Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAXF64WTVFQWE1CMRF53GZ

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Duration:
48.8s
Cost:
$0.000824
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chipped paint on the doorframe felt rough under Rory’s palm as she leaned against it, breathing shallow. Three deadbolts clicked, one after another, a small, defiant ritual against a world that felt increasingly unsteady. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound around her ankles, a warm weight offering minimal comfort. She hadn’t expected him to be so…present. Not after two years. Not after the way things ended. The knock hadn’t been a tentative rap, a question. It had been a demand, three solid strikes that vibrated through the floorboards. A ghost revisiting. She adjusted the worn cardigan around her, pulled tighter than necessary against the mild October chill. “Eva?” she called, though a knot in her stomach told her it wasn’t her friend. “Don’t bother with the charade, Carter.” Rory flinched. A voice she’d spent months trying to scrub from her memory. A voice coated in honey and regret. She unlocked the final bolt, the metal protesting with a groan, and pulled the door open. Lucien stood there, filling the small doorway with the dark gravity of a storm cloud. He hadn’t changed. Still impeccably dressed in a charcoal suit that likely cost more than her month’s rent. Still radiating an unnerving elegance. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, revealing the sharp angles of his face. His eyes…god, his eyes. One amber, burning with a contained fire, the other black, a void threatening to swallow the light. He held an ivory-handled cane, the polished surface gleaming. She knew what was concealed within, a thin blade honed to a brutal point. An accessory. Like a tie. “What are you doing here?” The question didn’t come out as sharp as she intended. More of a breathless whisper. He didn’t answer immediately. His gaze drifted over her, slow and deliberate, lingering on the faint crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A relic of a childhood climbing accident she’d long since forgotten he’d noticed. A discomforting flush warmed her cheeks. “I require a favor.” His French accent laced each word, smooth and dangerous. Rory straightened, forcing herself to meet his gaze. "I highly doubt that. You always *required* favors. Never offered them." A flicker of…something crossed his face. Amusement? Pain? It vanished before she could decipher it. “Times change, *chérie*.” He stepped inside without invitation, a subtle assertion of dominance that yanked at old wounds. Ptolemy hissed, arching his back and puffing up his fur, then bolted under the sofa. Good. Best to keep the cat out of this. The flat felt smaller with him in it, the air thicker, charged with an energy she’d thought she’d contained. Books towered from every surface, scrolls overflowed from shelves, and research notes littered the small table. Eva’s chaos was usually comforting. Tonight, it felt suffocating. “I’m not inclined to do anything for you, Lucien.” She moved back, putting a foot in front of the other and bumping into the cluttered table. A stack of papers swayed, threatening to topple. He caught the papers before they fell, his fingers brushing hers. A jolt, unwelcome and familiar, shot up her arm. He didn't release her hand immediately. “Such hostility.” He released her hand and arranged the papers with a deliberate care that felt pointed. “I assumed, after…everything, we could manage a modicum of civility.” “Civility?” Her laugh was brittle. “You walked out on me, Lucien. Remember that? No note, no call. Just…gone.” His jaw tightened. "That is hardly the complete story, Carter." “Oh, enlighten me.” She crossed her arms, trying to project an indifference she didn’t feel. “Was it the demands of your…demon business? Did father disapprove? Or were you simply bored?” “Don't.” “Don’t what? Don’t speak the truth? Don't remind you of your extremely bad habit of leaving people hanging?” “You know why I left.” The black in his eye seemed to deepen, absorbing the light. “Do I?” She tilted her head, letting her hair fall forward. “Because you decided I was too much trouble? Too…human?” He took a step closer, crowding her space. “You were reckless. Endangering yourself, and by extension, me.” "Oh, right. *You* were worried about *me*. How very touching.” The sarcasm dripped from her words. “I recall you enjoying the danger. Enjoying the thrill.” “There’s a difference between calculated risk and willful stupidity.” “And you decided I fell squarely into the latter category?” “I decided I couldn’t…protect you.” He said the last part barely above a whisper, his gaze fixed on a point just past her shoulder. The admission, so quiet, so unexpected, momentarily disarmed her. Protection. That had always been the undercurrent, hadn’t it? His need to control, disguised as concern. “I don’t need protecting,” she said, her voice steadier now. He finally met her eyes, the amber one blazing. “Everyone needs protecting, Carter. From themselves, if not others.” A tense silence descended, broken only by the distant rumble of traffic. Rory stared at him, searching for a flicker of the man she’d once thought she knew. The man who'd shared late-night conversations over cheap wine, the man who’d held her while she wept, the man who'd vanished without a trace. “What’s the favor?” she asked, the question clipped and devoid of emotion. He shifted, the tension easing slightly. “A retrieval. Someone has acquired an object. An object that belongs to…a mutual acquaintance.” “An object? What kind of object? And what does this have to do with me?” “It’s a grimoire. Bound in dragon hide. Very old. And its previous owner is rather…unhappy about its disappearance.” He offered a wry smile. “Let's just say upsetting him isn’t conducive to a peaceful existence.” Rory frowned. “You come to me for this? You with your connections, your…resources?” “My resources are presently…tied up.” He hesitated. “And the person who took it…she knows my methods. She knows how I operate. You, however, are…unpredictable. A ghost in the system.” She scoffed. “So, I’m your cleanup crew?” “A discreet operative.” “I deliver food for a living, Lucien. Not steal magical books.” She gestured around the cramped flat. “Look at this place! I'm barely keeping things together." “You’re resourceful, highly intelligent, and you have a knack for blending in. Qualities that are proving useful.” He paused, and his voice lowered. “And I know you’re good at finding things.” A memory surfaced. A frantic search for a stolen amulet, a hidden alleyway, a shared moment of triumph. Her hand had brushed his and the force of it made her heart stop. “What’s in it for me?” she asked quietly, despite herself. He didn’t immediately respond, his gaze sweeping over her face. The silence stretched, thick and heavy with unspoken things. She held his gaze, refusing to look away. Finally, he spoke. “Information. About Evan.” The name, spoken aloud, felt like a physical blow. Rory’s breath hitched. “What…what do you know about him?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She moved back [back]"
1"She gestured around [around]"
2"she asked quietly [quietly]"
3"The name spoken aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.864
rawRatio0.211
effectiveRatio0.182
82.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"flicker"
count2
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"comforting"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"calculated"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"vibrated"
2"chill"
3"stomach"
4"gleaming"
5"whisper"
6"flicker"
7"charged"
8"comforting"
9"familiar"
10"calculated"
11"silence"
12"tension"
13"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords1131
ratio0.004
matches
0"required"
1"chérie"
2"You"
3"me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, he spoke."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount775
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Eva2
October1
French1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"October"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a physical blow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1131
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean23.08
std14.44
cv0.626
sampleLengths
065
125
231
36
420
516
673
728
820
941
1013
1119
1215
1342
1444
1534
1626
1727
1818
1910
2030
211
2218
2316
2420
2517
2625
279
2810
2924
3025
3110
3218
3352
3412
3520
3615
3734
3813
3929
407
413
4226
4331
4432
4510
4630
4712
489
97.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was concealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences111
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount778
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.037275064267352186
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.017994858611825194
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean10.19
std5.82
cv0.571
sampleLengths
018
117
213
37
44
56
69
713
83
916
1015
116
122
1311
147
1516
1615
173
1815
195
2014
214
2217
239
2414
252
263
2715
285
294
3018
3113
326
3313
348
3511
366
371
381
397
4018
4115
421
438
4419
4516
465
474
4826
498
62.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4144144144144144
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences78
matches
0"Still radiating an unnerving elegance."
1"More of a breathless whisper."
2"Finally, he spoke."
ratio0.038
30.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences78
matches
0"She hadn’t expected him to"
1"It had been a demand,"
2"She adjusted the worn cardigan"
3"she called, though a knot"
4"She unlocked the final bolt,"
5"He hadn’t changed."
6"His platinum blond hair was"
7"His eyes…god, his eyes."
8"He held an ivory-handled cane,"
9"She knew what was concealed"
10"He didn’t answer immediately."
11"His gaze drifted over her,"
12"His French accent laced each"
13"It vanished before she could"
14"He stepped inside without invitation,"
15"She moved back, putting a"
16"He caught the papers before"
17"He didn't release her hand"
18"He released her hand and"
19"Her laugh was brittle"
ratio0.474
24.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences78
matches
0"The chipped paint on the"
1"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound around"
2"She hadn’t expected him to"
3"The knock hadn’t been a"
4"It had been a demand,"
5"A ghost revisiting."
6"She adjusted the worn cardigan"
7"she called, though a knot"
8"A voice she’d spent months"
9"A voice coated in honey"
10"She unlocked the final bolt,"
11"Lucien stood there, filling the"
12"He hadn’t changed."
13"His platinum blond hair was"
14"His eyes…god, his eyes."
15"He held an ivory-handled cane,"
16"She knew what was concealed"
17"The question didn’t come out"
18"He didn’t answer immediately."
19"His gaze drifted over her,"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Three deadbolts clicked, one after another, a small, defiant ritual against a world that felt increasingly unsteady."
1"The man who'd shared late-night conversations over cheap wine, the man who’d held her while she wept, the man who'd vanished without a trace."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She crossed, trying to project an indifference she didn’t feel"
1"she said, her voice steadier now"
2"she asked, the question clipped and devoid of emotion"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.227
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.1892%