| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1257 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1257 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "porcelain" | | 3 | "electric" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "pounding" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 50 | | markdownWords | 166 | | totalWords | 1243 | | ratio | 0.134 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The Veil thins at the solstice,\"" | | 1 | "\"But this… this is not the thinning. This is a tear.\"" | | 2 | "\"For when the shadows call, you must answer.\"" | | 3 | "\"This is Dymas,\"" | | 4 | "\"The realm of Belphegor.\"" | | 5 | "Gluttony." | | 6 | "\"We’re not supposed to be here.\"" | | 7 | "\"No,\"" | | 8 | "\"But neither are we supposed to be alive.\"" | | 9 | "\"The Veil is weakest here,\"" | | 10 | "\"But it is not broken. Not yet.\"" | | 11 | "alive" | | 12 | "thud" | | 13 | "drink" | | 14 | "\"What the hell is that?\"" | | 15 | "\"A Helbound memory,\"" | | 16 | "\"The souls here are not just trapped. They are… repurposed.\"" | | 17 | "pop" | | 18 | "exploded" | | 19 | "\"Did you just—?\"" | | 20 | "\"Summon something?\"" | | 21 | "\"No. But it was close.\"" | | 22 | "\"The fruit is not the danger,\"" | | 23 | "\"It is the *hunger" | | 24 | "moved" | | 25 | "else" | | 26 | "click" | | 27 | "\"A Glutton,\"" | | 28 | "laughed" | | 29 | "\"You should not have come,\"" | | 30 | "\"This is not a place for mortals.\"" | | 31 | "\"We’re not here to stay.\"" | | 32 | "\"No,\"" | | 33 | "\"But you will be hungry.\"" | | 34 | "\"Move,\"" | | 35 | "\"Now.\"" | | 36 | "twisting" | | 37 | "moved" | | 38 | "\"Run,\"" | | 39 | "shifted" | | 40 | "\"We’re not supposed to be here.\"" | | 41 | "\"We’re not.\"" | | 42 | "\"We are not welcome,\"" | | 43 | "\"But we are not alone.\"" | | 44 | "human" | | 45 | "\"Ah,\"" | | 46 | "\"Guests.\"" | | 47 | "\"We’re leaving.\"" | | 48 | "\"Not yet.\"" | | 49 | "\"Oh, but you will.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1091 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | Isolde | 6 | | Glutton | 6 | | Belphegor | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Glutton" | | 6 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.767 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like honeyed wine and something ol" | | 1 | "not quite" | | 2 | "bones that seemed to click* as it shifted" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1243 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 36.56 | | std | 33.68 | | cv | 0.921 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 99 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 74 | | 8 | 114 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 101 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 87 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 66 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 74 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled like honeyed wine and something older—something that had been fermenting in the dark for centuries." | | 1 | "The trees here were not trees at all—towering, gnarled things with bark like cracked porcelain, their branches heavy with fruit she didn’t recognize." | | 2 | "*Gluttony.* The sin had a flavor, she realized—sweet and cloying, like too much sugar left in the mouth." | | 3 | "The trees here were not just gnarled—they were *alive* in a way that made her skin prickle." | | 4 | "Some of the fruit was familiar—peaches, figs, grapes—but others were monstrous things, swollen and misshapen, their skins split open to reveal flesh that glowed faintly, like bioluminescent jellyfish." | | 5 | "Nyx crouched, their shadow pooling around a particularly grotesque fruit—round, the size of a melon, with a skin like cracked amber and a single, milky eye embedded in the center." | | 6 | "A sound cut through the air—a low, guttural growl, like a thousand voices speaking at once." | | 7 | "Its mouth was a lipless gash, filled with needle-like teeth, and its eyes—oh, its eyes—were hollow pits, reflecting nothing." | | 8 | "Aurora didn’t think—she *moved*, lunging forward with the dagger, the moonsilver edge flashing as she drove it into the creature’s side." | | 9 | "And at its center, a figure stood—tall, regal, his crown wreathed in flames." | | 10 | "And then the doors of the feast hall swung open, and the Glutton stepped through, its form now *human*—a man, gaunt and hollow-eyed, his mouth stretched in a grin too wide for his face." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1105 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.037104072398190045 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007239819004524887 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 12.43 | | std | 8.74 | | cv | 0.703 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 56.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.36 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 45.05% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, just as suddenly as" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t told anyone about" | | 1 | "She’d pressed the cold, slender" | | 2 | "It gave way beneath her" | | 3 | "they whispered, their voice carrying" | | 4 | "She swallowed, her throat dry." | | 5 | "She moved without sound, her" | | 6 | "she said, her voice like" | | 7 | "She extended a hand, and" | | 8 | "Their bark pulsed faintly, like" | | 9 | "They plucked the fruit from" | | 10 | "Its mouth was a lipless" | | 11 | "it hissed, its voice layered" | | 12 | "they commanded, their voice sharp" | | 13 | "It recoiled, its form flickering," | | 14 | "They didn’t need to be" | | 15 | "They stood in a clearing," | | 16 | "he said, his voice dripping" |
| | ratio | 0.23 | |
| 41.08% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled like honeyed" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter exhaled slowly, her" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat," | | 3 | "She hadn’t told anyone about" | | 4 | "Isolde had warned her." | | 5 | "the Half-Fae seer had murmured," | | 6 | "She’d pressed the cold, slender" | | 7 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 8 | "It gave way beneath her" | | 9 | "The trees here were not" | | 10 | "Some were plump and ripe," | | 11 | "The air hummed with a" | | 12 | "Nyx was already moving forward," | | 13 | "they whispered, their voice carrying" | | 14 | "Aurora’s breath hitched." | | 15 | "*Gluttony.* The sin had a" | | 16 | "She swallowed, her throat dry." | | 17 | "Nyx agreed, their shadow stretching" | | 18 | "Isolde had come last, her" | | 19 | "She moved without sound, her" |
| | ratio | 0.838 | |
| 67.57% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled like honeyed wine and something older—something that had been fermenting in the dark for centuries." | | 1 | "Some were plump and ripe, others withered and blackened, as if plucked from a feast long abandoned." | | 2 | "Nyx was already moving forward, their form solidifying just enough to step over a fallen branch." | | 3 | "Some of the fruit was familiar—peaches, figs, grapes—but others were monstrous things, swollen and misshapen, their skins split open to reveal flesh that glowed…" | | 4 | "Tall, emaciated, its limbs too long, its skin stretched tight over bones that seemed to *click* as it shifted." | | 5 | "The Glutton snarled, its body *twisting*, its limbs elongating, stretching toward Nyx." | | 6 | "It recoiled, its form flickering, unstable, as if the very air was rejecting it." | | 7 | "Aurora’s lungs burned, her legs pounding through the soft, yielding earth, the pendant at her throat pulsing in time with her heartbeat." | | 8 | "In the distance, a grand feast hall loomed, its towers reaching for the heavens, its banners snapping in a wind that didn’t exist." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "the Half-Fae seer had, her silver hair catching the dappled light of the Grove" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice carrying on the wind" | | 2 | "They plucked, the stem giving way with a wet *pop*" | | 3 | "they commanded, their voice sharp" | | 4 | "Isolde urged, her voice urgent" | | 5 | "he said, his voice dripping with honeyed malice" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the Half-Fae seer had (have)" | | 1 | "She’d (would)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" | | 4 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "it hissed (hiss)" | | 7 | "Isolde urged (urge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |