Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYARK1HACNHAY17X0V518ST

Run Details

Duration:
16.0s
Cost:
$0.000140
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock was tentative, a soft rap against the aged wood of the door that felt jarringly out of place in the cramped hallway. Rory hadn’t expected anyone. Not tonight. She was buried behind a stack of delivery manifests for Golden Empress, the scent of ginger and chili oil clinging to her clothes, a dull ache thrumming behind her eyes from a particularly brutal shift. Her fingers, stained with ink from correcting invoices, hovered over the lock. Another knock, louder this time, insistent. “Rory?” The voice was a ghost, a memory dredged up from the murky depths of her past. It snagged on her ribs with a painful, unfamiliar resonance. She took a slow, deliberate breath, forcing herself to relax the tight coil in her shoulders. “Go away, Lucien,” she said, the words sharper than she intended. “That’s not really an invitation.” He paused, and Rory could hear the faint, almost musical cadence of his French accent. “I need to talk to you.” Her gut twisted. Talking to Lucien Moreau was never simple. Never pleasant. It was invariably laced with a potent mixture of attraction and regret, a complicated cocktail that always left her feeling more unsettled than she’d been before. She considered ignoring him, retreating further into the chaos of her flat, but the pull, the undeniable magnetic force that still tethered her to him, was too strong to resist. She unlocked the door, pulling it open just enough to peek out. He was standing on the landing, bathed in the sickly yellow glow of the streetlamp outside, a silhouette of impeccably tailored charcoal against the brick wall. He held his ivory-handled cane, resting it casually against his thigh, a silent declaration of his authority. His heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black – scanned the room with a cool, assessing gaze. “You haven’t changed,” he observed, his voice low and measured. Rory narrowed her eyes. “And you clearly still enjoy making dramatic entrances.” He gave a small, almost imperceptible smile. “Habit, I’m afraid. Particularly when the subject of my dramatic entrances is rather… elusive.” He stepped inside, the door closing behind him with a soft click, cutting off the sounds of the street. The scent of sandalwood and something subtly metallic, something undeniably *Lucien*, filled the small space. Ptolemy, her tabby cat, unfurled from his customary spot on a pile of research notes and regarded him with a disdainful flick of his tail. Rory instinctively moved to shield him, a reflexive reaction ingrained from years of shared space. “What do you want?” she asked, her voice tight. “Information,” he stated simply, his gaze sweeping over the room – the overflowing bookshelves, the scattered maps, the half-eaten takeout containers. “Specifically, information about a certain… Malphora.” The nickname, a cruel reminder of the aliases she’d adopted after fleeing Evan, felt like a brand on her skin. “It’s Rory,” she corrected, her voice flat. “And I don’t deal in information.” “Not generally,” Lucien conceded. “But you do work for Madame Cheung. You have access. And I have a… vested interest in uncovering certain truths.” He took a slow step closer, his eyes boring into hers. “Truths that involve a rather unfortunate incident involving a stolen artifact and a demon lord named Vorlag.” Rory’s breath hitched. Vorlag. She’d deliberately avoided any mention of him, burying the details of her last encounter with him deep within the recesses of her memory. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” “Don't insult my intelligence, Rory,” Lucien said, his voice hardening slightly. “You were there. You saw him. You helped him.” He raised his cane, the ivory handle gleaming in the dim light. It wasn’t a threat, not exactly, but the sheer presence of it was unnerving. She instinctively shifted, straightening her back, meeting his gaze. “I was trying to survive,” she said, her voice gaining strength. “And I did what I had to do.” “Survival doesn’t always justify complicity,” Lucien countered, his amber eye flashing. “Vorlag is not a man to be trifled with. He’s wreaking havoc in Avaros. And his connection to London is growing stronger.” She turned away, running a hand through her black hair, trying to block out the intensity of his presence. The memory of that night – the fear, the desperation, the chilling realization that she’d been manipulated – clawed at her throat. “I’m done with that. I’m done with demons and artifacts and dangerous men.” Lucien moved closer, closing the distance between them until she could feel the warmth radiating from his body. "You can’t run from your past, Rory. It has a way of catching up with you." He stopped inches away, his breath warm against her cheek. "And frankly,” he added, his voice softening just slightly, “I’m rather fond of you." The admission, unexpected and jarring, caught her off guard. It was a fragile, hesitant declaration, a ghost of an emotion lingering after all these years. She wanted to deny it, to push him away, but her body felt strangely rooted to the spot. "Don't," she whispered, her voice barely audible. “Don’t what?” he asked, his voice laced with a melancholy that echoed her own. “Don’t say that.” He leaned closer still, his gaze locking onto hers. The heterochromatic colors of his eyes seemed to swirl, reflecting the turbulent emotions within her. “I’ve said a lot of things in my lifetime, Rory. This… this is just one of them.” He lowered his head, his lips brushing against her ear. “And I intend to say it again.” The air thickened with unspoken history, with the echoes of a connection that had burned fiercely and then died a slow, painful death. Rory closed her eyes, surrendering to the pull, the undeniable comfort of his presence. She didn’t know what the future held, what dangers lay ahead, but in this moment, standing in the cramped confines of her flat, with the scent of ginger and sandalwood mingling in the air, she realized that perhaps, just perhaps, running wasn't the answer after all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he stated simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.056
