Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAXX95ZFS6FZ7XKT6CQNN2

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Duration:
10.4s
Cost:
$0.000931
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
--- The door creaked open before the deadbolt could even click into place, swinging inward with a force that sent the framed poster of *The Great Wave* crashing to the floor. Glass shattered like a scream, and the scent of burnt wiring filled the air as the flat’s ancient fuse box let out a final, defiant spark. Rory Carter didn’t flinch. She didn’t even look up from the takeaway bag she’d just set on the counter. Her fingers tightened around the handle of the knife she’d pulled from the block without thinking, the blade glinting under the dim glow of the single bulb hanging over the sink. “You’re late,” she said, voice flat, but her pulse hammered in her throat like a trapped bird. The door swung wider, and the air inside the flat—already thick with the scent of fried garlic and stale beer—shifted. The man who stepped over the threshold didn’t look like the last time she’d seen him. Not really. His tailored charcoal suit was immaculate, the lapels perfectly aligned, but his platinum blond hair was tousled, as if he’d been running his fingers through it for hours. One hand rested on the ivory cane heathed in leather, the other held a single, unopened envelope. Lucien Moreau’s amber eye flickered with something unreadable as he took in the knife, the shattered glass, the way Rory’s fingers twitched at her side. “You always were a dramatic one,” he said, his voice smooth as aged whiskey, but there was a sharp edge to it now, like a blade dragged across steel. “Though I’d have thought you’d have learned by now that doors don’t stay closed forever.” Rory exhaled through her nose, a sound that was half-laugh, half-snarl. “You’re not supposed to be here.” “Neither are you,” he shot back, stepping fully into the room. The cane tapped against the linoleum with a rhythmic *thock-thock*, each strike echoing like a countdown. “But here we are.” The flat—small, cramped, smelling of takeaway and old books—suddenly felt too small. The walls seemed to press in, the air thick with the weight of everything left unsaid between them. Rory’s gaze flicked to the envelope in his hand, then back to his face. The way his lips quirked, just slightly, made her stomach clench. “What’s this?” she asked, voice dangerously quiet. Lucien didn’t answer right away. Instead, he let his gaze drift over her—really *look* at her—for the first time since he’d walked in. The black shoulder-length hair, the bright blue eyes that had always seemed to see too much, the way her jaw was set, stubborn and unyielding. His black eye darkened, just for a second, before he forced his expression into something unreadable again. “A letter,” he said finally, tucking the envelope into the inside of his jacket. “From someone who owes you an apology.” Rory’s fingers curled around the knife handle tighter. “Who?” “Evan.” The name hit her like a punch to the gut. She didn’t breathe. Didn’t move. Just stared at him, her vision swimming for a second before she forced herself to blink. “You’re lying.” Lucien’s lips twitched. “Am I?” “You don’t know where he is.” “No,” he agreed, stepping closer. The cane tapped again, the sound rhythmic, hypnotic. “But I know where *you* are.” Rory’s breath hitched. She should have stepped back. Should have called out, warned him. But the words died in her throat as he reached out, his fingers brushing against the scar on her left wrist—the one from the childhood accident, the one she’d never told anyone about, not even Eva. His touch was light, almost reverent, before he pulled away like she’d burned him. “You always were good at hiding,” he murmured, his voice dropping to something low and rough. “But scars don’t lie.” Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. She could feel the heat of his gaze on her skin, could *smell* the faint scent of bergamot and something darker, something like smoke and iron, clinging to him. Her fingers twitched against the knife, but she didn’t lower it. “What do you want, Lucien?” He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he let his gaze trail over her again, slower this time, like he was memorising every inch of her. The way her black t-shirt clung to her shoulders, the way her jeans hugged her hips, the way her breath came a little faster now, her chest rising and falling just enough to make him notice. “You,” he said finally, his voice rough. “I want you.” The words hung between them, heavy and electric, like a live wire. Rory’s breath caught. She should have been angry. Should have been furious. But all she could feel was the way her body reacted to him, the way her heart hammered against her ribs like it was trying to escape. “You’re full of shit,” she said, but her voice wasn’t steady. It wavered, just slightly. Lucien’s lips curled into something that wasn’t quite a smile. “Am I?” He reached out again, this time his fingers brushing against her cheek, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw. Rory’s skin prickled where he touched her, her body arching into his touch without her even realising it. “You left,” she said, her voice barely a whisper. “You just… left.” Lucien’s expression darkened. “And you ran.” Rory’s breath hitched. She should have been hurt. Should have been furious. But all she could feel was the way his touch made her feel alive, like she’d been drowning and he’d just thrown her a lifeline. “You don’t get to decide when I leave,” she said, her voice steadier now, but her fingers still trembled around the knife. Lucien’s gaze flicked to the blade, then back to her. “No,” he agreed, his voice low and rough. “I don’t.” He reached out again, his fingers brushing against her wrist, his thumb pressing against the scar. Rory’s breath hitched, her body arching into his touch, her fingers tightening around the knife handle. “You always were good at hiding,” he murmured, his voice rough. “But scars don’t lie.” Rory’s breath came faster now, her chest rising and falling, her body reacting to him in ways she didn’t understand. She should have been angry. Should have been furious. But all she could feel was the way his touch made her feel alive, like she’d been drowning and he’d just thrown her a lifeline. “What do you want, Lucien?” she asked again, her voice barely a whisper. He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he let his gaze trail over her again, slower this time, like he was memorising every inch of her. The way her black t-shirt clung to her shoulders, the way her jeans hugged her hips, the way her breath came a little faster now, her chest rising and falling just enough to make him notice. “You,” he said finally, his voice rough. “I want you.” The words hung between them, heavy and electric, like a live wire. Rory’s breath caught. She should have been angry. Should have been furious. But all she could feel was the way her body reacted to him, the way her heart hammered against her ribs like it was trying to escape. “You’re full of shit,” she said, but her voice wasn’t steady. It wavered, just slightly. Lucien’s lips curled into something that wasn’t quite a smile. “Am I?” He reached out again, this time his fingers brushing against her cheek, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw. Rory’s skin prickled where he touched her, her body arching into his touch without her even realising it. “You left,” she said, her voice barely a whisper. “You just… left.” Lucien’s expression darkened. “And you ran.” Rory’s breath hitched. She should have been hurt. Should have been furious. But all she could feel was the way his touch made her feel alive, like she’d been drowning and he’d just thrown her a lifeline. “You don’t get to decide when I leave,” she said, her voice steadier now, but her fingers still trembled around the knife. Lucien’s gaze flicked to the blade, then back to her. “No,” he agreed, his voice low and rough. “I don’t.” The door behind him burst open with a crash, sending a wave of cold air rushing into the flat. Rory’s head snapped up just in time to see a figure stumble into the room, their face pale and drawn, their breath coming in ragged gasps. “Rory—” the figure choked out, their voice trembling. “You have to come with me. Now.” Lucien’s head snapped up, his gaze locking onto the newcomer with a predatory intensity. “Who the hell are you?” The figure swallowed hard, their eyes darting between Rory and Lucien, their voice barely above a whisper. “Eva. I’m Eva. And we’re running out of time.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
26.09% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"she asked again [again]"
3"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.435
leniency0.87
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.174
72.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1477
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count3
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"perfectly"
2"suddenly"
3"slightly"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1477
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"shattered"
count2
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"aligned"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count2
6
word"rhythmic"
count2
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count3
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count6
12
word"electric"
count2
13
word"wavered"
count2
14
word"tracing"
count2
15
word"whisper"
count4
16
word"trembled"
count2
17
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"glinting"
2"pulse"
3"aligned"
4"flickered"
5"unreadable"
6"rhythmic"
7"echoing"
8"weight"
9"flicked"
10"stomach"
11"could feel"
12"electric"
13"wavered"
14"tracing"
15"whisper"
16"trembled"
17"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
44.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"notice"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords7
totalWords1467
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Great Wave"
1"thock-thock"
2"look"
3"you"
4"smell"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1290
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Great1
Carter1
Moreau1
Rory17
Lucien11
Eva1
Should6
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
5"Should"
places(empty)
globalScore0.841
windowScore1
44.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like smoke and iron, clinging to h"
1"quite a smile"
2"quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1467
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean27.17
std19.99
cv0.736
sampleLengths
01
156
250
317
483
525
644
717
831
955
107
1165
1221
139
141
1531
162
175
186
1919
2064
2120
2246
235
2461
2510
2651
2715
2812
2938
3012
316
3237
3322
3420
3532
3615
3754
3813
3961
4010
4151
4215
4312
4438
4512
466
4737
4822
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"was tousled"
84.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs230
matches
0"was memorising"
1"was trying"
2"was memorising"
3"was trying"
53.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences128
ratio0.031
matches
0"The door swung wider, and the air inside the flat—already thick with the scent of fried garlic and stale beer—shifted."
1"The flat—small, cramped, smelling of takeaway and old books—suddenly felt too small."
2"Instead, he let his gaze drift over her—really *look* at her—for the first time since he’d walked in."
3"But the words died in her throat as he reached out, his fingers brushing against the scar on her left wrist—the one from the childhood accident, the one she’d never told anyone about, not even Eva."
83.89% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1301
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount76
adverbRatio0.05841660261337433
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.012298232129131437
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean11.45
std8.79
cv0.768
sampleLengths
030
126
24
315
431
517
620
716
82
928
1017
1125
1229
1315
1411
156
1611
1716
184
1912
2018
2114
2211
237
245
2518
2625
2717
2814
297
308
311
321
3310
343
352
3616
372
383
392
406
415
428
436
443
455
466
4736
4814
4916
46.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2265625
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences100
matches
0"Instead, he let his gaze"
1"Just stared at him, her"
2"Instead, he let his gaze"
3"Instead, he let his gaze"
ratio0.04
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences100
matches
0"She didn’t even look up"
1"Her fingers tightened around the"
2"she said, voice flat, but"
3"His tailored charcoal suit was"
4"he said, his voice smooth"
5"he shot back, stepping fully"
6"she asked, voice dangerously quiet"
7"His black eye darkened, just"
8"he said finally, tucking the"
9"She didn’t breathe."
10"he agreed, stepping closer"
11"She should have stepped back."
12"His touch was light, almost"
13"he murmured, his voice dropping"
14"She could feel the heat"
15"Her fingers twitched against the"
16"He didn’t answer right away."
17"he said finally, his voice"
18"She should have been angry."
19"she said, but her voice"
ratio0.4
45.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences100
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"Glass shattered like a scream,"
2"Rory Carter didn’t flinch."
3"She didn’t even look up"
4"Her fingers tightened around the"
5"she said, voice flat, but"
6"The door swung wider, and"
7"The man who stepped over"
8"His tailored charcoal suit was"
9"Lucien Moreau’s amber eye flickered"
10"he said, his voice smooth"
11"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
12"he shot back, stepping fully"
13"The cane tapped against the"
14"The flat—small, cramped, smelling of"
15"The walls seemed to press"
16"Rory’s gaze flicked to the"
17"The way his lips quirked,"
18"she asked, voice dangerously quiet"
19"Lucien didn’t answer right away."
ratio0.83
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The door creaked open before the deadbolt could even click into place, swinging inward with a force that sent the framed poster of *The Great Wave* crashing to …"
1"His tailored charcoal suit was immaculate, the lapels perfectly aligned, but his platinum blond hair was tousled, as if he’d been running his fingers through it…"
2"Rory exhaled through her nose, a sound that was half-laugh, half-snarl."
3"The black shoulder-length hair, the bright blue eyes that had always seemed to see too much, the way her jaw was set, stubborn and unyielding."
4"The way her black t-shirt clung to her shoulders, the way her jeans hugged her hips, the way her breath came a little faster now, her chest rising and falling j…"
5"He reached out again, this time his fingers brushing against her cheek, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw."
6"Rory’s skin prickled where he touched her, her body arching into his touch without her even realising it."
7"Rory’s breath hitched, her body arching into his touch, her fingers tightening around the knife handle."
8"Rory’s breath came faster now, her chest rising and falling, her body reacting to him in ways she didn’t understand."
9"The way her black t-shirt clung to her shoulders, the way her jeans hugged her hips, the way her breath came a little faster now, her chest rising and falling j…"
10"He reached out again, this time his fingers brushing against her cheek, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw."
11"Rory’s skin prickled where he touched her, her body arching into his touch without her even realising it."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"she asked, voice dangerously quiet"
1"he murmured, his voice dropping to something low and rough"
2"he said finally, his voice rough"
3"she said, but her voice wasn’t steady"
4"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
5"he agreed, his voice low and rough"
6"he murmured, his voice rough"
7"she asked again, her voice barely a whisper"
8"he said finally, his voice rough"
9"she said, but her voice wasn’t steady"
10"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
11"he agreed, his voice low and rough"
12"the figure choked, their voice trembling"
19.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"he agreed (agree)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"he agreed (agree)"
5"the figure choked (choke)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.413
leniency0.826
rawRatio0.316
effectiveRatio0.261
68.8157%