Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAX063A3P7NAW653GA2Z8M

Run Details

Duration:
3m 25s
Cost:
$0.016225
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory hauled four stacked golden takeout containers toward the dim bar’s back counter, her shoulder-length black hair catching on a frayed edge of a 1970s Berlin map taped to the wall—its edges curled with age, smudged with the faint residue of whiskey spills from decades of patrons leaning against it. She jerked her head free, and the top container teetered; she clamped a hand under it, her left wrist’s crescent scar scraping against the map’s gilded border. A sharp sound escaped her lips, sharp enough to cut through the low hum of a jazz record spinning on a turntable in the corner. She set the containers on the nearest empty stool, the wood worn smooth by years of use, then rubbed the scar—still pink when pressed, a leftover from the childhood bike crash that had left her crying on a rain-slicked Cardiff sidewalk until a stranger with a dented toolbox had knelt to help. She didn’t know then the stranger was a retired MI6 agent, not until later when her father had mentioned a “quiet man with an auburn beard” who’d helped him win a high-profile extradition case, but the memory clung to her like lint on a wool coat, a small flicker of kindness in a life that had grown too cold. A shadow stretched across the containers. She looked up. A man of 6’1” stood before her, his neatly trimmed auburn beard streaked with grey that hadn’t been there when she’d last seen him, his hazel eyes fixed on her wrist. He shifted his weight to his right leg, a slight limp pulling at his hip—something she’d never noticed in him before, a flaw that didn’t match the steady, unflinching man who’d fixed her bike’s bent spoke without a word of complaint. His right hand rested on the bar top, a silver signet ring glinting against the smudged wood, its surface etched with a raven’s head that matched the bar’s name. She adjusted the takeout’s paper lid, which had slipped to reveal a whiff of orange chicken and steamed rice, then brushed a strand of hair from her bright blue eyes. The bar’s walls closed in around her—covered in more maps, of Prague and Cardiff and Tokyo, and black-and-white photographs: one of a group of men in tailored suits standing outside a Prague café, another of a young woman with Rory’s black hair sitting on a bike in a Cardiff park, a third of Silas’s younger self, no grey streaks, no limp, his right hand lacking the signet ring. That scar’s been causing you trouble since 1999. Rory’s fingers stilled. She’d only told one person about the exact year of the crash—someone who’d fixed her bike’s bent spoke in five minutes flat, after she’d spent half an hour fumbling with it, who’d bought her a lemonade from a nearby stand and listened as she ranted about her father’s endless law lectures and her mother’s insistence that she stop “getting into mischief.” She leaned in, squinting at his face. The auburn hair had faded to a duller shade, the lines around his eyes deepened into furrows carved by years of worry, but the shape of his jaw matched the man she’d known in Cardiff, the man who’d laughed when she’d tried to quote a legal textbook to him. Silas? The man nodded, then gestured to the containers, his left leg shifting again to ease the weight off his knee. Yu-Fei’s order. For the back room meeting. He’d called this morning, said the client wanted extra orange chicken. Rory blinked. She’d taken the delivery job at Golden Empress three weeks prior, had no clue the Raven’s Nest—with its distinctive green neon sign she’d passed a dozen times without noticing, its glow seeping into the Soho sidewalk after dark—belonged to him. She’d fled Cardiff six months ago, stuffed a backpack with a change of clothes and her mother’s old Welsh poetry book, and hopped a train to London without reaching out to anyone but Eva, too ashamed to tell anyone about Evan’s fists, too afraid he’d find her if she left a trail. You never called after the Prague op. Silas’s jaw tightened. He turned to grab a clean napkin from the bar’s undercounter, his limp more pronounced as he bent, the creak of his knee echoing through the quiet bar. He set the napkin beside her containers, the fabric crisp against the golden cardboard. I didn’t call anyone. The op went south. A bullet grazed my knee. I retired. Opened this place six months later, used my old contacts to set up the back room—hidden behind the bookshelf by the counter—for clandestine meetings. He tapped the bookshelf, its leather-bound books lined up perfectly, a few of them fake spines that swung open to reveal a narrow staircase. Rory’s gaze flicked from the bookshelf to his knee, then to the black-and-white photograph of the Prague café. She’d heard rumors through her father’s legal contacts—something about a botched intelligence job that left one agent injured and two others missing, their bodies never found—but