Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAX86SASSZHDXZ89FNRG6N

Run Details

Duration:
12.1s
Cost:
$0.000491
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying firefly as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the scent of aged whiskey and cigarette smoke wrapping around her like an old coat. She’d only meant to grab a quick drink before heading back to the flat above the bar—Silas’ flat, technically, though he’d never kicked her out after that night three years ago when she’d shown up on his doorstep, bruised and shaking. But the place had changed. The bar was quieter than she remembered. The usual hum of conversation, the clink of glasses, the low thrum of jazz from the corner speakers—all of it felt muted, like the world had turned down the volume. Rory slid onto a stool near the back, where the light was dim and the shadows pooled like spilled ink. She ordered a gin and tonic, neat, the way she used to drink them before London started feeling like a cage. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with slow, deliberate strokes. His back was to her, but she’d know that posture anywhere—the way his shoulders carried themselves, broad and unyielding, like he was still expecting a bullet to come flying through the door at any second. His hair had more grey now, streaked through the auburn like iron filings in rust. The limp in his left leg was more pronounced, a hitch in his step when he moved between the shelves. She should’ve left. Should’ve turned and walked out before he noticed her. But she didn’t. Rory took a slow sip of her drink, watching the way his fingers curled around the glass, the signet ring on his right hand catching the light. That ring had always been his tell—something he’d never take off, not even in the field. She remembered the first time she’d seen it, when they were kids sneaking into his father’s study, him swiping it off the desk like it was a trophy. “You’re staring.” His voice was rougher than she remembered. Deeper. The kind of voice that didn’t ask questions—it made statements. Rory turned, swirling her glass. “Didn’t mean to disturb you.” A lie. They both knew it. Silas set the glass down with a quiet *clink*. “You always were shit at lying, Carter.” She exhaled, half-laugh, half-sigh. “Still am.” He studied her for a long moment, his hazel eyes sharp in the low light. “You look different.” “So do you.” That got a smirk. “Older. Greyer. Still limping like a man who’s seen too many wars.” Rory traced the rim of her glass with her thumb. “You always did have a way with words.” Silas leaned against the bar, crossing his arms. “You’re not here for small talk.” “No.” “Then why?” She hesitated. The truth was a knife she wasn’t sure she wanted to twist. “I was delivering for the Empress. Thought I’d stop in. Haven’t been back in years.” A beat. The ice in her glass tinkled as she shifted it. “You still own this place?” “Still own it.” His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist—the one she’d gotten when she was twelve, climbing the fence behind his house, skinning her knee on the rusted metal. He’d patched her up in his kitchen, his mother scolding him for letting her near the stove. “You still work for Cheung?” “Part-time. Delivery.” Silas nodded, like that explained everything. Like it made sense that she’d ended up here, in this bar, after everything that had happened. “You look good, Rory.” She almost laughed. “Bullshit.” “You do.” His voice was steady. “You always were too thin. Now you’ve got some meat on your bones.” She shot him a look. “Thanks.” “Don’t mention it.” He reached for a rag, wiping down the counter with slow, methodical strokes. “You still in law?” “Dropped out.” Another nod. “Figured.” “Why’s that?” “Because you’re standing in a bar at midnight, not in a courtroom.” Rory took another sip. “You always could read me like a book.” “Used to be my job.” She set her glass down. “You still doing that? The spy stuff?” Silas didn’t answer right away. He poured himself a whiskey, neat, the way he always had. “Occasionally.” “Still with MI6?” A pause. “No.” “Then what?” He took a slow drink, watching her over the rim of the glass. “You really want to know?” “Yes.” Silas set the glass down. “I run a network. Independent. People who…” He trailed off, searching for the right words. “People who need things done that the government won’t touch.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. “Like what?” “Like finding people who don’t want to be found.” His eyes held hers. “Like extracting information from people who’d rather die than talk.” She swallowed. “You’re still playing with fire.” “Someone’s got to.” The air between them thickened. Rory looked away, her gaze landing on the old maps pinned to the wall behind the bar—London, Prague, places she’d never been but had heard whispered about in hushed tones when she was younger. “You ever think about what you’re missing?” Silas didn’t react. Didn’t flinch. Didn’t look away. “Every damn day.” She exhaled sharply. “I didn’t come here to dredge up the past.” “No?” He stepped closer, his voice low. “Then why’d you come back, Rory?” Because I needed to see if you’d still be here. Because I needed to know if you’d changed as much as I had. Because I needed to know if you’d forgive me. The words burned in her throat, but she didn’t say them. Instead, she finished her drink in one swallow and stood. “I should go.” Silas didn’t stop her. Just watched as she slid off the stool, her coat brushing against the bar as she turned to leave. “Rory.” She paused. “You still got that key to my flat?” She didn’t look back. “Yeah.” “Good.” And then she was gone, the door swinging shut behind her, the neon sign flickering like a dying pulse. Silas stayed where he was, staring at the empty space where she’d been standing. The weight of years pressed down on him, heavy as a tombstone. He poured another whiskey. And for the first time in a long time, he let himself wonder if maybe—just maybe—he’d made the wrong choice.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She’d only [only]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.113
leniency0.226
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.038
90.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1062
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1062
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"traced"
2"flicked"
3"methodical"
4"pulse"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1051
ratio0.004
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount782
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Rory8
Carter1
London2
Blackwood1
Prague1
Silas9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Prague"
globalScore0.925
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1051
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"know that posture"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean15.69
std18.72
cv1.193
sampleLengths
082
178
24
383
412
53
671
72
818
910
106
1116
126
1318
143
1516
1618
1714
181
192
2029
2117
2254
232
2427
254
2619
276
2820
292
303
312
3212
3312
345
3512
3617
373
383
392
4018
411
4230
438
4423
457
463
4746
4811
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was, staring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences122
ratio0.066
matches
0"She’d only meant to grab a quick drink before heading back to the flat above the bar—Silas’ flat, technically, though he’d never kicked her out after that night three years ago when she’d shown up on his doorstep, bruised and shaking."
1"The usual hum of conversation, the clink of glasses, the low thrum of jazz from the corner speakers—all of it felt muted, like the world had turned down the volume."
2"His back was to her, but she’d know that posture anywhere—the way his shoulders carried themselves, broad and unyielding, like he was still expecting a bullet to come flying through the door at any second."
3"That ring had always been his tell—something he’d never take off, not even in the field."
4"The kind of voice that didn’t ask questions—it made statements."
5"“Still own it.” His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist—the one she’d gotten when she was twelve, climbing the fence behind his house, skinning her knee on the rusted metal."
6"Rory looked away, her gaze landing on the old maps pinned to the wall behind the bar—London, Prague, places she’d never been but had heard whispered about in hushed tones when she was younger."
7"And for the first time in a long time, he let himself wonder if maybe—just maybe—he’d made the wrong choice."
65.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount203
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.08866995073891626
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.014778325123152709
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean8.61
std8.29
cv0.962
sampleLengths
036
141
25
37
430
520
621
74
813
935
1015
1120
123
139
143
1527
1616
1728
182
197
201
2110
225
235
242
254
269
277
284
292
3015
313
323
334
3412
3510
368
378
386
391
402
412
4212
4315
442
4510
465
4732
4817
495
49.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3360655737704918
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Instead, she finished her drink"
2"Just watched as she slid"
ratio0.045
68.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences66
matches
0"She’d only meant to grab"
1"She ordered a gin and"
2"His back was to her,"
3"His hair had more grey"
4"She should’ve left."
5"She remembered the first time"
6"His voice was rougher than"
7"They both knew it."
8"She exhaled, half-laugh, half-sigh."
9"He studied her for a"
10"His gaze flicked to the"
11"He’d patched her up in"
12"She almost laughed."
13"His voice was steady"
14"She shot him a look."
15"He reached for a rag,"
16"She set her glass down."
17"He poured himself a whiskey,"
18"He took a slow drink,"
19"He trailed off, searching for"
ratio0.379
58.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences66
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"She’d only meant to grab"
2"The bar was quieter than"
3"The usual hum of conversation,"
4"Rory slid onto a stool"
5"She ordered a gin and"
6"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
7"His back was to her,"
8"His hair had more grey"
9"The limp in his left"
10"She should’ve left."
11"Rory took a slow sip"
12"That ring had always been"
13"She remembered the first time"
14"His voice was rougher than"
15"The kind of voice that"
16"Rory turned, swirling her glass."
17"They both knew it."
18"Silas set the glass down"
19"She exhaled, half-laugh, half-sigh."
ratio0.803
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"Because I needed to see"
1"Because I needed to know"
2"Because I needed to know"
ratio0.045
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory took a slow sip of her drink, watching the way his fingers curled around the glass, the signet ring on his right hand catching the light."
1"He’d patched her up in his kitchen, his mother scolding him for letting her near the stove."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stepped, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.7706%