Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAW66HRH5PK8Q7HB7AT373

Run Details

Duration:
42.1s
Cost:
$0.000288
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against Detective Harlow Quinn’s trench coat, plastering the fabric to her legs. Each breath fogged the air in front of her face. The suspect, a wiry man with a nervous flinch, darted between overflowing bins, his shoulders hunched against the downpour. Quinn’s boots slapped against the slick pavement, the echo swallowed by the city's hum. She kept a steady distance, close enough to pursue, far enough to assess. He weaved through a cluster of late-night revelers spilling from a pub, a flash of dark hair disappearing into a narrow alley. Quinn cursed under her breath, pushing past a group of laughing students. This guy, whoever he was, knew the city like the back of his hand. The alley opened onto a wider street, the rain intensifying. He broke into a sprint. She matched his pace, the worn leather watch on her wrist a familiar anchor against the rising adrenaline. Eighteen years on the force. She’d chased down plenty of shadows, but this one felt different. Tangled with something she couldn’t quite name. Morbid curiosity mingled with the professionalism drilled into her. He didn't falter, disappearing through a wrought-iron gate. Quinn followed, her hand instinctively moving towards the Glock holstered under her coat. The gate led to a crumbling courtyard, the gargoyles perched on the buildings leering down at her. A metal door, tucked into the base of a soot-stained wall, stood ajar. He vanished inside. Quinn approached cautiously, her senses on high alert. The air grew noticeably colder, carrying a faint, metallic tang. She should call it in. Get backup. But something in the way he moved, the sheer desperation clinging to him, stalled her. This wasn't a common thief. This was someone running from something – or to something. She pushed the door open. The courtyard vanished. She stood instead at the foot of a curving staircase, descending into darkness. The metallic scent intensified, overlaid with the earthy smell of damp stone and something else... something acrid, almost chemical. A single bare bulb flickered overhead, casting long, distorted shadows. Each step creaked under her weight, the sound unnervingly loud in the oppressive silence. The air thickened, making it hard to breathe. She gripped her Glock tighter, her gaze fixed on the murky depths below. Then she heard it. A low hum, a murmur of voices. A sense of life, of activity, emanating from the darkness below. It wasn't a normal London hum. The staircase ended abruptly, spilling onto a vast, cavernous space. Quinn froze. She stood on the fringes of a market. Not a market of fruits and vegetables, or trinkets and souvenirs. This market pulsed with an alien energy. Merchants hawked their wares under the glow of flickering gas lamps, their faces obscured by shadows and elaborate masks. Stalls overflowed with bizarre items: vials filled with shimmering liquids, intricately carved bone pendants, bundles of dried herbs that smelled faintly of decay. The language spoken was a mishmash of tongues, some familiar, some not. The crowd was a tapestry of the bizarre: pale, gaunt figures in long coats, beings with eyes that glowed in the dim light, and others whose forms were too indistinct to classify. This was it. The Veil Market. Rumors whispered in the darker corners of the police force – a black market for the supernatural, a place where anything could be bought or sold. She’d dismissed them as just that: rumors. Until now. She scanned the crowd, searching for the suspect. He was at a stall near the center of the market, haggling with a hooded figure. The figure held aloft a small, ornate box, its surface covered in strange symbols. Quinn took a step forward, then paused. This was far beyond her jurisdiction. This was a rabbit hole she wasn’t sure she was ready to fall down. The memory of DS Morris's vacant eyes, the inexplicable circumstances surrounding his death, resonated in her mind. A cold dread coiled in her stomach. She risked a glance over her shoulder. The staircase leading back to the surface looked miles away, a fragile lifeline to the world she knew. Every instinct screamed at her to turn back, to report this to the higher-ups, to let someone else deal with it. But the suspect... what if he was running from something bigger? Something that threatened the city, the world? And what about that box? What secrets did it hold? A hand landed on her arm. She spun around, her gun raised. “Looking for something, Detective?” The voice was smooth, laced with an unsettling amusement. Quinn lowered her weapon slightly, her eyes fixed on the man who had spoken. He was tall, impeccably dressed in a tailored suit, his face partially hidden by the shadow of a wide-brimmed hat. A thin scar bisected his left eyebrow. "Just observing," Quinn replied, her voice carefully neutral. “Seems like an… unusual market.” He chuckled, a low, rumbling sound. “Unusual? Perhaps. Let’s just say it caters to a specific clientele.” He gestured towards the throng of shoppers. “You don't seem to belong here, Detective. This isn't a place for law enforcement.” “Someone ran in here,” Quinn countered. “A man. He was being chased.” The man’s smile didn't reach his eyes. “People run to all sorts of places, Detective. Seeking refuge, seeking opportunity. It’s hardly my concern.” He inclined his head slightly. “However, I can offer you some advice. Some places are best left undisturbed. This is one of them.” Quinn stared at him, assessing his every move. There was something familiar about him, something she couldn’t quite place. “Who are you?” she asked, her grip tightening on her Glock. “A concerned observer,” he replied smoothly. “Someone who wishes you well. Now, if you’ll excuse me…” He began to walk away, disappearing into the crowd. Quinn watched him go, her mind racing. She could still turn back. Walk away. Pretend she hadn’t seen this. She could file a report, let them handle it. But she knew, with a certainty that settled deep in her bones, that this was just the beginning. She glanced back at the suspect, still haggling over the ornate box. He caught her eye across the crowded market, his expression unreadable. He gave a barely perceptible nod. Quinn made her decision. She plunged deeper into the Veil Market. The crowd parted for her, wary eyes following her every move. She navigated the labyrinthine stalls, the cacophony of voices and the pungent aromas assaulting her senses. Where to begin? A figure bumped into her, nearly sending her sprawling. A young man. He recovered quickly, muttering a hasty apology. Quinn noticed a Saint Christopher medallion hanging around his neck. A familiar detail. “Sorry, Detective,” he blurted out, his face