Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAXHA970E92WNMB3DFC5AC

Run Details

Duration:
3m 12s
Cost:
$0.016177
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain lashed Harlow’s cropped salt-and-pepper hair to her skull, each drop a tiny, stinging percussion against her sharp jaw as she leaned against a rain-slicked brick wall across from The Raven’s Nest. The bar’s distinctive green neon sign flickered above the entrance, painting the puddles at her feet in sickly streaks of light that warped when a taxi hydroplaned past. She lifted her left wrist to check her worn leather watch—three hours and seventeen minutes since she’d settled into her stakeout, the hum of her military-trained pulse counting every second in lockstep with the watch’s tick. DS Morris’s face flashed unbidden behind her eyes, his grin faded by the memory of his cold, unexplained death three years prior; the coroner had called it a heart attack, but Harlow had seen the faint, iridescent bruises curling around his throat, bruises no human fist could have left. She’d promised him that night, kneeling beside his body in the rain-soaked alley, that she’d find whoever—or whatever—was responsible, no matter how deep she had to dig. Her gaze drifted to The Raven’s Nest’s walls, visible through the bar’s fogged window: frayed old maps of 19th-century Thames tunnels and black-and-white photographs of long-dead Soho residents, including one of a stern-faced man with a raven perched on his shoulder—Silas, the bar’s owner, who Harlow suspected was the clique’s middleman. She tensed when the bar’s door creaked open. A lanky figure in a waterlogged hoodie stumbled out, one hand clamped around a crumpled cloth bundle that glowed faintly through the fabric—supernatural, Harlow’s gut screamed, the same kind of energy she’d sensed the night Morris died. The figure’s hood fell back for a split second, revealing a gaunt face crisscrossed with silver scars, before he yanked it forward and bolted east, his boots splashing through puddles like a frightened rat. Harlow didn’t hesitate. She pushed off the wall, her trench coat flaring behind her, and gave chase, her 5’9” frame eating up the pavement with the precision of her 18 years of Met service. She wove around a group of drunk tourists huddling under an awning, their laughter fading into the rain as she ducked into an alley, her brown eyes locked on the hoodie’s flapping hem. The figure cut through a gap between two shops, and Harlow followed, but her boot slipped on a patch of ice hidden under a puddle—she caught herself on a rusted fire escape railing, her worn leather watch scraping against the metal with a sharp squeal, before pushing forward again, her military training turning the near-fall into a fluid recovery. The chase circled back to The Raven’s Nest. The hooded figure skidded to a halt in front of the green neon sign, wrenched open the bar’s door, and vanished inside. Harlow burst through right behind him, the scent of stale beer, old paper, and wood smoke slamming into her. The bar’s walls were lined with frayed old maps of 19th-century London and black-and-white photographs of long-dead Soho residents, their faces staring blankly as Harlow scanned the dim room. Her gaze caught on a man tending to a woman slouched in a booth: olive skin, short curly dark brown hair, a Saint Christopher medallion glinting against his throat, a thin scar running along his left forearm—Tomás Herrera, the former NHS paramedic she’d been investigating for his off-the-books care of the clique. He was dabbing a glowing, oozing wound on the woman’s thigh with a cloth soaked in some viscous blue liquid, and he murmured a Spanish prayer under his breath—*Nuestra Señora del Rosario*, Harlow recognized from her own limited Spanish lessons—when he saw her. The woman whimpered, her hand clamping around Tomás’s scarred forearm, and he froze, his warm brown eyes widening in recognition. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his Seville accent thick with caution, but Harlow didn’t stop. She spotted the hooded figure darting toward a floor-to-ceiling bookshelf in the back corner, its shelves crammed with dust-covered tomes ranging from *Moby-Dick* to a tattered copy of a 17th-century alchemical manuscript. The figure grabbed the alchemical manuscript and yanked; the bookshelf swung inward with a low groan, revealing a narrow staircase leading down into darkness. He vanished into the stairwell, and Harlow was on him in three strides, her hand closing around the bookshelf’s edge to keep it from swinging shut. She hesitated for a split second, the memory of Morris’s cold body weighing on her—this was uncharted territory, a hidden space she’d never known existed, but the glow of the hooded figure’s bundle was still visible at the bottom of the stairs, a beacon calling her toward the truth she’d been chasing for three years. She descended the staircase, her boots thudding against wooden steps that creaked with age. The air grew colder the farther down she went, the scent of mildew and burning incense replacing the bar’s stale beer. At the bottom, she stepped into a narrow tunnel lined with moss-covered brick, the sound of the rain above fading to a distant murmur. She followed the glow of the hooded figure’s bundle until the tunnel opened into an abandoned Camden Tube station—tattered posters peeling from the walls, tracks overgrown with weeds, the faint hum of activity echoing from the platform. This is the Veil Market, Harlow realized, her mind racing with the intel she’d gleaned from anonymous tips: a hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon, selling enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information no cop could dig up legally. The entry requirement was a bone token, the tips had said, but the hooded figure had dropped his when he stumbled over a rotting bench—Harlow spotted it on the ground, a small, smooth raven bone glinting in the faint light of a flickering fluorescent bulb. She bent to pick it up, her fingers closing around the cold bone, and tucked it into her trench coat pocket. A soft voice behind her made her spin, her hand hovering over the baton at her waist. Tomás stood in the tunnel’s entrance, his Saint Christopher medallion swinging gently as he stepped forward, his scarred left forearm visible through the sleeve of his soaked flannel shirt. “You shouldn’t be here, Detective,” he said, his Seville accent warmer now, laced with concern. “This market doesn’t take kindly to cops. You don’t understand the things that go on here—supernatural things, the kind that got your partner killed.” Harlow’s jaw tightened. “I know you lost your NHS license for administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients,” she said, her voice sharp with the intel she’d uncovered. “I know you provide off-the-books care for the clique that’s been running this market. What are you hiding, Herrera?” Tomás’s shoulders slumped. He pulled down the collar of his flannel shirt, revealing a faint, iridescent scar curling around his neck—same as Morris’s. “I’m not hiding anything,” he said, his warm brown eyes softening. “I was born in Seville, raised to help people—when I moved to London for the NHS, I thought I’d be saving lives, but then I found a woman with a glowing wound in her side, a wound no regular doctor could fix. I gave her a treatment I’d learned from a healer in my hometown, and they took my license away. The clique found me after that, offered me a place to keep helping people no one else would touch. That scar? It’s from a supernatural creature that attacked me while I was tending to a boy with scales instead of skin. I’m not a criminal, Detective. I’m just trying to do good.” Harlow stared at him for a long moment, her military precision warring with the flicker of doubt in her gut. She thought of Morris’s iridescent bruises, of the hooded figure who’d vanished into the market’s depths, of the glowing bundle that held the key to unlocking the truth about his death. She heard the hooded figure’s voice echoing from the market’s platform, arguing with someone in a guttural language she didn’t understand—“stolen amulet,” she caught, the words tangled with the hum of supernatural energy. The Veil Market was unfamiliar, dangerous, a place where human laws didn’t apply—but it was also the only lead she’d had in three years. She pulled the raven bone from her trench coat pocket and held it up. “The entry requirement is a bone token,” she said, her voice steady. “I have one. I’m going in after him.” Tomás stepped forward, his hand outstretched. “Don’t do this,” he said. “You’ll get yourself killed. The vendors here will tear you apart if they find out you’re a cop. They sell enchanted blades that can cut through bone like butter, alchemical potions that can twist your mind into mush. You don’t stand a chance.” Harlow shook her head. She thought of the promise she’d made to Morris, of the nights she’d lain awake staring at his photo, of the iridescent bruises that had haunted her for three years. “I don’t care,” she said, her eyes locked on the market’s platform, where the hooded figure’s glow was fading into the crowd. “Morris didn’t die for nothing. I’m going to find out what’s going on here, no matter the cost.” She turned and walked toward the platform, the raven bone clutched tightly in her hand. The market’s activity grew louder as she approached—shouts in languages she didn’t understand, the clink of glass vials, the faint glow of enchanted goods lining the stalls: a sword with a blade that shifted from silver to black, a vial of red liquid that bubbled without heat, a book with pages that turned on their own. She adjusted her trench coat, her leather watch ticking softly against her wrist, and stepped into the crowd, her military bearing a shield against the chaos around her. A vendor with a face crisscrossed with glowing blue veins glanced at her raven bone, then at her uniformed collar peeking from under her coat, and smirked—a cold, knowing twist of the lips that sent a shiver down Harlow’s spine. She didn’t know what she’d find in the Veil Market, but she knew she couldn’t turn back—not when the truth about Morris’s death was finally within her reach, tangled in the hum of supernatural energy that filled every shadow of the abandoned Tube station.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1748
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"tightly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1748
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count2
4
word"beacon"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count2
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"scanned"
3"glinting"
4"beacon"
5"echoing"
6"racing"
7"flicker"
8"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences38
matches(empty)
67.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences38
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences38
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen186
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1709
ratio0.003
matches
0"Nuestra Señora del Rosario"
1"Moby-Dick"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1446
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow16
Raven3
Nest3
Morris7
Thames1
Soho2
Silas1
London1
Saint2
Christopher2
Tomás5
Herrera1
Spanish2
Señora1
Seville2
Camden1
Tube2
Veil2
Market2
Detective1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Nest"
2"Morris"
3"Silas"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
7"Herrera"
places
0"Thames"
1"Soho"
2"London"
3"Seville"
4"Veil"
5"Market"
globalScore0.947
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1709
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
76.73% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean100.53
std42.08
cv0.419
sampleLengths
0173
1130
2126
378
4115
546
6105
796
8109
985
1046
11147
12108
1334
1454
1574
16183
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences38
matches
0"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs245
matches
0"was dabbing"
1"was tending"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences38
ratio0.342
matches
0"She lifted her left wrist to check her worn leather watch—three hours and seventeen minutes since she’d settled into her stakeout, the hum of her military-trained pulse counting every second in lockstep with the watch’s tick."
1"DS Morris’s face flashed unbidden behind her eyes, his grin faded by the memory of his cold, unexplained death three years prior; the coroner had called it a heart attack, but Harlow had seen the faint, iridescent bruises curling around his throat, bruises no human fist could have left."
2"She’d promised him that night, kneeling beside his body in the rain-soaked alley, that she’d find whoever—or whatever—was responsible, no matter how deep she had to dig."
3"Her gaze drifted to The Raven’s Nest’s walls, visible through the bar’s fogged window: frayed old maps of 19th-century Thames tunnels and black-and-white photographs of long-dead Soho residents, including one of a stern-faced man with a raven perched on his shoulder—Silas, the bar’s owner, who Harlow suspected was the clique’s middleman."
4"A lanky figure in a waterlogged hoodie stumbled out, one hand clamped around a crumpled cloth bundle that glowed faintly through the fabric—supernatural, Harlow’s gut screamed, the same kind of energy she’d sensed the night Morris died."
5"Her gaze caught on a man tending to a woman slouched in a booth: olive skin, short curly dark brown hair, a Saint Christopher medallion glinting against his throat, a thin scar running along his left forearm—Tomás Herrera, the former NHS paramedic she’d been investigating for his off-the-books care of the clique. He was dabbing a glowing, oozing wound on the woman’s thigh with a cloth soaked in some viscous blue liquid, and he murmured a Spanish prayer under his breath—*Nuestra Señora del Rosario*, Harlow recognized from her own limited Spanish lessons—when he saw her. The woman whimpered, her hand clamping around Tomás’s scarred forearm, and he froze, his warm brown eyes widening in recognition."
6"The figure grabbed the alchemical manuscript and yanked; the bookshelf swung inward with a low groan, revealing a narrow staircase leading down into darkness. He vanished into the stairwell, and Harlow was on him in three strides, her hand closing around the bookshelf’s edge to keep it from swinging shut. She hesitated for a split second, the memory of Morris’s cold body weighing on her—this was uncharted territory, a hidden space she’d never known existed, but the glow of the hooded figure’s bundle was still visible at the bottom of the stairs, a beacon calling her toward the truth she’d been chasing for three years."
7"She descended the staircase, her boots thudding against wooden steps that creaked with age. The air grew colder the farther down she went, the scent of mildew and burning incense replacing the bar’s stale beer. At the bottom, she stepped into a narrow tunnel lined with moss-covered brick, the sound of the rain above fading to a distant murmur. She followed the glow of the hooded figure’s bundle until the tunnel opened into an abandoned Camden Tube station—tattered posters peeling from the walls, tracks overgrown with weeds, the faint hum of activity echoing from the platform."
8"This is the Veil Market, Harlow realized, her mind racing with the intel she’d gleaned from anonymous tips: a hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon, selling enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information no cop could dig up legally. The entry requirement was a bone token, the tips had said, but the hooded figure had dropped his when he stumbled over a rotting bench—Harlow spotted it on the ground, a small, smooth raven bone glinting in the faint light of a flickering fluorescent bulb. She bent to pick it up, her fingers closing around the cold bone, and tucked it into her trench coat pocket."
9"You don’t understand the things that go on here—supernatural things, the kind that got your partner killed.”"
10"Tomás’s shoulders slumped. He pulled down the collar of his flannel shirt, revealing a faint, iridescent scar curling around his neck—same as Morris’s. “I’m not hiding anything,” he said, his warm brown eyes softening. “I was born in Seville, raised to help people—when I moved to London for the NHS, I thought I’d be saving lives, but then I found a woman with a glowing wound in her side, a wound no regular doctor could fix."
