Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYATA2DY2PSZ56FBAYQZF3C

Run Details

Duration:
22.4s
Cost:
$0.000920
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory fumbled with her phone, the glow of the screen illuminating her scar—crescent-shaped, silvery—where Evan had grabbed her wrist three years back. The barometer on the wall of Silas’ pub had read 72 degrees, but the air in Richmond Park bit through her jacket. 11:17 PM. She’d left with a thermos of black coffee and the Heartstone Pendant clutched in her palm, its chain digging into her throat the way Evan’s fingers used to. *Not this time*, she’d thought. *This is different*. The path to the Grove had been a straight line on Yu-Fei’s map—two miles from the pub, through the old arboretum. But her boots had crunched over dead leaves for 45 minutes, and the trees had thickened, their branches weaving a canopy so dense she could barely see the moon. Now, the trees thinned. Up ahead, the standing stones loomed: six ancient oaks, their trunks gnarled as witches’ fingers, their roots coiled over the ground like sleeping snakes. Yu-Fei had said the Grove was “between here and gone,” a pocket where the earth held its breath. Rory had scoffed at the old woman’s tales—until the pendant had started pulsing three nights ago, a dull thrum that matched the rhythm of her heartbeat. *Hel portals*, Yu-Fei had mumbled over a bowl of noodles, her hands shaking. *They don’t just open. They call. Someone’s trying to fix what was broken.* Rory pushed through a curtain of ivy. The clearing hit her like a hand over the mouth—silent, but not empty. Wildflowers bloomed in every color, their petals so vivid they looked painted: blood-red poppies, indigo irises, sunshine-yellow daisies. But they moved. Not in a breeze, which didn’t stir. A bloom turned toward her as she watched, its center a black hole that contracted and relaxed. She froze. The pendant buzzed again, hotter this time, its crimson gem flaring like a dying star. She fumbled it out, its warmth seeping into her palm, and the flowers stilled. Too still. A twig snapped. Rory spun. The trees were empty. The oaks stood, their shadows stretching long, but no one ducked behind bark or crouched in the undergrowth. She walked to the center, the grass soft underfoot, almost moldy. The pendant burned now, a white-hot point in her hand. *Here*, it seemed to say. *Under the stones*. She knelt, digging at the soil. It clumped in her fingers, dark and wet, like rotted leaves. The pendant throbbed harder, so hard her bones ached. *Under the stones*, it whispered. Not with words, but with a pressure behind her eyes, a memory of a woman’s voice: *“Water binds worlds. Soil holds the dead.”* Rory’s back went rigid. The air smelled like iron—coppery, thick—and something sweeter, like overripe peaches. She stood, turning. A figure was at the edge of the clearing, between two oaks. It was tall, taller than her, with a frame that shifted, like water in a mirror. She squinted. No face, just a void where eyes should be, and a smile that stretched too wide, lips painted red. Rory took a step back. The pendant slipped from her hand, clattering to the ground. It lay there, a still pool of crimson, and the figure moved. Not walked. *Shifted*, like smoke. It came closer, and the flowers around it bent, bowing, their petals fluttering upward. “Laila,” it said. The voice was a chorus—thousands of voices, high and low, overlapping until it hurt. “You came.” Laila. She’d used that name once, in a fight with Evan. *You’re not Laila*, he’d hissed, and then his hand had broken her wrist. *You’re Aurora. And Aurora’s mine.* But here, no one called her Laila. Not since Eva had dragged her to London, sobbing, *Run before he finds you*. Rory backed into a tree. The trunk was warm, almost alive, its bark pulsing with a slow, steady rhythm. The figure loomed over her, and now she saw the antlers—thin, branching, not bone but wood, like branches stripped of leaves. Its fingers ended in twigs, sharp as needles. “You *felt* it,” the voice said, and the flowers around them rustled, their black centers staring. “The pull. The wrongness. He let it loose, you know. Evan. He couldn’t control it, and he *hated* that you could. That you *saw*—” “Stop,” Rory said. Her voice shook, but she kept it low, steady. *Don’t show fear*, her father had told her, when she was six and froze in front of a bully. *Fear is a language they understand. Don’t speak it.* The figure tilted its head. The antlers creaked, like old doors. “You think you’re smart. You run. You hide. But he *always* finds his toys, Laila. He *loves* his toys.” Rory’s hand brushed the ground. She grabbed a fistful of dirt and hurled it at the figure. It didn’t flinch. The dirt fell away, like smoke. “Isolde,” Rory said. The name came from somewhere deep, a memory of a story Eva used to tell—about a queen who made a pact with the Fae, who cursed her lovers and her children, who lived in a grove where time forgot. “You’re in the Grove. But you’re not the queen anymore. You’re a ghost.” The figure flinched. The flowers around it shrieked. “You *know* the stories. Idiot. You think you can *solve* it? You think the Heartstone—” “My stone,” Rory corrected. The pendant had started glowing again, a faint, warm light, and now she realized why. The ground beneath it was cracking, a thin black line snaking outward. “Stay away from it.” The figure laughed, and it was Evan’s laugh—high, cruel, familiar. “It’s *mine*, Aurora. You can’t keep what he gave you.” Rory stepped away. The crack spread, and the ground *sank*, a little, like the earth was breathing. The flowers around the figure withered, their petals turning to ash. “You’re not him,” she said. “You’re a echo. A mistake.” The figure roared. Antlers split, branches exploding outward, and now she saw it—the face, formed from bark and thorns, its eyes glowing with the same crimson light as the pendant. *Evan’s eyes*, cold and hungry. “He’ll *find* you. And when he does—” A sound cut through the air: a low, guttural growl, coming from the trees. The figure tensed, its antlers trembling. Rory heard it again, closer, and this time, she saw it—a shadow, moving between the trees, something tall and hunched, with claws like broken glass. The figure whirled. The shadow lunged. There was a sound like splitting wood, and then silence. The figure was gone, its place a pile of ash. The shadow turned, and Rory saw its face—pale, gaunt, with eyes like empty sockets—and it smiled, showing teeth that were too many. Rory stumbled back, tripping over a root. The ground was tilting now, the crack widening into a chasm. She grabbed the pendant, its chain tight in her hand, and looked up. The sky was wrong—dark, but not night, with a second moon hanging low, its surface pockmarked like a wound. The flowers were gone, replaced by black grass that writhed under her boots. The shadow spoke, its voice a whisper in her ear. “You shouldn’t have come.” Rory ran. She didn’t stop until she reached the standing stones, her lungs burning, the pendant throbbing in her palm. The shadow followed, its footsteps echoing like thunder. She stumbled through the ivy, into the park, and kept going, her phone’s torch flickering on the path—until the trees closed in, and the world went dark. When she woke, she was on the ground, the pendant in her hand, the scar on her wrist stinging. The park was quiet, the moon high, the stars bright. No shadow, no flowers, no second moon. Just the crickets, and the distant hum of a car. She stood, brushing dirt from her jeans. The pendant was still warm, its gem glowing faintly. Rory smiled, cold and sharp. *Evan*, she thought. *You forgot how to run. But I never will.* She kept walking. The shadow watched from the trees, its face a mask of ash and thorns. It turned, and vanished into the dark, where the Fae Grove waited, hungry. A clock tower chimed 2:07 AM. Somewhere, a baby cried. The flowers in the Grove bloomed again, their petals red as blood, their centers black as coal. And the Heartstone Pendant pulsed, twice, then stopped. For a moment. Then it began to glow. And the Grove breathed.
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native_tokens_reasoning761
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1422
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1422
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"almost alive"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"warmth"
2"throbbed"
3"almost alive"
4"familiar"
5"echo"
6"silence"
7"whisper"
8"footsteps"
9"echoing"
10"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences130
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
81.26% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans27
markdownWords83
totalWords1398
ratio0.059
matches
0"Not this time"
1"This is different"
2"Hel portals"
3"They don’t just open. They call. Someone’s trying to fix what was broken."
4"Here"
5"Under the stones"
6"Under the stones"
7"“Water binds worlds. Soil holds the dead.”"
8"Shifted"
9"You’re not Laila"
10"You’re Aurora. And Aurora’s mine."
11"Run before he finds you"
12"felt"
13"hated"
14"saw"
15"Don’t show fear"
16"Fear is a language they understand. Don’t speak it."
17"always"
18"loves"
19"know"
20"solve"
21"mine"
22"sank"
23"Evan’s eyes"
24"find"
25"Evan"
26"You forgot how to run. But I never will."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"*Under the stones*, it whispered."
81.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1246
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Evan6
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Grove5
Yu-Fei3
Rory17
Aurora2
Laila3
Eva2
London1
Fae2
persons
0"Evan"
1"Pendant"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Rory"
4"Aurora"
5"Laila"
6"Eva"
places
0"Grove"
1"London"
2"Fae"
globalScore0.818
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like iron—coppery, thick—and somet"
56.94% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.431
wordCount1398
matches
0"Not with words, but with a pressure behind her eyes, a memory of a woman’s voice"
1"not bone but wood, like branches stripped of leaves"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"used that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean37.78
std28.95
cv0.766
sampleLengths
082
1148
296
32
43
553
654
767
846
919
1029
1121
1248
1340
1440
1530
1626
1755
1823
1935
2020
2138
2242
2345
2448
2563
2614
272
2853
2946
3033
313
3227
3335
343
355
364
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences130
matches
0"was gone"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs233
matches
0"was cracking"
1"was breathing"
2"was tilting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences140
ratio0.1
matches
0"Rory fumbled with her phone, the glow of the screen illuminating her scar—crescent-shaped, silvery—where Evan had grabbed her wrist three years back."
1"The path to the Grove had been a straight line on Yu-Fei’s map—two miles from the pub, through the old arboretum."
2"Rory had scoffed at the old woman’s tales—until the pendant had started pulsing three nights ago, a dull thrum that matched the rhythm of her heartbeat."
3"The clearing hit her like a hand over the mouth—silent, but not empty."
4"The air smelled like iron—coppery, thick—and something sweeter, like overripe peaches."
5"The voice was a chorus—thousands of voices, high and low, overlapping until it hurt."
6"The figure loomed over her, and now she saw the antlers—thin, branching, not bone but wood, like branches stripped of leaves."
7"The name came from somewhere deep, a memory of a story Eva used to tell—about a queen who made a pact with the Fae, who cursed her lovers and her children, who lived in a grove where time forgot."
8"The figure laughed, and it was Evan’s laugh—high, cruel, familiar."
9"Antlers split, branches exploding outward, and now she saw it—the face, formed from bark and thorns, its eyes glowing with the same crimson light as the pendant."
10"Rory heard it again, closer, and this time, she saw it—a shadow, moving between the trees, something tall and hunched, with claws like broken glass."
11"The shadow turned, and Rory saw its face—pale, gaunt, with eyes like empty sockets—and it smiled, showing teeth that were too many."
12"The sky was wrong—dark, but not night, with a second moon hanging low, its surface pockmarked like a wound."
13"She stumbled through the ivy, into the park, and kept going, her phone’s torch flickering on the path—until the trees closed in, and the world went dark."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount123
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.024390243902439025
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean9.99
std7.33
cv0.735
sampleLengths
022
122
22
328
45
53
621
729
84
924
1018
1126
1213
134
142
157
167
1713
1818
193
207
2117
222
2315
2414
252
263
272
284
2918
3011
3110
325
333
346
3511
369
375
3823
394
4011
413
4212
4316
442
4519
465
4710
4812
492
40.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.29285714285714287
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners41
86.96% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences115
matches
0"Just the crickets, and the"
1"Somewhere, a baby cried."
2"Then it began to glow."
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences115
matches
0"She’d left with a thermos"
1"*They don’t just open."
2"She fumbled it out, its"
3"She walked to the center,"
4"She knelt, digging at the"
5"It clumped in her fingers,"
6"She stood, turning."
7"It was tall, taller than"
8"It lay there, a still"
9"It came closer, and the"
10"She’d used that name once,"
11"*You’re not Laila*, he’d hissed,"
12"Its fingers ended in twigs,"
13"Her voice shook, but she"
14"She grabbed a fistful of"
15"It didn’t flinch."
16"She grabbed the pendant, its"
17"She didn’t stop until she"
18"She stumbled through the ivy,"
19"She stood, brushing dirt from"
ratio0.2
73.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences115
matches
0"Rory fumbled with her phone,"
1"The barometer on the wall"
2"She’d left with a thermos"
3"*This is different*."
4"The path to the Grove"
5"Yu-Fei had said the Grove"
6"Rory had scoffed at the"
7"*Hel portals*, Yu-Fei had mumbled"
8"*They don’t just open."
9"Someone’s trying to fix what"
10"Rory pushed through a curtain"
11"The clearing hit her like"
12"Wildflowers bloomed in every color,"
13"A bloom turned toward her"
14"The pendant buzzed again, hotter"
15"She fumbled it out, its"
16"A twig snapped."
17"The trees were empty."
18"The oaks stood, their shadows"
19"She walked to the center,"
ratio0.774
43.48% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"Now, the trees thinned."
ratio0.009
90.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory had scoffed at the old woman’s tales—until the pendant had started pulsing three nights ago, a dull thrum that matched the rhythm of her heartbeat."
1"The shadow turned, and Rory saw its face—pale, gaunt, with eyes like empty sockets—and it smiled, showing teeth that were too many."
2"She didn’t stop until she reached the standing stones, her lungs burning, the pendant throbbing in her palm."
3"She stumbled through the ivy, into the park, and kept going, her phone’s torch flickering on the path—until the trees closed in, and the world went dark."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.111
86.9065%