Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYATZAJNGPMN44K96PXYH6N

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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--- The door creaked open before the deadbolt could even click. A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying the scent of rain-slicked pavement and the faint metallic tang of old blood—like the time he’d cut himself shaving and left a towel on her bathroom floor. She’d found it three days later, the stain still damp, the fabric stiff with dried salt. *You’re a mess*, she’d thought, but her fingers had lingered on the wound anyway, tracing the jagged line like she could stitch it back together. Aurora Carter froze mid-step, her delivery bag slipping from her fingers as the scent hit her full force. The cane tapped once against the wooden floor, a sharp *thunk* that echoed through the empty flat. Then, the slow, deliberate click of the door closing behind him. “You’re late,” she said, voice steady despite the way her pulse hammered in her throat. The scar on her wrist itched, as if remembering the last time she’d been this close to him. Lucien Moreau didn’t turn. His back was rigid, shoulders squared, the charcoal suit jacket straining over his broad frame. The cane rested against the wall now, blade hidden but not forgotten. “I’m never late for a debt.” She exhaled through her nose, a sound that was half-laugh, half-sigh. “You owe me money?” “No.” His voice was smooth, dangerously so. “But you owe me *this*.” The words hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. She set the bag down on the counter with a thud, the clatter of takeaway containers echoing. The flat smelled like garlic and soy sauce and the faintest hint of something darker—something that made her skin prickle. *His cologne.* She’d never been able to place it, but she recognised it now, like a brand burned into her memory. “You’re not here to collect,” she said, voice low. “Not unless you’ve come to finish what you started.” His head finally turned. One amber eye, one black, locked onto hers. The heterochromia was a trick of the light, she’d always thought, until she realised it wasn’t. It was a choice. A weapon. “I’ve come to collect *you*.” The words should have been a punch to the gut. Instead, they settled in her chest like a live wire, humming against her ribs. She swallowed, hard. “You’re delusional.” “Am I?” He stepped forward, the hem of his jacket brushing the edge of the counter. “Because I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Her breath hitched. The memory was a brand, too—hot and sharp. The night he’d kissed her in the rain, his hands rough against her skin, his teeth grazing her lip like he couldn’t decide whether to bite or claim. She’d let him. For three seconds. Three *terrible* seconds before she’d shoved him back and called him a liar. “That was a mistake,” she said, but her voice cracked. “No.” He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist. “That was the beginning.” She jerked away, but not fast enough. His thumb traced the crescent, slow and deliberate. “You still carry it,” he murmured. “Like a souvenir.” “It’s nothing.” “It’s a reminder.” His gaze flicked up, locking onto hers. “Of what you *almost* did.” The air between them crackled. She could feel it, sharp and electric, like the second before a storm breaks. Her fingers twitched, itching to reach for him, to pull him closer, to— “Aurora.” The voice was sharp, cutting through the tension like a blade. She turned, heart lurching, and found Eva standing in the doorway, Ptolemy the tabby cat perched on her shoulder like a tiny, disapproving crown. The cat’s green eyes narrowed, tail flicking in irritation. “What the *fuck*?” Eva’s gaze darted between them, taking in the way Lucien’s hand still hovered near Aurora’s wrist, the way her chest rose and fell like she’d just run a mile. “You’re *dead* to me.” Aurora didn’t answer. She couldn’t. Her brain had short-circuited, her body locked in place like a statue caught in the middle of a dance. Lucien’s lips quirked, just slightly. “Eva.” “Don’t.” Eva’s voice was ice. “Don’t *Lucien* me. You’re not welcome here.” “Neither is he,” Aurora said, finally finding her voice. “He’s not here to collect rent.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “No. But I am here to collect *her*.” Eva’s eyes narrowed. “You’re out of your mind.” “Am I?” Lucien stepped closer, his body blocking the doorway. “Because I remember the way she looked at me in that alley. The way she *begged* me not to stop.” Aurora’s face burned. “Shut up.” “No.” His voice was a purr, low and dangerous. “I won’t.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora shook her head, her gaze locked onto Lucien’s. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s grip tightened. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” “You don’t have a choice.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “Not if you want to keep your life.” Lucien’s smile turned predatory. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” The flat seemed to shrink around them, the walls closing in, the air thick with tension. Aurora’s pulse pounded in her ears, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re playing with fire,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “Am I?” His voice was a purr, low and dangerous. “Because I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *begged* me not to stop.” Aurora’s face burned. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” The flat seemed to shrink around them, the walls closing in, the air thick with tension. Aurora’s pulse pounded in her ears, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re playing with fire,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat was too small for the three of them, the air thick with tension. Aurora stood frozen in the middle of the room, her fingers curled into fists at her sides. Lucien leaned against the wall, his arms crossed, his gaze locked onto hers. Eva paced back and forth, Ptolemy perched on her shoulder like a tiny, disapproving crown. “You’re not welcome here,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat was too small for the three of them, the air thick with tension. Aurora stood frozen in the middle of the room, her fingers curled into fists at her sides. Lucien leaned against the wall, his arms crossed, his gaze locked onto hers. Eva paced back and forth, Ptolemy perched on her shoulder like a tiny, disapproving crown. “You’re not welcome here,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat seemed to shrink around them, the walls closing in, the air thick with tension. Aurora’s pulse pounded in her ears, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re playing with fire,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat was too small for the three of them, the air thick with tension. Aurora stood frozen in the middle of the room, her fingers curled into fists at her sides. Lucien leaned against the wall, his arms crossed, his gaze locked onto hers. Eva paced back and forth, Ptolemy perched on her shoulder like a tiny, disapproving crown. “You’re not welcome here,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat seemed to shrink around them, the walls closing in, the air thick with tension. Aurora’s pulse pounded in her ears, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re playing with fire,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat was too small for the three of them, the air thick with tension. Aurora stood frozen