Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYASTSEJ4PZHHYAB6NW47KY

Run Details

Duration:
39.9s
Cost:
$0.000252
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked, a sound that echoed too loudly in the cramped hallway. Rory squinted, the dim light of the stairwell failing to illuminate the figure standing on the other side of the door. She’d expected silence, the comforting weight of solitude after another evening dodging rush hour traffic on her delivery bike. Not this. “Lucien?” The word slipped out, a hesitant question. She braced herself, her hand still on the doorknob. He didn’t bother with pleasantries. “May I come in, Aurora?” His voice, a low, smooth rasp she’d spent months trying to forget, cut through the quiet. His accent, the subtle curl of French vowels, hadn’t softened with time. If anything, it was more pronounced, more deliberate. Rory felt her pulse jump. She unlocked the final bolt, the metallic scraping a counterpoint to the sudden rush of… something. Discomfort, certainly. And a familiar, unwelcome tremor of attraction. He stepped inside, filling the doorway, a stark silhouette against the fading light. He was just as she remembered him: impeccably tailored in a charcoal suit, his platinum blond hair slicked back from a high forehead, highlighting the sharp angles of his face. The heterochromia—one amber eye, one black—was even more striking in the dimness, a constant reminder of the otherness that clung to him. He held his ivory-handled cane, leaning on it with an unconscious elegance. “What are you doing here?” Rory asked, trying to keep her voice level. She stepped back, gesturing vaguely towards the cluttered space. “I wasn’t expecting anyone.” “A surprise visit,” he said, his lips curving in a faint smile that didn’t quite reach his eyes. “Forgive the intrusion. I hoped you might have a moment.” The flat was a controlled chaos of books, scrolls spilling from shelves, and scattered research notes. Eva, her childhood friend, hadn’t been keen on minimalist aesthetics. Rory tolerated it – it was Eva’s space as much as it was hers. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, emerged from beneath a pile of ancient texts, regarding Lucien with a languid disinterest before hopping onto the nearest armchair and settling down with a purr. “A moment?” Rory repeated, her fingers tightening around the doorknob. “Lucien, we haven't… spoken in a while.” An understatement, really. ‘A while’ was six months, a chasm of silence filled with unspoken accusations and the lingering ache of a relationship that had imploded with spectacular force. He surveyed the room, his gaze lingering on a half-finished sketch of a gargoyle that lay on a drafting table. “Indeed. Six months, four days, to be precise.” Rory’s eyebrows shot up. “You’ve been counting?” He ignored her sarcasm. “I needed to speak with you. Urgent matters.” "Urgent enough to show up on my doorstep?" Rory countered, folding her arms. "Couldn't you have sent a message through one of your… contacts?" “The urgency precludes intermediaries,” he said, his voice hardening slightly. “This concerns the Avaros shard.” The mention of it sent a jolt through her. The Avaros shard. The reason they’d even met in the first place, the reason they’d gotten involved in something far beyond their comprehension. And the reason their brief, intense relationship had fractured so violently. Rory busied herself with fiddling with the lock, pretending to secure it, although there was little more she could do. “What about it? What’s happened?” “It’s been moved,” Lucien stated, his gaze fixed on her. “Taken from its secure location.” “Moved? By whom?” “Unknown,” he replied. “But the trail leads here. To London.” He paused, and for a moment, the carefully constructed facade of aloofness seemed to waver, revealing a glimpse of something vulnerable beneath. Rory used to see it, that flicker of something… human, in his eyes. Now, it was buried beneath layers of calculated control. “Why me?” she asked, her voice softer. “Why show up here? What does this have to do with me?” Lucien finally met her gaze. His amber eye seemed to bore into her, assessing, probing. "Because you were the one who first detected its presence. Because you possess a unique… sensitivity to its energy.” He’d been a patronizing when he said it before. But hearing it now, still clipped, still precise, it stirred something uncomfortable within her. A sense of responsibility, maybe. Or a lingering resentment. “And you need my help,” she finished for him. He inclined his head. “Naturally. Your expertise is… required.” Rory let out a short, humorless laugh. “My expertise? I’m a delivery person for a Chinese restaurant. And I live above a bar.” “You’re also a linguist with an aptitude for ancient languages and a knack for solving puzzles. Skills that proved invaluable during our previous collaboration.” She flinched, the mention of ‘our previous collaboration’ a painful reminder of what they’d had – and lost. “That collaboration ended badly, Lucien. Let’s not pretend it was some glorious partnership.” He didn’t deny it. He simply said, “Circumstances change. The shard’s disappearance presents a significant threat. Ignoring it is not an option.” “Threat to who?” Rory challenged, crossing her arms again. "You? Your supernatural friends?" “To everyone,” he said, his voice low and serious. "The Avaros shard is a conduit. A gateway. If it falls into the wrong hands…" He trailed off, the unspoken implications hanging heavy in the air. Ptolemy, disturbed by the rising tension, let out a disgruntled yowl and swatted playfully at Lucien’s trouser leg. Lucien ignored him, his focus solely on Rory. “And what makes you think I want to get involved again?” Rory asked, trying to sound defiant, but the tremor in her voice betrayed her. The memory of the last time she’d trusted him, the devastation that had followed, was still a raw wound. He took a step closer, closing the distance between them. Rory felt a sudden, suffocating awareness of his presence, the subtle scent of expensive cologne and something else—something indefinable, faintly exotic—that always clung to him. “Because you are resourceful, Aurora. Clever. And you have a conscience.” He paused, his gaze flicking down to her left wrist, where a small, crescent-shaped scar pulsed faintly beneath her skin—a souvenir from a childhood accident. “And because I suspect