she’d never connected it to Silas, never guessed the steady man from Cardiff had a past that included gunfights and secret meetings. I fled Cardiff six months ago. Silas paused mid-wipe of a whiskey glass, the cloth freezing against the crystal. He set the glass down so hard the ice clinked, a sharp sound that cut through the jazz record’s hum. Why? Rory’s fingers curled around the takeout container’s edge, the wood’s rough grain pressing into her palm until her knuckles whitened. She’d never told anyone but Eva about Evan—about the nights he’d grabbed her wrist so tight she’d thought the scar would split open, about the lectures that turned into screams, about the day she’d walked in on him going through her mother’s poetry book and tearing out the pages with Welsh verses, about the train ride to London where she’d hidden in the bathroom for three hours, afraid he’d be sitting in the next car. An ex. He didn’t like me having memories that didn’t involve him. She nodded at the scar, now hidden under her sleeve, and tugged the fabric tighter, as if she could pull it over all her hurts. He tried to cut over it once. Told me it was a reminder of a life he didn’t want me to have. Silas’s signet ring dug into his palm as he clenched his hand, the raven’s head etching a small mark into his skin. He’d seen the scar first when he’d knelt to fix her bike, had noticed the way she’d flinched when he’d brushed against it—even then, she’d been quiet about her hurts, too quick to brush them off as nothing, too afraid to ask for help. I should have checked in. After the op. After I settled here. I had your father’s number, but I thought you’d moved on, that you’d forgotten about the bike fix and the lemonade, that you’d grown into the pre-law student your father wanted you to be. Rory shook her head, her black hair falling in front of her eyes. She’d had Eva’s number memorized, but she’d never looked up Silas. She’d thought he’d forgotten about her, that the bike fix and the lemonade had been a one-time kindness from a man with better things to do, a man who’d moved on from his Cardiff contacts to his London bar and his secret meetings. I didn’t look for you. I thought you’d moved on. That you didn’t want to hear from a kid who couldn’t stop getting into trouble—who’d snuck into her father’s office and stolen murder case files, who’d argued with her mother about pre-law, who’d ended up with a man who hated every part of her. Silas gestured to a booth in the corner, lined with old case files tucked under the seat, their pages yellowed with age, and a half-empty bottle of whiskey sitting on the table. He limped toward it, his knee creaking with every step, and Rory followed, her takeout containers forgotten for a moment, the whiff of orange chicken fading into the smell of whiskey and fried peanuts. When you were 16, you snuck into your father’s office and stole a copy of his most high-profile murder case files. You brought them to me, hidden in your school bag, and asked if the witness statements were fake—you’d noticed that one witness had claimed to see the murder at 10 PM, but the moon had been new that night, so there was no light to see anything. Rory laughed, a quiet, tight sound that didn’t reach her eyes. I thought I was a detective. You told me I’d get disbarred before I even applied to law school. You told me I had a knack for seeing what others missed, that pre-law was a waste of that knack. Silas sat down, his knee creaking as he shifted, and rested his right hand on the table, the signet ring glinting. I meant it. You fixed my bike’s bent spoke in five minutes flat, after I’d spent half an hour fumbling with it. You noticed the fake witness statement in your father’s files before he did. You’re not stupid. You’re not worth nothing. Rory’s throat tightened. She’d pursued pre-law because her father had insisted, because Evan had told her it was the only way she’d be “worth something.” She’d dropped out three months before fleeing Cardiff, after Evan had thrown her law textbook across the room and told her she’d never pass a single exam. I dropped out. After Evan told me I was too stupid to finish. I’ve been delivering takeout for Yu-Fei for three weeks, crashing on Eva’s couch, trying to save enough money for a flat of my own. Silas tapped his signet ring against the booth’s table, the raven’s head clicking against the wood. This bar’s flat is empty. Above the storage room. I’ve been looking for someone to rent it—someone I can trust, someone who can keep an eye on the bar when I’m in the back room. The rent’s cheap. Cheaper than any flat you’ll find in Soho. Rory froze. She’d been scanning classified ads every night, looking for a flat that cost less than her weekly delivery paycheck, but she’d never guessed the flat above Silas’s bar was available. She’d passed The Raven’s Nest a dozen times, never knowing it was his, never knowing he’d been looking for someone to rent the flat. You’d rent to me? Silas nodded, his hazel eyes softening. I know what it’s like to run from something. To hide from the past. To feel like you’re carrying everything alone. I don’t want you to carry it alone anymore. Rory’s left wrist tingled. She pulled her sleeve up, revealing the crescent scar, and let it sit in the bar’s dim light, for Silas to see—no more hiding, no more tugging her sleeve to cover it. I regret not calling. I regret thinking you’d forgotten me. I regret running to London without reaching out, without telling you what was happening. Silas’s hazel eyes filled with a quiet sorrow. I regret not checking in. I regret letting my own pain—my knee, my failed op, my guilt over the two agents who died—make me push everyone away. I regret not looking for you when I heard about your father’s law case falling apart, not realizing you were in trouble. He gestured to the takeout containers on the stool. Yu-Fei’s order is for my back room meeting. The clients will be here in ten minutes. I can help you carry the containers to the back room, then we can talk more about the flat. You don’t have to crash on Eva’s couch anymore. You don’t have to deliver takeout forever. Rory looked toward the bookshelf, lined with leather-bound books, and then back at Silas—his grey-streaked auburn beard, his slight limp, his signet ring glinting in the dim light. She’d spent six months running, six months hiding, but for the first time since she’d fled Cardiff, she didn’t feel alone. I have to drop off the containers first. Then I can talk about the flat. Silas stood, his limp pulling at his hip, and grabbed the top takeout container from the stool, his signet ring glinting against the golden cardboard. I’ll help you. You don’t have to carry everything alone anymore.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2098
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2098
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"glinting"
count4
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"clandestine"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"etching"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"weight"
2"glinting"
3"etched"
4"echoing"
5"clandestine"
6"flicked"
7"crystal"
8"reminder"
9"etching"
10"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
49.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences46
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences46
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen102
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2061
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions84
wordCount1952
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Berlin1
Cardiff10
Prague4
Tokyo1
Rory13
Silas16
Golden1
Empress1
Raven2
Nest2
Soho2
Welsh2
London4
Eva5
Evan5
Yu-Fei3
You12
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Raven"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"You"
places
0"Berlin"
1"Cardiff"
2"Prague"
3"Tokyo"
4"Golden"
5"Soho"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2061
matches(empty)
21.74% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences46
matches
0"on, that you’d"
1"missed, that pre-law"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean50.27
std29.48
cv0.587
sampleLengths
0102
1111
2110
398
48
564
656
71
838
994
107
1145
1263
1366
146
1533
161
1795
1812
1947
2066
2146
2267
2354
2466
2568
2650
2763
2852
2937
3062
3156
324
3336
3436
3524
3657
3760
3849
3915
4036
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"get disbarred"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs349
matches
0"was happening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences46
ratio0.348
matches
0"Rory hauled four stacked golden takeout containers toward the dim bar’s back counter, her shoulder-length black hair catching on a frayed edge of a 1970s Berlin map taped to the wall—its edges curled with age, smudged with the faint residue of whiskey spills from decades of patrons leaning against it."
1"She jerked her head free, and the top container teetered; she clamped a hand under it, her left wrist’s crescent scar scraping against the map’s gilded border."
2"She set the containers on the nearest empty stool, the wood worn smooth by years of use, then rubbed the scar—still pink when pressed, a leftover from the childhood bike crash that had left her crying on a rain-slicked Cardiff sidewalk until a stranger with a dented toolbox had knelt to help."
3"She adjusted the takeout’s paper lid, which had slipped to reveal a whiff of orange chicken and steamed rice, then brushed a strand of hair from her bright blue eyes. The bar’s walls closed in around her—covered in more maps, of Prague and Cardiff and Tokyo, and black-and-white photographs: one of a group of men in tailored suits standing outside a Prague café, another of a young woman with Rory’s black hair sitting on a bike in a Cardiff park, a third of Silas’s younger self, no grey streaks, no limp, his right hand lacking the signet ring."
4"Rory’s fingers stilled. She’d only told one person about the exact year of the crash—someone who’d fixed her bike’s bent spoke in five minutes flat, after she’d spent half an hour fumbling with it, who’d bought her a lemonade from a nearby stand and listened as she ranted about her father’s endless law lectures and her mother’s insistence that she stop “getting into mischief.”"
5"Rory blinked. She’d taken the delivery job at Golden Empress three weeks prior, had no clue the Raven’s Nest—with its distinctive green neon sign she’d passed a dozen times without noticing, its glow seeping into the Soho sidewalk after dark—belonged to him. She’d fled Cardiff six months ago, stuffed a backpack with a change of clothes and her mother’s old Welsh poetry book, and hopped a train to London without reaching out to anyone but Eva, too ashamed to tell anyone about Evan’s fists, too afraid he’d find her if she left a trail."
6"I didn’t call anyone. The op went south. A bullet grazed my knee. I retired. Opened this place six months later, used my old contacts to set up the back room—hidden behind the bookshelf by the counter—for clandestine meetings. He tapped the bookshelf, its leather-bound books lined up perfectly, a few of them fake spines that swung open to reveal a narrow staircase."
7"Rory’s gaze flicked from the bookshelf to his knee, then to the black-and-white photograph of the Prague café. She’d heard rumors through her father’s legal contacts—something about a botched intelligence job that left one agent injured and two others missing, their bodies never found—but she’d never connected it to Silas, never guessed the steady man from Cardiff had a past that included gunfights and secret meetings."
8"Rory’s fingers curled around the takeout container’s edge, the wood’s rough grain pressing into her palm until her knuckles whitened. She’d never told anyone but Eva about Evan—about the nights he’d grabbed her wrist so tight she’d thought the scar would split open, about the lectures that turned into screams, about the day she’d walked in on him going through her mother’s poetry book and tearing out the pages with Welsh verses, about the train ride to London where she’d hidden in the bathroom for three hours, afraid he’d be sitting in the next car."
9"Silas’s signet ring dug into his palm as he clenched his hand, the raven’s head etching a small mark into his skin. He’d seen the scar first when he’d knelt to fix her bike, had noticed the way she’d flinched when he’d brushed against it—even then, she’d been quiet about her hurts, too quick to brush them off as nothing, too afraid to ask for help."
10"I didn’t look for you. I thought you’d moved on. That you didn’t want to hear from a kid who couldn’t stop getting into trouble—who’d snuck into her father’s office and stolen murder case files, who’d argued with her mother about pre-law, who’d ended up with a man who hated every part of her."
11"When you were 16, you snuck into your father’s office and stole a copy of his most high-profile murder case files. You brought them to me, hidden in your school bag, and asked if the witness statements were fake—you’d noticed that one witness had claimed to see the murder at 10 PM, but the moon had been new that night, so there was no light to see anything."
12"Silas tapped his signet ring against the booth’s table, the raven’s head clicking against the wood. This bar’s flat is empty. Above the storage room. I’ve been looking for someone to rent it—someone I can trust, someone who can keep an eye on the bar when I’m in the back room. The rent’s cheap. Cheaper than any flat you’ll find in Soho."
13"Rory’s left wrist tingled. She pulled her sleeve up, revealing the crescent scar, and let it sit in the bar’s dim light, for Silas to see—no more hiding, no more tugging her sleeve to cover it."
14"Silas’s hazel eyes filled with a quiet sorrow. I regret not checking in. I regret letting my own pain—my knee, my failed op, my guilt over the two agents who died—make me push everyone away. I regret not looking for you when I heard about your father’s law case falling apart, not realizing you were in trouble."