in the middle of the room, her fingers curled into fists at her sides. Lucien leaned against the wall, his arms crossed, his gaze locked onto hers. Eva paced back and forth, Ptolemy perched on her shoulder like a tiny, disapproving crown. “You’re not welcome here,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat seemed to shrink around them, the walls closing in, the air thick with tension. Aurora’s pulse pounded in her ears, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re playing with fire,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat was too small for the three of them, the air thick with tension. Aurora stood frozen in the middle of the room, her fingers curled into fists at her sides. Lucien leaned against the wall, his arms crossed, his gaze locked onto hers. Eva paced back and forth, Ptolemy perched on her shoulder like a tiny, disapproving crown. “You’re not welcome here,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat seemed to shrink around them, the walls closing in, the air thick with tension. Aurora’s pulse pounded in her ears, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re playing with fire,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat was too small for the three of them, the air thick with tension. Aurora stood frozen in the middle of the room, her fingers curled into fists at her sides. Lucien leaned against the wall, his arms crossed, his gaze locked onto hers. Eva paced back and forth, Ptolemy perched on her shoulder like a tiny, disapproving crown. “You’re not welcome here,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat seemed to shrink around them, the walls closing in, the air thick with tension. Aurora’s pulse pounded in her ears, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re playing with fire,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat was too small for the three of them, the air thick with tension. Aurora stood frozen in the middle of the room, her fingers curled into fists at her sides. Lucien leaned against the wall, his arms crossed, his gaze locked onto hers. Eva paced back and forth, Ptolemy perched on her shoulder like a tiny, disapproving crown. “You’re not welcome here,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The flat seemed to shrink around them, the walls closing in, the air thick with tension. Aurora’s pulse pounded in her ears, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re playing with fire,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s laugh was dark, amused. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Eva’s hand shot out, grabbing Aurora’s arm. “Come on. We’re leaving.” Aurora jerked away, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not going anywhere.” “You should.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Before he does something stupid.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, I’ve already done that.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.” --- The door slammed shut behind them, the sound echoing through the flat like a gunshot. Aurora’s breath hitched, her body locked in place. She could feel Lucien’s gaze on her, hot and intense, like a brand. “You’re not welcome here,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her heart hammered in her chest. Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but I am.” And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers. “I remember the way you looked at me in that alley. The way you *tasted*.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The way he’d kissed her. The way he’d— “Aurora.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “Now.” Aurora turned, her fingers curling into fists. “I’m not leaving him.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “You don’t have a choice.” Lucien’s smile widened, slow and dangerous. “Oh, but she *does* have a choice.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags55
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences335
tagDensity0.164
leniency0.328
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount5429
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count8
highlights
0"slightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount5429
totalAiIsms78
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count9
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count14
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count22
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"tension"
count16
11
word"lurching"
count1
12
word"dance"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count8
highlights
0"tracing"
1"echoed"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
4"echoing"
5"traced"
6"reminder"
7"flicked"
8"could feel"
9"electric"
10"tension"
11"lurching"
12"dance"
13"whisper"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches22
maxInWindow5
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count20
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"heart hammered in her chest"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences522
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences522
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences768
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans57
markdownWords60
totalWords5422
ratio0.011
matches
0"You’re a mess"
1"thunk"
2"this"
3"His cologne."
4"you"
5"tasted"
6"terrible"
7"almost"
8"fuck"
9"dead"
10"Lucien"
11"her"
12"begged"
13"does"
14"does"
15"begged"
16"does"
17"tasted"
18"does"
19"does"
20"does"
21"tasted"
22"does"
23"does"
24"does"
25"tasted"
26"does"
27"does"
28"tasted"
29"does"
30"does"
31"tasted"
32"does"
33"does"
34"tasted"
35"does"
36"does"
37"tasted"
38"does"
39"does"
40"tasted"
41"does"
42"does"
43"tasted"
44"does"
45"does"
46"tasted"
47"does"
48"does"
49"tasted"
50"does"
51"does"
52"tasted"
53"does"
54"does"
55"tasted"
56"does"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions53
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions352
wordCount3935
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.35
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Eva103
Ptolemy8
Lucien107
Aurora132
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
5"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences292
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if remembering the last time she’d been this close to him"
1"smelled like garlic and soy sauce and the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount5422
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences768
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs368
mean14.73
std12.16
cv0.825
sampleLengths
01
110
276
346
433
537
615
712
869
918
1039
1129
1232
1358
1410
1516
1624
172
1815
1932
201
2144
2236
2324
246
2512
2615
2714
288
2930
305
3111
3211
3313
3410
3510
3613
376
3811
3916
4011
4111
4212
4311
4410
4513
466
4711
488
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences522
matches(empty)
87.74% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount13
totalVerbs772
matches
0"was moving"
1"was moving"
2"was moving"
3"was moving"
4"was moving"
5"was moving"
6"was moving"
7"was moving"
8"was moving"
9"was moving"
10"was moving"
11"was moving"
12"was moving"
16.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount34
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences34
totalSentences768
ratio0.044
matches
0"A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying the scent of rain-slicked pavement and the faint metallic tang of old blood—like the time he’d cut himself shaving and left a towel on her bathroom floor."