11"Harlow stared at him for a long moment, her military precision warring with the flicker of doubt in her gut. She thought of Morris’s iridescent bruises, of the hooded figure who’d vanished into the market’s depths, of the glowing bundle that held the key to unlocking the truth about his death. She heard the hooded figure’s voice echoing from the market’s platform, arguing with someone in a guttural language she didn’t understand—“stolen amulet,” she caught, the words tangled with the hum of supernatural energy. The Veil Market was unfamiliar, dangerous, a place where human laws didn’t apply—but it was also the only lead she’d had in three years."
12"She turned and walked toward the platform, the raven bone clutched tightly in her hand. The market’s activity grew louder as she approached—shouts in languages she didn’t understand, the clink of glass vials, the faint glow of enchanted goods lining the stalls: a sword with a blade that shifted from silver to black, a vial of red liquid that bubbled without heat, a book with pages that turned on their own. She adjusted her trench coat, her leather watch ticking softly against her wrist, and stepped into the crowd, her military bearing a shield against the chaos around her. A vendor with a face crisscrossed with glowing blue veins glanced at her raven bone, then at her uniformed collar peeking from under her coat, and smirked—a cold, knowing twist of the lips that sent a shiver down Harlow’s spine. She didn’t know what she’d find in the Veil Market, but she knew she couldn’t turn back—not when the truth about Morris’s death was finally within her reach, tangled in the hum of supernatural energy that filled every shadow of the abandoned Tube station."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount808
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.017326732673267328
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009900990099009901
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences38
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences38
mean44.97
std42.19
cv0.938
sampleLengths
033
128
236
349
427
551
68
737
834
93
10123
1178
12115
1346
14105
1596
16109
1768
1817
1941
205
2176
2219
2319
242
2520
265
276
28108
2929
305
3115
3214
3320
345
3561
3613
37183
60.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.39473684210526316
totalSentences38
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences37
matches
0"She lifted her left wrist"
1"She’d promised him that night,"
2"Her gaze drifted to The"
3"She tensed when the bar’s"
4"She pushed off the wall,"
5"Her gaze caught on a"
6"he said, his Seville accent"
7"She descended the staircase, her"
8"You don’t understand the things"
9"I gave her a treatment"
10"It’s from a supernatural creature"
11"I’m not a criminal, Detective."
12"I’m just trying to do"
13"She pulled the raven bone"
14"I’m going in after"
15"They sell enchanted blades that"
16"You don’t stand a"
17"I’m going to find out"
18"She turned and walked toward"
ratio0.514
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences37
matches
0"The rain lashed Harlow’s cropped"
1"The bar’s distinctive green neon"
2"She lifted her left wrist"
3"DS Morris’s face flashed unbidden"
4"She’d promised him that night,"
5"Her gaze drifted to The"
6"She tensed when the bar’s"
7"A lanky figure in a"
8"The figure’s hood fell back"
9"Harlow didn’t hesitate."
10"She pushed off the wall,"
11"The chase circled back to"
12"Her gaze caught on a"
13"he said, his Seville accent"
14"The figure grabbed the alchemical"
15"She descended the staircase, her"
16"This is the Veil Market,"
17"A soft voice behind her"
18"You don’t understand the things"
19"Harlow’s jaw tightened. she said,"
ratio0.973
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The figure’s hood fell back for a split second, revealing a gaunt face crisscrossed with silver scars, before he yanked it forward and bolted east, his boots sp…"
1"The chase circled back to The Raven’s Nest. The hooded figure skidded to a halt in front of the green neon sign, wrenched open the bar’s door, and vanished insi…"
2"Her gaze caught on a man tending to a woman slouched in a booth: olive skin, short curly dark brown hair, a Saint Christopher medallion glinting against his thr…"
3"The figure grabbed the alchemical manuscript and yanked; the bookshelf swung inward with a low groan, revealing a narrow staircase leading down into darkness. H…"
4"She descended the staircase, her boots thudding against wooden steps that creaked with age. The air grew colder the farther down she went, the scent of mildew a…"
5"This is the Veil Market, Harlow realized, her mind racing with the intel she’d gleaned from anonymous tips: a hidden supernatural black market that moved locati…"
6"They sell enchanted blades that can cut through bone like butter, alchemical potions that can twist your mind into mush."
7"She turned and walked toward the platform, the raven bone clutched tightly in her hand. The market’s activity grew louder as she approached—shouts in languages …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, his Seville accent warmer now, laced with concern"
1"she said, her voice sharp with the intel she’d uncovered"
2"she said, her voice steady"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Harlow’s jaw tightened. (tighten)"
1"She pulled (pull)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.267
69.1835%