15"Rory looked toward the bookshelf, lined with leather-bound books, and then back at Silas—his grey-streaked auburn beard, his slight limp, his signet ring glinting in the dim light. She’d spent six months running, six months hiding, but for the first time since she’d fled Cardiff, she didn’t feel alone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount225
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.022222222222222223
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences46
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences46
mean44.8
std26.52
cv0.592
sampleLengths
050
127
225
352
459
56
63
7101
898
98
1064
1156
121
1338
1494
157
1645
1763
1866
196
2033
211
2295
2312
2447
2566
2646
2767
2854
2966
3068
3150
3263
3352
3437
3562
3656
374
3836
3936
4024
4157
4260
4349
4415
4536
47.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.2608695652173913
totalSentences46
uniqueOpeners12
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences44
matches
0"She jerked her head free,"
1"She set the containers on"
2"She didn’t know then the"
3"She looked up."
4"She adjusted the takeout’s paper"
5"She leaned in, squinting at"
6"You never called after the"
7"I didn’t call anyone. The"
8"I fled Cardiff six months"
9"She nodded at the scar,"
10"I should have checked in."
11"I didn’t look for you."
12"I dropped out. After Evan"
13"You’d rent to me?"
14"I regret not calling. I"
15"He gestured to the takeout"
16"I have to drop off"
ratio0.386
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences44
matches
0"Rory hauled four stacked golden"
1"She jerked her head free,"
2"A sharp sound escaped her"
3"She set the containers on"
4"She didn’t know then the"
5"A shadow stretched across the"
6"She looked up."
7"A man of"
8"She adjusted the takeout’s paper"
9"That scar’s been causing you"
10"Rory’s fingers stilled. She’d only"
11"She leaned in, squinting at"
12"The man nodded, then gestured"
13"Rory blinked. She’d taken the"
14"You never called after the"
15"Silas’s jaw tightened. He turned"
16"I didn’t call anyone. The"
17"Rory’s gaze flicked from the"
18"I fled Cardiff six months"
19"Silas paused mid-wipe of a"
ratio0.977
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount15
matches
0"She set the containers on the nearest empty stool, the wood worn smooth by years of use, then rubbed the scar—still pink when pressed, a leftover from the child…"
1"She adjusted the takeout’s paper lid, which had slipped to reveal a whiff of orange chicken and steamed rice, then brushed a strand of hair from her bright blue…"
2"She leaned in, squinting at his face. The auburn hair had faded to a duller shade, the lines around his eyes deepened into furrows carved by years of worry, but…"
3"Rory blinked. She’d taken the delivery job at Golden Empress three weeks prior, had no clue the Raven’s Nest—with its distinctive green neon sign she’d passed a…"
4"I didn’t call anyone. The op went south. A bullet grazed my knee. I retired. Opened this place six months later, used my old contacts to set up the back room—hi…"
5"Rory’s gaze flicked from the bookshelf to his knee, then to the black-and-white photograph of the Prague café. She’d heard rumors through her father’s legal con…"
6"Rory’s fingers curled around the takeout container’s edge, the wood’s rough grain pressing into her palm until her knuckles whitened. She’d never told anyone bu…"
7"She nodded at the scar, now hidden under her sleeve, and tugged the fabric tighter, as if she could pull it over all her hurts. He tried to cut over it once. To…"
8"Rory shook her head, her black hair falling in front of her eyes. She’d had Eva’s number memorized, but she’d never looked up Silas. She’d thought he’d forgotte…"
9"Silas gestured to a booth in the corner, lined with old case files tucked under the seat, their pages yellowed with age, and a half-empty bottle of whiskey sitt…"
10"Rory laughed, a quiet, tight sound that didn’t reach her eyes. I thought I was a detective. You told me I’d get disbarred before I even applied to law school. Y…"
11"Silas sat down, his knee creaking as he shifted, and rested his right hand on the table, the signet ring glinting. I meant it. You fixed my bike’s bent spoke in…"
12"I dropped out. After Evan told me I was too stupid to finish. I’ve been delivering takeout for Yu-Fei for three weeks, crashing on Eva’s couch, trying to save e…"
13"Silas tapped his signet ring against the booth’s table, the raven’s head clicking against the wood. This bar’s flat is empty. Above the storage room. I’ve been …"
14"Silas’s hazel eyes filled with a quiet sorrow. I regret not checking in. I regret letting my own pain—my knee, my failed op, my guilt over the two agents who di…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory’s fingers stilled. (still)"
1"Rory’s throat tightened. (tighten)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
69.8071%