Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAX1RM0ZR41P70FG1QKEF3

Run Details

Duration:
2m 53s
Cost:
$0.015649
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow’s boots thudded against damp Tube station tiles, each step measured to the tick of her worn leather watch. The tunnel mouth’s metal grate whined shut behind her—she’d jammed it with a loose brick to block unauthorized entry, her military precision ensuring the brick fit snugly enough to resist prying hands. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught the glow of her torch; the beam cut through a haze of burnt sage and mildew that clung to the air like a second skin. She’d gotten the bone token (the Veil Market’s non-negotiable entry requirement) from the crime scene’s initial sweep—clutched in a dead man’s discarded wool glove by the tunnel entrance, its surface carved with a tiny raven sigil she’d yet to place. Two hours past the market’s usual post-full-moon evacuation, the station hummed with a faint, unidentifiable energy; she’d felt it prick at her neck the moment she stepped through the grate. She spotted the body first. It slumped against a splintered vendor’s stall stacked with dried mandrake roots, rolled sheets of sigil-etched parchment, and three vials of glowing blue liquid—banned alchemical substances she’d read about in Eva’s restricted archive reports. The man’s face was slack, his eyes staring blankly at the water-stained ceiling. No bullet holes marred his tailored wool coat. No knife wounds gaped at his throat. No signs of struggle twisted his fingers, save for the white-knuckled grip on the object clamped in his right hand. Her torch beam settled on that object. A small brass compass, its casing coated in a patina of verdigris that dulled its shine, its face etched with swirling protective sigils she’d glimpsed once in Eva’s research notes during a casual consultation six months prior. She’d dismissed the notes then, writing off the Veil Compass as a myth concocted by occult enthusiasts—now, it sat heavy in her mind, a piece of evidence that defied every logical explanation she’d honed over 18 years of decorated Metropolitan Police service. A movement caught her eye. She snapped her torch to the left. Eva Kowalski crouched by the stall’s base, her curly red hair falling in tangles over her round glasses. She tucked a strand behind her left ear (her well-documented nervous habit) as she flipped through a leather-bound book from her worn leather satchel, the satchel’s frayed straps spilling loose pages of occult texts onto the cold tile. She’d arrived 20 minutes before Harlow, summoned by a frantic radio call Harlow had made after spotting the compass—her master’s degree in Ancient History from Oxford and access to the British Museum’s restricted archives made her the only occult researcher she could trust, even if she still bristled at the thought of leaning on supernatural explanations. Bone token’s missing from his pockets. Harlow’s fingers curled around her radio, perched on her belt. She’d already patted down the man’s coat pockets—empty, save for a crumpled train ticket dated the previous full moon, a pack of half-smoked cigarettes, and a folded receipt for mandrake roots from a market vendor she’d never heard of. You need one to get in. No exception. The market’s guards check every entry point. Eva’s voice carried a faint tremor as she pushed her glasses back up her nose, her freckled complexion pale under the torch’s glow. I’ve seen their logs—no one slips through without a token. Harlow stepped closer, her boots crunching a loose sheet of sigil parchment underfoot. She knelt beside the body, her knees cracking softly against the tile, and pried the compass from the man’s hand. Its weight was heavier than she expected, its casing cool to the touch. A faint scratch marred one of the swirling sigils on its face—she’d missed it in the initial glance, her focus fixed on the man’s unmarked throat. What’s this? She held the compass up to Eva’s face, her thumb brushing the scratch. Eva leaned in, her hair falling forward again—she tucked another strand behind her ear before gesturing at the scratch with a page from her book. That’s a protective sigil, crafted by a Shade artisan. They’re impossible to scratch accidentally—Shade metalwork is forged to resist blades and blunt force. Harlow’s mind raced. She’d lost her partner, DS Morris, three years prior to an unexplained incident that left his body unmarked, his eyes staring blankly at the ceiling just like this man’s. She’d dismissed the supernatural whispers back then, writing off the death as a hidden poison she’d failed to detect. Now, the pieces tugged at the edges of her deduction, a quiet urgency building in her chest. The compass’s needle. It’s spinning. She held the compass up to her torch, watching the tiny black needle whirl in circles, never settling on a direction. Eva