| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice echoed oddly [oddly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1031 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1031 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "shimmered" | | 15 | "wavering" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "maw" | | 19 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1019 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Wind through leaves, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 997 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Evan | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Silence | 1 | | Welsh | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Brendan" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Silence" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed smaller now, the standing stones inching inward" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.981 | | wordCount | 1019 | | matches | | 0 | "not stone or root, but a petal" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.93% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 72.79 | | std | 21.85 | | cv | 0.3 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 117 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 106 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 90 | | 7 | 68 | | 8 | 79 | | 9 | 85 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "Another sound, closer this time—a faint click, like a twig snapping under careful weight." | | 1 | "One, two, three—her boot pressed down on something yielding, not stone or root, but a petal that squelched wetly." | | 2 | "At the edge of her vision, a shadow flitted—low to the ground, sinuous, gone when she turned." | | 3 | "The whispers returned, overlapping now, murmurs in a tongue that tugged at half-remembered stories from her mum's Welsh lullabies—melodic, insistent, pleading." | | 4 | "At the corner of her eye, the shadow darted again—closer, humanoid now, with limbs that stretched too far." | | 5 | "But the mist thickened, coiling like smoke from a dying fire, and hands—cold, insistent—grazed her shoulder from behind." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 138 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.021739130434782608 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014492753623188406 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 12.13 | | std | 6.81 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 61.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.39285714285714285 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the oaks, their trunks" | | 1 | "Too deliberate, too hungry." |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught herself against one" | | 1 | "She straightened, heart hammering, and" | | 2 | "She flexed her fingers, the" | | 3 | "She'd check the pendant's behaviour," | | 4 | "She stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 5 | "It hummed under her touch," | | 6 | "She slipped the pendant's chain" | | 7 | "Its inner glow pulsed in" | | 8 | "She replaced the pendant, its" | | 9 | "She blinked, shook her head." | | 10 | "She lifted her foot." | | 11 | "She wiped it on her" | | 12 | "She needed to leave." | | 13 | "She spun, fists clenched." | | 14 | "Her voice echoed oddly, layered" | | 15 | "She pressed on, the pendant" | | 16 | "She broke into a jog," | | 17 | "She veered away, but the" | | 18 | "She reached the split oak," | | 19 | "She bolted, branches whipping her" |
| | ratio | 0.256 | |
| 68.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's boot caught on a" | | 1 | "She caught herself against one" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 3 | "She straightened, heart hammering, and" | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed at" | | 6 | "Eva had described this place" | | 7 | "The pendant had pulled her" | | 8 | "She flexed her fingers, the" | | 9 | "The screen had gone blank" | | 10 | "She'd check the pendant's behaviour," | | 11 | "This was just another puzzle." | | 12 | "A rustle came from the" | | 13 | "Rory froze, ears straining." | | 14 | "She stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 15 | "The flowers brushed her calves," | | 16 | "The pendant warmed again, insistent" | | 17 | "Rory knelt, tracing one with" | | 18 | "It hummed under her touch," | | 19 | "Fae bargains, portals to other" |
| | ratio | 0.782 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's boot caught on a root that shouldn't have been there, twisting her ankle just enough to send her stumbling forward into the clearing." | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed at the edges, twisted oaks that formed a ragged circle, their branches interlocking overhead like skeletal fingers." | | 2 | "Quick out-of-the-box thinking, that's what got her through law lectures and Evan's rages." | | 3 | "But the air hung still, heavy with the cloying scent of honeysuckle that bloomed out of season, its sweetness cloying enough to coat her tongue." | | 4 | "Its inner glow pulsed in time with her heartbeat, casting erratic shadows that danced across the stones." | | 5 | "The path narrowed, branches scraping her arms, drawing thin lines that stung with unnatural heat." | | 6 | "The whispers returned, overlapping now, murmurs in a tongue that tugged at half-remembered stories from her mum's Welsh lullabies—melodic, insistent, pleading." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |