Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAWJACZ7BSNYCYHNB591NK

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaks. Rory’s pen skids across the invoice she’s scribbling for Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress, ink blooming a dark star on the paper. She doesn’t look up. The knock is too deliberate—three sharp raps, not Eva’s lazy tap. “Go away, Ptolemy,” she calls, though the tabby in question is curled on the windowsill, eyeing a sparrow outside. The third rap lands, harder, and she tenses. Her hand drifts to her left wrist, the crescent scar there throbbing under the fabric of her sleeve—a reflex, not fear. *Eva would’ve texted.* She crosses the cluttered room in two strides, pulling the deadbolt back with a *click*. The chain stays, of course. Crime doesn’t skip Brick Lane, not even for a flat above a curry house with a cat that thinks it owns the place. Her hand wraps around the door handle. The peephole is smudged, but she knows the outline before she squints: broad shoulders, a platinum blond hairline that’s too neat, a suit that costs more than her weekly wages. “Lock the chain, Rory,” he says, and her fingers go rigid. The name is a blade—cold, familiar. She yanks the door open. Lucien Moreau stands on her step, one gloved hand on the doorframe, the other hanging loose at his side. His cane leans against the wall, its ivory handle catching the light. He hasn’t changed—tight charcoal suit, cufflinks that look like they belong on a king, eyes two colors, amber and black, sharp as they’ve ever been. But something’s off. His jaw is set, the way it is when he’s hiding something, and his normally slicked hair has a stray lock that falls over his forehead, like he ran his hand through it a dozen times. “Took you long enough,” she says, voice steady even though her throat feels like it’s been lined with sand. “Thought you’d learned your lesson when I threw your invite to the O’Connor funeral in your face.” He pushes off the frame, stepping inside. The door clicks shut behind him, and she braves the chain. His scent hits her first—cinnamon, leather, something sharp and earthy that’s always been uniquely *him*. “Funerals aren’t my forte,” he says, nodding at the desk cluttered with delivery receipts. “But this… matters.” She snorts. “Matter? Moreau, you broker lives. You sell secrets. *Matters* doesn’t even make the list.” He ignores it. “You’re packing. Now.” “Excuse me?” “Your jacket. Underwear. Toothbrush. Don’t overthink it—we leave in ten minutes.” He turns, glancing at the windowsill. Ptolemy hisses, arching its back, and he pauses. “Cat stays. I’ll send someone for it.” Rory crosses her arms. “Who’s *we*? And why should I trust you to tell me what to do after you ghosted me like I was a bad business deal?” His head tilts, one amber eye narrowing. “You still don’t trust me?” “Should I?” He opens his mouth, then closes it. For a second, he looks younger—thirty-two, not the man who’d walked out of her life three years ago, leaving only a note: *Stay alive. Trust no one.* “Last week,” he says, “Evans was at the market. The one you left behind—the Irishman with the temper.” Her hands flex. *Evan.* The memory of his fist connecting with her cheek, the way he’d laughed when she’d begged for mercy… “He’s dead,” she says, and it’s not a question. “Yu-Fei told me. Throat slit. Found in the docklands.” Lucien nods. “The man who killed him? Name’s Voss. Runs a crew out of the Docks. He’s been asking about you. For months.” Rory’s back hits the wall. “That’s why you’re here. To *help*.” “To protect you. Voss doesn’t like being ignored.” He steps closer, and she doesn’t move—can’t, not with the way his eyes are on her, like he’s trying to memorize the shape of her. “You think I walked away because I *could*? Because some information broker has more important things to do than worry about his… *associate*?” “Associate.” The word tastes bitter. “That’s what I was. A tool.” “You were *more* than a tool.” His voice is lower now, rough around the edges. “You were the one who made me want to burn the rules down. The ones that say demons don’t feel, that humans are fragile. You… you *felt*. For me.” Her breath hitches. *Felt*. He’d said that once, in a moment when they were both drunk, in his flat in Bloomsbury—his hands on her waist, his mouth on hers, a promise that lingered in the air. Then the next morning, the note. *Stay alive. Trust no one.