1"The flat smelled like garlic and soy sauce and the faintest hint of something darker—something that made her skin prickle."
2"The memory was a brand, too—hot and sharp."
3"Her fingers twitched, itching to reach for him, to pull him closer, to—"
4"The way he’d—"
5"The way he’d—"
6"The way he’d—"
7"The way he’d—"
8"The way he’d—"
9"The way he’d—"
10"The way he’d—"
11"The way he’d—"
12"The way he’d—"
13"The way he’d—"
14"The way he’d—"
15"The way he’d—"
16"The way he’d—"
17"The way he’d—"
18"The way he’d—"
19"The way he’d—"
20"The way he’d—"
21"The way he’d—"
22"The way he’d—"
23"The way he’d—"
24"The way he’d—"
25"The way he’d—"
26"The way he’d—"
27"The way he’d—"
28"The way he’d—"
29"The way he’d—"
30"The way he’d—"
31"The way he’d—"
32"The way he’d—"
33"The way he’d—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3968
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount79
adverbRatio0.019909274193548387
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.0030241935483870967
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences768
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences768
mean7.03
std4.89
cv0.696
sampleLengths
010
135
216
325
418
517
611
715
818
94
1015
1112
126
1311
144
157
165
1711
1817
1920
2021
219
229
234
248
2516
264
272
285
2910
3014
313
322
3316
3416
353
368
3728
383
393
4013
4110
4212
434
447
458
466
473
482
4910
45.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats33
diversityRatio0.044270833333333336
totalSentences768
uniqueOpeners34
13.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences489
matches
0"Then, the slow, deliberate click"
1"Instead, they settled in her"
ratio0.004
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount68
totalSentences489
matches
0"She’d found it three days"
1"*You’re a mess*, she’d thought,"
2"she said, voice steady despite"
3"His back was rigid, shoulders"
4"She exhaled through her nose,"
5"His voice was smooth, dangerously"
6"She set the bag down"
7"*His cologne.* She’d never been"
8"she said, voice low"
9"His head finally turned."
10"It was a choice."
11"She swallowed, hard."
12"He stepped forward, the hem"
13"Her breath hitched."
14"She’d let him."
15"she said, but her voice"
16"He reached out, his fingers"
17"She jerked away, but not"
18"His thumb traced the crescent,"
19"His gaze flicked up, locking"
ratio0.139
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount471
totalSentences489
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"A gust of cold air"
2"She’d found it three days"
3"*You’re a mess*, she’d thought,"
4"Aurora Carter froze mid-step, her"
5"The cane tapped once against"
6"she said, voice steady despite"
7"The scar on her wrist"
8"Lucien Moreau didn’t turn."
9"His back was rigid, shoulders"
10"The cane rested against the"
11"She exhaled through her nose,"
12"His voice was smooth, dangerously"
13"The words hung between them,"
14"She set the bag down"
15"The flat smelled like garlic"
16"*His cologne.* She’d never been"
17"she said, voice low"
18"His head finally turned."
19"The heterochromia was a trick"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences489
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences116
technicalSentenceCount17
matches
0"The cane tapped once against the wooden floor, a sharp *thunk* that echoed through the empty flat."
1"The scar on her wrist itched, as if remembering the last time she’d been this close to him."
2"She exhaled through her nose, a sound that was half-laugh, half-sigh."
3"The flat smelled like garlic and soy sauce and the faintest hint of something darker—something that made her skin prickle."
4"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
5"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
6"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
7"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
8"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
9"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
10"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
11"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
12"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
13"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
14"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
15"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
16"And then he was moving, his body blocking the doorway, his gaze locked onto hers."
15.91% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags55
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"she said, voice low"
1"she said, but her voice cracked"
2"He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist"
3"Lucien stepped, his body blocking the doorway"
4"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
9"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
10"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
11"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags48
fancyCount16
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
2"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
3"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
4"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
5"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
6"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
7"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
8"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
9"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
10"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
11"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
12"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
13"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
14"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
15"Eva’s voice (eva voice)"
dialogueSentences335
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.287
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.096
71.2468%