Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
76
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"sounded like choking"
1
"banquets that seemed to replenish themselves: roasts carved from beasts she couldn't name, their juices pooling in moats around the platters; pies with crusts flaking gold, steam rising in shapes of dancing figures; bowls of creams whipped to peaks that never fell"
"The path widened into a clearing ringed by orchards, trees bowed low under the weight of fruits that defied earthly logic: apples striped in gold and scarlet, their flesh visible through semi-transparent skins; peaches that wept nectar in steady drips, pooling into rivulets that snaked towards unseen drains."
1
"The bark felt warm, almost feverish, and the leaves rustled without wind, whispering in a tongue she couldn't place—half melody, half groan."
2
"No dust clung to her touch; she left the stone pristine."
3
"Tables stretched endlessly, laden with banquets that seemed to replenish themselves: roasts carved from beasts she couldn't name, their juices pooling in moats around the platters; pies with crusts flaking gold, steam rising in shapes of dancing figures; bowls of creams whipped to peaks that never fell."
4
"Servants moved among them—helbound souls, their eyes glassy, skin stretched tight over bones, ladling portions with mechanical precision."
5
"Aurora's hand drifted to her blade, the cold metal grounding her amid the onslaught of scents—roasted nuts, fermented berries, a undercurrent of rot beneath the indulgence."
6
"She heard it now—chewing sounds, wet and rhythmic, emanating from the vines themselves."
7
"Fountains bubbled here, not with water, but with liquid gold—wine that fizzed and popped, spraying droplets that sizzled on contact with stone."
8
"In the centre, a massive tree dominated, its trunk swollen and gnarled, branches sagging under fruits that mimicked human forms—curved like limbs, pitted like faces frozen in ecstasy."
9
"Wonder warred with revulsion; this place mocked life, amplified it into grotesque abundance."
10
"She reached out, but Nyx's hand—solid now, cool as night—stopped her."
11
"From the tree's roots, tendrils emerged—vines thick as arms, tipped with maws that gnashed."
12
"From the tree's canopy, eyes opened—dozens, glowing amber—and laughter bubbled up, deep and insatiable."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
57
technicalSentenceCount
13
matches
0
"Nyx materialised from the shadows at her side, their form solidifying into a towering silhouette that swallowed the light around them."
1
"The air thickened immediately, heavy with the scent of overripe fruit and spiced smoke that clung to their skin like honey."
2
"The standing stones that had marked the Fae boundary now pulsed with a deeper rhythm, their oak bark warped into something fleshy, veined with crimson."
3
"Aurora nodded, sheathing the blade for now but keeping her scarred wrist close to her side, the crescent mark itching as if alive."
4
"They pressed on, the ground yielding underfoot like trampled dough, each step releasing puffs of sweet pollen that dusted their clothes."
5
"The path widened into a clearing ringed by orchards, trees bowed low under the weight of fruits that defied earthly logic: apples striped in gold and scarlet, t…"
6
"Stone arches loomed ahead, carved with reliefs of figures mid-feast—mouths agape, hands clutching platters that overflowed with writhing eels and glistening fru…"
7
"Tables stretched endlessly, laden with banquets that seemed to replenish themselves: roasts carved from beasts she couldn't name, their juices pooling in moats …"
8
"The other souls froze, then resumed with frantic energy, piling plates higher, as if the sound commanded excess."
9
"Aurora dipped a finger, the taste exploding on her tongue: tart cherries, smoked oak, a velvet finish that begged for more."
10
"They discovered a grotto at the hollow's end, walls encrusted with crystals that refracted the amber light into rainbows of temptation."
11
"In the centre, a massive tree dominated, its trunk swollen and gnarled, branches sagging under fruits that mimicked human forms—curved like limbs, pitted like f…"
12
"Isolde danced back, her form blurring, as another vine reared high, mouth gaping wide enough to swallow a man."