"Rory fumbled with her phone, the glow of the screen illuminating her scar—crescent-shaped, silvery—where Evan had grabbed her wrist three years back."
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"The path to the Grove had been a straight line on Yu-Fei’s map—two miles from the pub, through the old arboretum."
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"Rory had scoffed at the old woman’s tales—until the pendant had started pulsing three nights ago, a dull thrum that matched the rhythm of her heartbeat."
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"The clearing hit her like a hand over the mouth—silent, but not empty."
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"The air smelled like iron—coppery, thick—and something sweeter, like overripe peaches."
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"The voice was a chorus—thousands of voices, high and low, overlapping until it hurt."
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"The figure loomed over her, and now she saw the antlers—thin, branching, not bone but wood, like branches stripped of leaves."
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"The name came from somewhere deep, a memory of a story Eva used to tell—about a queen who made a pact with the Fae, who cursed her lovers and her children, who lived in a grove where time forgot."
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"The figure laughed, and it was Evan’s laugh—high, cruel, familiar."
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"Antlers split, branches exploding outward, and now she saw it—the face, formed from bark and thorns, its eyes glowing with the same crimson light as the pendant."
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"Rory heard it again, closer, and this time, she saw it—a shadow, moving between the trees, something tall and hunched, with claws like broken glass."
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"The shadow turned, and Rory saw its face—pale, gaunt, with eyes like empty sockets—and it smiled, showing teeth that were too many."
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"The sky was wrong—dark, but not night, with a second moon hanging low, its surface pockmarked like a wound."
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"She stumbled through the ivy, into the park, and kept going, her phone’s torch flickering on the path—until the trees closed in, and the world went dark."
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"Rory had scoffed at the old woman’s tales—until the pendant had started pulsing three nights ago, a dull thrum that matched the rhythm of her heartbeat."
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"The shadow turned, and Rory saw its face—pale, gaunt, with eyes like empty sockets—and it smiled, showing teeth that were too many."
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"She didn’t stop until she reached the standing stones, her lungs burning, the pendant throbbing in her palm."
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"She stumbled through the ivy, into the park, and kept going, her phone’s torch flickering on the path—until the trees closed in, and the world went dark."