nodded, flipping to a page marked with a pressed four-leaf clover. It’s supposed to point to the nearest supernatural rift or portal—Shade artisans craft them to lead users to hidden energy pockets. Spinning means it’s been tampered with, the energy disrupted. Harlow stood, her boots thudding against the tile as she paced the stall’s perimeter. The stall’s wood had warped with age, its edges swollen from the station’s damp air. A small gap showed between the back panel and the frame, so faint she’d missed it in her initial sweep—she’d focused on the body and the compass, relying on her usual criminal investigation tactics instead of accounting for the market’s supernatural rules. He was a vendor here. He’d have access to hidden storage. She stopped in front of the back panel, her torch beam highlighting the gap. The market’s vendors hide their most valuable goods from casual thieves—enchanted tools, restricted information, even maps of hidden rifts. Eva pushed herself to her feet, her satchel slipping off one shoulder as she closed her book. She’d observed the vendors during a research trip six months prior, hiding their treasures in wall niches and floor panels to avoid the market’s enforcers. Harlow pried the back panel open with her torch’s edge, her fingers gripping the metal firmly as she levered the wood away from the frame. A small wooden box fell out, its lid carved with the same raven sigil as the bone token from the glove. She caught it before it hit the tile, her sharp jaw tightening at the sound of a paper rustling inside. She flipped the box’s lid. Inside, she found a crumpled note and a second bone token, its surface polished to a faint shine. The note’s ink was faded, its handwriting scrawled in a hurry: Rift at King’s Cross, platform 13, midnight. The date at the bottom matched the train ticket in the man’s pocket—three nights prior, the night of the last full moon. Harlow’s breath caught. She’d checked the stall’s front and sides, running her hands over every inch of wood for hidden compartments, but she’d missed the warped back panel because she’d dismissed the market’s supernatural storage habits as a fantasy. The man hadn’t been a random victim—he’d been a whistleblower, hiding the rift’s location to warn someone before his attacker silenced him. You didn’t check the back. Eva’s voice was soft, her gaze fixed on the note as she stepped closer. The tamperer wouldn’t want anyone to find the rift—they’d scratch the compass to cause a backlash, knowing it would kill him without leaving a trace. Backlash? Harlow’s fingers tightened around the compass, the scratch digging into her thumb. She’d never believed in supernatural consequences, but the man’s unmarked body matched her partner’s death so closely she couldn’t ignore it. The Shade artisan’s compasses have a built-in defense—tamper with a protective sigil, and the compass’s energy rebounds, draining the user’s life force in seconds. No bullet holes, no knife wounds, just a slack face and a staring gaze. Eva explained, her voice steadying as she gestured at the body. I’ve read about it in the restricted archives—three other cases in the last decade, all linked to the Veil Market. Harlow flipped her wrist to check her worn leather watch—midnight was in two hours. She’d need to mobilize her unit to King’s Cross platform 13, a disused platform she’d investigated once after a report of strange lights. The rift’s energy could spread to the surface if left unchecked, putting hundreds of commuters at risk. He was trying to warn someone. The note, the second bone token—he hid them so the tamperer couldn’t find them. Harlow said, slipping the note and token into her coat pocket. She’d missed the warning because she’d refused to acknowledge the market’s supernatural rules, but now she saw the pattern: her partner’s death, this man’s death, all linked to tampered Shade tools and hidden rifts. Eva tucked another strand of hair behind her ear, her glasses slipping down her nose as she pushed them back with a steady hand—no more nervous trembling, a sign she’d gained confidence in her deduction. The tamperer’s still nearby, she said, her gaze drifting to the tunnel mouth. They’d have stayed to make sure no one found the note. Harlow flicked her radio on, pressing the talk button with a firm finger. Unit 7, converge on King’s Cross platform 13. Standby for further instructions. No unauthorized personnel within 50 yards of the platform. She snapped the radio off, her sharp jaw tightening as she looked at Eva. I didn’t believe you before—about the supernatural, about the compasses, about the rifts. The sigils don’t lie. They’re carved to hold energy, to guide or protect. Eva’s freckled complexion lit up with a faint smile, her curly red hair catching the torch’s glow. You just had to look past the obvious. Harlow stepped toward the tunnel mouth, her torch held high. She’d need to retrieve the first bone token from the wool glove by the entrance—she’d need it to exit the station without triggering the market’s hidden defenses, which Eva had warned could trap intruders in a supernatural loop for days. She’d missed the warped back panel, the hidden note, and the pattern linking her partner’s death to this case because she’d clung to her usual logical tactics. Now, with the compass in her hand and the note in her pocket, she finally saw what others had missed: the supernatural wasn’t a myth. It was a weapon, and someone was using it to kill.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1743
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1743
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"ensuring"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"raced"
count1
5
word"disrupted"
count1
6
word"firmly"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"ensuring"
2"etched"
3"weight"
4"raced"
5"disrupted"
6"firmly"
7"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1707
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1707
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Veil3
Market2
Eva14
Compass1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Kowalski1
Harlow14
Ancient1
History1
Oxford1
British1
Museum1
Shade5
Morris1
Rift1
King3
Cross3
You3
persons
0"Market"
1"Eva"
2"Compass"
3"Police"
4"Kowalski"
5"Harlow"
6"Museum"
7"Morris"
8"King"
9"Cross"
10"You"
places
0"Veil"
1"Ancient"
2"Oxford"
3"British"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1707
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean42.68
std33.55
cv0.786
sampleLengths
0152
187
286
312
4112
56
649
715
833
972
102
1113
1248
1368
145
1521
1642
1771
1811
1914
2019
2142
2266
2363
2461
255
2639
271
2833
2938
3031
3154
3220
3345
3459
3534
3627
3713
3825
39113
91.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences100
matches
0"is forged"
1"been tampered"
2"was faded"
3"carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs289
matches
0"was trying"
1"was using"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences25
totalSentences100
ratio0.25
matches
0"The tunnel mouth’s metal grate whined shut behind her—she’d jammed it with a loose brick to block unauthorized entry, her military precision ensuring the brick fit snugly enough to resist prying hands."
1"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught the glow of her torch; the beam cut through a haze of burnt sage and mildew that clung to the air like a second skin."
2"She’d gotten the bone token (the Veil Market’s non-negotiable entry requirement) from the crime scene’s initial sweep—clutched in a dead man’s discarded wool glove by the tunnel entrance, its surface carved with a tiny raven sigil she’d yet to place."
3"Two hours past the market’s usual post-full-moon evacuation, the station hummed with a faint, unidentifiable energy; she’d felt it prick at her neck the moment she stepped through the grate."
4"It slumped against a splintered vendor’s stall stacked with dried mandrake roots, rolled sheets of sigil-etched parchment, and three vials of glowing blue liquid—banned alchemical substances she’d read about in Eva’s restricted archive reports."
5"She’d dismissed the notes then, writing off the Veil Compass as a myth concocted by occult enthusiasts—now, it sat heavy in her mind, a piece of evidence that defied every logical explanation she’d honed over 18 years of decorated Metropolitan Police service."
6"She’d arrived 20 minutes before Harlow, summoned by a frantic radio call Harlow had made after spotting the compass—her master’s degree in Ancient History from Oxford and access to the British Museum’s restricted archives made her the only occult researcher she could trust, even if she still bristled at the thought of leaning on supernatural explanations."
7"She’d already patted down the man’s coat pockets—empty, save for a crumpled train ticket dated the previous full moon, a pack of half-smoked cigarettes, and a folded receipt for mandrake roots from a market vendor she’d never heard of."
8"I’ve seen their logs—no one slips through without a token."
9"A faint scratch marred one of the swirling sigils on its face—she’d missed it in the initial glance, her focus fixed on the man’s unmarked throat."
10"Eva leaned in, her hair falling forward again—she tucked another strand behind her ear before gesturing at the scratch with a page from her book."
11"They’re impossible to scratch accidentally—Shade metalwork is forged to resist blades and blunt force."
12"It’s supposed to point to the nearest supernatural rift or portal—Shade artisans craft them to lead users to hidden energy pockets."
13"A small gap showed between the back panel and the frame, so faint she’d missed it in her initial sweep—she’d focused on the body and the compass, relying on her usual criminal investigation tactics instead of accounting for the market’s supernatural rules."