flushing. “Didn’t see you there.” Quinn recognized him immediately. Tomás Herrera. The former paramedic. She’d interviewed him once, regarding a string of unexplained injuries. He’d been cooperative, if a little evasive. He’d worked with the clique. “Herrera,” she said, her voice low. “What are you doing here?” He wrung his hands nervously. “Just… helping out.” “Helping out with what? Selling enchanted snake oil?” He glanced around, his eyes darting nervously. “It’s not like that, Detective. I’m… I’m providing medical assistance.” "To who? Demons?" Quinn folded her arms, scrutinizing him. "What's the suspect doing?" "He's buying something for Silas," Herrera muttered, his voice barely audible above the din. "Silas?" "Silas Blackwood. Runs this place. Don't go looking for him." Quinn ignored him, focused on the suspect. He’d secured the box, tucking it carefully inside his coat. He began to push through the crowd, heading towards a darkened archway at the far end of the market. She started to move, but Herrera grabbed her arm. “Detective, wait! You don’t understand. This place... it’s not safe.” “Safe for who?” Quinn yanked her arm free. “For you? For Blackwood? Or for the people hiding in the shadows?” She didn’t wait for an answer. She pushed past him, weaving through the crowd, her eyes fixed on the suspect’s retreating figure. She was closing the distance, the rain from the outside world a distant memory in this subterranean realm. He passed under the archway, disappearing into the darkness. Quinn hesitated for a moment, then followed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he replied smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.074
70.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1370
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"nervously"
count2
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"quickly"
4"nervously"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1370
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count4
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"depths"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"tapestry"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"resonated"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"eyebrow"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"unreadable"
count1
16
word"navigated"
count1
17
word"cacophony"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"familiar"
2"flickered"
3"weight"
4"oppressive"
5"silence"
6"depths"
7"sense of"
8"pulsed"
9"tapestry"
10"scanned"
11"resonated"
12"stomach"
13"eyebrow"
14"racing"
15"unreadable"
16"navigated"
17"cacophony"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1367
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1190
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn19
Glock3
London1
Veil2
Market2
Morris1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Herrera"
places
0"London"
1"Veil"
globalScore0.702
windowScore0.667
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite name"
1"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1367
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean26.29
std17.5
cv0.666
sampleLengths
070
148
265
338
434
537
65
745
835
928
1012
118
1272
1332
1441
1538
1651
1746
1828
1912
204
2150
2213
2338
2412
2523
2623
2719
2811
2925
3046
3129
324
337
3430
3532
3612
3731
3811
398
408
4117
4213
4314
441
4510
4636
479
4810
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"was, knew"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs212
matches
0"was running"
1"was closing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences144
ratio0.014
matches
0"This was someone running from something – or to something."
1"Rumors whispered in the darker corners of the police force – a black market for the supernatural, a place where anything could be bought or sold."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1193
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03520536462699078
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01760268231349539
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean9.49
std5.48
cv0.577
sampleLengths
014
110
219
314
413
522
612
714
810
95
1018
115
1211
137
149
158
1613
1717
1813
193
208
2110
225
232
2415
255
2610
275
283
2913
3015
314
3210
3314
348
3513
364
377
3811
396
4010
412
428
4311
447
4519
4623
4712
4832
493
46.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3263888888888889
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners47
27.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"Then she heard it."
ratio0.008
65.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences122
matches
0"She kept a steady distance,"
1"He weaved through a cluster"
2"He broke into a sprint."
3"She matched his pace, the"
4"She’d chased down plenty of"
5"He didn't falter, disappearing through"
6"He vanished inside."
7"She should call it in."
8"She pushed the door open."
9"She stood instead at the"
10"She gripped her Glock tighter,"
11"It wasn't a normal London"
12"She stood on the fringes"
13"She’d dismissed them as just"
14"She scanned the crowd, searching"
15"He was at a stall"
16"She risked a glance over"
17"She spun around, her gun"
18"He was tall, impeccably dressed"
19"He chuckled, a low, rumbling"
ratio0.385
17.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences122
matches
0"Rain lashed against Detective Harlow"
1"Each breath fogged the air"
2"The suspect, a wiry man"
3"Quinn’s boots slapped against the"
4"She kept a steady distance,"
5"He weaved through a cluster"
6"Quinn cursed under her breath,"
7"This guy, whoever he was,"
8"The alley opened onto a"
9"He broke into a sprint."
10"She matched his pace, the"
11"She’d chased down plenty of"
12"He didn't falter, disappearing through"
13"Quinn followed, her hand instinctively"
14"The gate led to a"
15"A metal door, tucked into"
16"He vanished inside."
17"Quinn approached cautiously, her senses"
18"The air grew noticeably colder,"
19"She should call it in."
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Stalls overflowed with bizarre items: vials filled with shimmering liquids, intricately carved bone pendants, bundles of dried herbs that smelled faintly of dec…"
1"The crowd was a tapestry of the bizarre: pale, gaunt figures in long coats, beings with eyes that glowed in the dim light, and others whose forms were too indis…"
2"Quinn lowered her weapon slightly, her eyes fixed on the man who had spoken."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Quinn replied, her voice carefully neutral"
1"she asked, her grip tightening on her Glock"
2"he blurted out, his face flushing"
3"she said, her voice low"
4"Herrera muttered, his voice barely audible above the din"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he blurted out (blurt out)"
1"Herrera muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.148
78.9421%