79.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount999
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"deliberately"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount999
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"depths"
count1
1
word"resonance"
count1
2
word"unsettled"
count1
3
word"magnetic"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"encounter"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"chilling"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"unspoken"
count1
15
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"depths"
1"resonance"
2"unsettled"
3"magnetic"
4"scanned"
5"measured"
6"reminder"
7"encounter"
8"gleaming"
9"intensity"
10"chilling"
11"could feel"
12"warmth"
13"echoed"
14"unspoken"
15"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1002
ratio0.001
matches
0"Lucien"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount777
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Rory6
French1
Lucien6
Moreau1
Evan1
persons
0"Rory"
1"French"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a brand on her skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.998
wordCount1002
matches
0"not exactly, but the sheer presence of it was unnerving"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean38.54
std23.13
cv0.6
sampleLengths
077
17
253
326
468
572
610
712
855
940
109
1127
1233
1352
1434
1546
1628
1733
1854
1958
2043
217
2214
233
2458
2583
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"was buried"
1"been manipulated –"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs118
matches
0"was standing"
20.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences70
ratio0.043
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black – scanned the room with a cool, assessing gaze."
1"“Information,” he stated simply, his gaze sweeping over the room – the overflowing bookshelves, the scattered maps, the half-eaten takeout containers."
2"The memory of that night – the fear, the desperation, the chilling realization that she’d been manipulated – clawed at her throat."
92.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount774
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04392764857881137
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.02454780361757106
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean14.31
std9.13
cv0.638
sampleLengths
024
14
22
335
412
56
61
716
810
916
1011
1120
126
133
147
152
1626
1730
1812
1926
2017
2117
2210
234
248
257
2633
2715
2825
2915
309
3121
326
3320
347
356
364
3731
3817
393
401
4123
427
4311
4421
4514
469
4711
488
4911
58.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.38571428571428573
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences54
matches
0"She was buried behind a"
1"Her fingers, stained with ink"
2"It snagged on her ribs"
3"She took a slow, deliberate"
4"she said, the words sharper"
5"He paused, and Rory could"
6"Her gut twisted."
7"It was invariably laced with"
8"She considered ignoring him, retreating"
9"She unlocked the door, pulling"
10"He was standing on the"
11"He held his ivory-handled cane,"
12"His heterochromatic eyes – one"
13"he observed, his voice low"
14"He gave a small, almost"
15"He stepped inside, the door"
16"she asked, her voice tight"
17"he stated simply, his gaze"
18"she corrected, her voice flat"
19"He took a slow step"
ratio0.648
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences54
matches
0"The knock was tentative, a"
1"Rory hadn’t expected anyone."
2"She was buried behind a"
3"Her fingers, stained with ink"
4"Another knock, louder this time,"
5"The voice was a ghost,"
6"It snagged on her ribs"
7"She took a slow, deliberate"
8"she said, the words sharper"
9"He paused, and Rory could"
10"Her gut twisted."
11"It was invariably laced with"
12"She considered ignoring him, retreating"
13"She unlocked the door, pulling"
14"He was standing on the"
15"He held his ivory-handled cane,"
16"His heterochromatic eyes – one"
17"he observed, his voice low"
18"Rory narrowed her eyes."
19"He gave a small, almost"
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The knock was tentative, a soft rap against the aged wood of the door that felt jarringly out of place in the cramped hallway."
1"The air thickened with unspoken history, with the echoes of a connection that had burned fiercely and then died a slow, painful death."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"he observed, his voice low and measured"
1"she asked, her voice tight"
2"she corrected, her voice flat"
3"He took, his eyes boring into hers"
4"Lucien said, his voice hardening slightly"
5"He raised, the ivory handle gleaming in the dim light"
6"she said, her voice gaining strength"
7"Lucien countered, his amber eye flashing"
8"He stopped, his breath warm against her cheek"
9"he added, his voice softening just slightly,"
10"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
11"He lowered, his lips brushing against her ear"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"he stated simply (state)"
2"she corrected (correct)"
3"Lucien conceded (concede)"
4"he added (add)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.4
71.7560%