14"The market’s vendors hide their most valuable goods from casual thieves—enchanted tools, restricted information, even maps of hidden rifts."
15"The date at the bottom matched the train ticket in the man’s pocket—three nights prior, the night of the last full moon."
16"The man hadn’t been a random victim—he’d been a whistleblower, hiding the rift’s location to warn someone before his attacker silenced him."
17"The tamperer wouldn’t want anyone to find the rift—they’d scratch the compass to cause a backlash, knowing it would kill him without leaving a trace."
18"The Shade artisan’s compasses have a built-in defense—tamper with a protective sigil, and the compass’s energy rebounds, draining the user’s life force in seconds."
19"I’ve read about it in the restricted archives—three other cases in the last decade, all linked to the Veil Market."
20"Harlow flipped her wrist to check her worn leather watch—midnight was in two hours."
21"The note, the second bone token—he hid them so the tamperer couldn’t find them."
22"Eva tucked another strand of hair behind her ear, her glasses slipping down her nose as she pushed them back with a steady hand—no more nervous trembling, a sign she’d gained confidence in her deduction."
23"I didn’t believe you before—about the supernatural, about the compasses, about the rifts."
24"She’d need to retrieve the first bone token from the wool glove by the entrance—she’d need it to exit the station without triggering the market’s hidden defenses, which Eva had warned could trap intruders in a supernatural loop for days."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1743
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"usual post-full-moon"
1"no more nervous trembling,"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.023522662076878944
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.0068846815834767644
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean17.07
std11.15
cv0.653
sampleLengths
019
132
231
340
430
55
634
713
88
97
1020
117
1237
1342
145
157
1618
1738
1856
196
2010
2139
226
232
247
2523
2610
2713
2820
2913
3026
312
3213
3325
349
3514
363
3729
3819
3917
403
412
4221
4312
4421
459
4614
4715
4842
495
42.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.23
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences96
matches
0"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
1"She’d gotten the bone token"
2"She spotted the body first."
3"It slumped against a splintered"
4"Her torch beam settled on"
5"She’d dismissed the notes then,"
6"She snapped her torch to"
7"She tucked a strand behind"
8"She’d arrived 20 minutes before"
9"She’d already patted down the"
10"You need one to get"
11"I’ve seen their logs—no one"
12"She knelt beside the body,"
13"Its weight was heavier than"
14"She held the compass up"
15"They’re impossible to scratch accidentally—Shade"
16"She’d lost her partner, DS"
17"She’d dismissed the supernatural whispers"
18"She held the compass up"
19"It’s supposed to point to"
ratio0.427
17.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences96
matches
0"Harlow’s boots thudded against damp"
1"The tunnel mouth’s metal grate"
2"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
3"She’d gotten the bone token"
4"She spotted the body first."
5"It slumped against a splintered"
6"The man’s face was slack,"
7"Her torch beam settled on"
8"A small brass compass, its"
9"She’d dismissed the notes then,"
10"A movement caught her eye."
11"She snapped her torch to"
12"Eva Kowalski crouched by the"
13"She tucked a strand behind"
14"She’d arrived 20 minutes before"
15"Harlow’s fingers curled around her"
16"She’d already patted down the"
17"You need one to get"
18"The market’s guards check every"
19"Eva’s voice carried a faint"
ratio0.885
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"Now, the pieces tugged at"
1"Now, with the compass in"
ratio0.021
82.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences71
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught the glow of her torch; the beam cut through a haze of burnt sage and mildew that clung to the air like a second …"
1"A small brass compass, its casing coated in a patina of verdigris that dulled its shine, its face etched with swirling protective sigils she’d glimpsed once in …"
2"She’d dismissed the notes then, writing off the Veil Compass as a myth concocted by occult enthusiasts—now, it sat heavy in her mind, a piece of evidence that d…"
3"Eva leaned in, her hair falling forward again—she tucked another strand behind her ear before gesturing at the scratch with a page from her book."
4"She’d lost her partner, DS Morris, three years prior to an unexplained incident that left his body unmarked, his eyes staring blankly at the ceiling just like t…"
5"She held the compass up to her torch, watching the tiny black needle whirl in circles, never settling on a direction."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.7165%