* “Funny,” she says, pushing off the wall, “how you’re the first person to tell me that. After three years of silence.” “Because silence was safer. Voss was watching. He knew I cared—knew you mattered. He’d have killed you to get to me.” He reaches into his suit jacket, pulls out a small case. Unclasps it. Inside: a silver chain with a locket—a locket she’d given him, the one with the photo of her and Eva at the beach. “I’ve been keeping this. For you. All this time.” She stares at the locket. Her hand trembles, and before she can stop it, she grabs his wrist. His skin is warm under her fingers, calloused from holding a cane. “Why didn’t you come back?” “Because I thought I could keep you safe,” he says, and there’s a strip of metal glinting in his sleeve—a blade, she realizes. His cane isn’t just for show. “But Voss found you. At least, he found a photo in your things. Said if I didn’t meet him tonight, he’d carve your name into your skin with his knife.” “You didn’t have to do this,” she says, voice breaking. “I know.” He closes her hand over the locket. “But I wanted to.” A car horn blares outside. Loud, sharp. They freeze. “Too late,” she says, pulling away. He’s already moving, cane in hand. He slams the jacket—no, it’s a bulletproof vest—over her shoulders. “Tuck it in. It’ll stop a knife. Maybe a bullet.” “Who else is out there?” “Moreau crew. Five guys. They’re there to slow Voss down. You and I… we’re taking the back exit. The one by the alley.” She glances at the window. The fire escape is rusted, but it’s solid enough. “What if Voss isn’t alone?” “Then we run. You’re faster than you think.” He hesitates, then adds, “You were always faster than anyone.” A noise from the hallway—a boot on the stairs. Heavy, deliberate. “Go,” Lucien says, shoving her toward the bedroom. “And lock the door. *After* you go.” She doesn’t argue. She sprints, shoving clothes into a duffel bag. A toothbrush, a hair tie, the locket (she tucks it inside). The door creaks open as she zips it. “Rory,” Lucien says, low. She turns. He’s got his cane in one hand, the blade extended. The hallway is dark, but she can see his shadow in the light from the landing. “Remember the scar?” he says, nodding at her wrist. “You got it falling off a bike when you were ten. Said you’d ‘rather be brave than perfect.’” “I remember.” “I promised I’d always be there to help you up.” He steps closer, and she sees the way his eyes are steady, unflinching. “Well. I’m here. And this time… I’m not leaving.” The boot thuds again. Closer. “Go,” he says, and there’s a *click*—the blade retracting. He grabs her duffel, slings it over his shoulder. “Now.” She runs. The back door is unlocked—Lucien’s crew must have done it. She slips outside, the cool night air hitting her face. The alley is narrow, lit by a flickering streetlamp. Lucien is waiting, leaning against a brick wall, the cane at his side. “Voss is coming from the end,” he says, nodding. “We go left—through the stables, then the market. There’s a exit there, near the old clock tower.” “Stables?” She snorts. “The ones that got condemned in ’19?” “Still standing. And empty.” He holds out a hand. She stares at it. His hand—the same one that’s held her, that’s touched her in ways no one else ever has. “You really think I’m letting you play hero again?” “Then don’t.” He smiles, and it’s the first time she’s seen it in three years—soft, almost warm. “Let me be yours. For once.” The alley darkens. A shadow moves at the far end. “Now or never, Rory,” he says. She takes his hand. They run. --- The scene ends with their footsteps merging, the shadow growing closer, and the locket bouncing against Lucien’s chest—its chain tight enough to leave a mark, a promise that things will never be the same.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He hesitates then [then]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.881
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.034
96.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"glinting"
3"perfect"
4"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans16
markdownWords26
totalWords1437
ratio0.018
matches
0"Eva would’ve texted."
1"click"
2"him"
3"Matters"
4"we"
5"Stay alive. Trust no one."
6"Evan."
7"help"
8"could"
9"associate"
10"more"
11"felt"
12"Felt"
13"Stay alive. Trust no one."
14"After"
15"click"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount937
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva3
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Ptolemy1
Lucien7
Bloomsbury1
Unclasps1
Rory3
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Empress"
2"Eva"
3"Brick"
4"Moreau"
5"Lucien"
6"Rory"
places
0"Lane"
1"Bloomsbury"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1437
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean23.95
std19.96
cv0.833
sampleLengths
03
186
243
337
411
511
695
736
833
917
1016
116
122
1332
1429
1512
162
1734
1818
1922
2018
2123
2211
2356
2411
2544
2647
2721
2866
2935
3059
3110
3213
339
346
3526
365
3723
3819
3918
4011
4115
4230
434
4455
452
4632
475
4819
4944
95.14% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"is curled"
1"been lined"
2"held"
3"touched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs176
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences136
ratio0.125
matches
0"The knock is too deliberate—three sharp raps, not Eva’s lazy tap."
1"Her hand drifts to her left wrist, the crescent scar there throbbing under the fabric of her sleeve—a reflex, not fear."
2"The name is a blade—cold, familiar."
3"He hasn’t changed—tight charcoal suit, cufflinks that look like they belong on a king, eyes two colors, amber and black, sharp as they’ve ever been."
4"His scent hits her first—cinnamon, leather, something sharp and earthy that’s always been uniquely *him*."
5"For a second, he looks younger—thirty-two, not the man who’d walked out of her life three years ago, leaving only a note: *Stay alive."
6"“To protect you. Voss doesn’t like being ignored.” He steps closer, and she doesn’t move—can’t, not with the way his eyes are on her, like he’s trying to memorize the shape of her."
7"He’d said that once, in a moment when they were both drunk, in his flat in Bloomsbury—his hands on her waist, his mouth on hers, a promise that lingered in the air."
8"Inside: a silver chain with a locket—a locket she’d given him, the one with the photo of her and Eva at the beach."
9"“Because I thought I could keep you safe,” he says, and there’s a strip of metal glinting in his sleeve—a blade, she realizes."
10"He slams the jacket—no, it’s a bulletproof vest—over her shoulders."
11"A noise from the hallway—a boot on the stairs."
12"“Go,” he says, and there’s a *click*—the blade retracting."
13"The back door is unlocked—Lucien’s crew must have done it."
14"His hand—the same one that’s held her, that’s touched her in ways no one else ever has."
15"“Then don’t.” He smiles, and it’s the first time she’s seen it in three years—soft, almost warm."
16"The scene ends with their footsteps merging, the shadow growing closer, and the locket bouncing against Lucien’s chest—its chain tight enough to leave a mark, a promise that things will never be the same."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount957
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.025078369905956112
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0041797283176593526
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean10.56
std8.32
cv0.788
sampleLengths
03
120
24
311
419
58
621
73
815
95
1023
117
1230
1311
146
155
1619
1712
1825
193
2036
2119
2217
237
2411
2515
2614
273
282
2914
303
313
322
3317
348
357
364
3725
387
395
402
417
4224
433
4418
453
4619
479
489
492
68.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4264705882352941
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners58
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then the next morning, the"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences89
matches
0"She doesn’t look up."
1"she calls, though the tabby"
2"Her hand drifts to her"
3"She crosses the cluttered room"
4"Her hand wraps around the"
5"he says, and her fingers"
6"She yanks the door open."
7"His cane leans against the"
8"He hasn’t changed—tight charcoal suit,"
9"His jaw is set, the"
10"she says, voice steady even"
11"He pushes off the frame,"
12"His scent hits her first—cinnamon,"
13"he says, nodding at the"
14"He ignores it."
15"He turns, glancing at the"
16"His head tilts, one amber"
17"He opens his mouth, then"
18"Her hands flex."
19"she says, and it’s not"
ratio0.584
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences89
matches
0"The door creaks."
1"Rory’s pen skids across the"
2"She doesn’t look up."
3"The knock is too deliberate—three"
4"she calls, though the tabby"
5"The third rap lands, harder,"
6"Her hand drifts to her"
7"*Eva would’ve texted.*"
8"She crosses the cluttered room"
9"The chain stays, of course."
10"Crime doesn’t skip Brick Lane,"
11"Her hand wraps around the"
12"The peephole is smudged, but"
13"he says, and her fingers"
14"The name is a blade—cold,"
15"She yanks the door open."
16"Lucien Moreau stands on her"
17"His cane leans against the"
18"He hasn’t changed—tight charcoal suit,"
19"His jaw is set, the"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The peephole is smudged, but she knows the outline before she squints: broad shoulders, a platinum blond hairline that’s too neat, a suit that costs more than h…"
1"He hasn’t changed—tight charcoal suit, cufflinks that look like they belong on a king, eyes two colors, amber and black, sharp as they’ve ever been."
2"He’d said that once, in a moment when they were both drunk, in his flat in Bloomsbury—his hands on her waist, his mouth on hers, a promise that lingered in the …"
3"The scene ends with their footsteps merging, the shadow growing closer, and the locket bouncing against Lucien’s chest—its chain tight enough to leave a mark, a…"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she says, voice breaking"
1"Lucien says, low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.271
leniency0.542
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.4705%