
205
216
2216
238
2415
2513
2614
2726
286
299
3017
3124
3228
3336
343
355
3630
375
3825
3916
404
4121
426
433
446
455
4614
478
484
4916
56.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.36
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners36
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then, just as suddenly as"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences74
matches
0"She hadn’t told anyone about"
1"She’d pressed the cold, slender"
2"It gave way beneath her"
3"they whispered, their voice carrying"
4"She swallowed, her throat dry."
5"She moved without sound, her"
6"she said, her voice like"
7"She extended a hand, and"
8"Their bark pulsed faintly, like"
9"They plucked the fruit from"
10"Its mouth was a lipless"
11"it hissed, its voice layered"
12"they commanded, their voice sharp"
13"It recoiled, its form flickering,"
14"They didn’t need to be"
15"They stood in a clearing,"
16"he said, his voice dripping"
ratio0.23
41.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences74
matches
0"The air smelled like honeyed"
1"Aurora Carter exhaled slowly, her"
2"The pendant at her throat,"
3"She hadn’t told anyone about"
4"Isolde had warned her."
5"the Half-Fae seer had murmured,"
6"She’d pressed the cold, slender"
7"The ground beneath her boots"
8"It gave way beneath her"
9"The trees here were not"
10"Some were plump and ripe,"
11"The air hummed with a"
12"Nyx was already moving forward,"
13"they whispered, their voice carrying"
14"Aurora’s breath hitched."
15"*Gluttony.* The sin had a"
16"She swallowed, her throat dry."
17"Nyx agreed, their shadow stretching"
18"Isolde had come last, her"
19"She moved without sound, her"
ratio0.838
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Now, standing at the edge"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The air smelled like honeyed wine and something older—something that had been fermenting in the dark for centuries."
1"Some were plump and ripe, others withered and blackened, as if plucked from a feast long abandoned."
2"Nyx was already moving forward, their form solidifying just enough to step over a fallen branch."
3"Some of the fruit was familiar—peaches, figs, grapes—but others were monstrous things, swollen and misshapen, their skins split open to reveal flesh that glowed…"
4"Tall, emaciated, its limbs too long, its skin stretched tight over bones that seemed to *click* as it shifted."
5"The Glutton snarled, its body *twisting*, its limbs elongating, stretching toward Nyx."
6"It recoiled, its form flickering, unstable, as if the very air was rejecting it."
7"Aurora’s lungs burned, her legs pounding through the soft, yielding earth, the pendant at her throat pulsing in time with her heartbeat."
8"In the distance, a grand feast hall loomed, its towers reaching for the heavens, its banners snapping in a wind that didn’t exist."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"the Half-Fae seer had, her silver hair catching the dappled light of the Grove"
1"they whispered, their voice carrying on the wind"
2"They plucked, the stem giving way with a wet *pop*"
3"they commanded, their voice sharp"
4"Isolde urged, her voice urgent"
5"he said, his voice dripping with honeyed malice"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"the Half-Fae seer had (have)"
1"She’d (would)"
2"they whispered (whisper)"
3"Nyx agreed (agree)"
4"they murmured (murmur)"
5"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
6"it hissed (hiss)"
7"Isolde urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.444
71.7252%