you don’t have the luxury of walking away.” Rory’s hand instinctively went to the scar. It was a familiar gesture, a grounding mechanism when she felt overwhelmed. She looked up at him, her bright blue eyes challenging his. “And if I do?” He met her gaze, his expression unreadable. “Then London is at risk.” He straightened, the subtle curve of his lips returning. "Quite inconvenient, don’t you think?" A flicker of the old humor, sharp and wry, crossed his face. The one she used to find both infuriating and endearing. “So, I’m being blackmailed with the fate of the city?” Rory said, her voice laced with sarcasm. “Let’s call it a… persuasive invitation,” Lucien corrected, his gaze locking with hers. The air between them crackled with unspoken history, with regret and a complicated, undeniable pull. Rory looked around the cluttered flat, at the stacks of books and the sleeping cat. She looked at Lucien, at the man who had once captivated her, and then shattered her world. “Fine,” she said, the word tasting like ash in her mouth. “But this time, Lucien, we do things my way.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He simply said [simply]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.045
87.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1210
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1210
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count2
8
word"unspoken"
count3
9
word"fractured"
count1
10
word"constructed"
count1
11
word"facade"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count2
13
word"calculated"
count1
14
word"sense of"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"playfully"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"unreadable"
count1
19
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silence"
2"comforting"
3"weight"
4"pulse"
5"familiar"
6"stark"
7"reminder"
8"unspoken"
9"fractured"
10"constructed"
11"facade"
12"flicker"
13"calculated"
14"sense of"
15"tension"
16"playfully"
17"pulsed"
18"unreadable"
19"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1204
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount848
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
French1
Eva3
Lucien7
Avaros1
Rory17
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.498
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1204
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean28.67
std16.36
cv0.571
sampleLengths
055
117
246
330
477
526
628
770
846
928
107
1112
1224
1315
1443
1525
1615
173
1810
1944
2019
2134
2232
239
249
2523
2624
2731
2822
2913
3035
3126
3244
3335
3448
3530
364
3748
3817
3928
4032
4120
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
30.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences102
ratio0.039
matches
0"The heterochromia—one amber eye, one black—was even more striking in the dimness, a constant reminder of the otherness that clung to him."
1"Rory tolerated it – it was Eva’s space as much as it was hers."
2"Rory felt a sudden, suffocating awareness of his presence, the subtle scent of expensive cologne and something else—something indefinable, faintly exotic—that always clung to him."
3"“Because you are resourceful, Aurora. Clever. And you have a conscience.” He paused, his gaze flicking down to her left wrist, where a small, crescent-shaped scar pulsed faintly beneath her skin—a souvenir from a childhood accident."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount544
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.029411764705882353
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.011029411764705883
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean11.8
std7.05
cv0.597
sampleLengths
013
121
219
32
48
59
65
721
812
98
105
1115
121
132
147
1513
1630
1722
1812
1913
209
214
2218
2310
2416
2510
2614
2730
2810
2910
3026
3120
328
334
343
354
368
3713
3811
3910
405
419
423
4320
4411
4520
465
4710
485
493
65.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4215686274509804
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences76
matches
0"She’d expected silence, the comforting"
1"She braced herself, her hand"
2"He didn’t bother with pleasantries."
3"His voice, a low, smooth"
4"His accent, the subtle curl"
5"She unlocked the final bolt,"
6"He stepped inside, filling the"
7"He was just as she"
8"He held his ivory-handled cane,"
9"She stepped back, gesturing vaguely"
10"he said, his lips curving"
11"He surveyed the room, his"
12"He ignored her sarcasm."
13"he said, his voice hardening"
14"He paused, and for a"
15"she asked, her voice softer"
16"His amber eye seemed to"
17"He’d been a patronizing when"
18"she finished for him"
19"He inclined his head."
ratio0.434
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences76
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked, a sound"
1"Rory squinted, the dim light"
2"She’d expected silence, the comforting"
3"The word slipped out, a"
4"She braced herself, her hand"
5"He didn’t bother with pleasantries."
6"His voice, a low, smooth"
7"His accent, the subtle curl"
8"Rory felt her pulse jump."
9"She unlocked the final bolt,"
10"He stepped inside, filling the"
11"He was just as she"
12"The heterochromia—one amber eye, one"
13"He held his ivory-handled cane,"
14"Rory asked, trying to keep"
15"She stepped back, gesturing vaguely"
16"he said, his lips curving"
17"The flat was a controlled"
18"Eva, her childhood friend, hadn’t"
19"Rory tolerated it – it"
ratio0.921
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"If anything, it was more"
1"Now, it was buried beneath"
ratio0.026
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The heterochromia—one amber eye, one black—was even more striking in the dimness, a constant reminder of the otherness that clung to him."
1"The memory of the last time she’d trusted him, the devastation that had followed, was still a raw wound."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory asked, trying to keep her voice level"
1"Rory repeated, her fingers tightening around the doorknob"
2"he said, his voice hardening slightly"
3"she asked, her voice softer"
4"he said, his voice low and serious"
5"He trailed, the unspoken implications hanging heavy in the air"
6"Lucien corrected, his gaze locking with hers"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory repeated (repeat)"
1"Lucien stated (state)"
2"Rory challenged (challenge)"
3"Lucien corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.182
77.8061%