Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYATAZ7WVSNVDPBBFBA8YX1

Run Details

Duration:
9.7s
Cost:
$0.000420
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before the second knock even finished echoing through the hallway. Rory stood there, her bright blue eyes widening as she took in the man framed in her doorway—Lucien Moreau, looking every inch the polished devil he was in his charcoal suit, cane tucked under one arm like it was an afterthought. The scent of rain and something faintly metallic, like old coins, clung to him, and for a heartbeat, she forgot how to breathe. “You,” she said, the word coming out sharper than she intended. Lucien’s lips quirked, just slightly, as if he’d expected no less. “Bonjour, *Laila*,” he replied, using the name she’d given him years ago, the one that had always made her feel like she was slipping into a different skin. His amber eye gleamed, the black one unreadable. “May I come in?” She should’ve slammed the door. Should’ve told him to go to hell, that she wasn’t interested in whatever game he was playing. But the words died in her throat because, damn him, he looked *good*—too good, like a man who’d just stepped out of a tailored dream. And because, beneath the polished exterior, she knew the truth: he wasn’t here for small talk. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, chose that moment to weave between her legs, purring loudly, as if to say, *Oh, this is interesting.* Rory ignored him, her fingers tightening around the edge of the doorframe. “What do you want, Lucien?” His gaze flicked past her, taking in the chaos of Eva’s flat—the stacks of books, the scrolls pinned to the walls with yellowed paper clips, the half-empty teacup on the kitchen counter. “I want what I always wanted,” he said softly, stepping closer. The cane brushed against her hip, deliberate, and she flinched. “You.” The air between them thickened, charged with everything unsaid, everything *done*. Rory’s pulse jumped. She remembered the last time he’d been here, the way his hands had traced the curve of her waist, the way his voice had dropped into that dangerous, velvety tone that made her skin prickle. She remembered the fight that had followed, the way he’d walked out without looking back. “You’re insane,” she muttered, but her voice lacked conviction. Lucien chuckled, low and dark, and reached past her to press the door fully open. “Probably. But insanity has its uses.” He stepped inside, and the flat suddenly felt smaller, the walls pressing in. “I need your help.” Rory crossed her arms, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the dim light from the streetlamp outside. “With what?” “A job.” His cane tapped against the floor as he moved deeper into the room, his polished shoes clicking against the warped wood. “Something that requires… discretion.” She should’ve known it wasn’t personal. Of course it wasn’t. Lucien Moreau didn’t do personal. He did transactions—information, favors, the occasional supernatural favor call. He didn’t do *her*. But then he turned, and his heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers, and for a second, she saw the man beneath the suit, the one who had once told her stories about the stars, who had kissed her like she was the only thing in the world worth remembering. “It’s dangerous,” he said. “So am I,” she shot back. A slow smile spread across his face, and something in her chest tightened. “That’s what I’m counting on.” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the couch, tail flicking, as if to say, *Well, this is awkward.* Rory ignored him, her gaze never leaving Lucien’s. The air between them was electric, crackling with old heat and new tension. Lucien exhaled, long and slow, as if bracing himself. “I missed you,” he admitted, the words rough, unguarded. Rory’s breath hitched. She missed him too—god, she missed him—but pride was a stubborn thing, and so was the sting of betrayal. “Bullshit,” she said, but her voice wavered. He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the faint scar along his jawline, close enough that she could smell the bergamot and leather that always clung to him. “I never should’ve left,” he murmured. “I should’ve fought for you.” “You had your chance,” she whispered. His hand lifted, fingers brushing against her cheek, and she should’ve stepped back, but she didn’t. “I know.” The touch was featherlight, but it sent a jolt through her, a reminder of all the nights they’d spent tangled together, of the way his hands had memorized her body. She swallowed hard. “What do you want from me, Lucien?” His thumb traced the line of her jaw, slow and deliberate. “The same thing I’ve always wanted. A chance to make it right.” Rory’s heart pounded. She wanted to hate him. She wanted to push him away. But the truth was, she’d spent too many nights wondering what might’ve been, too many years pushing people away before he’d even had the chance to leave. “You’re impossible,” she breathed. “And you’re still the only woman who’s ever made me feel like I might actually be human,” he countered, his voice rough. She should’ve laughed. She should’ve told him to get out. But instead, she found herself leaning into his touch, her eyes fluttering shut as the world narrowed to the heat of his skin, the weight of his gaze. When she opened her eyes again, Lucien was watching her, his expression unreadable. “So?” he prompted. “Will you help me?” Rory exhaled, the fight draining out of her. “Fine,” she said, though she knew it was more than that. It was always more than that with him. “But we’re doing this *my* way.” Lucien’s smile was slow, triumphant. “I’d expect nothing less.” And just like that, the past was back, tangled with the present, and Rory realized she was in deeper than she’d ever let herself admit.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
84.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount971
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount971
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"unreadable"
2"flicked"
3"charged"
4"pulse"
5"traced"
6"electric"
7"tension"
8"wavered"
9"reminder"
10"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords13
totalWords965
ratio0.013
matches
0"Laila"
1"good"
2"Oh, this is interesting."
3"done"
4"her"
5"Well, this is awkward."
6"my"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.62% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount843
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien8
Moreau2
Rory9
Eva1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.966
windowScore1
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if bracing himself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount965
matches(empty)
36.80% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"chose that moment"
2"like that, the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean30.16
std18.61
cv0.617
sampleLengths
078
111
251
363
439
554
664
79
838
920
1027
1128
1248
134
146
1518
1640
1718
1829
1941
206
2118
2240
2323
2441
254
2622
2738
2820
2933
309
3125
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
77.30% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was slipping"
1"was playing"
2"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences77
ratio0.065
matches
0"Rory stood there, her bright blue eyes widening as she took in the man framed in her doorway—Lucien Moreau, looking every inch the polished devil he was in his charcoal suit, cane tucked under one arm like it was an afterthought."
1"But the words died in her throat because, damn him, he looked *good*—too good, like a man who’d just stepped out of a tailored dream."
2"His gaze flicked past her, taking in the chaos of Eva’s flat—the stacks of books, the scrolls pinned to the walls with yellowed paper clips, the half-empty teacup on the kitchen counter."
3"He did transactions—information, favors, the occasional supernatural favor call."
4"She missed him too—god, she missed him—but pride was a stubborn thing, and so was the sting of betrayal."
97.90% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount849
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.04240282685512368
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008244994110718492
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean12.53
std10.29
cv0.821
sampleLengths
014
141
223
311
411
528
68
74
85
917
1025
1116
1234
135
1432
1511
1610
171
1811
193
2035
2115
229
2315
2419
254
2618
272
2823
294
306
314
325
339
344
3548
364
376
3813
395
4027
4113
429
439
443
4519
467
4730
486
495
51.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.35064935064935066
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners27
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Of course it wasn’t."
ratio0.017
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences58
matches
0"she said, the word coming"
1"he replied, using the name"
2"His amber eye gleamed, the"
3"She should’ve slammed the door."
4"His gaze flicked past her,"
5"he said softly, stepping closer"
6"She remembered the last time"
7"She remembered the fight that"
8"she muttered, but her voice"
9"He stepped inside, and the"
10"His cane tapped against the"
11"She should’ve known it wasn’t"
12"He did transactions—information, favors, the"
13"He didn’t do *her*."
14"she shot back"
15"he admitted, the words rough,"
16"She missed him too—god, she"
17"she said, but her voice"
18"He stepped closer, close enough"
19"His hand lifted, fingers brushing"
ratio0.5
37.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences58
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Rory stood there, her bright"
2"The scent of rain and"
3"she said, the word coming"
4"Lucien’s lips quirked, just slightly,"
5"he replied, using the name"
6"His amber eye gleamed, the"
7"She should’ve slammed the door."
8"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, chose"
9"His gaze flicked past her,"
10"he said softly, stepping closer"
11"The cane brushed against her"
12"The air between them thickened,"
13"Rory’s pulse jumped."
14"She remembered the last time"
15"She remembered the fight that"
16"she muttered, but her voice"
17"Lucien chuckled, low and dark,"
18"He stepped inside, and the"
19"Rory crossed her arms, the"
ratio0.845
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, chose that moment to weave between her legs, purring loudly, as if to say, *Oh, this is interesting.* Rory ignored him, her fingers tigh…"
1"She remembered the last time he’d been here, the way his hands had traced the curve of her waist, the way his voice had dropped into that dangerous, velvety ton…"
2"But then he turned, and his heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers, and for a second, she saw the man beneath the suit, the one who had once told her stories abo…"
3"But instead, she found herself leaning into his touch, her eyes fluttering shut as the world narrowed to the heat of his skin, the weight of his gaze."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, the word coming out sharper than she intended"
1"she muttered, but her voice lacked conviction"
2"His cane tapped, his polished shoes clicking against the warped wood"
3"she said, but her voice wavered"
4"he countered, his voice rough"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.333
71.0249%