| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 899 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 899 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "looming" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "lurched" | | 15 | "trembled" | | 16 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.89% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 34 | | markdownWords | 49 | | totalWords | 890 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "pull" | | 1 | "desperate" | | 2 | "This isn’t right." | | 3 | "breathe" | | 4 | "watch" | | 5 | "shifted" | | 6 | "this" | | 7 | "burned" | | 8 | "\"You shouldn’t have come.\"" | | 9 | "move" | | 10 | "listening" | | 11 | "pull" | | 12 | "reaching" | | 13 | "moved" | | 14 | "wrong" | | 15 | "open" | | 16 | "warped" | | 17 | "\"You shouldn’t have come,\"" | | 18 | "\"But you did.\"" | | 19 | "fight" | | 20 | "hungry" | | 21 | "pulling" | | 22 | "spoke" | | 23 | "\"Give it back.\"" | | 24 | "moved" | | 25 | "touched" | | 26 | "inside" | | 27 | "laughed" | | 28 | "shuddered" | | 29 | "mouth" | | 30 | "wrong" | | 31 | "\"You shouldn’t have come,\"" | | 32 | "pulling" | | 33 | "hungry" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 871 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.754 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 890 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 22.25 | | std | 20.9 | | cv | 0.939 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 6 |
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| 94.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "were elongated" | | 1 | "was obscured" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 27.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "was struggling" | | 1 | "was *listening" | | 2 | "was *reaching" | | 3 | "was *pulling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d felt it before—this warmth, this *pull*—but never like this." | | 1 | "The air smelled wrong—earth and something metallic, like old blood." | | 2 | "Then—movement." | | 3 | "She could swear she saw something *move* between the cracks in the bark of the nearest oak—something long and pale, like a branch…" | | 4 | "She could feel it now—the *pull*, the way the grove was *reaching* for her, dragging her deeper into its heart." | | 5 | "Its face—if it had one—was obscured by a tangle of roots and vines, but its eyes…" | | 6 | "She could feel it now—the way the grove was *pulling* at her, dragging her deeper into its heart." | | 7 | "The thing was *inside* the tree now, its form shifting, its limbs elongating, its eyes—" | | 8 | "The thing’s form rippled, its limbs twisting, its face—" | | 9 | "The last thing she saw was the thing’s mouth opening wider, wider, wider—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 881 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.032917139614074914 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0022701475595913734 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 8.47 | | std | 5.67 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 38.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.20952380952380953 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Just her and the pendant" | | 1 | "Then the ground gave way." | | 2 | "Too tall to be human." |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 96.92% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d felt it before—this warmth," | | 1 | "Her breath came in ragged" | | 2 | "It wasn’t supposed to *watch*." | | 3 | "She turned slowly, her fingers" | | 4 | "Her breath hitched." | | 5 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 6 | "She’d come here for answers," | | 7 | "She spun, scanning the darkness," | | 8 | "She could swear she saw" | | 9 | "Her phone buzzed in her" | | 10 | "She ignored it." | | 11 | "She could feel it now—the" | | 12 | "Her foot caught on a" | | 13 | "She landed hard on her" | | 14 | "Its limbs were elongated, its" | | 15 | "Its face—if it had one—was" | | 16 | "its eyes were *open*." | | 17 | "She could run." | | 18 | "She could *fight*." | | 19 | "She could feel it now—the" |
| | ratio | 0.308 | |
| 47.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter yanked her hand" | | 2 | "The Heartstone’s crimson glow pulsed" | | 3 | "She’d felt it before—this warmth," | | 4 | "The grove swallowed her whole." | | 5 | "Branches clawed at her sleeves" | | 6 | "The air smelled wrong—earth and" | | 7 | "Her breath came in ragged" | | 8 | "*This isn’t right.* The pendant" | | 9 | "It wasn’t supposed to *watch*." | | 10 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 11 | "The sound had come from" | | 12 | "She turned slowly, her fingers" | | 13 | "The trees remained still, their" | | 14 | "A flicker of motion at" | | 15 | "Her breath hitched." | | 16 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 17 | "The pendant flared brighter, its" | | 18 | "Aurora’s stomach twisted." | | 19 | "She’d come here for answers," |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 54.95% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it *burned*, as if" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 93.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter yanked her hand back as if she’d touched a live wire, the silver chain snapping taut between her fingers." | | 1 | "Now it *burned*, as if something inside it was struggling to get out." | | 2 | "The thing was *inside* the tree now, its form shifting, its limbs elongating, its eyes—" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the voice repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |